VN Ren'Py Intertwined [v0.13.2] [Nyx]

[Hellysium]

A great update, really liking everything going on at the moment.
Gasped a few times when i understood we would meet Layla and Lexi together and when I understood the former roommate of Emily is actually Lexi and Layla's mother. (Intertwined is not even close to what we got. ^^ )

It was also funny to see the young Dylan trying to be the bartender.
And it was great to see how the friendship between Emily and Melissa started, I didn't actually expected Mel to be the responsible one. In the present, Emily feels like the adult of the two and Mel likes to play so much. Nice touch to see this.
By the way, their relationship reminded me a tad of that of Erynn and Lexi. Speaking of Erynn, I was already worried about her before the update but now even more so. Feels almost like she's blackmailed by Ethan to do some escort job but I really hope I'm very wrong there...

As for the person we meet in the plane, the only one I can see there is Lakeyn. And I really hope it's the case because travelling to Riverside should have been a nice opportunity to see her, if the trip wasn't shortened because of drama.
(And Valeria was the other one I missed in this update, so let's hope we'll see more of her next time.)

 

[bosp]

By the expression of her face you can really see that she isn't happy at all. She's in dark spot, probably wants out but doesn't know how. And here's the hole in entire plot. Something or someone is keaping her from leaving. Whether its a blackmail or something else. What kind of job she does? Prostitution, striping with touch me element, some sort of addult escort whatever its clear that she doesn't like it a bit. You can say that she's a hooker, by the job she does. The q in my mind is is Ethan in anny possible way conected to it. Does he blackmail her or its something else? From last episodes you can see that she isn't a fan of him and yet somehow he have a grip over her.

As for MC shifting all the blame to himself its more 50-50. Sure he does have some fault in some cases but he isn't responsible or fault for Erynn, choices she made and job that she do. Its all on her an her alone. Note that i like Erynn, she's like number 1 girl for me in this game but you have to be real in some questions.

Eh, Ethan is definitely connected to this - either as a blackmailer and a pimp or just a pimp.
Guess we will find out in due time.

 

[Raziel_8]

Andres for some reason, love or not stick with Emily even with her being the easy girl she was and thinking she cheated on him BUT he took well the role of father, he cared for him, he took care of him, he was a father, when Emily chose the easy way and throw him to andres because she couldn't do her "job" as mom to control and understand her son, he man up a took him even without being blood related.
Blood relate or not that is much more parenting than send you son away. Atlest for me that's much more parent that the so called mom had done but still andres he is the one put on spot light only in bad situations and emily is always try to have her image cleaned.

Yeah Andres taking Emily despite she is pregnent from some other man clearly is not something many would do.
I also found his reaction/temper at the park more than understandable, most men would have a similiar reaction, if not worse, when the women u love tells u she is pregnant by some douchebag. The same goes for women if u would tell them u have knocked up some slut...i would like to see the one which takes that information without throwing a fit (or something else).

Maybe choosing the public park for such a sensible talk is also not the best idea...

Honestly even with the shit Andres pulled at his last scene, i still find him more sympathetic than Emily.
Just that last talk where she said how she meet Santi in secret for several times, i mean come on Andres takes her when she 18 and pregnant from someone else, he raises MC like his own son and Emily don't think that he maybe has a right to be involved in this talk about his son...followed by her comment about how she will always love Santi for knocking her up, but doesn't give a shit about Andres which is the man & father which was there for her and her son all the time...she really takes the cake in this update (just to stay polite), for me she is nearly as likeable as Ethan.

I mean even the MC is doubtful if she ever loved Andres.

Really don't give a damn about erryn, she is far below on my list, with the way she had been writen, all that drama and shady things kepping delayed to come to surface you can put her in a house and light fire on hit that I couldn't care less and depending on what that shady thing his i could even give your the lighter or not.

Pretty much this, i wouldn't go so far as giving u the lighter...but i wouldn't care either.

Also Erynn the best looking girl ?? Nikki beats her with ease and Cara, Lyla & Gabi are easily on the same level as Erynn imo.

 

[KoGa3]

Short note:
I updated my Mod (music/audio/WT/cheat) to the new game version v0.6.
Link to my Mod page here.

Well, reading about the new grilling techniques made me really hungry - time to grab something to eat...

 

[DA22]

Very true.

whaaaa...little out of left field and little different to the situation Erynn is in....

Maybe out of left field, but if you consider Erryn as a LI and future ending for MC, what stops her from doing something equally stupid again after MC helps her clean up her current shit and they do get together out of pride or whatever?

Also Erryn does put a whole lot of blame, responsibility and hope on MC, if we remember that MC with their past basically owes her nothing anymore, she broke that the day of the confession and after plus staying friends with Ethan, which was her choice. Choosing against MC for her own reasons and wants, fair enough but that was her choosing her priority in relations.

In a way she is lucky enough he still cares enough to want to have some kind of relation with her based on his old feelings for her. Remember as he told Alexis in plane, he is not in love with her anymore and is not in a relation with her, let alone a confirmed relation.

 

[bosp]

You think it would be a bigger plot twist if she WASN'T a hooker???

Lol, it would definitely be a bigger asspull plot twist... "you know I am a sexless escort, they just pay to grope my ass and fondle my tits all night, nothing more, I swear."

 

[Deleted member 207916]

Eh, Ethan is definitely connected to this - either as a blackmailer and a pimp or just a pimp.
Guess we will find out in due time.

Ethan definitely is dark character here. He constantly pushed MC to a moment being physical. He's in some dark shit no doubt. The way he acts, when he stops Erynn from going after MC in her apartment. The guy is an a hole on that i think majority agrees. What is his role with Erynn and her job i think that will be revealed in future updates.

 

[Sancho1969]

Thanks but that's exactly what is in the WT. Not sure what you're saying is wrong?

ERYNN APARTMENT:

47.   Peek
          •    Go back
          •    Join her     [-4 RP/Erynn] [Go to section: Saturday – Weekend 1]

      Don’t peek            [+2 RP/Erynn]

Good morning. I've copied/pasted code below for reference, but you get [+2 RP/Erynn] at the "Peek" selection directly. So if player then selects "Go back" it still retains a [+2 RP/Erynn]. It's in the code right before the submenu for "Go back/Join her", 15th line in code below:

Spoiler: Erynn shower code

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So, the walkthrough should be updated as follows according to the above code:

47. Peek [+2 RP/Erynn]

• Go back​

• Join her [-4 RP/Erynn] [Go to section: Saturday – Weekend 1]​

Don’t peek [+2 RP/Erynn]​

Regards, I hope I wrote that clearly, still on first cup of coffee this morning

 

[HornyyPussy]

Lol, it would definitely be a bigger asspull plot twist... "you know I am a sexless escort, they just pay to grope my ass and fondle my tits all night, nothing more, I swear."

Like someone else said earlier, escort as eyecandy in a highstakes pokergame in the vip-room with clients getting handsy would work.

 

[bosp]

Like someone else said earlier, escort as eyecandy in a highstakes pokergame in the vip-room with clients getting handsy would work.

Huh, maybe in romance novels.
In real life, high-roller players would not pay for an escort just to be eye-candy and refusing to give them a blowjob or pussy after they won a big game and paid her handsomely.
She would be out of that line of work very quickly and nobody would hire her again.

 

[Deleted member 596203]

Good morning. I've copied/pasted code below for reference, but you get [+2 RP/Erynn] at the "Peek" selection directly. So if player then selects "Go back" it still retains a [+2 RP/Erynn]. It's in the code right before the submenu for "Go back/Join her", 15th line in code below:

Spoiler: Erynn shower code

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So, the walkthrough should be updated as follows according to the above code:

47. Peek [+2 RP/Erynn]

• Go back​

• Join her [-4 RP/Erynn] [Go to section: Saturday – Weekend 1]​

Don’t peek [+2 RP/Erynn]​

Regards, I hope I wrote that clearly, still on first cup of coffee this morning

That's a modded code and is incorrect. You don't get points for peeking.

 

[Deleted member 596203]

Huh, maybe in romance novels.
In real life, high-roller players would not pay for an escort just to be eye-candy and refusing to give them a blowjob or pussy after they won a big game and paid her handsomely.
She would be out of that line of work very quickly and nobody would hire her again.

Maybe it's not for them but to distract the other players who'll be looking at her instead of concentrating on the game.
Plenty of possibilities.

 

[Maviarab]

Good morning. I've copied/pasted code below for reference, but you get [+2 RP/Erynn] at the "Peek" selection directly. So if player then selects "Go back" it still retains a [+2 RP/Erynn]. It's in the code right before the submenu for "Go back/Join her", 15th line in code below:

Spoiler: Erynn shower code

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So, the walkthrough should be updated as follows according to the above code:

47. Peek [+2 RP/Erynn]

• Go back​

• Join her [-4 RP/Erynn] [Go to section: Saturday – Weekend 1]​

Don’t peek [+2 RP/Erynn]​

Regards, I hope I wrote that clearly, still on first cup of coffee this morning

No..it doesn't. Sure you haven't overwittten the game folder...done something else unusual...installed mod...looking at pre-reworked code?

From unmodded, fresh install of update 0.06:

    scene 783 with Dissolve(1)
    menu:
        "Peek":
            scene 784 with Dissolve(1)
            mc "{i}(Wow... I've known her for so long and this is the first time I've seen her naked...){/i}"
            scene black with Dissolve(1)
            transform moveup:
                xalign 0.5 yalign 1.0
                linear 5.0 yalign 0.0
            show 785 at moveup
            pause 7
            mc "{i}(I know this is wrong but... Damn. She's so gorgeous.){/i}"
            scene 786 with Dissolve(1)
            mc "{i}(What would've happened between us if I didn't leave?){/i}"
            mc "{i}(Maybe... I can find out now?){/i}"
            menu:
                "Go back":
                    $ Erynn_Week1_ShowerJoin = False
                    mc "{i}(Better not. Don't want to risk our friendship for my curiosity.){/i}"
                    jump erynnmeet2
                "Join her":
                    $ Erynn_Week1_ShowerJoin = True
                    $ Erynn_Points -= 4

 

[Adamu_]

Yeah Andres taking Emily despite she is pregnent from some other man clearly is not something many would do.
I also found his reaction/temper at the park more than understandable, most men would have a similiar reaction, if not worse, when the women u love tells u she is pregnant by some douchebag. The same goes for women if u would tell them u have knocked up some slut...i would like to see the one which takes that information without throwing a fit (or something else).

Maybe choosing the public park for such a sensible talk is also not the best idea...

Honestly even with the shit Andres pulled at his last scene, i still find him more sympathetic than Emily.
Just that last talk where she said how she meet Santi in secret for several times, i mean come on Andres takes her when she 18 and pregnant from someone else, he raises MC like his own son and Emily don't think that he maybe has a right to be involved in this talk about his son...followed by her comment about how she will always love Santi for knocking her up, but doesn't give a shit about Andres which is the man & father which was there for her and her son all the time...she really takes the cake in this update (just to stay polite), for me she is nearly as likeable as Ethan.

I mean even the MC is doubtful if she ever loved Andres.

Very well put. If only this whole thread could be this polite, stating their point respectfully and without throwing shit about who is more equal like in one of those self-righteous bigoted reddit threads. *Clap* *clap*

Makes me miss the time when Internet wasn't cool and boards were mostly populated by people who could actually fucking read and express themselves like they would do in a face-to-face conversation.

 

[1337Bob]

Why is everyone complaining about this or that character being an arsehole/bitch?

I'm sitting here thinking, like isn't that the fucking point of the game? That literally everyone is flawed (except sweet, sweet Elena )? And everyone is screwing over (and just screwing ) each other?

Santiago is a manwhore (like his son). Andres is also a manwhore (like his adoptive son) and also violent. Emily is a whore (like her son). Alexis is manipulative and dishonest. Erynn is dishonest too for that matter. And so on.

It actually give the characters some depth, even if it is a bit melodramatic. Honestly I'm just enjoying the ride and I can't wait untill everything blows up in MC's face.

Keep up the great work Nyx.

 

[Maviarab]

Huh, maybe in romance novels.
In real life, high-roller players would not pay for an escort just to be eye-candy and refusing to give them a blowjob or pussy after they won a big game and paid her handsomely.
She would be out of that line of work very quickly and nobody would hire her again.

1. How old are you?
2. Do you know what a Geisha is? (real term, not the modern one). Still incredibly popular in Japan btw. Not to be confused with a courtesan.
3. Plenty of women work as a 'hostess' designed to help men relax, drink, spend money, open their mouths to information. Yes some let/are required to allow men to get handsy at times...they are not escorts, hookers and do not indulge in sex with clients. There are there as eye candy and to serve specific purposes.

Please educate yourself to what actually does happen in the real world. You know the old saying....better to let people think you're a fool....

 

[Deleted member 2528490]

'hostess'

THATS IT. Thats the word I was looking for when I mentioned backroom pokergame stuff. I was blanking and stuck with escorts.

This could just be what Erynn thought was a hostess job thats become sleazy and she wants out, but Ethan is pressuring her somehow to stay in.

 

[OutOfAshes]

1. How old are you?
2. Do you know what a Geisha is? (real term, not the modern one). Still incredibly popular in Japan btw. Not to be confused with a courtesan.
3. Plenty of women work as a 'hostess' designed to help men relax, drink, spend money, open their mouths to information. Yes some let/are required to allow men to get handsy at times...they are not escorts, hookers and do not indulge in sex with clients. There are there as eye candy and to serve specific purposes.

Please educate yourself to what actually does happen in the real world. You know the old saying....better to let people think you're a fool....

you have many patience that's for sure
i didn't read more then 3 posts
and was no more in the mood to answer

 

[Deleted member 207916]

you have many patience that's for sure
i didn't read more then 3 posts
and was no more in the mood to answer

Be carefull when you deal with that guy. He constantly pick fights and is toxic. He doesn't like when you have your own opinion. I tried a positive aproach with the guy but it doesn't work, he constantly pick fights. I needed to block him so he can stop being boring

 

[.Black Panther.]

Guys, there are a few questions in my mind right now that I do not know what the answer is.
It is very likely that Navarro is the husband of the Latin teacher.


* What is the reason for his acquaintance with MC as we saw in the cafe?
* Is Navarro the father of MC?
* Valeria had no role in this update. How bold her role is in the game. Who is she and what is her role? (Which is even the name and avatar of the "NyxValeria" is this character )
* What is the role of flight attendant in the game (I forgot her name). Why did NyxValeria inquire about whether or not someone had played in her path?How important she is in the game storyline؟
*Why haven't we seen Lexi and Layla's father yet? Is there a connection?
*Why haven't we seen or heard anything about Ethan's family so far?

I do not know, maybe I think wrong in many cases.