VN Ren'Py Intertwined [v0.13.2] [Nyx]

[minibaer12]

This AVN definitely needs a lot more Slim Pickens. Now if Slim Pickens was the MC's bio dad, we'd be kicking Ethan's ass six updates ago.



An example of what you just talked about.

ME: " I love this moment of vulnerability with Erynn here. " " Her eyes are anxious, worried, sad. "

This would hit so much harder if the blackmail plot was given top priority for resolution or there was no blackmail plot and we're just focusing on relationship drama between the MC and the ladies.

The dialogue that follows is much more interesting

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[LSC82]

An example of what you just talked about.

ME: " I love this moment of vulnerability with Erynn here. " " Her eyes are anxious, worried, sad. "

This would hit so much harder if the blackmail plot was given top priority for resolution or there was no blackmail plot and we're just focusing on relationship drama between the MC and the ladies.

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The girl is in desperate need for reassurance... but the game doesn't give us the option to be more assertive or prioritize solving this Ethan BS.

The dialogue that follows is much more interesting

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The way the Nikki dialogue differs from the Cara one is kinda hillarious lol.

I also wonder how Erynn will take the news we are spending saturday on Riverside(assuming you kept Cara/Nikki around).
That's also an interesting conversation

 

[minibaer12]

The girl is in desperate need for reassurance... but the game doesn't give us the option to be more assertive or prioritize solving this Ethan BS.



The way the Nikki dialogue differs from the Cara one is kinda hillarious lol.

I also wonder how Erynn will take the news we are spending saturday on Riverside(assuming you kept Cara/Nikki around).
That's also an interesting conversation

Things are completely different with Nikki; Nikki's name keeps coming up not only with the MC but also with Erynn. Erynn is well aware that Nikki is stronger not only physically but also mentally. She sees them as a threat.

you remember...

 

[minibaer12]

I also wonder how Erynn will take the news we are spending saturday on Riverside(assuming you kept Cara/Nikki around).
That's also an interesting conversation

Speaking of the weekend: in some routes it will be a very “sporty” weekend in EP 13!

Friday morning: Beach visit with Erynn
Friday lunchtime: flight to Riverside (6h)
Friday evening: Meeting with Nikki and/or Cara
Saturday (probably) lunchtime: drive to Nathan (approx. 2 hours) (not yet clear with or without Nikki/Cara)
Saturday afternoon: Meeting with Nathan
Sunday morning: Departure to Madison Springs (6h)
Sunday afternoon to evening: Meeting with other LI's

After this weekend my MC needs a vacation!!!

 

[Maviarab]

Speaking of the weekend: in some routes it will be a very “sporty” weekend in EP 13!

Friday morning: Beach visit with Erynn
Friday lunchtime: flight to Riverside (6h)
Friday evening: Meeting with Nikki and/or Cara
Saturday (probably) lunchtime: drive to Nathan (approx. 2 hours) (not yet clear with or without Nikki/Cara)
Saturday afternoon: Meeting with Nathan
Sunday morning: Departure to Madison Springs (6h)
Sunday afternoon to evening: Meeting with other LI's

After this weekend my MC needs a vacation!!!

I'd just like to know what side-gig the MC has to be affording all these $600 flights

 

[Elduriel]

I'd just like to know what side-gig the MC has to be affording all these $600 flights

mommy dear is paying for it for sure

 

[valbitterb]

Nikki's name keeps coming up not only with the MC but also with Erynn. Erynn is well aware that Nikki is stronger not only physically but also mentally. She sees them as a threat. I conclude that Nikki has the same status as Alexis. I also rate the following “sex scenes” completely differently.

The dialogue that follows is much more interesting

NIKKI-TAKER is definitely the final boss.

Sorry Defenestrator.for.traitor, SlowGoesSlow and LSC82 ... I couldn't help myself ...

 

[minibaer12]

mommy dear is paying for it for sure

or Alexis???

 

[LSC82]

Speaking of the weekend: in some routes it will be a very “sporty” weekend in EP 13!

Friday morning: Beach visit with Erynn
Friday lunchtime: flight to Riverside (6h)
Friday evening: Meeting with Nikki and/or Cara
Saturday (probably) lunchtime: drive to Nathan (approx. 2 hours) (not yet clear with or without Nikki/Cara)
Saturday afternoon: Meeting with Nathan
Sunday morning: Departure to Madison Springs (6h)
Sunday afternoon to evening: Meeting with other LI's

After this weekend my MC needs a vacation!!!

Except this was his "free" week and monday he's back to school.
Well at least it's the good kind of busy, fucking a whole bunch of hot chicks!!!

I'd just like to know what side-gig the MC has to be affording all these $600 flights

Everyone is made of money in this fucking city...

mommy dear is paying for it for sure

She's the owner and chef of a high tier restaurant popular with the rich and famous (and owns a cafe too)... If she had to give money to Andres during those 5 years... she's probably handing it to the MC now, pocket money for her...

Add to that, Monroe/Navarro/Moore family absolutely loaded.
Val daughter of a famous actress(i assume).
Melissa is the hairstylist of celebrities...

Even John doesn't seem to be doing too bad.

Only exceptions seem to be Elena and Darryl, maybe Brooke's family.

 

[minibaer12]

Except this was his "free" week and monday he's back to school.
Well at least it's the good kind of busy, fucking a whole bunch of hot chicks!!!


Everyone is made of money in this fucking city...


She's the owner and chef of a high tier restaurant popular with the rich and famous (and owns a cafe too)... If she had to give money to Andres during those 5 years... she's probably handing it to the MC now, pocket money for her...

Add to that, Monroe/Navarro/Moore family absolutely loaded.
Val daughter of a famous actress(i assume).
Melissa is the hairstylist of celebrities...

Even John doesn't seem to be doing too bad.

Only exceptions seem to be Elena and Darryl, maybe Brooke's family.

wasn't it last weekend EP 6 two weeks (in game) where the MC flew to Riverside for his non-father's wedding???

Climate protection looks different.

 

[valbitterb]

She's the owner and chef of a high tier restaurant popular with the rich and famous (and owns a cafe too)... If she had to give money to Andres during those 5 years... she's probably handing it to the MC now, pocket money for her...

Add to that, Monroe/Navarro/Moore family absolutely loaded.
Val daughter of a famous actress(i assume).
Melissa is the hairstylist of celebrities...

Even John doesn't seem to be doing too bad.

Only exceptions seem to be Elena and Darryl, maybe Brooke's family.

Thanks for pointing out that most of the characters don't want for money. I agree that it looks like a problem for Elena, Darryl and Brooke's families.

Even those bastards Ethan and Zach are rich bastards.

 

[LSC82]

Thanks for pointing out that most of the characters don't want for money. I agree that it looks like a problem for Elena, Darryl and Brooke's families.

Even those bastards Ethan and Zach are rich bastards.

Ethan has money for sure, those dudes probably walk around with him because he pays for everything, not because they like him.
That bar looked expensive and he's a regular there, and he was paying for 4 people besides him, 2 girls and and his 2 "body guards".

And Zach got a cool car and personalized plates...

wasn't it last weekend EP 6 two weeks (in game) where the MC flew to Riverside for his non-father's wedding???

Climate protection looks different.

It's only been 2 weeks? Feels like a whole lot more lol.

 

[Elduriel]

Thanks for pointing out that most of the characters don't want for money. I agree that it looks like a problem for Elena, Darryl and Brooke's families.

Even those bastards Ethan and Zach are rich bastards.

I always wondered how Melissa is making that much money... she has a pretty nice place, pool etc. Single mom, doesn't seem to be working all that much or regular schedule. Maybe parents are loaded?

 

[LSC82]

I always wondered how Melissa is making that much money... she has a pretty nice place, pool etc. Single mom, doesn't seem to be working all that much or regular schedule. Maybe parents are loaded?

I never questioned, but it didn't make much sense, hairstylist living in a nice neighborhood with a pool in her backyard...

But it appears that she isn't the type of hairstylist that works at a beauty parlor, she goes to the clients homes to do their hair, and she has Ximena in her client list.
So hairstylist to the rich and famous.

 

[minibaer12]

Ethan has money for sure, those dudes probably walk around with him because he pays for everything, not because they like him.
That bar looked expensive and he's a regular there, and he was paying for 4 people besides him, 2 girls and and his 2 "body guards".

And Zach got a cool car and personalized plates...

It's only been 2 weeks? Feels like a whole lot more lol.

shit, sorry, it's three weeks, my fault:
EP 10 was Nikki/Cara at the MC
EP 8 was the MC in the training camp
EP 6 the MC flew to Riverside

 

[balazar]

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Nikki after hearing about this conversation

 

[balazar]

shit, sorry, it's three weeks, my fault:
EP 10 was Nikki/Cara at the MC
EP 8 was the MC in the training camp
EP 6 the MC flew to Riverside

Imagine all the crap our hero could have gotten into in a 3 month period

 

[minibaer12]

I never questioned, but it didn't make much sense, hairstylist living in a nice neighborhood with a pool in her backyard...

But it appears that she isn't the type of hairstylist that works at a beauty parlor, she goes to the clients homes to do their hair, and she has Ximena in her client list.
So hairstylist to the rich and famous.

and it has to be really good; you can see the result of Cara!

 

[balazar]

Yup it gets frustrating how awful the situation is, blackmail, sexual harrassment, psychological torture and even physical abuse... and how little everyone seems to care about it and just goes about their daily lives like there's nothing wrong, including the MC and Erynn...
I understand she doesn't like to talk about this but still... Which brings me too:


I'm not saying you guys are wrong, it does feel like they are beyond simple making out...
But specially because we are dealing with a traumatized person... the MC needs to vocalize his feelings and stop playing "smooth".
This is a person who needs every reassurance that there's gonna be someone there to catch her when she jumps, so i do think the "big words" need to be said.

Hopefully the beach event provides this opportunity, it's possible her ex-boyfriend(the one from the tape) is gonna be there.
This should provide the perfect opportunity to say something.

The problem with ever saying anything to him is he was a really good athlete if he made it to pro league, who says Ethan isn't blackmailing him too. I mean I can't say Ethan is above it

 

[Elduriel]

I never questioned, but it didn't make much sense, hairstylist living in a nice neighborhood with a pool in her backyard...

But it appears that she isn't the type of hairstylist that works at a beauty parlor, she goes to the clients homes to do their hair, and she has Ximena in her client list.
So hairstylist to the rich and famous.

yeah that could be, but I'd still be interested to learn a bit more of her background if she will be an actual LI at some point