VN Ren'Py Intertwined [v0.13.2] [Nyx]

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[Tremonia]

this game has a really good story but the scenes in the game suck ass ngl i played it 8 hours straight on the weekend and couldnt nut once they are bland as fuck and the mc cant keep a bitch to save his life and it has winks of a possible harem with some of the girls with nothing actually going forward to a harem and it winks at possible incest and if i am being honest i would love to have the mc fuck his mom in the story and if i miss spell the name sorry Errena his childhood crush John is her dad and she doesnt even know it neither does the mc but he is putting the dots together because Iris looks like his childhood crush a lot and while i am on the topic of his childhood crush that bitch sucks fucking ass no scenes with her that are worth mentioning the shower scene fucking ass her not allowing him to watch her take her fucking panties off that is some gay ass shit she loves him yet did nothing back in the day to help him out and im talking about the 5 year ago flash backs where 12 year old mc said to himself you know what i really love her so im going to go into my house take this flower out the vase and give it to the girl i love Alexis was the only good person that day going over to him trying to comfort him his childhood crush should of ran over to him and told him her feelings instead she is still stringing him along for what nothing fuck that bitch

 

[Dessolos]

jesus fuck that actually hurt to read through

yeah it hurt my eyes to read I just saw the bit about a harem so I tried to read it lol

 

[MilesEdgeworth]

It does admittedly feel pretty weird to have these college girls fighting over a high school senior and the way he asked her that question was pretty weird. Am I missing the storyline reasons why it was necessary to have the mc 3 years younger?

 

[ModiThorrson]

It does admittedly feel pretty weird to have these college girls fighting over a high school senior and the way he asked her that question was pretty weird. Am I missing the storyline reasons why it was necessary to have the mc 3 years younger?

Age gaps are fairly common, hell my first gf was 21 when i was 16. If you add in the whole childhood friend angle and iris essentially teaching the MC how NOT to be a complete tool to women, and it's not terribly surprising that an athletic, attractive(from the right angle) young guy is pulling older women.

 

[Dessolos]

It does admittedly feel pretty weird to have these college girls fighting over a high school senior and the way he asked her that question was pretty weird. Am I missing the storyline reasons why it was necessary to have the mc 3 years younger?

i'm like the age gap personally because it makes the relationship feel a bit cutier and more wholesome to me knowing that bit of their past. That and it's kind of nice seeing not everyone in the same age group as well but I don't really see a story reason for it other than to separate girls in to different groups. College , High School , Long Distance

 

[Xiba21]

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i didnt break any of the rules what was the point linking them to me

 

[flaviopaganini]

i didnt break any of the rules what was the point linking them to me

Why is Punctuation Important?

Punctuation is very important in writing because it helps the reader understand what is being said. It works like traffic signs, telling us when to stop, when to pause, and how to understand the tone of the sentence.

For example, without punctuation, a sentence can be confusing or have more than one meaning. Take this sentence: "Let’s eat children." It sounds like the children are going to be eaten! But if we add a comma, it’s clear: "Let’s eat, children." Now, it means we’re inviting the children to eat.

Punctuation also shows emotions and intentions. An exclamation mark (!) shows excitement or surprise, while a question mark (?) shows a question. These signs help the reader understand the tone and feeling of the text.

This is why it’s important to use punctuation correctly. A well-punctuated text is easier to read and understand, which makes all the difference in written communication.

 

[ModiThorrson]

Why is Punctuation Important?

Punctuation is very important in writing because it helps the reader understand what is being said. It works like traffic signs, telling us when to stop, when to pause, and how to understand the tone of the sentence.

For example, without punctuation, a sentence can be confusing or have more than one meaning. Take this sentence: "Let’s eat children." It sounds like the children are going to be eaten! But if we add a comma, it’s clear: "Let’s eat, children." Now, it means we’re inviting the children to eat.

Punctuation also shows emotions and intentions. An exclamation mark (!) shows excitement or surprise, while a question mark (?) shows a question. These signs help the reader understand the tone and feeling of the text.

This is why it’s important to use punctuation correctly. A well-punctuated text is easier to read and understand, which makes all the difference in written communication.

*drops a childs shoe* oh uhh...yeah meal time, right.

 

[Tremonia]

i didnt break any of the rules what was the point linking them to me

flaviopaganini gave you a hint, but the main problem is your text was just a vomit of letters. You know, there's no problem when someone can't use english properly because it's not their native language. But you didn't even tried to be understandable. It's also extremely rude for anyone who doesn't fully understand English. It is simply a matter of respect towards the reader to deliver a readable and understandable text. Quite apart from that, it's also not English if you rape the language as you have done.

 

[Xiba21]

flaviopaganini gave you a hint, but the main problem is your text was just a vomit of letters. You know, there's no problem when someone can't use english properly because it's not their native language. But you didn't even tried to be understandable. It's also extremely rude for anyone who doesn't fully understand English. It is simply a matter of respect towards the reader to deliver a readable and understandable text. Quite apart from that, it's also not English if you rape the language as you have done.

im lazy when i type you dont see me correcting you now do you example i will do just that right now only once you typed english you should of typed English let me do me you do you

 

[cxx]

It does admittedly feel pretty weird to have these college girls fighting over a high school senior and the way he asked her that question was pretty weird. Am I missing the storyline reasons why it was necessary to have the mc 3 years younger?

others besides lexi, iris and erynn are sameish age as mc. main reason is that nyx likes to play with a fire and they spent time together as a kids.

 

[Tremonia]

Why do I always make the mistake and debate with idiots instead of just putting them on the ignore list?

 

[cxx]

Why do I always make the mistake and debate with idiots instead of just putting them on the ignore list?

good question, you must ponder it next 3 days.

 

[Tremonia]

good question, you must ponder it next 3 days.

Nah. I simply corrected the mistake and added the jumping jack to the list. By tomorrow I'll have forgotten that the soup sparrow even exists.

 

[Elduriel]

im lazy when i type you dont see me correcting you now do you example i will do just that right now only once you typed english you should of typed English let me do me you do you

boy you getting on a lot of ignore lists with that kinda attitude here, including mine. Learn a little humility, might do you some good in the future

 

[Xiba21]

boy you getting on a lot of ignore lists with that kinda attitude here, including mine. Learn a little humility, might do you some good in the future

dont take the high and might road with me my very first comment here wasnt mean or hurtful at all neither was my 2nd comment which was a reply to the reply i received my 3rd comment however is the one you replied to with this

 

[Dessolos]

im lazy when i type you dont see me correcting you now do you example i will do just that right now only once you typed english you should of typed English let me do me you do you

im lazy as hell when I type to but you know what at least I the common curiosity to make random paragraphs so it's easier on the eyes unlike you. Even if I forget to correct some of my mistakes

 

[Xiba21]

im lazy as hell when I type to but you know what at least I the common curiosity to make random paragraphs so it's easier on the eyes unlike you. Even if I forget to correct some of my mistakes

guess im lazier than you and tbh idc you either read it or you dont doesnt matter to me

 

[Dessolos]

guess im lazier than you and tbh idc you either read it or you dont doesnt matter to me

yeah I read it but was very very very hard to read. Which is why I only quoted you and only responded on one thing you said.