VN Ren'Py Intertwined [v0.13.2] [Nyx]

[JoeAngel]

I thought to myself Let's do Some Analyze Characters

 

[NebulousShooter]

It's not a path i would favor in my "main" playthrough, but it's certainly something daring to explore in alternative runs.
Wether because of attachment to the character or fear of the "WE ARE GETTING CUCKED(despite this being easily avoidable)" crowd, she went for vanilla.

I feel like this isn't the only example where personal attachment to the characters may have hurt the story, things like Layla taking being ditched for her sister without any issues felt weird and detached, Nyx can write better than this, i know, i've seen it... maybe comes from not wanting to see her characters looking like a crazy emotional mess that some players will make fun of.
For all the teasing that things will go balistic if these girls find out about each other, there's awful little fireworks.

I will also say that despite this game giving you the option to be a manwhore that flirts with every girl in town, it doesn't do it well.
When you are with a girl the game defaults to you caring deeply about this girl and not to "i want to get laid, and i will lie and deceive for it".
The sloooooow burns(and how patient our guy always is with it) aren't suited to a guy that just wants to sleep around.



The fact that Nyx herself says, "i'm not happy with this scene, it's gonna be released in this state anyways and i will change it at later date" makes it sound like poor planning, maybe re-address this now, do the necessary nips and tucks before releasing?
Not to mention she already hinted that there's one specific occurance on the MC-Erynn-Alexis triangle that she means to change from past chapters, and she said that after she had just released a reboot version...

For the enormous amount of 'Layla is jealous' shots in the game, I would have assumed a yandere-eque possible path, but she seems ok with just taking it after a while which is just sad, since she seems like good people.

 

[JoeAngel]

Gabi deserves more strength
And would be cool to Analyze the male characters

you mean the Mc Or Zack ? xD lol
it would be easy to give them Titles
Let's start with the bad
Ethan (THE BULLY PUSSY)
Zack (THE SD&SB{SMALL DICK & SMALL BRAIN}) Or (THE PIG SHIT)
John (THE BIKER LION)
MC Father (THE HUNTER SEDUCER)
MC I would say That up to every player how he play and go with option
and about Gabi I didn't see her play any sport and also her body say that she's not into sport other wise she would be like Lexi mom or even the Mc mother or Melissa

 

[MaliPizdek]

Here:

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I saw that but we don't see what MC sees, right? And who is that ex bf, any pics of him?

 

[JoeAngel]

I saw that but we don't see what MC sees, right? And who is that ex bf, any pics of him?

will for me i don't want to see what the Mc sees if you put in your mind you will understand why you can't look at friend the same way you used to

 

[valbitterb]

 

[cxx]

not gonna happen.

 

[LSC82]

For the enormous amount of 'Layla is jealous' shots in the game, I would have assumed a yandere-eque possible path, but she seems ok with just taking it after a while which is just sad, since she seems like good people.

Yup, everything we knew about her pointed in this direction, young, a little immature, (likely) first love, crazy possessive and jealous... perfect recipe for a emotional storm.
Yet, she gets the news that the guy she's been obssessing about is ending things with her... and it's because of her sister of all people!!!!

She gets the news, is a little sad, but moves on rather quickly... immediately becomes good friends with the guy that just broke her heart and is very supportive of him with his sister, she's too much of a good sport for me to buy it.

Funny enough, she flies off the handle and doesn't wanna talk to Alexis or the MC(and keeps this up for a few days at least) if you choose to reveal you banged Alexis in the pizza place date
That's more in line with the previously established character, and honestly more relatable and endearing, characters showing passion and emotion in even in a break up is what it's all about.
No one plays these things to see prople be reasonable and logical.

 

[Jericho85]

No one plays these things to see people be reasonable and logical.

 

[JoeAngel]

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That not Logical to give Margaret Hope then kill it

 

[valbitterb]

Yup, everything we knew about her pointed in this direction, young, a little immature, (likely) first love, crazy possessive and jealous... perfect recepy for a emotional storm.
Yet, she gets the news that the guy she's been obssessing about is ending things with her... and it's because of her sister of all people!!!!

She gets the news, is a little sad, but moves on rather quickly... immediately becomes good friends with the guy that just broke her heart and is very supportive of him with his sister, she's too much of a good sport for me to buy it.

Funny enough, she flies off the handle and doesn't wanna talk to Alexis or the MC(and keeps this up for a few days at least) if you choose to reveal you banged Alexis in the pizza place date
That's more in line with the previously established character, and honestly more relatable and endearing, characters showing passion and emotion in even in a break up is what it's all about.
No one plays these things to see prople be reasonable and logical.

I love this: "That's more in line with the previously established character, and honestly more relatable and endearing, characters showing passion and emotion in even in a break up is what it's all about.

No one plays these things to see people be reasonable and logical. "

 

[valbitterb]

Intertwined Foreshadowing

Spoiler: Before Meeting Mama's Mama

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[Warscared]

Intertwined Foreshadowing

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so Zach hitting on Valeria again? did the MC not told Val who lured him into the trap?
is this a revenge plan where the MC beats up Zach and Dylan rapes Zach´s ass?

Sometimes, when I read a Warscared post, I feel like Clarisse Starling peeking inside Hannibal's brain

i am not sure how to feel about this,
i mimic my emotions since i can hardly feel any and therefore in such situations i am never sure how i should feel!
yeah i know my psychologist told me just to feel and not over think it
but that is sort of irrational, whats the point of feeling for the sake of feeling
if you can not use the pretense of feeling to manipulate others?
sort of a waste of a good opportunity and resources imho!

but thats just me you do you... preferably not with a dildo...
unless you are a girl... and if you are wtf is wrong with you?
get a vibrator and buy some batteries! a dildo pfuuu...

I thought to myself Let's do Some Analyze Characters View attachment 2775070

i disagree with how you choose to rate them but i can respect the effort!

 

[CrazyRabbit]

i am not sure how to feel about this,
i mimic my emotions since i can hardly feel any and therefore in such situations i am never sure how i should feel!
yeah i know my psychologist told me just to feel and not over think it
but that is sort of irrational, whats the point of feeling for the sake of feeling
if you can not use the pretense of feeling to manipulate others?
sort of a waste of a good opportunity and resources imho!

but thats just me you do you... preferably not with a dildo...
unless you are a girl... and if you are wtf is wrong with you?
get a vibrator and buy some batteries! a dildo pfuuu...

Making you own pretense of feeling profitable ?
Welp CEOs all over the world are wetting their undies at this idea.

Alright then, not a girl so no dildo nor vibrator.
Gonna play a mindless VN, see if that works

 

[LSC82]

Intertwined Foreshadowing

Spoiler: Before Meeting Mama's Mama

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Wasn't this douchebag going on a week long trip last we "spoke" to him? Not even his family can stand being with him i guess...
Also, granny is coming into town? We have enough problems with people wanting to bang Mom...

so Zach hitting on Valeria again? did the MC not told Val who lured him into the trap?
is this a revenge plan where the MC beats up Zach and Dylan rapes Zach´s ass?

Doesn't look like Valeria to me, too skinny... just another girl having the unlucky experience of Zack "putting the moves" on her.
I would say sabotage him, but nature handles that.

 

[xCalon]

Wasn't this douchebag going on a week long trip last we "spoke" to him? Not even his family can stand being with him i guess...
Also, granny is coming into town? We have enough problems with people wanting to bang Mom...

Doesn't look like Valeria to me, too skinny... just another girl having the unlucky experience of Zack "putting the moves" on her.
I would say sabotage him, but nature handles that.

I think in this case, or in this picture, the point is not the two girl or Zack in the background. The point is the woman with blue bag in her hand, she is Elena's mother.

 

[Warscared]

I think in this case, or in this picture, the point is not the two girl or Zack in the background. The point is the woman with blue bag in her hand, she is Elena's mother.

you mean... the MC`s father cousins daughter (3 more random familial relationship!) step sister?

 

[valbitterb]

so Zach hitting on Valeria again? did the MC not told Val who lured him into the trap?
is this a revenge plan where the MC beats up Zach and Dylan rapes Zach´s ass?

i am not sure how to feel about this,
i mimic my emotions since i can hardly feel any and therefore in such situations i am never sure how i should feel!
yeah i know my psychologist told me just to feel and not over think it
but that is sort of irrational, whats the point of feeling for the sake of feeling
if you can not use the pretense of feeling to manipulate others?
sort of a waste of a good opportunity and resources imho!

but thats just me you do you... preferably not with a dildo...
unless you are a girl... and if you are wtf is wrong with you?
get a vibrator and buy some batteries! a dildo pfuuu...

i disagree with how you choose to rate them but i can respect the effort!

I hope there is a scene where the MC tells Val of Zach's betrayal.

I think Dylan has higher standards. Even a weed would think twice before taking root in Zach's anus.

 

[valbitterb]

I think in this case, or in this picture, the point is not the two girl or Zack in the background. The point is the woman with blue bag in her hand, she is Elena's mother.

Yes. It's Ava.

When Nyx redoes the earlier chapters, I wonder if she'll be sprinkling more of this foreshadowing/easter eggs or "intertwined" hints.

 

[valbitterb]

MC punching Ethan

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