Wouldn't be surprised if it was Layla, she says she has a sister, and seeing how Layla already knows Erryn, it wouldn't surprise me.
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I was playing with WT mod, and everything went fine, she kissed me.
Depends on how you relate to her rather. In the club, choose when Zach asks you about Elena, say she's cute (or something similar) and in Erynn meeting go with Layla and not Erynn.
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i guess Layla came home? but idk... mc should have recognized her voice right?
Alexis is still my no.1 girl
, if that's the only thing that's bad about her that Layla is her sis, well it's an easy choice for me also Rachel is back and she's friends with mc's mom (damn she is hot af )It sucks what Erynn did when mc was a kid but hey, everyone acts like that when they are teenagers, so it's not a big deal for me so i forgave her... but i'm scared of her words when mc stayed at her place
Do you have any idea how much i missed you...
why did you leave... why didn't you ever contact me?
i made so many mistakes...
i hope it's not something bad like rape or abortion from a one night stand...
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Very good update, can't wait for more.
Would be nice if the spanish texts could get some kind of subtitle though. Google translate is a bit clunky and while I understand english quite ok-ish, even if the translation lacks a bit, I don't understand a word of spanish.
Would be nice if the spanish texts could get some kind of subtitle though. Google translate is a bit clunky and while I understand english quite ok-ish, even if the translation lacks a bit, I don't understand a word of spanish.
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I had to start over. I think you might have to pick Meh when you in the science class. So that way she thinks you a little interested in her. I could be wrong might do another test without picking that one.
Either way I hope I can make Elena my main girl. Most games that use her model use her as a side chick or some bestiality bullshit.
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That's what I chose. Even when I installed the WT mod then the '' Meh '' option was not marked green, I don't know why.
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Thoughts, thoughts, so many thoughts!
First, I like the game so if you're reading Dev, any criticisms are truly intended to be constructive.
The models are beautiful. Each character has a personality, not completely fleshed out yet, but there is development.
There isn't much of a plot. Since we're still meeting people and establishing relationships, it's not missed yet, but that could be an issue later.
Pacing seems a bit on the rushed side with some abrupt transitions. For instance, MC leaves Melissa's pool well before dinner time, and the next scene is going into the school the next morning.
I have a couple of bigger reservations though. First, you have gated some content behind perfect scores. Mostly it was dialogue options, but there was Layla's kiss in the park and Elena's train kiss as well and possibly others. This might not be such a big deal except that getting max points with Layla and Elena requires MC to tolerate/accept some shoddy treatment from the girls. For example, in the cafeteria scene when Zach and MC are sitting at the girls' table, they come on full aggro on the guys which I thought was uncalled for. However, in order to get the points for the girls in that scene, you have to take their side against Zach who isn't really acting inappropriately. To get a bunch of points with Layla, you basically have to force yourself into her life when she hasn't exactly been very welcoming to you. You do relax the point gateway a bit later on, but max points less two is still a pretty high threshold.
Second, I am concerned about the choice with Erryn in MC's bedroom. MC must either forgive her even though she hasn't apologized because she is completely clueless about how she hurt him in the first place OR carry a grudge ("Two can play this game!") The scene then plays out exactly the same way no matter which choice you select. I hope I'm wrong, but I'm worried that choosing the second choice is going to result in some misguided, hurtful revenge plot. Erryn needs to be told what she did and how it hurt him and given the chance to apologize/make amends. She doesn't need to be hurt tit for tat. In this situation, my inclination is to reserve forgiveness for when it is truly deserved (She at least knows what she did and expresses some regret/remorse about it.) However, I don't think that embarking on a revenge campaign is appropriate either. How about, oh, I don't know, talking about what happened so she knows. I see being embarassed and hurt, but for crying out loud, she is so obviously happy to see him and wants to rekindle their friendship, doesn't she deserve to know why he's reluctant? Perhaps I'm reading too much into this choice, but as you are writing the continuation of this scene, I hope you can keep this in mind (unless that is actually the direction you are intending to take the story of course!)
Lastly, and this isn't really criticism, it's just my reaction to the story so far, I'm disappointed with the direction the Alexis story seems to be taking. Maybe it's an oversight, but I certainly noticed that she hasn't called or texted MC after unceremoniously ejecting him from her home when "someone" came home unexpectedly. If it were just one of her parents, I would have expected her to say so in the moment and barring that send him an apology message, but she pretty pointedly avoids saying anything so much so that MC wonders about it later on. By the end of this update, it's been approaching 48 hours with nothing from her at all.
Good luck! I look forward to seeing how you continue your story!
Edited to fix Zach's name! Oops!
First, I like the game so if you're reading Dev, any criticisms are truly intended to be constructive.
The models are beautiful. Each character has a personality, not completely fleshed out yet, but there is development.
There isn't much of a plot. Since we're still meeting people and establishing relationships, it's not missed yet, but that could be an issue later.
Pacing seems a bit on the rushed side with some abrupt transitions. For instance, MC leaves Melissa's pool well before dinner time, and the next scene is going into the school the next morning.
I have a couple of bigger reservations though. First, you have gated some content behind perfect scores. Mostly it was dialogue options, but there was Layla's kiss in the park and Elena's train kiss as well and possibly others. This might not be such a big deal except that getting max points with Layla and Elena requires MC to tolerate/accept some shoddy treatment from the girls. For example, in the cafeteria scene when Zach and MC are sitting at the girls' table, they come on full aggro on the guys which I thought was uncalled for. However, in order to get the points for the girls in that scene, you have to take their side against Zach who isn't really acting inappropriately. To get a bunch of points with Layla, you basically have to force yourself into her life when she hasn't exactly been very welcoming to you. You do relax the point gateway a bit later on, but max points less two is still a pretty high threshold.
Second, I am concerned about the choice with Erryn in MC's bedroom. MC must either forgive her even though she hasn't apologized because she is completely clueless about how she hurt him in the first place OR carry a grudge ("Two can play this game!") The scene then plays out exactly the same way no matter which choice you select. I hope I'm wrong, but I'm worried that choosing the second choice is going to result in some misguided, hurtful revenge plot. Erryn needs to be told what she did and how it hurt him and given the chance to apologize/make amends. She doesn't need to be hurt tit for tat. In this situation, my inclination is to reserve forgiveness for when it is truly deserved (She at least knows what she did and expresses some regret/remorse about it.) However, I don't think that embarking on a revenge campaign is appropriate either. How about, oh, I don't know, talking about what happened so she knows. I see being embarassed and hurt, but for crying out loud, she is so obviously happy to see him and wants to rekindle their friendship, doesn't she deserve to know why he's reluctant? Perhaps I'm reading too much into this choice, but as you are writing the continuation of this scene, I hope you can keep this in mind (unless that is actually the direction you are intending to take the story of course!)
Lastly, and this isn't really criticism, it's just my reaction to the story so far, I'm disappointed with the direction the Alexis story seems to be taking. Maybe it's an oversight, but I certainly noticed that she hasn't called or texted MC after unceremoniously ejecting him from her home when "someone" came home unexpectedly. If it were just one of her parents, I would have expected her to say so in the moment and barring that send him an apology message, but she pretty pointedly avoids saying anything so much so that MC wonders about it later on. By the end of this update, it's been approaching 48 hours with nothing from her at all.
Good luck! I look forward to seeing how you continue your story!
Edited to fix Zach's name! Oops!
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Seems she's into escort, it kind of adds up. The dress up, modelling, that VIP room ( that she was probably in)i guess Layla came home? but idk... mc should have recognized her voice right?
Alexis is still my no.1 girl
It sucks what Erynn did when mc was a kid but hey, everyone acts like that when they are teenagers, so it's not a big deal for me so i forgave her... but i'm scared of her words when mc stayed at her place
Do you have any idea how much i missed you...
why did you leave... why didn't you ever contact me?
i made so many mistakes...
i hope it's not something bad like rape or abortion from a one night stand...
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I'm pretty sure Alexis is cheating [her own SO] (locked door) so she is out of option, Erynn is out of option by default, even if wounds are healed, scars remain. Tori has standard manipulative bitch aura going on with her, so she is also out. I say Layla is straight good option so far. If you really into getting equal therms I would say go for Melissa, two birds one stone.
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Well MC is not really in a relationship with her, at least not yet. They're basically fuck buddies.
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I meant she is cheating her own SO. I thought people could understand that statement.
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With that response that she gave in the club
"So.. What's the occasion? Some private party or something like that?"
"Yeah.. Something like that.."
And the comment she makes later
"I made so many mistakes.."
"I needed you here.. Who else watches out for me.."
Makes you wonder what she has been doing since you left.
At the moment I'm leaning towards Layla and Elena as the best options.