VN Ren'Py Intertwined [v0.13.2] [Nyx]

[bananabrown]

Also, I think the dev backed herself into a corner with Nikki and Cora. Reading between the lines, I think she regrets carrying the paths past the flashbacks so now she has to deal with two more characters that are not really part of the whole "intertwined" story.

What lines are you reading between? What makes you think she regrets having to deal with Nikki and Cara? It makes no sense since she has been adding more and more characters after them. Do you think she thought "oh no that's too many girls!" then proceeded to introduce everyone since?

Not part of the story? This claim is even more bizzare than your last. How are Nikki and Cara not part of the story? What's your definition of story? revolving around Erynn? living in Madison Springs? What about being a main love interest of the MC doesn't that count?

 

[Dessolos]

I was to tired yesterday to share my thoughts on the update as a whole. I know this is just my opinion but feel like sharing it nonetheless.

I first wanted to start my saying this update reminded me why I love this game so much and why it's my #1 AVN. Most of the updates hit me emotionally to some degree because of how much I like this game. But this update hit me just as hard as my first time playing. Where it made feel sad and bummed out that I was done playing the game and just wanted more and couldn't wait for more because how good and perfect the update was for me on a personal level. Even now im having a hard time not thinking about it constantly or coming up with fantasy scenarios' or scene I want to see but much better than the first few days. Which is why this game is my #1 AVN of all time and is very special to me and im gonna be very sad when it does get that completed tag.

Now onto my thoughts sorry about me rambling,

Gonna start in the order I liked the paths.

Spoiler: my thoughts

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[AgnorWolf]

It's funny that the whole John thing is fully avoidable if you just choose for her to not go out with him lol. All the people complaining got the scene by either not reading or agreeing she should go out with him and then acting surprised they hooked up lol.

 

[byaaahh]

It's funny that the whole John thing is fully avoidable if you just choose for her to not go out with him lol. All the people complaining got the scene by either not reading or agreeing she should go out with him and then acting surprised they hooked up lol.

Maybe it's not the sex that bothers them, maybe they just don't like John moving into MCs first home...

 

[jadepaladin]

Spoiler: my thoughts

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Spoiler: Alexis

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[Tremonia]

At the very least, she could have made the bar seem crowded so that MC was having trouble hearing Alexis, but no, we end ep 12 with literally "That's my dad!" and there's no room for error, then 10 seconds later, "That's my dad's friend!" It makes the MC look absolutely stupid. He was focused on the conversation with Alexis, there was no reason for him to mishear to that degree.

He didn't heard correctly because it was crowded and one guy was yelling an order right into the sentence. Just saying. BTW told Nyx on the release day of Ep12 that situation would get solved immediately in Ep13. So, yes, "10 seconds later" is what she promised.

 

[LionHeart 95]

You think it was a setup in what way exactly? That she was aware of her first time being filmed? You cannot be serious.
She's just scared and who could blame her, considering what happened with her relationship and first time with Zane. She also will only be fully sexual with the MC when he's her boyfriend, which is a requirement for most girls.
Also I'm sorry that your son is getting blue balled, tell him to get a new girlfriend.

My guess is that it has to be that Ethan and Zane set this up, Zane is possible another model and based on the title its him, and should he work for the same company. The question did Ethan set it up together with Zane.

I don't see that most girls need to be a gf to have sex, but why when he is single she still isn't willing. remember no matter the reason when Mc originally confessed she walked away not knowing how to answer but knowing he would as the question still she never gave an answer to MC then or now.
He did get a different girl but it still fit the story i wanted explain and no need to be rude.

 

[MightbeSomeone]

My guess is that it has to be that Ethan and Zane set this up, Zane is possible another model and based on the title its him, and should he work for the same company. The question did Ethan set it up together with Zane.

I don't see that most girls need to be a gf to have sex, but why when he is single she still isn't willing. remember no matter the reason when Mc originally confessed she walked away not knowing how to answer but knowing he would as the question still she never gave an answer to MC then or now.
He did get a different girl but it still fit the story i wanted explain and no need to be rude.

I think zane is the hot male intern teacher at the school. And that Zane has no idea what is going on.

 

[Dessolos]

I think zane is the hot male intern teacher at the school. And that Zane has no idea what is going on.

Honestly I get a feeling he would help Erynn out cause I do not think he is involved either. Yeah same as you I think the teacher is Zane

 

[MightbeSomeone]

If she can pull off something like what she did in the new update and it's all fake, she'd be one master snake/con-woman.

She went up a couple of pegs in my list of LIs after the last update. If that turns out to be fake, I'll have to punch something.

She is now number 3 for me after this update

 

[LionHeart 95]

You really think the girl who is manipulated by an abusive bastard from the moment she loses her virginity has issues? No shit, Sherlock...

she had issues way before Zane, I find Erynn to be an antagonist in this story. "i want" "I need" only better after Mc returns She the pretty girl that goes for the bad guy and the good one is friend zone forever. but she want him to fix it. and even blames him for leaving. Hinting if he did not leave it all would have been different. total BS.

 

[Dessolos]

She is now number 3 for me after this update

haah exact same as me it was Nikki in 3rd but now Val took her her spot. So for me Erynn , Alexis , Val

 

[Tremonia]

she had issues way before Zane, I find Erynn to be an antagonist in this story. "i want" "I need" only better after Mc returns She the pretty girl that goes for the bad guy and the good one is friend zone forever. but she want him to fix it. and even blames him for leaving. Hinting if he did not leave it all would have been different. total BS.

Wow, you really didn't understand anything about the Erynn character in the game. I don't know why, and to be honest I don't care, but you should really play this game again and read more carefully. Also a little bit of knowledge about traumas could be helpful.

 

[byaaahh]

Zane can't be the teacher, or there are two Zanes

The model Zane pulled out because his nose got fucked up, unless he lied to go catch some waves.

 

[Dessolos]

she had issues way before Zane, I find Erynn to be an antagonist in this story. "i want" "I need" only better after Mc returns She the pretty girl that goes for the bad guy and the good one is friend zone forever. but she want him to fix it. and even blames him for leaving. Hinting if he did not leave it all would have been different. total BS.

I mean I don't think it's unreasonable to blame the MC at all because the MC is the one that handled the situation worst in my opinion. Yeah Erynn handled it bad to but by not letting her explain or talk and ghost her for 5 years is much worst. Then Ethan changes and fakes being nice for a time and Erynn loses almost all her friend because of him. Not to mention the blackmail. I don't think it's unreasonable at all that she may secretly blames the MC at all to some small degree, It 100% would of been different if he never left there is no question about that but to what degree is the question. But I do think it's a bit of a stretch to say she had issues before Zane we don't know enough about Erynn when she was young.

 

[Justaphase]

My guess is that it has to be that Ethan and Zane set this up, Zane is possible another model and based on the title its him, and should he work for the same company. The question did Ethan set it up together with Zane.

I don't see that most girls need to be a gf to have sex, but why when he is single she still isn't willing. remember no matter the reason when Mc originally confessed she walked away not knowing how to answer but knowing he would as the question still she never gave an answer to MC then or now.
He did get a different girl but it still fit the story i wanted explain and no need to be rude.

I don't believe that Zane was involved in setting up the sex tape, he likely isn't even aware of it. My guess is that Ethan overheard or managed to get information as to his plans for a date with Erynn and then setup a camera with the plan to blackmail her with it and here we are.
Most girls do indeed prefer to be in a relationship before taking that step, despite what porn and the media would make you believe. As for his original confession, she was embarrassed, the MC put her on the spot with Lexi and Ethan right there. It was the wrong place and the wrong time, that's on the MC not Erynn.

 

[jadepaladin]

she had issues way before Zane, I find Erynn to be an antagonist in this story. "i want" "I need" only better after Mc returns She the pretty girl that goes for the bad guy and the good one is friend zone forever. but she want him to fix it. and even blames him for leaving. Hinting if he did not leave it all would have been different. total BS.

I'm convinced we're reading different stories. Erynn my not be my favorite but this is the weirdest take I've read for her on this forum and there are some crazy ideas in here. You're trolling right?

 

[MightbeSomeone]

haah exact same as me it was Nikki in 3rd but now Val took her her spot. So for me Erynn , Alexis , Val

Same order for me

 

[jadepaladin]

Zane can't be the teacher, or there are two Zanes

The model Zane pulled out because his nose got fucked up, unless he lied to go catch some waves.

We don't know the male teacher yet, right? Only that his last name is Donovan or something like that? Why can't it be Zane Donovan? The nose thing should have gotten some chatter at school but I think they were on spring break in that period? It'll be telling if Layla or someone mentions it after getting back into the school routine.

 

[Justaphase]

Zane can't be the teacher, or there are two Zanes

The model Zane pulled out because his nose got fucked up, unless he lied to go catch some waves.

No, I think that he will be revealed as Zane Donovan. He is doing an internship at the school. Erynn's "surprise" for the MC is that she is also going to be doing an internship at the school. Which will be rather interesting, to say the least.
As for the busted nose, who knows? I just think that Nyx wanted to tease an "Is it or isn't it the same Zane?" without revealing him that early.