What in the world is Erynne doing? If she's being blackmailed, the heck would she be blackmailed for? Why does our MC walk off instead of letting her explain herself? Why does MC forgive his mother so easily for basically cheating? How did his mother have such a change of heart? She went from an (apparently... not judging)easy lay, to a loyal, loving mother? Also, why does our MC run from his problems so much?
Will there ever be a point in the story when the MC would come to grips with both of his parents being terrible? I mean, he shouldn't really blame his step-dad for being angry. He was being constantly cheated on by someone he loved, and after forgiving her and moving past all of that, she goes and meets up with not only the person that got her pregnant, but the man she was assumedly in-love with. Matters only made worse when we figure out that his step-dad was an unfaithful person himself. No-one's innocent in their story.
Wonderful writing by Nyx because there's absolutely no black and white to any part of this story. Just so many different shades of grey. The writing is commendable because not only was it able to successfully invoke strong emotions within the audience, but it left everyone wanting more, and with many plausible questions. The only con in the writing being how our Main Character almost uncharacteristically forgave his mother so quickly. You'd think he'd be more furious after realizing that he put his step-father through so much based off of false beliefs. Sorry if I got anything wrong here, but I'm not fully analyzing the literary aspect of this novel. I will say however, that this is one of the better-written AVN's that I've seen in recent years. A lot of potential here.
All of these various questions aside, when would we get a chance to progress our relationship with Layla or begin a relationship with Elena? In my current playthrough, I'm playing almost exclusively for Layla, which may be a bit unpopular, seeing as she's one of the less-liked LI's.