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Just finished the latest update (well, the Layla/Elena path). Well, that's the progress on Elena Sofia Ortiz I've been looking for! Went quite fast in the end. Some more buildup from MC's side, like MC discovering his feeling beyond just getting a hard on (the beach scene with her brothers would've been perfect for that) would have been nice, but since Elena is in my top 3 across all AVNs, I'm not complaining lol. I can understand people wishing there was a 'normal' path for her, but tbh I quite like this unconventional route. Something different for once. Can't wait for the fallout in the next updates. Give me all the drama. :D

Minus points for locking the Tori scene behind Alexis' paths. Really don't feel like replaying her path atm. Though I might give the secret path a go. Never done that one before. :unsure:
 
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How do you get the Iris at the beach scene? Keep trying but she always stops saying if I wasnt with Alexis?
 

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This is what I'm getting at in why the current interactions feel "weird". Because organically they'd lead to something, but we know they won't, so it's immersion breaking.

Trying to tell love and sex stories without any potential partner ever having any involvement with anyone else would be like trying to tell a war story where no one on your side ever dies. You could do it, but after awhile it would start to get extremely boring and predictable, and severely limit how creative the tale could be.

The analogous war story to the Intertwined dialogues I've spoke about would be "Well, it's not looking good, your squad leader had to lead a frontal assault on a heavily defended position" while you know ahead of time no one dies, so there's zero tension and drama in them mentioning that.
Because its a story about the MC, not everyone, if he dumps LI and moves on why would it matter if she dated someone else. The way MC is written from my standpoint is he is a kinda loyal person. Feel like you are arguing this point because you want NTR in the game and trying to make a flawed logical reason why it should be. None of the other girls do we get side on them unless it pertains to MC. Layla Fucking someone in revenge for example he might hear about but not see which I think is what your hoping for
 

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no at Layla's house you have to be on her and Elena's path I believe for the topless scene
I try to be both layla and elena path, meaning i tried to choose all positives for each, but it seems i end up being with layla alone in hot tub how do i get elena to be there too?
 

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I try to be both layla and elena path, meaning i tried to choose all positives for each, but it seems i end up being with layla alone in hot tub how do i get elena to be there too?
did you go to elena invite you to her house for help to train and did she hang out with you at the beach instead of going home when her mom showed up. If you didn't get those scenes I think you probably messed up somewhere along the way.
 
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did you go to elena invite you to her house for help to train and did she hang out with you at the beach instead of going home when her mom showed up. If you didn't get those scenes I think you probably messed up somewhere along the way.
The Elena path means helping her train for the competition, go watch her at the competition (which means don't bang Gabi at the camp) and staying with her and her brothers at the beach.
Then pull her in when the scene with Layla starts.
 
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The Elena path means helping her train for the competition, go watch her at the competition (which means don't bang Gabi at the camp) and staying with her and her brothers at the beach.
Then pull her in when the scene with Layla starts.
ah I see thanks only did her path once and it was a speed run to see the content so I was making my best guess to help out the other person that asked me.
 
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Because its a story about the MC, not everyone, if he dumps LI and moves on why would it matter if she dated someone else. The way MC is written from my standpoint is he is a kinda loyal person. Feel like you are arguing this point because you want NTR in the game and trying to make a flawed logical reason why it should be. None of the other girls do we get side on them unless it pertains to MC. Layla Fucking someone in revenge for example he might hear about but not see which I think is what your hoping for
While It's true I like sharing games, that's not what I'm advocating for here. It's the difference between them explicitly showing/describing it (ntr game) vs it merely being implied. I'm saying skipping over the latter removes believability - something as small as if you ditch an LI, there's dialogue about "Oh yeah, shes with Zach now.." - stuff like that.
 

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While It's true I like sharing games, that's not what I'm advocating for here. It's the difference between them explicitly showing/describing it (ntr game) vs it merely being implied. I'm saying skipping over the latter removes believability - something as small as if you ditch an LI, there's dialogue about "Oh yeah, shes with Zach now.." - stuff like that.
Wait... you think Zach would get a girl? Who's straining believably NOW? :ROFLMAO:
 

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I tried a few path, did the Layla path which was quite nice a the end, but also on one of my paths, I rejected going in her room and chose Elena instead, that really crushed her, I felt like shit after that, wonder where that will take me in the next update :unsure:
 

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I tried a few path, did the Layla path which was quite nice a the end, but also on one of my paths, I rejected going in her room and chose Elena instead, that really crushed her, I felt like shit after that, wonder where that will take me in the next update :unsure:
yeah felt shitty to make her cry but I felt it was also the right thing to do once the MC realized what was going to happen assuming you are more interested in Elena.
 

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did you go to elena invite you to her house for help to train and did she hang out with you at the beach instead of going home when her mom showed up. If you didn't get those scenes I think you probably messed up somewhere along the way.
Yes i think im about to get it. It seems there are 2 hot tub scenes, one with only layla, and one a couple of days later with elena.
 
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