VN Ren'Py Intertwined [v0.13.2] [Nyx]

[Elduriel]

Would they not be his half-sisters, if he's right and they have the same father?

they don't have the same father, it's your typical Nyx cliffhanger bait, this AVN doesn't and won't have incest.

 

[cxx]

Exactly, I feel like Erynn and the MC's romantic time is overshadowed by the whole Ethan thing constantly. I want a few episodes of them just being happy together without all of the drama. I feel like we have that romantic time with most of the other LI's but not with Erynn, apart from a few small scenes in the MC's bedroom. Hopefully the beach date in the next episode can be a step in the right direction.

you are right but we are talking about nyx who wants to add drama to game.

Hmm, I just played through the Gabi scenes to see this picture as I hadn't done that before, caught the photo of her in her athletics kit with him as well. How can they be married though, unless I'm completely missing several points? Maybe brother and sister?

I had been wondering how it would work with regards to Patreon's rules though, bearing in mind you have Layla and Alexis paths...

gabi isn't related to mc any ways, not even step-mother, she's just mc's dad's new(est?) ex-wife so no fear about patreon saying anything.

Would they not be his half-sisters, if he's right and they have the same father?

monroe sisters might have different fathers aka lexi has different dad than layla but who is it.

 

[flaviopaganini]

You're probably right and in theory they're shouldn't be any problems, I hadn't actually connected it in my head that it was prior to Lexi. But it is Nyx and this MC is such a drama queen, he'll probably make it a problem when he finds out they're cousins. Lexi may have issues that she has to work though too, but nothing breakup worthy.

His dramas break the experience of this game a little. In a good VN, it would be the player who determines whether there is drama or not, but I think Nyx wouldn't have an equivalent path or doesn't want to write a story for the MC without the drama.

 

[TonyMurray]

Oh god I see that Nyx got you with the cliffhanger at the end there. Don't worry, Lexi's was just interrupted by some guy ordering a drink before she could finish. "He's my dad...." we believe this will be my dad's agent or friend. They aren't his sisters. It was a gotcha by Nyx and will apparently be cleared up straight away at the start of the next episode.

they don't have the same father, it's your typical Nyx cliffhanger bait, this AVN doesn't and won't have incest.

Right... well that's what I was thinking, with the no incest thing. Cutting the apostrophe+s doesn't really work very well - "Dad..." over "Dad's..." is not really a likely break if interrupted (plus the ellipsis is conventionally used to denote trailing off, not an interruption, so maybe that's why I don't read it that way). I'll take your word for it though and wait to see how it resolves.

 

[Justaphase]

His dramas break the experience of this game a little. In a good VN, it would be the player who determines whether there is drama or not, but I think Nyx wouldn't have an equivalent path or doesn't want to write a story for the MC without the drama.

Well I think Nyx took some inspiration from spanish soap operas (Telenovela's) where there is constant drama and pretty much everyone has some kind of link to each other. Now that we are coming to the end though I do hope that she focuses on the relationships with the LI's rather than outside drama. I want to see some relationship building, some romantic dates etc with whoever the player chooses.

 

[MiltonPowers]

Well I think Nyx took some inspiration from spanish soap operas (Telenovela's) where there is constant drama and pretty much everyone has some kind of link to each other. Now that we are coming to the end though I do hope that she focuses on the relationships with the LI's rather than outside drama. I want to see some relationship building, some romantic dates etc with whoever the player chooses.

Fingers crossed.

 

[Justaphase]

Right... well that's what I was thinking, with the no incest thing. Cutting the apostrophe+s doesn't really work very well - "Dad..." over "Dad's..." is not really a likely break if interrupted (plus the ellipsis is conventionally used to denote trailing off, not an interruption, so maybe that's why I don't read it that way). I'll take your word for it though and wait to see how it resolves.

Yup, you're right and honestly I wish that Nyx hadn't done it. I love this game it's one of my favourites but imo it was a cheap cliffhanger that some people can and have taken literally. We all know that they aren't related as Nyx would risk being booted off Patreon and I believe that Nyx does rather well there, who would want to risk that?

 

[TonyMurray]

Yup, you're right and honestly I wish that Nyx hadn't done it. I love this game it's one of my favourites but imo it was a cheap cliffhanger that some people can and have taken literally. We all know that they aren't related as Nyx would risk being booted off Patreon and I believe that Nyx does rather well there, who would want to risk that?

At the same time, "I know how it looks, Patreon, but give it X months and all will become clear," is perhaps a risky strategy...

 

[cxx]

At the same time, "I know how it looks, Patreon, but give it X months and all will become clear," is perhaps a risky strategy...

nyx has given proof to patreon most likely.

 

[Tremonia]

At the same time, "I know how it looks, Patreon, but give it X months and all will become clear," is perhaps a risky strategy...

Patreon knows already how all the characters are intertwined. She told them a couple of years ago after they asked for the xth time because of some envious idiots spammed Patreon to "report" her content.

 

[valbitterb]

o really didn't realize Val wasn't on the official list.

How dare you?
She's not "a side girl", she's "THE SIDE GIRL", and i'm inserting her in most saves because...

Side? SIDE?!!! I protest too!

Not too many sides you can fit those sides into ...

(Val is the booby trap. Gabi is the launch the nuke button we can't help but press.)

 

[LSC82]

Side? SIDE?!!! I protest too!

Not too many sides you can fit those sides into ...

(Val is the booby trap. Gabi is the launch the nuke button we can't help but press.)


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Absolutely!!!!
And then there's the friend/mom(?) too... yummy.


Something just occured to me, Ximena is quite famous right? If we go out with her, do we end up on Intertwined's version of TMZ?
"XIMENA VERGARA HAS A NEW BOY TOY!!!! EXCLUSIVE PICTURES!!!!!"

Anywhere we go there might be a paparazzi taking pictures lol.

 

[valbitterb]

Something just occured to me, Ximena is quite famous right? If we go out with her, do we end up on Intertwined's version of TMZ?
"XIMENA VERGARA HAS A NEW BOY TOY!!!! EXCLUSIVE PICTURES!!!!!"

Anywhere we go there might be a paparazzi taking pictures lol.

Did you say Intertwined's version of TMZ? This video might come back to bite us if we're with Ximena? These vloggers might be around also then.




Ximena already doing her sexual position mathematics ... Heels or no heels for standing/standing doggy

 

[LSC82]

Did you say Intertwined's version of TMZ? This video might come back to bite us if we're with Ximena? These vloggers might be around also then.

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Ximena already doing her sexual position mathematics ... Heels or no heels for standing/standing doggy

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Not Pink Nation...

And yeah, Ximena looked to be taking measures at several points

 

[valbitterb]

Not Pink Nation...

There are local paps.

 

[flaviopaganini]

Well I think Nyx took some inspiration from spanish soap operas (Telenovela's) where there is constant drama and pretty much everyone has some kind of link to each other. Now that we are coming to the end though I do hope that she focuses on the relationships with the LI's rather than outside drama. I want to see some relationship building, some romantic dates etc with whoever the player chooses.

Yes, here where I live, they show Mexican and Colombian soap operas that have this kind of drama.

 

[Elduriel]

Yes, here where I live, they show Mexican and Colombian soap operas that have this kind of drama.

I think they have those pretty much everywhere

 

[LSC82]

Exactly, I feel like Erynn and the MC's romantic time is overshadowed by the whole Ethan thing constantly. I want a few episodes of them just being happy together without all of the drama. I feel like we have that romantic time with most of the other LI's but not with Erynn, apart from a few small scenes in the MC's bedroom. Hopefully the beach date in the next episode can be a step in the right direction.

Ethan does hang like a dark cloud over everything we do with Erynn, a lot of the times we hang out with her are about dealing with him... going to John's garage and even the photoshoot were instigated by him and the blackmail.
While the other girls are going on happy dates.

The typical story structure is that we must resolve the girl quest before we can romance her, even in mainstream titles like the Witcher(that Nyx loves to reference so much) to have the romance scene with Triss first you must complete her line of quests.
One more reason we need him gone and fast, his presence slows down the relationship.
I hope Nyx doesn't intend to keep this thing going right to the end(and holding back us with Erynn).

And to be honest the kind of conflict that interests me with Intertwined is the girl vs girl dynamics, i find it a lot more enjoyable than this blackmail plot.

I think they have those pretty much everywhere

Brazil is all about novelas too... older women eat them up.
Before the internet and Netflix they were even bigger...

 

[Elduriel]

Brazil is all about novelas too... older women eat them up.
Before the internet and Netflix they were even bigger...

don't I know it, mom and grandma were all about them when I was younger, they couldn't be bothered when one of them was on.

 

[ImSenjou]

if I was in that situation... yeah, slightly awkward, but I'd probably wouldn't say a word about it to Lexi, neither would Lakeyn, why make things worse. Now if she wouldn't be a side-chick, and had actual contact with MC then things would be different.

In the beach scene, the MC tells Iris about Lakeyn, so even if the MC and Lakeyn don't say anything to Alexis, Iris can comment and create the drama that Nyx likes.

Right... well that's what I was thinking, with the no incest thing. Cutting the apostrophe+s doesn't really work very well - "Dad..." over "Dad's..." is not really a likely break if interrupted (plus the ellipsis is conventionally used to denote trailing off, not an interruption, so maybe that's why I don't read it that way). I'll take your word for it though and wait to see how it resolves.

In the final scene at the bar, we saw MC and Santiago talking about Zo, Santiago played with him and was his agent, which impressed MC, and based on that ending of Santiago and Alexis talking while looking at MC, I'm going to guess and say they were talking about Zo, and about an opportunity for MC to meet his idol.
I'm one of those who believe that Zo is Alexis' father.