Tremonia

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question im guessing if ur on the alexia path u dont go to the beach as the game litterally eneded for me after they made plans for it after they ran?
You did something wrong. On Alexis path you're going to the beach with her, Erynn, and Iris and after that into the club.
 
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LSC82

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Well, wait until Layla telled Elena about it. Elena beats the shit out of you and is instantly bone dry every time she sees you. Possible double shit if Layla tells the whole story to Alexis, including the blow jobs and the other stuff, and Alexis gossips it to Erynn.
Really messy stuff lol.
You tell a girl you like her BFF after she blew you and right after she basically rewarded you with a topless make out session with both girls...
And then you add messing around with her sister (and maybe her BFF too), good way for all the girls to resent you at the end...

Given that Elena immediately turned off if you broke Layla's heart by chosing Alexis, it's actually quite possible that she won't be "does that mean you are free now?", following these events.
 
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Breaking up with Layla feels super bad, i think i already said in this thread i've broken up with girls IRL where i didn't feel as bad as i did for this virtual girl... she just had so much invested into this guy, was ready for him to be her first...
And i agree, if you keep going, the Layla scene was "chef's kiss" perfect, perfect depiction of an inexperienced girl, her choice of music is pretty hillarious too.

For Val's mom, there's little evidence right now, but there's also nothing blocking it from being true and they have similarities, this will likely be developed in future updates.

Yeah, i think that old guy can run past you and maybe he has shown up in earlier episodes.
The model who couldn't make it being called Zane can't be a coincidence however, well... his loss our gain.
Still i feel like he's gonna show up at some point.

Lots of setup for Erynn, mysterious phone call, work stuff that she doesn't tell us what it is... plus she wants to go shopping, that can be nice date.


For an update that was focussed on Erynn she can be absent for like 70% of it, in my save where i cut ties with Alexis early there's no beach scene, i guess she insisted on girls night rather than hang out with the guy who pumped and dumped her...

And even when i get the beach scene it's super awkward, being in a relationship with Alexis and kinda trying to put the moves on Erynn, saying i would marry Erynn in front of my current girlfriend... i thought she would quit, with me clearly going for Erynn right in front of her eyes... but no she's hanging in there.


Seems like Val goes to the beach with Darryl and crew regardless, the question is wether we are there to see it...
He has her phone no matter what and it looked like that group was comfortable together, even Tori seems to have lost interest in Darryl and doesn't care about him "putting the moves" aka harrasment on Val.
And despite his "forward" attitude, she's still there, doesn't blow up, kick him in the nuts or anything...

I was smiling from ear-to-ear and laughing at many parts of the Erynn and Layla paths in this update.

I've known some girls similar to Layla - flirty but also innocent in a lot ways. Yes, that choice of music made me burst out in laughter. She's like a lot of young women of that age. They really put their all into a relationship, thinking and believing with all their heart that this guy is the one they will be with forever. It works out some of the time, but most of the time, you end up with their first devastating heartbreak - regardless if the guy is a normal guy, good guy, douche or narcissist. I'll have to play to see how awful breaking Layla's heart is. I don't doubt your description of it.

The Erynn scenes at the shoot, afterwards and in bed are delightful. It's consistent with someone getting over her trauma and trust issues of being in a blackmail sex tape as well as her personal history baggage with the MC. While Erynn and the MC are at the same spot Santi and Emily were 18-20 years ago, you can see Layla and Val jogging in the background.

Regarding Val, isn't that inconsistent writing on Nyx's part? During the training camp, Darryl also gropes Val on the second training day which angers her. She shoves him away and tells him to back off.
 
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valbitterb

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Dont know if gabi's friend is Valeria's mother , but she was the one at the beach with that one coach was fucking (forgot her name) at the locker room, she saw MC when he went to that beach date with Layla and Elena.
They look similar, but I think they are different women.

The woman at the beach is Rose who is friends with Natasha (the one fucking Coach Mike Morgan in the school locker room.)

Natasha is the school receptionist and the older sister of Zach.

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enjoyed the update, though thought after such a long time between them, that the update would contain more than just content for Erynn and Lexi with a small side of Iris and Valeria. although i have a route for Nikki i don't see that going anywhere unless Nikki moves closer to the mc. i like her a fair bit, but there are way too many girls close by for the mc to have as LI's.
as for the story, was waiting for mc to run into Zach and beat his ass..well guess it will be another 6-8 months wait for next update..
many games to play while waiting though..on to the next one.
 

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Really messy stuff lol.
You tell a girl you like her BFF after she blew you and right after she basically rewarded you with a topless make out session with both girls...
And then you add messing around with her sister (and maybe her BFF too), good way for all the girls to resent you at the end...

Given that Elena immediately turned off if you broke Layla's heart by chosing Alexis, it's actually quite possible that she won't be "does that mean you are free now?", following these events.
Do you think there's a possible ending where the MC ends up alone, alone, alone?

Off topic, I like that the Layla path gives you a moment showing Darryl's character with more nuance and in a little bit more sympathetic light. Otherwise, he's just a one-dimensional douche.

And Sienna is silent but deadly (experienced).
 
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Getting errors. I think the saves are no longer compatible with this update which uses v8.10. Anyone having same error while being on Erynn path?

Code:
I'm sorry, but an uncaught exception occurred.

While running game code:
  File "game/episode_11.rpy", line 2, in script
    if Erynn_Week3_Monday_Help == False:
  File "game/episode_11.rpy", line 2, in <module>
    if Erynn_Week3_Monday_Help == False:
NameError: name 'Erynn_Week3_Monday_Help' is not defined
 

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Getting errors. I think the saves are no longer compatible with this update which uses v8.10. Anyone having same error while being on Erynn path?

Code:
I'm sorry, but an uncaught exception occurred.

While running game code:
  File "game/episode_11.rpy", line 2, in script
    if Erynn_Week3_Monday_Help == False:
  File "game/episode_11.rpy", line 2, in <module>
    if Erynn_Week3_Monday_Help == False:
NameError: name 'Erynn_Week3_Monday_Help' is not defined
Did you happen to use the bugfix? Also, yes, saves for some are borked.
 

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Neither is real life and neither am I. Harems having happy endings are unrealistic. Real men with harems are going to have favorites, and women are going to play all sorts of games to 1-up each other in such a situation. In games it is only fun because it is fantasy, but in real life balancing the jealousy between the women is and their egos and competition would be a thing.


Harems are drama. In ancient times wealthy men could afford harems because they bought them or captured them in war or women volunteered because of his wealth.

Nowadays? The closest equivalent are hollywood stars, and even they settle down with their favorites sooner or later.

Bottom line is the fact that you have one sex organ meant to go in another. If we were meant to simultabeously have sex with multiple people at the same time we would have extra sex organs for that.
 
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LSC82

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I was smiling from ear-to-ear and laughing at many parts of the Erynn and Layla paths in this update.

I've known some girls similar to Layla - flirty but also innocent in a lot ways. Yes, that choice of music made me burst out in laughter. She's like a lot of young women of that age. They really put their all into a relationship, thinking and believing with all their heart that this guy is the one they will be with forever. It works out some of the time, but most of the time, you end up with their first devastating heartbreak. I'll have to play to see how awful breaking Layla's heart is. I don't doubt your description of it.

The Erynn scenes at the shoot, afterwards and in bed are delightful. It's consistent with someone getting over her trauma and trust issues of being in a blackmail sex tape as well as her personal history baggage with the MC. While Erynn and the MC are at the same spot Santi and Emily were 18-20 years ago, you can see Layla and Val jogging in the background.

Regarding Val, isn't that inconsistent writing on Nyx's part? During the training camp, Darryl also gropes Val on the second training day which angers her. She shoves him away and tells him to back off.
Everything Layla was perfect this episode, the break up... oh boy, i'm a person who criticized the scene where you pick Alexis over Layla, i thought Layla was too non-chalant about it, the guy she's been so invested with is dumping her... for her freaking sister!!!! She was too cool about it and has been too much of a good sport since...
This time it's truly a tough scene to watch, and the girl is so freaking hurt by this, this scene delivers the emotional punch necessary, kudos!!! Nothing else to add.

And the romance scene, yeah this girl is 100% invested and convinced this guy is the one for her.
And you can feel how tense she is to take this step, very sweet and also emotional, again perfect delivery.

Erynn can be a bit frustrating given how slow it is, how much hesitancy is there, but despite being older than Layla she's close to the same level of inexperience and she has closed off in a huge way following her trauma, she also puts so much expectations into this guy, that he's the one for her.
If anything, imo, the real breakthrough is when she starts relaxing after we "diddle" her... rather than the fact that we made her cum.
She's getting closer to learning that she doesn't need to be afraid.

Val... her "girl with attitude" was absent in that scene, very passive.
And in the scene with her trainer she was in full, "girl who hangs out with guys" mode, the guy grabs her ass, they joke about it, she gives him a lighthearted kick...

Do you think there's a possible ending where the MC ends up alone, alone, alone?

Off topic, I like that the Layla path gives you a moment showing Darryl's character with more nuance and in a little bit more sympathetic light. Otherwise, he's just a one-dimensional douche.
I'm fairly sure it will be possible to blow it with every girl, maybe Tori will still throw you a bone lol.
Yeah in a group where most people seem to have money(the Monroes obviously have a lot, the MCs mom is doing better than alright, Zach got a sports car despite not working), Darryl is a guy who has to work to get anything, he obviously has his rough edges, no excuses here, but i can see why he's hostile, he probably worked hard to be the number 1 prospect and becoming the big guy at school...
And here comes this new guy, challenging him for number 1 spot and grabbing girls attention... i understand why he's not "welcoming", he feels he must defend "his territory".
I feel like if we had "Intertwined next generation" he'd probably turn out like a cool dude... i know a few of those that were assholes back in school but turned out ok later, maybe he'll cool off before the endgame.
 

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Is there a new bugfix? I can't see any posted in OP.
I'll just start a new play and hopefully remember my choices to stay on Erynn's path
Yes, I added it to my compressed post, added extra links, and also here is the original comment...


Google Drive
Here's the bug fix Copy and replace the file in the Intertwined-0.11-pc\game folder)

I have updated my compressed post now. New compressed already has the "bugfix" applied, so you don't need it. If you already have my compressed post, just get the "bugfix" only and copy/replace :coffee:
 

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hibc4 You should really stop just publicly posting the Devs links and either reupload or report the links...
 

otto82

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Getting errors. I think the saves are no longer compatible with this update which uses v8.10. Anyone having same error while being on Erynn path?

Code:
I'm sorry, but an uncaught exception occurred.

While running game code:
  File "game/episode_11.rpy", line 2, in script
    if Erynn_Week3_Monday_Help == False:
  File "game/episode_11.rpy", line 2, in <module>
    if Erynn_Week3_Monday_Help == False:
NameError: name 'Erynn_Week3_Monday_Help' is not defined
I've got errors on all the paths I have.
 
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