VN Ren'Py Intertwined [v0.13.2] [Nyx]

[valbitterb]

Really messy stuff lol.
You tell a girl you like her BFF after she blew you and right after she basically rewarded you with a topless make out session with both girls...
And then you add messing around with her sister (and maybe her BFF too), good way for all the girls to resent you at the end...

Given that Elena immediately turned off if you broke Layla's heart by chosing Alexis, it's actually quite possible that she won't be "does that mean you are free now?", following these events.

Do you think there's a possible ending where the MC ends up alone, alone, alone hated by the main ladies? just fucking around with the side ladies?

Off topic, I like that the Layla path gives you a moment showing Darryl's character with more nuance and in a little bit more sympathetic light. Otherwise, he's just a one-dimensional douche. And Sienna is silent but deadly (experienced).

 

[Capt. Fubar]

Now I believe gods actually exist, a true miracle for sour eyes.

Because she can't do anything beautiful,
intimate with her son.
Who makes such two beautiful beauties,
and then nothing to do with it !!

Spoiler: heavenly,divine,intimate...

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We will get both of them, we must; first one by one and then... and then both of them. They dreamed about MC anyway, this is 50% of the road; other 50% depends on developer's balls. We will see if developer is a real man or a snowflake... soon.

 

[NebulousShooter]

As someone commented above, damn we made Layla cry (again) if you broke up with her at camp. I must say I loved Layla's first time having sex. That's one of the more (if not the most) realistic ones I've seen in an AVN/porn game, especially with regards to Layla's behavior. I already predicted it when I saw her all overly dressed up, the MC noticing her nervousness, her buying multiple drinks without getting too drunk and the different looks in her eyes. It was a sweet first time.

Regarding Gabi's friend, I'm with you. I'm guessing she is Val's mom. And she might be the Entangled actress. Val is quite secretive and private. I wouldn't be surprised.

Also I noticed, perfume advertising guy client actually appears in an earlier scene as foreshadowing.

Well, I always thought Gabi is Val's aunt, not mother, so back on the theory

can you get together with Melissa now?

 

[xCalon]

(...) this is 50% of the road; other 50% depends on developer's balls. We will see if developer is a real man or a snowflake... soon.

This will be a little bit problematic, because the developer is a she, a real woman. And Nyx is against the incest content.

 

[Dessolos]

What sex scene with Erynn?
Layla finally lost her virginity,
but erynn still gives us blue balls

Honestly while I think Erynn is my favorite cant really decide between her and Lexi truth be told.
I do kinda like the slow burn aspect off Erynn even if we get blue balled the way it is delivered doesn't feel bad to me cause of how playful her and the MC are with one another and their feelings for another they clearly don't want to mess things up. While we did get a good amount of Erynn content I was still hoping for more still felt short especially cause the other 1/2 of her content is tied Lexi's path. I was hoping we get a proper date with Erynn at the very least.

Edit : While this sounds like a complaint this is my first update so im not used to how long the average chapters feel in length I didnt discover this wonderful game till V10.5. Also I love this game anytime I play it and finish it the game makes me sad for a few days unless i move onto another avn equally as good cause I have to wait for the next cycle of deveoplment. That is how powerful of an effect this game has on me and why it's #1 on my list. Only a few AVN's ive played had a powerful emotion affectt on me like that. No more than 5 id say

 

[valbitterb]

Well, I always thought Gabi is Val's aunt, not mother, so back on the theory

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I agree that Gabi is possibly Val's aunt or at worst an informal auntie friend who is super close to Val's mom.

 

[NebulousShooter]

Do you think there's a possible ending where the MC ends up alone, alone, alone?

Off topic, I like that the Layla path gives you a moment showing Darryl's character with more nuance and in a little bit more sympathetic light. Otherwise, he's just a one-dimensional douche.

And Sienna is silent but deadly (experienced).

There is a variable for MC no friends already, you can bet you will have an ending where you screw everything up.

 

[valbitterb]

Honestly while I think Erynn is my favorite cant really decide between her and Lexi truth be told.
I do kinda like the slow burn aspect off Erynn even if we get blue balled the way it is delivered doesn't feel bad to me cause of how playful her and the MC are with one another and their feelings for another they clearly don't want to mess things up. While we did get a good amount of Erynn content I was still hoping for more still felt short especially cause the other 1/2 of her content is tied Lexi's path. I was hoping we get a proper date with Erynn at the very least.

Edit : While this sounds like a complaint this is my first update so im not used to how long the average chapters feel in length I didnt discover this wonderful game till V10.5. Also I love this game anytime I play it and finish it the game makes me sad for a few days unless i move onto another avn equally as good cause I have to wait for the next cycle of deveoplment. That is how powerful of an effect this game has on me and why it's #1 on my list. Only a few AVN's ive played had a powerful emotion affectt on me like that. No more than 5 id say

With all its flaws, it's my number one too. I'm an AVN newbie, and have played only several, but this one - like you - really gets my emotions the most.

 

[valbitterb]

There is a variable for MC no friends already, you can bet you will have an ending where you screw everything up.

Would that be a first for an AVN? Hopefully even if the MC ends up alone, he realizes his screw ups and becomes more mature.

 

[soprano31]

Honestly while I think Erynn is my favorite cant really decide between her and Lexi truth be told.
I do kinda like the slow burn aspect off Erynn even if we get blue balled the way it is delivered doesn't feel bad to me cause of how playful her and the MC are with one another and their feelings for another they clearly don't want to mess things up. While we did get a good amount of Erynn content I was still hoping for more still felt short especially cause the other 1/2 of her content is tied Lexi's path. I was hoping we get a proper date with Erynn at the very least.

Edit : While this sounds like a complaint this is my first update so im not used to how long the average chapters feel in length I didnt discover this wonderful game till V10.5. Also I love this game anytime I play it and finish it the game makes me sad for a few days unless i move onto another avn equally as good cause I have to wait for the next cycle of deveoplment. That is how powerful of an effect this game has on me and why it's #1 on my list. Only a few AVN's ive played had a powerful emotion affectt on me like that. No more than 5 id say

Sorry,there is only one favourite,
my chica bomb Elena ,mi amore

fuck,layla,I'm not going with you,
I'll wait till i can take your best friend !!

 

[Tremonia]

Valeria is a superbitch. I don't like her anymore. I've played that update several times now and the more I do the more I hate her. There was this red flag before where she goes after MC although she knows about MC being in a dating relationship with Layla or being Alexis' boyfriend. But now we see her with Darryl and the gym dude. At first I thought she's kind of a victim of Darryl's behavior but the more I play the scenes with her again I can see she's okay with that else she would stop that.

Valeria is like a mirror of MC. MC's circle of friends are all females and he's a little Casanova who tries to get all the pants. Valeria's the same but female. Her friends are males and she acts accordingly. Cute but crazy. She's poison. MC should run every time he sees her.

 

[CrioniC.Syn]

Valeria is a superbitch. I don't like her anymore. I've played that update several times now and the more I do the more I hate her. There was this red flag before where she goes after MC although she knows about MC being in a dating relationship with Layla or being Alexis' boyfriend. But now we see her with Darryl and the gym dude. At first I thought she's kind of a victim of Darryl's behavior but the more I play the scenes with her again I can see she's okay with that else she would stop that.

Valeria is like a mirror of MC. MC's circle of friends are all females and he's a little Casanova who tries to get all the pants. Valeria's the same but female. Her friends are males and she acts accordingly. Cute but crazy. She's poison. MC should run every time he sees her.

You got that from discord. Nyx said that yesterday.

 

[Dessolos]

Valeria is a superbitch. I don't like her anymore. I've played that update several times now and the more I do the more I hate her. There was this red flag before where she goes after MC although she knows about MC being in a dating relationship with Layla or being Alexis' boyfriend. But now we see her with Darryl and the gym dude. At first I thought she's kind of a victim of Darryl's behavior but the more I play the scenes with her again I can see she's okay with that else she would stop that.

Valeria is like a mirror of MC. MC's circle of friends are all females and he's a little Casanova who tries to get all the pants. Valeria's the same but female. Her friends are males and she acts accordingly. Cute but crazy. She's poison. MC should run every time he sees her.

I got the opposite feel from her. To me she gave me the feeling yes she may be okay with it but I see her more as having fun or teasing but with the MC she feels more reserved like with the MC she may have potential feeelings for while the other she does not so just has fun teasing or what not.

Yet to do Layla path yet but i didnt get the feeling she was trying to steal the MC from lexi

 

[Tremonia]

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Who is your favourite character now? Let's see if anything changes again or maybe another character enters the top3? You can vote for multiple characters.

Not on the list? Please share it in the comments.
Last poll results:

POLL#10
Valeria(521)
Layla(374)
Alexis(371)
POLL#9
Valeria(348)
Layla(325)
Alexis(288)
POLL#8
Alexis(327)
Layla(321)
Valeria(316)
POLL#7
Alexis(313)
Layla(281)
Erynn(198)
POLL#6
Alexis(283)
Layla(231)
Nikki(193)
POLL#5
Alexis(143)
Layla(118)
Erynn(102)

The girl who ends up on top will be killed off.

 

[Tremonia]

You got that from discord. Nyx said that yesterday.

Nah, I said nearly the same last Tuesday before the release.

Well, theories are nice but Valeria is far from perfect. She's a sneaky bitch who is fully aware that Layla has the hots for MC and he's in a serious relationship with Alexis, but that doesn't stop her to hunt him. You're sure that's a perfect girl one want to be? There're way more "perfect" girls in this AVN. Sure, if you only rate the looks, Valeria is top tier in this AVN.

 

[ThunderStruck]

Getting errors. I think the saves are no longer compatible with this update which uses v8.10. Anyone having same error while being on Erynn path?

I'm sorry, but an uncaught exception occurred.

While running game code:
  File "game/episode_11.rpy", line 2, in script
    if Erynn_Week3_Monday_Help == False:
  File "game/episode_11.rpy", line 2, in <module>
    if Erynn_Week3_Monday_Help == False:
NameError: name 'Erynn_Week3_Monday_Help' is not defined

I've applied bugfix (compressed version) but I'm still getting errors all over the place, on all pats, especially during Emily (mom) scenes. I will probably delete all saves and persistent file and than start over to see if errors still remain.

 

[CrioniC.Syn]

Nah, I said nearly the same last Tuesday before the release.

I take it back then. And you're right. She's a bitch and has trouble written all over her.

 

[bananabrown]

Valeria's attractive, but she's for the streets.

 

[camube]

just finished the chapter. I feel like the entanglement on this VN is too complicated, some times even needlessly. It feels like a soap opera, which i guess is what's it's trying to go for.

I didn't have an Alexis path at all until i had to redo from the beginning in this update, and i think, "might as well". And then i saw many intertwining that i don't see in other routes, like Alexis-Iris or Male Bartender-John that all hinges on the MC having a relationship with Alexis.

After I finished playing I feel like, to get maximum amount of scenes in 1 go through the entanglements, the MC has to prioritize having a relationship with Alexis over everything before then getting caught doubledipping in Ch 9 by Alexis and Layla

And then all of a sudden, Erynn is now okay with the MC again, lol. That's a bit of an unexpected from my view. To veer off so far from Erynn's path, just to go back to Erynn's path again because Layla and Alexis both dumped the MC

The way I played that accidental path makes me feel like the center of all the entanglements are Alexis. Like Alexis is the core entanglement, not Erynn, not Layla.

 

[valbitterb]

Everything Layla was perfect this episode, the break up... oh boy, i'm a person who criticized the scene where you pick Alexis over Layla, i thought Layla was too non-chalant about it, the guy she's been so invested with is dumping her... for her freaking sister!!!! She was too cool about it and has been too much of a good sport since...
This time it's truly a tough scene to watch, and the girl is so freaking hurt by this, this scene delivers the emotional punch necessary, kudos!!! Nothing else to add.

And the romance scene, yeah this girl is 100% invested and convinced this guy is the one for her.
And you can feel how tense she is to take this step, very sweet and also emotional, again perfect delivery.

Erynn can be a bit frustrating given how slow it is, how much hesitancy is there, but despite being older than Layla she's close to the same level of inexperience and she has closed off in a huge way following her trauma, she also puts so much expectations into this guy, that he's the one for her.
If anything, imo, the real breakthrough is when she starts relaxing after we "diddle" her... rather than the fact that we made her cum.
She's getting closer to learning that she doesn't need to be afraid.

Val... her "girl with attitude" was absent in that scene, very passive.
And in the scene with her trainer she was in full, "girl who hangs out with guys" mode, the guy grabs her ass, they joke about it, she gives him a lighthearted kick...


I'm fairly sure it will be possible to blow it with every girl, maybe Tori will still throw you a bone lol.
Yeah in a group where most people seem to have money(the Monroes obviously have a lot, the MCs mom is doing better than alright, Zach got a sports car despite not working), Darryl is a guy who has to work to get anything, he obviously has his rough edges, no excuses here, but i can see why he's hostile, he probably worked hard to be the number 1 prospect and becoming the big guy at school...
And here comes this new guy, challenging him for number 1 spot and grabbing girls attention... i understand why he's not "welcoming", he feels he must defend "his territory".
I feel like if we had "Intertwined next generation" he'd probably turn out like a cool dude... i know a few of those that were assholes back in school but turned out ok later, maybe he'll cool off before the endgame.

Good point on reminding me that its strange that Layla is fine with Alexis being with the MC. The only time Layla cries about it to Elena at the training camp is when she and Alexis break up with you but Layla is still friends with you.

That's an excellent analysis of Darryl's social background, and also very psychologically plausible. (In BADIK, it's the other way around, the MC comes from a poorer background that most of the other characters.) Intertwined, if Nyx wanted, could give some nice social commentary.