VN Ren'Py Intertwined [v0.13] [Nyx]

ReallyNotTimmy · Feb 18, 2024

Played the update on a few of my runs (Layla, Alexis, Erynn, Gabi) and was mostly “meh.” Erynn and Brooke, plus an entirely new girl named Gianna, had the most new content so far. Which is a downer if any other girls, like Layla, are your favorite… or if you wanted to see any Elena at all. But to be fair, making an AVN takes a whole lot of time to render and code, and if you want more and frequent updates, they’ve gotta consist of little disappointing increments which won’t always give you what you want.

Still, the bits I do like:

Finding out from Valeria that Darryl is a turn-off.
Getting to manhandle Ethan is always fun, and i particularly appreciate the loops in which you get to do it over and over and over until you finally tire of it. Takes me a while to tire of it.
Getting jacked off in the shower by Erynn was a pleasant surprise. (Realizing the reason she’s good at it is likely because she had to jack off a lot of guys who hired her as an escort… not so pleasant.) Pity she won’t let the MC return the favor. She flinches from further intimacy like a molestation victim, which makes me wonder whether that’s gonna become an unpleasant storyline in the future.
Finding out Brooke is gay, and in particular gay for Emily, was also a pleasant surprise. Let’s get em together! (What about John? So let’s get em all together!)
Alexis finding out what she and Iris and the MC did when she was drunk. Never presume the crazy shit you get your drunk girl to do, won’t have consequences!
Finally confirming what we all already guessed—that Navarro is Santiago, and Alexis and Layla’s dad. Yeah, it messes with the MC’s head a bit (unnecessarily) and hopefully that’ll be resolved in the next update, instead of getting dragged on and on like Erynn’s shit. Meanwhile it’ll be fun to watch him (if he’s dating Alexis or Layla) freak out about incest. Then decide it doesn’t matter; he loves that girl; he’ll just get a vasectomy to eliminate any incest-baby problems and stay with that girl regardless. Then find out it’s okay, cuz Santiago’s just their adoptive father. (Bonus fun: He finds out after he gets the vasectomy.) Then find out it’s not okay, cuz adoptive fathers are legal fathers, which makes this legal incest; then find out whoops, Santiago forgot to sign the right paperwork, so it’s all good… Oh shit, he’s fixed the paperwork and filing it now; better race him to the courthouse! I could go on like this for days, but Nyx can do it for years if she wants, so like I said, hope it’s resolved in entirety in the next update.
Meeting the hot stepmom from Alexis’s favorite softcore TV show, because you know she and the MC are gonna get to fuck.
Alexis going to the airport, because you know she’s picking up her cousin Lakelyn, which’ll either be great fun or another excuse for Alexis to break up with the MC.
Planning to visit Nathan, which means he’s gonna run into another ex-girlfriend while he‘s there.

The bits I don’t like are the obvious empty cliffhangers. Oh no, Ethan’s contact might find out who John is!—who cares. Oh no, Valeria’s been grabbed from behind by someone she knows but we don’t!—who cares. Oh no, Alexis might be the MC’s sister but we already know there’s no actual incest in the game!—really who cares.

LSC82 · Feb 18, 2024

ImSenjou said:
No content with cousin Valeria in this update?

Small conversation.

townie said:
Isn't this big reveal kinda nonsense? Does it even make sense that

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Or am I missing something?

He's even dumber than his son, the MC even tells him he works for Emily.
He knows he's a high schooler, working for Emily can't be a steady full time job, only a part time for people who are still at school.
Btw i like his "reminiscing" look he has when talking about "little Emi", totally thinking about the times he banged the MCs mom lol.

Still who the fuck is the guy in the big framed photo with Gabi?

ReallyNotTimmy said:
The bits I don’t like are the obvious empty cliffhangers. Oh no, Ethan’s contact might find out who John is!—who cares. Oh no, Valeria’s been grabbed from behind by someone she knows but we don’t!—who cares. Oh no, Alexis might be the MC’s sister but we already know there’s no actual incest in the game!—really who cares.

Ethan finishes the update either wanting "more revenge" on the MC or suspicious of John.
Besides finding out Kyle Johnson doesn't exist he has nothing, and what can we gain from his cell phone in the beat him up route? Or is he gonna call the police? He has his "merchandise" on his phone so that's tricky for him too.
The whole thing with "Valeria gets lots of attention" is also meh.
And the incest teasing, bitch please...

joypinse · Feb 18, 2024

i keep getting these errors with the latest compressed:

Code:

I'm sorry, but an uncaught exception occurred.

While running game code:
  File "game/episode_12.rpy", line 1048, in script
    if Valeria_Friends == True:
  File "game/episode_12.rpy", line 1048, in <module>
    if Valeria_Friends == True:
NameError: name 'Valeria_Friends' is not defined

-- Full Traceback ------------------------------------------------------------

Full traceback:
  File "game/episode_12.rpy", line 1048, in script
    if Valeria_Friends == True:
  File "C:\own\Intertwined-0.12.1-pc-compressed\renpy\ast.py", line 2133, in execute
    if renpy.python.py_eval(condition):
  File "C:\own\Intertwined-0.12.1-pc-compressed\renpy\python.py", line 1153, in py_eval
    return py_eval_bytecode(code, globals, locals)
  File "C:\own\Intertwined-0.12.1-pc-compressed\renpy\python.py", line 1146, in py_eval_bytecode
    return eval(bytecode, globals, locals)
  File "game/episode_12.rpy", line 1048, in <module>
    if Valeria_Friends == True:
NameError: name 'Valeria_Friends' is not defined

Windows-10-10.0.22621 AMD64
Ren'Py 8.1.0.23051307
Intertwined 0.12
Sun Feb 18 07:04:22 2024

Code:

I'm sorry, but an uncaught exception occurred.

While running game code:
  File "game/episode_12.rpy", line 1838, in script
    if Alexis_Week5_Wednesday_Beach == False:
  File "game/episode_12.rpy", line 1838, in <module>
    if Alexis_Week5_Wednesday_Beach == False:
NameError: name 'Alexis_Week5_Wednesday_Beach' is not defined

-- Full Traceback ------------------------------------------------------------

Full traceback:
  File "game/episode_12.rpy", line 1838, in script
    if Alexis_Week5_Wednesday_Beach == False:
  File "C:\own\Intertwined-0.12.1-pc-compressed\renpy\ast.py", line 2133, in execute
    if renpy.python.py_eval(condition):
  File "C:\own\Intertwined-0.12.1-pc-compressed\renpy\python.py", line 1153, in py_eval
    return py_eval_bytecode(code, globals, locals)
  File "C:\own\Intertwined-0.12.1-pc-compressed\renpy\python.py", line 1146, in py_eval_bytecode
    return eval(bytecode, globals, locals)
  File "game/episode_12.rpy", line 1838, in <module>
    if Alexis_Week5_Wednesday_Beach == False:
NameError: name 'Alexis_Week5_Wednesday_Beach' is not defined

Windows-10-10.0.22621 AMD64
Ren'Py 8.1.0.23051307
Intertwined 0.12
Sun Feb 18 07:08:14 2024

Warscared · Feb 18, 2024

LSC82 said:
Still who the fuck is the guy in the big framed photo with Gabi?

the true Santiago ofc!
Hey dad remembering when you tryed to have me murdered while i was still in the womb?
yeahhh i cucked you over it!
REVENGE IS A DISH BEST SERVED COLD AND WITH A DRESSING OF MY CUM!

*pulls his douche cap backwards
*makes gang hand signs
*puts on some shades
*lights up a rolled up cigarette
*walks away with a slight limp

PEACE BITCH!

LSC82 · Feb 18, 2024

Warscared said:
the true Santiago ofc!
Hey dad remembering when you try to have me murdered while i was still in the womb?
yeahhh i cucked you over it!
REVENGE IS A DISH BEST SERVED COLD AND WITH A DRESSING OF MY CUM!

*makes gang hand signs
*puts on some shades
*lights up a rolled up cigarette
*walks away with a slight limp

PEACE BITCH!

Fucks his wife>fucks his daughters>refuses to elaborate

jkwan93 · Feb 18, 2024

ill see you guys in 6 months

nyrek · Feb 18, 2024

jkwan93 said:
ill see you guys in 6 months

for what?
it took her 6 months for these ~1200 renders
and hands down THE BEST CLIFFHANGER EVER
and she said the next release is gonna be a long one
so I'm looking forward to nyx needing 12 months for it
things were looking really good for her releases recently, faster than other top game devs for a solid chunk of content
and the other devs already did the 12 months thing, would be a shame if she didn't use the chance to do it too

idk, guess I'm too disappointed after this release so I'm expecting the worst
I'm even considering dropping the game after the epic cliffhanger she delivered

Krepax · Feb 18, 2024

After replaying some old save on Layla's route, I stumbled on a scene at the end of chapter 11 between Santiago (possible biological father of mc / Alexis+Layla) and Adriana.

Adriana is talking about having another child and she says: "We always talked about having 3"

An odd sentence to say, if you aren't talking to the father of your two other sons.

As for the incest being forbidden, well... you must be aware of it. I remember a case from a few years ago about a young married couple, who's been together since the school, who discovered that they were brother and sister only because they were experiencing difficulties in having babies and started doing some genetic tests to look for potential causes of infertility. It turned out the (deceased) mother of one them had a liaison with the father of the other and didn't realize she got pregnant from him.

As for Gabi being married to Santiago, I believe it's just a case of re-using a similar asset for the picture. Unless I'm mistaken, we never get to see the husband in person; for whatever reason he left and he just speaks to her through phone.

LSC82 · Feb 18, 2024

Krepax said:
As for Gabi being married to Santiago, I believe it's just a case of re-using a similar asset for the picture. Unless I'm mistaken, we never get to see the husband in person; for whatever reason he left and he just speaks to her through phone.

Gabi is in an unhappy marriage with someone that looks exactly like Santiago and she also has photos with a "younger Santiago" in her drawers.
The worst thing about Gabi isn't even the photo, it's her training camp scene, she's clearly distressed because someone didn't even bother talking to her before leaving... and of course Santiago was present at the camp.

That's the problem with Nyx style, no doubt she looked at the fact that everyone had zeroed in on "Navarro is married to Gabi" and that Alexis/Layla's father was some other guy(Zo was gaining "votes") so she decided to go for the opposite... and fuck it that it doesn't make a whole lot of sense... because shock value is more important than making sense.

On another topic, can't wait for the forced friendship with Darryl, having to train and compete as a team for a relay race...
Yay!!!!

Hahn1900 · Feb 18, 2024

Krepax said:
After replaying some old save on Layla's route, I stumbled on a scene at the end of chapter 11 between Santiago (possible biological father of mc / Alexis+Layla) and Adriana.

Adriana is talking about having another child and she says: "We always talked about having 3"

An odd sentence to say, if you aren't talking to the father of your two other sons.

As for the incest being forbidden, well... you must be aware of it. I remember a case from a few years ago about a young married couple, who's been together since the school, who discovered that they were brother and sister only because they were experiencing difficulties in having babies and started doing some genetic tests to look for potential causes of infertility. It turned out the (deceased) mother of one them had a liaison with the father of the other and didn't realize she got pregnant from him.

You are messing things up here...

First, Adriana doesnt talk about getting a third child, its the guy who does it (and the guy is Santiago), Adriana is surprised by that. And they dont have sons, they have daughters. And you can be sure of it, that Santiago is not the biological father of either Layla or Alexis.

Than... the forbidden thing about incest.

Nobody cares about that here. And btw... F95 as a whole is ilegal too. Its a pirate site.

The issues with "incest is forbidden" in this thread are only because of patreon. Nyx makes her money pretty much only there. Patreon rules are very strict about incest in any way. Even Step-sister , Step-mother and so on are a no go on patreon, so if you dont want to lose your patreon site... watch it.

Aaaaaand... finally... the game has no incest, never will, and Nyx is just trolling all the guys who want incest so bad (for whatever reason)... she just plays around with the taboo thaught/fantasy of it, without crossing that line, and will never cross that line. Its a useful instrument to implement another layer for drama, which is annoying cause only fools are falling for that... most players already knew since the beginning of the game that there never will be any kind of incest in this game... sometimes it looks like Nyx is searching desperatley for the support of the incest community to get more support on patreon. But it doesnt work that way.

The whole thing is something you can see in many soap operas too btw... my ex-girlfriend watched them all the time (and so i got my fair share of them too for a while)... i cant even count how many times the "oh shit i accidentially banged my sister/brother" plot was used and it always turned out... they arent related in any way. The same thing is going on in this game.

GuessWho1211 · Feb 18, 2024

I found out how to bypass gofiles little "download access temporary limited" shit and it's great lmfao

ThunderStruck · Feb 18, 2024

I know there's a big shitstorm in MC head right now, but the truth is usually much simplier than that.

Seriously, there is probably another Santiago who is MC biological father, and this will all turn out to be a big misunderstanding.

RohanPrince · Feb 18, 2024

Alexis and Erynn are the worst in the game. Claims they loved MC, but both have done the opposite of showing their love. Alexis leads him on despite knowing who MC is, and Erynn sleeps around and cries after winning stupid prize.

The other girls seem much better options for MC.

Pantic_10 · Feb 18, 2024

Is there any option to have sex with the new waitress?

minibaer12 · Feb 18, 2024

ThunderStruck said:
I know there's a big shitstorm in MC head right now, but the truth is usually much simplier than that.

Seriously, there is probably another Santiago who is MC biological father, and this will all turn out to be a big misunderstanding.

From Wikipedia:

Santiago, (also San Iago, San Tiago, Santyago, Sant-Yago, San Thiago) is a male
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name that derives from the
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name
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(Ya'akov) via "Sant Iago", "Sant Yago", "Santo Iago", or "Santo Yago", first used to denote
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, the brother of
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It is traditionally believed that Saint James (Santiago) had travelled to the Iberian Peninsula during his life and was buried there. The name is complicated in Spanish in that Jaime and Jacobo are modern versions of
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Variants of Santiago include Iago (a common
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Dessolos · Feb 18, 2024

RohanPrince said:
Alexis and Erynn are the worst in the game. Claims they loved MC, but both have done the opposite of showing their love. Alexis leads him on despite knowing who MC is, and Erynn sleeps around and cries after winning stupid prize.

The other girls seem much better options for MC.

While you aren't wrong cause of all the drama they bring despite that they are still my favorite 2 LI in the game tho im more on team Erynn and I admit im am bias for her as she is tied for #1 LI across all AVN's for me. But I still think saying she sleeps around is a bit of a stretch , unless there is something she hasn't told us or is lying , considering she cocksblock the MC like crazy. As far as we know she only had sex once and was blackmailed as she had no idea she was being recorded. But yeah she was stupid with the way she handled the situation 100%. I know you were probably just slighting joking or exaggerating the wording a bit , even if you arent just felt like saying why I think it's a stretch.

albul · Feb 18, 2024

ReallyNotTimmy said:
Getting jacked off in the shower by Erynn was a pleasant surprise. (Realizing the reason she’s good at it is likely because she had to jack off a lot of guys who hired her as an escort… not so pleasant.) Pity she won’t let the MC return the favor. She flinches from further intimacy like a molestation victim, which makes me wonder whether that’s gonna become an unpleasant storyline in the future.

Where are you getting that she's good at it because she had to jack off a lot of guys? In the scene itself she says it was the first time she did it. This is not the dialogue of someone who has been doing it a lot:

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indio68 · Feb 18, 2024

Krepax said:
After replaying some old save on Layla's route, I stumbled on a scene at the end of chapter 11 between Santiago (possible biological father of mc / Alexis+Layla) and Adriana.

Adriana is talking about having another child and she says: "We always talked about having 3"

An odd sentence to say, if you aren't talking to the father of your two other sons.

As for the incest being forbidden, well... you must be aware of it. I remember a case from a few years ago about a young married couple, who's been together since the school, who discovered that they were brother and sister only because they were experiencing difficulties in having babies and started doing some genetic tests to look for potential causes of infertility. It turned out the (deceased) mother of one them had a liaison with the father of the other and didn't realize she got pregnant from him.

As for Gabi being married to Santiago, I believe it's just a case of re-using a similar asset for the picture. Unless I'm mistaken, we never get to see the husband in person; for whatever reason he left and he just speaks to her through phone.

chase the sunset, right?

minibaer12 · Feb 18, 2024

albul said:
Where are you getting that she's good at it because she had to jack off a lot of guys? In the scene itself she says it was the first time she did it. This is not the dialogue of someone who has been doing it a lot:

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Nemesiz691 · Feb 18, 2024

albul said:
Where are you getting that she's good at it because she had to jack off a lot of guys? In the scene itself she says it was the first time she did it. This is not the dialogue of someone who has been doing it a lot:

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Damn so only hj with her in this update? Thought mc will be balls deep alredy with them nuts hanging out. Tsktsktsk.

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