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I donwloaded the game be coincident to check. Well I have to say this VN is one of the best ones Ive seen. This story and the twists are brilliant. Real good and solid story writing. Plus the characters are very nice. Not the typical allways same stuff or backgrounds...it is really unique.

The story sucked me really in so I hope there is more content coming up soon. And thanks for that work so far. For me a real juwel here.
need to wait a while still.
 

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Oh, so that's how it is, hmm? Author made Zach into the unpopular one (probably to feel better about themselves) for whatever reason and MC the popular one for whatever reason. Ok, so I'm going to make sure the MC isn't going to get any pussy. The world is shoving pussy his way with no effort from his side whatsoever? Oh no no, we can't have it that way. He's an idiot, he's going to deny all the girls there. :D Gonna be fun.
 

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The author is female.
I wrote "themselves". But even so, you can never be sure. But if they are, than it's even sader. So it's a woman that makes game about her dream guy as MC and makes it that all women feel the same way as she does, right?

I don't know. I just find it annoying. Zach is at least trying. Yes, he does it all wrong but he actually does SOMETHING. Don't take me wrong, I don't give a damn about Zach not getting any pussy, it's just that MC has it fucking easy. MC just IS and all women fall for him. Female or not, it does seem like a wet dream of some unpopular kid.
 

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I wrote "themselves". But even so, you can never be sure. But if they are, than it's even sader. So it's a woman that makes game about her dream guy as MC and makes it that all women feel the same way as she does, right?

I don't know. I just find it annoying. Zach is at least trying. Yes, he does it all wrong but he actually does SOMETHING. Don't take me wrong, I don't give a damn about Zach not getting any pussy, it's just that MC has it fucking easy. MC just IS and all women fall for him. Female or not, it does seem like a wet dream of some unpopular kid.
Dont agree here since the MC tells him what he things he should do. Honestly Zach is acting like many of the high school dorks that then wonder why no girl even falls for the stupid stuff they da. I however agree that Zach does a bit too much stupid stuff and should learn a bit more and advance. Maybe also if you drop a girl as you dont persue the route he could maybe get help from the MC or so (not that he gets the "leftovers") but this could give a nice drive and more of a "wingman" feeling.
 

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But man, playing this game by denying them all is really fun. It's like the MC is going on the street, all beautiful women are running to him, trying to hug him, kiss him, some drop on their knees ready to suck his dick and he's just shoving them around, kicking them, screaming "I don't want any of you, women, get away from me!". It's almost scarier than living a life where no woman wants you. Guess beautiful women feel like that all the time - men approaching them, hitting on them, cat calling them, some even try to grope them. Never thought I would experience something like that as male MC in any game. :D
 

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I wrote "themselves". But even so, you can never be sure. But if they are, than it's even sader. So it's a woman that makes game about her dream guy as MC and makes it that all women feel the same way as she does, right?
Or maybe she makes all women feel the same like you? Who knows? Who cares?
 
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whf

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Maybe that is why that game and the character are so good. Honestly all the interaction with the woman in the game and the dialoges (also why they like certain statements or actions) is much more realistic (or close to as its still a game) than in other. For me was one reason to support it via Patreon :)
Yeah, but sandly low standards in erotic games in general doesn't make those interactions and dialogues much realistic either.
 

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I wrote "themselves". But even so, you can never be sure. But if they are, than it's even sader. So it's a woman that makes game about her dream guy as MC and makes it that all women feel the same way as she does, right?

I don't know. I just find it annoying. Zach is at least trying. Yes, he does it all wrong but he actually does SOMETHING. Don't take me wrong, I don't give a damn about Zach not getting any pussy, it's just that MC has it fucking easy. MC just IS and all women fall for him. Female or not, it does seem like a wet dream of some unpopular kid.
Maybe that's the point isn't it? This is one of the most realistic AVNs in terms of interaction with NPCs, still... MC is the MC
So we expect him to be the guy going around and getting the girls without much resistence. Although, if you think about it, as of now we can only have sex or a romantic relationship with Lexi, Nikki and/or Cara (maybe Tori as well idk), at least from the main cast. Erynn, Layla, Elena and Val are just friendly flirting with MC so far.

Maybe Mel will be a option in the future, and Emily(?) I guess... if you are into that kind of shit... I don't kinkshame. It depends on the Author tho.
 
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MC: "I had so many girls chasing after me that I actually became really good at running."

This made me laugh. It really hits home here. :D

MC has it too easy, but writing is actually pretty good and girls are hot, albeit off limits for my MC. :D I think I'll let him have some fun with Erynn, they are childhood friends, so the atraction is logical there, not some love at first sight like with other girls.
 
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"Honestly all the interaction with the woman in the game and the dialoges (also why they like certain statements or actions) is much more realistic (or close to as its still a game) than in other."
Are You really sure about this ALL "Honestly"?
Because "Realistically", that's stretching things blatantly.
For just an example.

MC has the encounter with Ethan, Zach & company AT a Modeling Event.
After everything that's happen, Ethan's Actions/Intent(not to mention Zach's obsession with Erynn).
MC is just going to go home and play on the PC.

WITHOUT finding Erynn to make sure she's OK(as a friend/acquaintance, if nothing else).
And You call this realistic, Honestly.
 
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Lol, that Layla is funny. So clingy even if you are constantly rude to her. But what's funny was when you meet her sister Alexis. I was thinking man, she's got her little fingers everywhere around MC - mother is a principal, sister Alexis, it's just a matter of time we'll meet her father, hmm? Bam, that was that dude in the bar, right? :D So next are grandparents, maybe she's got some other sister or brother, then we'll go for her cousins, hell, who knows maybe we already met some. :D

Ok, enough spamming. This concludes my stories from Laylaland. Have a nice day, guys and gals.
 

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Lol, that Layla is funny. So clingy even if you are constantly rude to her. But what's funny was when you meet her sister Alexis. I was thinking man, she's got her little fingers everywhere around MC - mother is a principal, sister Alexis, it's just a matter of time we'll meet her father, hmm? Bam, that was that dude in the bar, right? :D So next are grandparents, maybe she's got some other sister or brother, then we'll go for her cousins, hell, who knows maybe we already met some. :D

Ok, enough spamming. This concludes my stories from Laylaland. Have a nice day, guys and gals.
You missed some really important Char, Lak the Tattoo Artist (Alexis Cousin). Can't wait for the Drama if you popped Lak back then and Alexis/Layla find out bout it. BooooooM :ROFLMAO:
 

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Ok, so I finished what's there so far. Damn, that shower peeking went down spectacularly. Good job, MC. :D Yeah, I was thinking maybe I'll let him a have a go at Val, that bonding in the bus was actually pretty nice (and she's freaking sexy - those big doe eyes, just that scary mix of cute and hot), but after that truth of dare failure it doesn't seem to work out. Oh well.
Damn, that 9th chapter has 2000 pics, but if you play it like I do, you will get a hundred and are done in a heartbeat. :D

In any case it's a solid game. There could be more story, but writing is good, girls are sexy, I had reasonably good time. Yeah, no sexy time for the MC, but otherwise good.
 
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there was sexy time in flashbacks and also in present if chose cara earlier.
 

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I wrote "themselves". But even so, you can never be sure. But if they are, than it's even sader. So it's a woman that makes game about her dream guy as MC and makes it that all women feel the same way as she does, right?

I don't know. I just find it annoying. Zach is at least trying. Yes, he does it all wrong but he actually does SOMETHING. Don't take me wrong, I don't give a damn about Zach not getting any pussy, it's just that MC has it fucking easy. MC just IS and all women fall for him. Female or not, it does seem like a wet dream of some unpopular kid.
That's life, some dudes get pussy without trying while others turn into perfect gentlemen school shooters.
It has nothing to do with fantasy.
 
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