VN Ren'Py Intertwined [v0.13.2] [Nyx]

[Tremonia]

If she's sick of answering about incest, she shouldn't have teased it in game with lewd shots of MC's mom, relationship points and some dubious choices.

Well, you know about "relationship points" because you looked into the code. This doesn't mean anything for the story. Variables are the way how a dev made a game. It doesn't say anything about the story. And btw there're just called points, not relationship points. But let's use your "term". A mother-son relationship is a relationship too. If you get enough Points with Emily she acts way better towards you. Without enough points you don't get a birthday present, for example.

And lewd shots... Well,... I don't know in which society those scenes would called "lewd". I just can speak for my country and here it's not uncommon to see the boobs of your mom. Be it at home after showering or at swimming or when she suns topless in the garden or many occasions more. It's the problem of the crowd, if they misinterpret such things as incest teasing. Wishful thinking of people with that fetish. They see it, because they want to see it. It's okay. There's no kinkshaming from my side. I respect that all. My one and only problem is why one can't just accept when a dev clearly states that they don't plan to please fetish beggars.

He left MC to become a father to Alexis and Layla, one older than MC and one around the same age.

Emily left Santiago before his birth. She got in contact again six years before the actual game time. That's why Andres left Emily. It's never mentioned when Santiago and Adriana met and since when they're a couple.

 

[NebulousShooter]

MC knew Elena was talking about him but did not want to make it awkward. He said that guy will choose you to her, or there was not any indication or inner monologue but whatever.

you see, if this was planned properly it would have given the player a hint of that, instead I am going to say its another retcon, because it made the MC look dumb as a rock

• I think Nyx butchered Val. What the fuck is that even mean she did not want to make a scene? She flirted with Daryl but does not see him like that, what's that even mean?

100%, she was so caught up in screwing with the players that she basically made her act out of character/ like trash last update and now tried to walk it back, making her look even weaker, by not at least owning it.

 

[Tremonia]

The bot holding the banhammer doesn't care about nuance like that. If a project gets too many reports in a short time, the hammer drops automatically.

It's not that simple with Patreon. The bot didn't react on accounts who aren't a patron of the reported artist. They learned after they banned some artists which were reported by some bots. So it has to be a significant number of the own patrons. Sure, everyone can still report any account. But it doesn't impact the automatic ban anymore. If enough non-patrons reports, a person looks after it to make sure it isn't another raid against an artist. If they think it's not, well, then they contact this artist.

 

[Raziel_8]

you see, if this was planned properly it would have given the player a hint of that, instead I am going to say its another retcon, because it made the MC look dumb as a rock

How dare you to say it wasn't properly planned
But i guess it will be something similiar with the Navarro/Gabi relationship...so far there was pretty much no doubt that he is Gabi's husband, but now you got to fit that dad of Lexi, relationship with Adriana somehow in there...

 

[Tremonia]

Did she ever elaborate why she removed it?

Yes. She got many feedback to that scene. She said she wasn't unsure about the scene herself and wanted to drop it, but she decided to let it in. After the feedback which stated the same problems she had with the scene (doesn't fit to the character) she drops it with the fix 0.11.1 to 0.11.2.

 

[lorkdubo]

Alexis and Layla's father is Zo 100%, thus making Navarro a friend of the family. The Cliffhanger is pretty stupid imo, and i expected to see Lakeyn again. Sad

 

[Maviarab]

Alexis and Layla's father is Zo 100%, thus making Navarro a friend of the family. The Cliffhanger is pretty stupid imo, and i expected to see Lakeyn again. Sad

And again...in all the time Erynn has been in the MC's bedroom...why has she never said something like...hey...that's Alexis' dad....

 

[anonnyscouse]

Competing for worst resolution of the cliffhanger?


MC: Santi's your Dad?
Lexi: Who the fuck is Santi.
MC: The person you said was your Dad.
Lexi: His name's not Santi.
MC: He told me it was.
Lexi: Dad, why did you tell MC your name is Santi?
Dad: Santi's an old mate, you know him, he's Gabi's husband, and I know who MC is so I thought I'd fuck with him for a laugh.
MC: You made me think I was dating my half-sister!
Dad: HA I knew you were dating, see I told you I'd find out who you were dating Lexi.
Lexi: Shit.

 

[NebulousShooter]

Alexis and Layla's father is Zo 100%, thus making Navarro a friend of the family. The Cliffhanger is pretty stupid imo, and i expected to see Lakeyn again. Sad

Lakelyn shows up only when you can start up the Iris route again, coming sooner provides no drama

 

[Raziel_8]

Competing for worst resolution of the cliffhanger?


MC: Santi's your Dad?
Lexi: Who the fuck is Santi.
MC: The person you said was your Dad.
Lexi: His name's not Santi.
MC: He told me it was.
Lexi: Dad, why did you tell MC your name is Santi?
Dad: Santi's an old mate, you know him, he's Gabi's husband, and I know who MC is so I thought I'd fuck with him for a laugh.
MC: You made me think I was dating my half-sister!
Dad: HA I knew you were dating, see I told you I'd find out who you were dating Lexi.
Lexi: Shit.

Somehow i think yours is better and way more funny than what we will get

 

[Tremonia]

Lakelyn shows up only when you can start up the Iris route again, coming sooner provides no drama

You think? I thought Lakelyn is the person Lexi and Layla collect from the airport. Can't wait to see Lexi's/Layla's reaction when they learn MC knows her.

 

[sarfid]

I played the game through other routes once again since yesterday's update... and in fact some things could happen in the next updates such as:
- Valeria/Zach romance patch
- Valeria/Zach/MC threesome for fun
- MC/Layla/Elena Threesome
- MC/Jasmine

And perhaps it could be added:

- MC/Layla/Sienna/Isaiah foursome

- MC/Layla/Valeria Threesome

 

[anglaas]

amazing VN, but this update is pretty small

 

[Raziel_8]

I played the game through other routes once again since yesterday's update... and in fact some things could happen in the next updates such as:
- Valeria/Zach romance patch
- Valeria/Zach/MC threesome for fun
- MC/Layla/Elena Threesome
- MC/Jasmine

And perhaps it could be added:

- MC/Layla/Sienna/Isaiah foursome

- MC/Layla/Valeria Threesome

My man. Homie. Did you actually play the same game as us ?
Three and foursomes ? Zach romance path ? Layla & Val path

 

[Maviarab]

I played the game through other routes once again since yesterday's update... and in fact some things could happen in the next updates such as:
- Valeria/Zach romance patch
- Valeria/Zach/MC threesome for fun
- MC/Layla/Elena Threesome
- MC/Jasmine

And perhaps it could be added:

- MC/Layla/Sienna/Isaiah foursome

- MC/Layla/Valeria Threesome

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[ImSenjou]

I posted this almost 2 years ago:

Is it already certain that Layla, Lexi and the MC have the same father?
The MC's life is so fucked up that I'm already saving myself for Val, I hope the DEV doesn't invent that she's some lost cousin of the MC, I'm already on my fourth route...

Unfortunately, even my interest in Val disappeared after the many changes that the game underwent in these two years.

 

[NebulousShooter]

You think? I thought Lakelyn is the person Lexi and Layla collect from the airport. Can't wait to see Lexi's/Layla's reaction when they learn MC knows her.

Pitch #2 its Lakelyn, but MC goes to visit Nathan and they never meet

 

[Pgabriel23]

nice error error error update game is fucked

 

[valbitterb]

Spoiler: Another Potential Rival, More Drama woohoo

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[DMoney1000]

And again...in all the time Erynn has been in the MC's bedroom...why has she never said something like...hey...that's Alexis' dad....

It's the biggest criticism I've had of the game: the dev took the term "Intertwined" too literally, to the point where the connections become contrived. Basically, the connections are only revealed when it creates a conflict, and never before, no matter how much it doesn't seem to make sense.

It's a shame, too, because I think most of the characters are actually pretty decently written, and for the most part, they talk and act like people.