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I'll have to check this out, I know this model gets his ass kicked by Victoria in the 1st chapter of City of Broken Dreamers. (at the bar, the idiot who tries her)
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Thanks for the kind words!
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Always, amigo. I try to never forget anyone who has helped me out.Thanks for the kind words!
Actually, Adriana was Emily's roommate at the time, as Melissa lived at home with her parents and Erynn opposed to living in the dorms. The scenes between Emily and Melissa in the dorms were all at Emily's dorm.
However, this has always given me questions, because if Erynn and Lexi are around the same age (given that they are in the same grade from at least high school on AND the game treats Erynn/Lexi as both having a similar age gap with the MC (around 2-ish years))... then that means the scenes we see of Adriana in the dorm, she is already a mother to Lexi.
Now, Adriana is displayed as not in the dorm often, but why maintain a dorm, where is Lexi when Adriana is at the dorm, is Adriana's current husband and the man that Lexi calls Dad actually Lexi's bio dad, and given that there are some loosely maintained connections between Adriana and Emily over the years...how does Emily not know that Alexis is Adriana's daughter.
These NPCs must not share any updates about each others lives when interacting for two people that roomed together in college to not make the shared connection over the years to "oh, I have a daughter, too, here is a picture, her name is Alexis" and Adriana must not have ever gone to Melissa's to pick up Lexi at the same time Melissa and Emily where hanging out. XD
This actually could add weight to Gabi and Adriana having a shared connection via their current husbands/who Alexis's dad is, given that we could potentially see about MC Santiago vs. Andres situation except as it relates to Lexi's bio vs. the person that raised her. In that, the importance of who Gabi's married to and that the MC slept with her could be that the MC slept with the MC's potential LI (Lexi Route)'s bio dad opposed to the other theory I see some pose on here about Gabi's husband being the MC's bio dad. I do also see this scenario of Gabi's husband being Lexi's bio dad as less likely than being MC's bio dad, though...mostly because I don't see Nyx reusing the same trick of bio vs. dad who raised them trick for both Lexi and MC.
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I saw it as the two of them being roommates but not necessarily close friends. Which translated into their lives now, plus they are both really busy. Emily is running at least two restaurants (IIRC) and Adriana is running a school, dealing with the district administration (which is often a nightmare of paperwork), and then raising two daughters. Who's to say they really run into each other very often?
Another reason for the characters not being aware of each other could be the fact that Alexis was supposed to just be a casual fuck that had the MC join the mile high club and then she'd be gone from the game. IIRC Nyx and the early players liked Alexis a lot so she was "wedged" into the game... Supposedly. I've no idea how difficult it has been to add in Alexis or if her "casualness" is true. Just what I remember from a while ago.
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Doesn't mean people here don't want a harem route my bro. Don't have to be a dick about it.
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AOA academy ptsd my bro? lol That abandoned tag still hurts after chapter 6 was so close to release.
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I mean, there are plenty of games with harems, one of the major 'selling points' of Intertwined is that it isn't one.
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As much as it can be helpful being attentive to superscription-patrions.
Some story's can get off track in practice of this.
Can observe this with several titles aside from this VN.
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They might have that fight or hopefully a threesome.
It looks like Layla and Elena are the younger counterpart to Eryn and Lexi: two friends attracted to the MC.
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I think a catfight would be far out bros. My moneys on whichever girl goes for the wedgie and boob grabs first. Would breathe new life into the game bros.
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INTERTWINED: MOTIFS, MIRRORS
Some thoughts and observations on the game:
I came to AVNs late in the game, and later in life. (Although my memory might be playing tricks on me since I recall playing one of those DOS proto AVNs in high school.)
Like a lot of people, I came for the sex and stayed for the story of games like this one and BADIK.
It's a game about shocking and unexpected connections (in a six degrees of separation telenovela manner), and how history, behavior and life patterns can repeat itself through different generations.
At her best, Nyx uses similar characters scenes, situations, and finds interesting and fun character and plot progression variations that aren't repetitive or redundant. At her worst it's a telenovela with all the annoying tropes and cliches magnified.
Narrative Mirror Scenes, Parallel Narrative Lines, Parallel Scenes, Plot Devices, Motifs, Comparison and Contrast, Scene and Situation Repetitions and Variations, Mirror Reflections of Characters and Mirror Sets of Characters, Visual Repetitions and Variations
(Intertwined even attempts a Rashomon effect of the MC's memory of being rejected by Erryn. It obviously is not as great or effective as the original Rashomon film or other attempts at utilizing it, but I think the attempt is commendable within the AVN medium. It might have worked better as a single episode where Erryn, MC and Lexi confront each other before a threesome)
Some thoughts and observations on the game:
I came to AVNs late in the game, and later in life. (Although my memory might be playing tricks on me since I recall playing one of those DOS proto AVNs in high school.)
Like a lot of people, I came for the sex and stayed for the story of games like this one and BADIK.
It's a game about shocking and unexpected connections (in a six degrees of separation telenovela manner), and how history, behavior and life patterns can repeat itself through different generations.
At her best, Nyx uses similar characters scenes, situations, and finds interesting and fun character and plot progression variations that aren't repetitive or redundant. At her worst it's a telenovela with all the annoying tropes and cliches magnified.
Narrative Mirror Scenes, Parallel Narrative Lines, Parallel Scenes, Plot Devices, Motifs, Comparison and Contrast, Scene and Situation Repetitions and Variations, Mirror Reflections of Characters and Mirror Sets of Characters, Visual Repetitions and Variations
(Intertwined even attempts a Rashomon effect of the MC's memory of being rejected by Erryn. It obviously is not as great or effective as the original Rashomon film or other attempts at utilizing it, but I think the attempt is commendable within the AVN medium. It might have worked better as a single episode where Erryn, MC and Lexi confront each other before a threesome
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well mc would be total winner if he was watching it.
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Progress Update - Episode 10
I'll keep this very short. The only thing left to do is more testing. Didn't come across many errors yet and let's hope it stays that way.
Release: Friday!
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He got jumped, 3 on 1. Most will get beaten, in those circumstances.
Then he went looking to take some, knowing it would save his step-Sis.
So made a sacrifice of himself, knowing that he could take the physical pain, but she couldn't take the emotional pain of exclusion.
I'd say that the former is as expected & the latter is pretty noble.
Certainly don't really see either as warranting being branded as a "bitchboy".