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Thanks again[VN] [Ren'Py] Intertwined [Episode 1-9, v0.9.2] [Nyx] [OS@11.66GB, MQ, MyRepack-YAC]
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I'm making good progress on the Sunday scenes. Working on a scene in the restaurant. Has been some time since MC had to work. So much for his spring break.
The difficult part though is that I have to change some of the script due to me adding that future scene I talked about last week. There was supposed to be a scene with multiple love interests involved, meaning there would've been quite a few scenarios happening. But because of the new scene, I think I'll keep the restaurant scene to a minimum because if I have to create a scene for every possible outcome, it will take me weeks. It will be something I'll change in the future though. I've added it to my add/change/rewrite notes.
The new scene hasn't been written yet. So I'll actually write and create the renders at the same time. Let's see how that turns out. That scene will also be the last Sunday scene. So, I'm getting closer to the last day (Monday) of this update.
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Your son, the stepbrother, how's that for intertwined?
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Exactly, 100%+ Spot On!
Gripping decisions without responding in kind, like wandering-plots lost in a blank mind.
Several opportunities to seize yet, none taken.
Fillers in after thoughts serving no purpose like a painting left undone.
Leaving no resolve to account.
Unless there is closure to reason of---> WTF...why...JUST WHY!??.
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So Grateful to've never had to deal with that choice.
Having not done either path.
Their both Awesome in their own respects but, Val's my Fav and even IF she had no more content for the rest of the VN.
She would STILL be my favorite
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Turn 360º and walk away.
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he could help both up since he has 2 hands.
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Don't be unreasonable here, helping both just cause he has two hands and choosing the obvious thing to do...
What's next ? Are we getting help from the police or a lawyer to help Erynn/Layla, how should the MC get beaten up a few more times if we do so.
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I was wondering recently how boring a novel/show would be if everyone would do the most common sense thing every time, divulging new information the moment they find it, fixing conflicts the moment they arise, compromising, asking for professional help instead of trying to fix it on their own. Would it be as boring as irl, where the most 'exciting' thing that can happen is by accident, or natural catastrophe? Do you think a really good writer/group of writers could still pull off a compelling story, or is suspension of disbelief always necessary in storytelling?
Suspension of disbelief is more or less necessary depending on the genre, but that doesn't mean that a story has to be unimmersive. Even fantasy stories can be immersive, if the setting/universe has comprehensible rules and the characters act believably.
The "This isn't what you think!" trope from trashy romance flicks is lazy writing. Character driven narratives are the best imo, but only if the characters are believable. So I'd argue that you should only have to suspend your disbelief, when it comes to character's actions, if the writer took a lazy shortcut.
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A certain degree of suspension of disbelief is often necessary and nothing i have a problem with.
But it doesn't speak for high quality or good writing if it's necessary to continuously ignore basic common sense to keep things interesting, it certainly makes for bad drama.
It kinda works here as it is more of a soap opera, or in shows which don't take themself seriously, comedy etc.
But if u want to have a show/game which takes itself serious and have some dark themes, heavy conflict and drama that just doesn't work, at least not for me.