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One of those scenes, the MC will not be present, or at least not in the vicinity. I'm still debating how exactly I want to show you that scene. Either show the full scene and what's happening or have a character who is in the scene tell MC what happened. I think the first option is a little bit more interesting? Let me know.
If the scene is about John (after he learn that Erynn is his daughter) with his hammer and his hacksaw transforming Ethan into an artistic meat puzzle, i sure hope we'll see that scene ;)
 
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the last update post I saw on this thread was this I think that is the most recent one as it was like 5 or so pages back.

Still working on the restaurant scene(s) and will be for the next weeks also. It'll most likely be the largest scene of the update. It has a lot of smaller scenes within it and depending on path(s), you'll jump back and forth between them. The difficult part is to make them all flow together and make sense.

After the restaurant scene, there will be 2 more bigger scenes. One of those scenes, the MC will not be present, or at least not in the vicinity. I'm still debating how exactly I want to show you that scene. Either show the full scene and what's happening or have a character who is in the scene tell MC what happened. I think the first option is a little bit more interesting? Let me know.
We know it's progressing, but no word on how long it will take or when the release will be.
Thank you both for that. I don't mind waiting. Not sure I like the part about a scene where the MC isn't present. That could be anything and is very worrisome. Especially with what happened with the crap before.
 
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Thank you both for that. I don't mind waiting. Not sure I like the part about a scene whether the MC isn't present. That could be anything and is very worrisome. Especially with what happened with the crap before.
Yeah if it has to do with Erynn kind of scared what it could be just hope it isnt the last scene that ends on a cliffhanger haha.
 
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Yeah if it has to do with Erynn kind of scared what it could be just hope it isnt the last scene that ends on a cliffhanger haha.
Or Valeria. When she helped us against Ethan. I don't want anything bad happen to any of them. Except maybe the fake best friend. I don't like him.
 

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Or Valeria. When she helped us against Ethan. I don't want anything bad happen to any of them. Except maybe the fake best friend. I don't like him.
I hope we dont get back at Zach till they go to school. I think it would make for a fun scene to get in a school fight haha
 
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I hope we dont get back at Zach till they go to school. I think it would make for a fun scene to get in a school fight haha
Yeah. But then that makes us out as a bully. I'd rather do it off-campus. Zach deserves to be humiliated, but not if that means people think we're a bully.
 

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The MC is always talking very big, but he's unfortunately (for him) full of air, the only way the MC is beating anyone in a fight is by having either Nathan or John with him.
The only time he didn't ended flat on the ground in a fight was when he surprise-attacked Nathan (edit : not Nathan, Ethan i mean).

So i doubt it would be a good idea for him to fight Zach alone ;)

Unless it's the MC seduction strategy : getting beaten so often that the women are attracted by him out of pity. :ROFLMAO:
 
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The MC is always talking very big, but he's unfortunately (for him) full of air, the only way the MC is beating anyone in a fight is by having either Nathan or John with him.
The only time he didn't ended flat on the ground in a fight was when he surprise-attacked Nathan.

So i doubt it would be a good idea for him to fight Zach alone ;)

Unless it's the MC seduction strategy : getting beaten so often that the women are attracted by him out of pity. :ROFLMAO:
The MC has been in 5 fights during the story. The first fight was against Emanuel and his two friends in Alvarado where he lost, second fight was against Emanuel and his friends again but this time he won bc he was with Nathan, third fight against Lucas where he lost bc he got sucker punched in the face, fourth time when beat Ethan and last one where he was in a 1 v 3 against Ethan and his 2 buddies, and if you have Val kicking Ethan MC knocks out both the other guys by himself whereas with John he beats only one. So he only lost when he was outnumbered or he got sucker punched. So i think he could take Zach.
 
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The MC has been in 5 fights during the story. The first fight was against Emanuel and his two friends in Alvarado where he lost, second fight was against Emanuel and his friends again but this time he won bc he was with Nathan, third fight against Lucas where he lost bc he got sucker punched in the face, fourth time when beat Ethan and last one where he was in a 1 v 3 against Ethan and his 2 buddies, and if you have Val kicking Ethan MC knocks out both the other guys by himself whereas with John he beats only one. So he only lost when he was outnumbered or he got sucker punched. So i think he could take Zach.
yeah that's why I think he can take him Zach plus Zach looks like he would be a pushover for the MC
 
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The MC is always talking very big, but he's unfortunately (for him) full of air, the only way the MC is beating anyone in a fight is by having either Nathan or John with him.
The only time he didn't ended flat on the ground in a fight was when he surprise-attacked Nathan.
I'm missing something. Isn't Nathan his friend? The last time I saw the guy was when he helped me beat up those bullies that wanted Cara.
 

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The MC has been in 5 fights during the story. The first fight was against Emanuel and his two friends in Alvarado where he lost, second fight was against Emanuel and his friends again but this time he won bc he was with Nathan, third fight against Lucas where he lost bc he got sucker punched in the face, fourth time when beat Ethan and last one where he was in a 1 v 3 against Ethan and his 2 buddies, and if you have Val kicking Ethan MC knocks out both the other guys by himself whereas with John he beats only one. So he only lost when he was outnumbered or he got sucker punched. So i think he could take Zach.
this... yeah he got fucked up a couple times but it was him mostly being outnumbered, or sucker punched when he wasn't paying attention. He is decently built, so in a fair fight with an opponent similar to him I don't see why he couldn't win. He just had bad luck in the past
 
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