Alright, so...there's a lot here. Sorry, was out running errands and someone from work wanted computer help so I volunteered. That said....
"Youth on his way to college"
Has Graying hair and looks 30.
Seriously? Do you know what a teenager looks like?
Yea, there's all kinds of teenagers, man. The hair might have been a bit of a mixup, I thought it looked more like shine than grey, but there are a lot of teenagers out there with stubble. I also don't really want to write about actual teenagers, I want young adults, like college age. Bit more comfortable with that area.
At this point, you just want to kind of sigh when you read things like "gets ancient power (sorry, power from antiquity
)," and "family he thought he was related to," or even "young adult on his way to college."
It's like, even if the writing isn't bad, what can you get out of a story like this, that hasn't been done a few dozen times?
I'm not at all trying to beat on the dev, but I find it awfully hard to gather any enthusiasm for yet another game in this vein.
True, I suppose the game does follow some common tropes. Like there are dozens of hundreds of games, books, and other media formats that follow similar tropes, but it's all about what you do with those tropes. I can't promise that I'll produce Tolstoy or Shakespeare, but I'd like to explore certain themes and situations with the characters. They just so happen to fit those tropes better than going 'outside of the box'.
This I will look into immediately. I thought I did fairly intensive bugtesting before I compiled....
There is nothing wrong with this other than there is no way that you know you have come to the end of content. The MC could look younger. This could also be different depending on how the developer works the corruption.
Well, to be fair I should have snuck in another author's note at the beginning to avoid this sort of confusion, I thought about it but I was stupid and didn't do it. I'll sneak it into the hotfix I provide to fix the above scripting error, but there are actually a bunch of scenes. After the intro, you'll want to visit the school library, gym, or behind the school during the afternoon/day time, Mon-Friday. There are three girls, they all have sex scenes, and they all make it pretty clear when you've reached the end of the available content.
As for the original heroine, she does play a big part in the future story. My main idea for the game is to have her and the Demon King's story be the critical path, which will unlock more abilities for the player character to use, but it'll be a pretty short critical path. The player reaches the end of that, and then will get an ending based on what they do over the course of the story. For instance, if you rush to the end of the critical path without interacting with any of the girls, you might get a fairly unsatisfying 'Oh, you didn't really do much' ending, but if you take your time and do the main girl's story paths, the ending you'll get will have 'ending slides' telling you how what you did affected them and the like. I shouldn't give too much away, that build is a while down the line but I have a clear outline for what I want to accomplish, and the original girl plays into it.
With Nurse Feelgood, she's a side character right now, so I'm not sure how long it will be for her to get content since my main focus right now is on finishing the other two main girls, and my priority is to get the game's story told without getting too bogged down in feature creep. But, seeing as she's already introduced, what content she does get shouldn't be too far into the future.
That's how game looks like when the script is written by a robot crawling through first time devs' projects on F95. Gotta love the aura that make me more attractive to women. Does it work also on men, cats and flowers by any chance?
Actually, it will work on men, too. Not cats or flowers, it's human pheromones. I don't plan on adding any outright gay content but if/when I do get around to adding male NPCs, expect males to interact as normal with the MC unless he's under the effects of the heightened pheromones spell, in which case....if you do that you done fucked up unless you wanted to get molested by a dude.