VN Ren'Py Intertwined [v0.13.1] [Nyx]

[Maviarab]

What's wrong with that? If you're already a father figure to a boy, his mother is not married, you are not married either, what's wrong with dating her?

Yes, the boy used to date your daughter, but even if they were still in a relationship, it's not like their parents getting married would make it incest.

Did I mention anythign about incest? That's not even a consideration in my post. The feck has that got to do with anything?

 

[Dessolos]

I love this post, especially Erynn part. This is a perfect hate-post about Erynn but he ended every point I don't think so. She did this, she did that and people think that makes her bad person, but I don't think so. If I ever need to refer a hate-post Erynn, I'll come to this post.

haha it does seem a bit like that doesn't it but hey I can't not talk about her faults unless I want to be completely biased, so you're welcome . They just aren't big enough negatives for me compared to things I do like about her. And well with context i'm able to be a bit too understanding perhaps but hey that's just how am I normally it isn't exclusive to her but you probably know that based on other LI i like that you hate in other threads haha.

 

[valbitterb]

hey @mnotwoke
I am asking about what Nyx saying, and yes inside the game she dreams with mc and he dreams 2 , so No way you did not see that

Nyx likes to build up, indicate (foreshadow) the MC's future sexual encounters with ladies by having the MC gradually getting physical with the ladies or the ladies teasing the MC. For example look at how repeated physical games and playing around with Layla and Elena eventually leads up to an almost threesome in the hot tub.

With Val: It's repeated actions: taking pictures together (in the bus and the photo booth). Val not liking to get physically picked up by boys but the MC keeps getting away with picking her up. The MC chasing after her or competing with her when they train together. The MC tackling Val onto the bed and onto the beach. All these lead up to the MC and Val kissing each other in the photo booth and at the beach.

Val has also given the MC a massage. The MC has helped Val stretch before training in what looks like sexual positions. They also have not yet returned each other's underwear from their Truth or Dare game.

Games have also led to Val's sexy body slowly being revealed to the MC. During the underwear swap truth or dare game, we can peek to see her ass. At the beach, the rogue wave drenches us and allows the MC to see her breasts through her t-shirt. What game will finally lead to Val stripping nude for the MC?

Spoiler: Val's Tongue

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Hopefully this thing that happened at the beach eventually becomes sexual reality for the MC and Val.

Spoiler: Val's cushion

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Spoiler: Melissa (Maybe) from Dreams to Reality

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[Kazanovaromeo]

Nyx likes to build up, indicate (foreshadow) the MC's future sexual encounters with ladies by having the MC gradually getting physical with the ladies or the ladies teasing the MC. For example look at how repeated physical games and playing around with Layla and Elena eventually leads up to an almost threesome in the hot tub.

With Val: It's repeated actions: taking pictures together (in the bus and the photo booth). Val not liking to get physically picked up by boys but the MC keeps getting away with picking her up. The MC chasing after her or competing with her when they train together. The MC tackling Val onto the bed and onto the beach. All these lead up to the MC and Val kissing each other in the photo booth and at the beach.

Val has also given the MC a massage. The MC has helped Val stretch before training in what looks like sexual positions. They also have not yet returned each other's underwear from their Truth or Dare game.

Games have also led to Val's sexy body slowly being revealed to the MC. During the underwear swap truth or dare game, we can peek to see her ass. At the beach, the rogue wave drenches us and allows the MC to see her breasts through her t-shirt. What game will finally lead to Val stripping nude for the MC?

Spoiler: Val's Tongue

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Hopefully this thing that happened at the beach eventually becomes sexual reality for the MC and Val.

Spoiler: Val's cushion

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Spoiler: Melissa (Maybe) from Dreams to Reality

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True , True and True , thank you

Spoiler: angry

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[balazar]

Expanding on this...
MC=Mother Emily, father is named Santiago, the father is responsible for his Latino looks and he's suppoused to look a lot like him.

Erynn=Mother Melissa, father a tall, blonde guy with tatoos... there's one strong possibility here(or a sudden asspull just to surprise people).

Alexis= Adrianna is her biological mother, when she has the "use protection" talk with Layla she reminds her that she got preggo with Alexis at 18 years old to reinforce that she should "cover up" with the MC.
No such info on Layla or if the guy who lives at their house is their biological father, but it seems more likely the case.

Iris= Daughter of John(most likely biological), mother never brought up... since he dated her for 2 years already the MC might know things we don't and he doesn't need to ask "where is your mother?" now.

Elena=Mother Ava, father absent.

Val= Mother yet to be named(moves towns often), father not yet mentioned.

Nikki and Cara= We have met both parents and have the full backstory of this family, unbelievable!!!!!

Nyx does love family trouble huh.


That's highly unlikely, one of the options brought up to help Erynn was Alexis dad(who she says has a soft spot for Erynn), they shoot it down because he is famous, but Erynn is receptive to the idea of doing this with him.
She probably wouldn't be happy hearing the suggestion had he hired her services just a couple of weeks back.

I am not 100% sure the MC is the protagonist, I mean if you ask Ethan, Darryl or Emanuel they would consider him the antagonist and Zach depends on the day what he believes. Not to mention why if this is really Santiago's story in some weird mockery of the Star Wars tale I mean if we are doing theories lets go batshit lol.

 

[cxx]

what ? she is in dreams with mc inside the game already NOT my dreams

well you are watching his dreams.

 

[Defenestrator.for.traitor]

I am not 100% sure the MC is the protagonist, I mean if you ask Ethan, Darryl or Emanuel they would consider him the antagonist and Zach depends on the day what he believes. Not to mention why if this is really Santiago's story in some weird mockery of the Star Wars tale I mean if we are doing theories lets go batshit lol.

According to the Nyx, Santiago is the MC in his harem game and this game is just a sequel to that.

Grain of salt, my 2 cents etc. etc.

 

[Jacowboy]

About Erynn tho (ye I'm late, sue me)... I see a lot of people saying she has an "obsession" with MC or a stupid crush or whatever, but IMO you guys are forgetting one thing: It's not so much a crush as it is the fact that they were childhood best buddies (and neighbors).

Now, granted, there are some poorly written sections in the game, but overall it was clear to me that Erynn is a lonely chick who's had a lot of issues with men, and she sees the MC's return more as her best buddy coming back, hence why she struggles with romantic feelings towards him once she sees he became hot and all that.

So basically: MC is the one who has had a crush on her forever, Erynn did like him, but probably not at "crush" level, she is just happy that her childhood friend is back because she doesn't seem to have any male friends (and not many female friends for that matter) and has been struggling with a lot of shit. But things start getting complicated if the MC tries to romance her... You'll notice that she only behaves as BFF if you don't romance her, and she still wakes you up and comes into your room all the frickin time because she misses her BFF, not because she wants the D.

She does seem to desperately want to go back to a "simpler" time in her life when they were kids tho, she really acts in a very childish manner towards the MC, but that's very much in line with what I'm saying.

So in short, I don't think Erynn's badly written, or at least to the extent some of you claim, and I think her character makes enough sense... I'm not saying it's perfect or anything, but it's good enough that I got the gist of what's going on with her.

 

[Defenestrator.for.traitor]

About Erynn tho (ye I'm late, sue me)... I see a lot of people saying she has an "obsession" with MC or a stupid crush or whatever, but IMO you guys are forgetting one thing: It's not so much a crush as it is the fact that they were childhood best buddies (and neighbors).

Now, granted, there are some poorly written sections in the game, but overall it was clear to me that Erynn is a lonely chick who's had a lot of issues with men, and she sees the MC's return more as her best buddy coming back, hence why she struggles with romantic feelings towards him once she sees he became hot and all that.

So basically: MC is the one who has had a crush on her forever, Erynn did like him, but probably not at "crush" level, she is just happy that her childhood friend is back because she doesn't seem to have any male friends (and not many female friends for that matter) and has been struggling with a lot of shit. But things start getting complicated if the MC tries to romance her... You'll notice that she only behaves as BFF if you don't romance her, and she still wakes you up and comes into your room all the frickin time because she misses her BFF, not because she wants the D.

So in short, I don't think Erynn's badly written, or at least to the extent some of you claim, and I think her character makes enough sense... I'm not saying it's perfect or anything, but it's good enough that I got the gist of what's going on with her.

First of all you'll never be late to the Erynn party because it's constant. It's die down a little bit then reflame again, so no suing on process.

She does not have any friends beside Alexis, Ethan made sure of that, starting from MC. Tried to the same for Alexis but Alexis' loyalty beat the Ethan's games, though Erynn still has these lingering feeling about it.

She sees MC as her only hope from getting rid of Ethan's blackmail and if you as a player don't help her she just leaves MC. Neither bff thing nor the lack of d keeps her there.

 

[Dessolos]

About Erynn tho (ye I'm late, sue me)... I see a lot of people saying she has an "obsession" with MC or a stupid crush or whatever, but IMO you guys are forgetting one thing: It's not so much a crush as it is the fact that they were childhood best buddies (and neighbors).

Now, granted, there are some poorly written sections in the game, but overall it was clear to me that Erynn is a lonely chick who's had a lot of issues with men, and she sees the MC's return more as her best buddy coming back, hence why she struggles with romantic feelings towards him once she sees he became hot and all that.

So basically: MC is the one who has had a crush on her forever, Erynn did like him, but probably not at "crush" level, she is just happy that her childhood friend is back because she doesn't seem to have any male friends (and not many female friends for that matter) and has been struggling with a lot of shit. But things start getting complicated if the MC tries to romance her... You'll notice that she only behaves as BFF if you don't romance her, and she still wakes you up and comes into your room all the frickin time because she misses her BFF, not because she wants the D.

She does seem to desperately want to go back to a "simpler" time in her life when they were kids tho, she really acts in a very childish manner towards the MC, but that's very much in line with what I'm saying.

So in short, I don't think Erynn's badly written, or at least to the extent some of you claim, and I think her character makes enough sense... I'm not saying it's perfect or anything, but it's good enough that I got the gist of what's going on with her.

I mostly agree with you. While I think part of her crush is a tad silly cause she didn't know if the MC changed and became another Ethan in those 5 years. I thought she should of gotten to know him a bit again, before crushing hard for him . But I did think her crush does make sense. Like I mentioned in my post . I don't think her crush is a rational one at all. But I do think there is 2 layers to her crush.

First like you mentioned she was childhood friends and neighbors. Second Do to all the trauma she has gone through with Ethan, the blackmail , losing all her friends, the escorting take your pick. Second I believe she sees the MC as the last good thing she had in her life. Since she started to lose all her friends but Alexis because of her bad decision to believe Ethan's manipulation in thinking he has changed. As in the flashback I never got the impression so saw the MC as more than friends so it would have to be a irrational crush in my eyes unless we learn more later.

 

[Jacowboy]

and if you as a player don't help her she just leaves MC. Neither bff thing nor the lack of d keeps her there.

I mean, to be fair, I'd probably do the same thing in her situation, 'cause not helping her is a REAL dick move... just walking past when someone's getting physically abused is a really shitty thing to do generally speaking, even worse when it's someone close to you, no?

 

[Defenestrator.for.traitor]

As in the flashback I never got the impression so saw the MC as more than friends so it would have to be a irrational crush in my eyes unless we learn more later.

That part kept vague on purpose by the dev, when Ethan ask do you see him like that, she answers none of your business. You can say she has a crush on MC but hides it or she just sees him as a friend and not want to give an answer to Ethan.

Btw, I think if she was dating Ethan story would have make much more sense. I would understand why she was so open to Ethan's manipulations, why she did not just leave Ethan after she saw him bullying MC, why she did not leave him after he caused her bff left town, why she stayed with him after he banished all of her friends, why she was angry at Alexis for sleeping with Ethan(make no fucking sense as it is, what if Alexis slept with Ethan you are just a friend to both of them after all), why she compared MC sleeping with Alexis to Ethan sleeping with Alexis, having a blackmail material(he would have much more material so she can't just brush it off it's not me explanation and it would have been not secret record, so her fear of not being able to become a teacher would make much more sense) etc. Maybe Nyx chickened out writing Erynn dated main antagonist, so went sideways for it.

 

[Jacowboy]

I mostly agree with you. While I think part of her crush is a tad silly cause she didn't know if the MC changed and became another Ethan in those 5 years. I thought she should of gotten to know him a bit again, before crushing hard for him . But I did think her crush does make sense. Like I mentioned in my post . I don't think her crush is a rational one at all. But I do think there is 2 layers to her crush.

First like you mentioned she was childhood friends and neighbors. Second Do to all the trauma she has gone through with Ethan, the blackmail , losing all her friends, the escorting take your pick. Second I believe she sees the MC as the last good thing she had in her life. Since she started to lose all her friends but Alexis because of her bad decision to believe Ethan's manipulation in thinking he has changed. As in the flashback I never got the impression so saw the MC as more than friends so it would have to be a irrational crush in my eyes unless we learn more later.

Huh, but the issue is that I'm not seeing that "crush" you guys are talking about... maybe I'm forgetting something?

From what I remember though, to me it seems the opposite... I mean, she clearly finds MC hot, but she doesn't seem to see him in a romantic way, at least at first, and she's actually struggling with her feelings, hence why she's so hesitant to move forward, she sees him as a friend first.

Again, I might be misremembering something, but I didn't interpret her actions as her having a massive irrational cursh on the MC at all...

 

[Defenestrator.for.traitor]

I mean, to be fair, I'd probably do the same thing in her situation, 'cause not helping her is a REAL dick move... just walking past when someone's getting physically abused is a really shitty thing to do generally speaking, even worse when it's someone close to you, no?

It is, I agree but see it from MC's eyes. MC does hate Ethan. When he came back, he is unsure about being friends with Erynn again. Erynn is always secretive about her relationship status, i.e. she got furious when Mel said she was single. Then he sees the photos, she still has Ethan's photos in her place and saw Erynn went to prom with Ethan etc. When he asked about prom she just brush it off with using gaslighting 101. Then suddenly Ethan showed up at the door calling Erynn babe etc. At this point he is suspicious about Erynn dating Ethan, she again brush it off with calling it only business. Then Erynn ditches MC for going on a date with Ethan, MC caught them red-handed while handholding. At this point, he is sure Erynn and Ethan are dating. When he saw Ethan and Erynn fighting it's a couple fighting in a back alley. Why should he put himself in danger at this point? Erynn is no longer a friend to him, she kicked him out at his worst without an explanation and she is dating his mortal enemy. There was no reason for him to intervene.

We are aware some of these are not true and some others forced on her by Ethan but we only know these from others' POV, MC does not know any of these. It's not his business so he just walks away, nothing evil about it. It's not a dick move either, MC is not a superhero who helps damsel in distress. Even thinking she got what she deserves is not completely out of ordinary because she is dating Ethan.

 

[Kazanovaromeo]

It is, I agree but see it from MC's eyes. MC does hate Ethan. When he came back, he is unsure about being friends with Erynn again. Erynn is always secretive about her relationship status, i.e. she got furious when Mel said she was single. Then he sees the photos, she still has Ethan's photos in her place and saw Erynn went to prom with Ethan etc. When he asked about prom she just brush it off with using gaslighting 101. Then suddenly Ethan showed up at the door calling Erynn babe etc. At this point he is suspicious about Erynn dating Ethan, she again brush it off with calling it only business. Then Erynn ditches MC for going on a date with Ethan, MC caught them red-handed while handholding. At this point, he is sure Erynn and Ethan are dating. When he saw Ethan and Erynn fighting it's a couple fighting in a back alley. Why should he put himself in danger at this point? Erynn is no longer a friend to him, she kicked him out at his worst without an explanation and she is dating his mortal enemy. There was no reason for him to intervene.

We are aware some of these are not true and some others forced on her by Ethan but we only know these from others' POV, MC does not know any of these. It's not his business so he just walks away, nothing evil about it. It's not a dick move either, MC is not a superhero who helps damsel in distress. Even thinking she got what she deserves is not completely out of ordinary because she is dating Ethan.

Oh man , now I know how much game and script writers had a very hard work and so long nights to make a game.

 

[Defenestrator.for.traitor]

Oh man , now I know how much game and script writers had a very hard work and so long nights to make a game.

Right?! It's almost impossible to write, thinking every perception. When you create something it's like releasing it into the wild.

 

[Jacowboy]

It is, I agree but see it from MC's eyes. MC does hate Ethan. When he came back, he is unsure about being friends with Erynn again. Erynn is always secretive about her relationship status, i.e. she got furious when Mel said she was single. Then he sees the photos, she still has Ethan's photos in her place and saw Erynn went to prom with Ethan etc. When he asked about prom she just brush it off with using gaslighting 101. Then suddenly Ethan showed up at the door calling Erynn babe etc. At this point he is suspicious about Erynn dating Ethan, she again brush it off with calling it only business. Then Erynn ditches MC for going on a date with Ethan, MC caught them red-handed while handholding. At this point, he is sure Erynn and Ethan are dating. When he saw Ethan and Erynn fighting it's a couple fighting in a back alley. Why should he put himself in danger at this point? Erynn is no longer a friend to him, she kicked him out at his worst without an explanation and she is dating his mortal enemy. There was no reason for him to intervene.

We are aware some of these are not true and some others forced on her by Ethan but we only know these from others' POV, MC does not know any of these. It's not his business so he just walks away, nothing evil about it. It's not a dick move either, MC is not a superhero who helps damsel in distress. Even thinking she got what she deserves is not completely out of ordinary because she is dating Ethan.

Yeah, listen I get your point, but still... you don't walk past that, under any circumstance, that's a shitty thing to do as a human being.

 

[matschbirne]

Oh yes, released into the wild... wait a minute, are we talking about what I think now or....

 

[Kazanovaromeo]

Oh yes, released into the wild... wait a minute, are we talking about what I think now or....

No , I think you always think in the wrong right direction.

 

[Jacowboy]

Also, imma be real and I'm probably gonna piss a lot of you off, but by far, the worst written character is Alexis. I understand the reasons why she was written that way, but it's still bad.

She's like entirely 2 different people depending on whether you talk to her on the plane or if you do the Alexis secret path... and speaking of irrational crushes: Alexis

I get that Nyx probably wanted a "quick" LI to start off the game, but damn, when you compare her to the Alexis in the secret path, she's legit two different people, it's kinda jarring ngl... So when people complain about Erynn I'm like... really??