VN Ren'Py Intertwined [v0.13] [Nyx]

[5p1der]

Maybe? I don't think it would be to hard to downgrade Layla to friends status at the moment. Depending on what the heck happened with Alexis, we may not even want to continue with her.

Oh, you mean boning them both at the same time? You dog! Yeah, that could be problematic!

Well can you blame me

 

[Glooskabe]

Well can you blame me

Not in the least!

 

[MrFriendly]

Meeting Erynn was interesting. But I have a grudge against her for what she has done to us in the past. Now there are more choices about who to go with and you have to choose, I chose Layla, at least she won't laugh at us and go to other assholes.
Erynn is angry that we didn't ask her how she is and we didn't give her a hug. And she apologized to us for what she once did? no, we should be pissed.
Time will tell if I will convince myself of Erynn. Alexis and Layla the best so far.

I'm right there with you. In fact I was annoyed that we couldn't avoid Erynn more. I was really disappointed that we were given a choice to ignore her but still had to talk to Erynn, we didn't have a choice to go back home on the train with the friends, just unhappy we aren't allowed to choose to help get our new friend Elena home safely. Especially when no conversation takes place once they go to Erynn's apartment. Erynn doesn't deserve the MC's time, she was a bitch to him in the past and, even though it's been five years, the MC should be able to decide not to waste his time with her. She was his childhood crush and he should be able to move on to someone else. Instead we are forced to spend a bunch of time with her, have her wake him up, etc.

At the moment I am just wanting to knock Alexis up, elope to Vegas, and live happily ever after.

 

[bosp]

I totally agree! Its stupid on too many levels.

P.S
What can one even expect from woman who fucks 10 mins after meeting someone? STD for starter...she definitelly didnt even bother to ask for condom.. used to doing things too much? What can such girl even offer you ? fuck that shit

Quite an interesting opinion from guys who come to a pirate website to download and play erotic and porn games.

Guess none of you ever heard of "consenting adults" or acted on pure instinct or impulse.
What for you seemed like 10 min. in-game was 6,5 hours long flight. Things like that happen often - talking from my personal experience here.
In my younger days I worked as an airline executive (for almost 10 years) so... yeah I enjoyed the mile high club often either with "consenting adult" passengers or members of the flight crew. We had fun because we felt like it but if you're not a nice and charming person, not many women would be willing to jump your bones no matter how horny they are.
Sometimes it turned into more meaningful relationships and sometimes into long-lasting friendships.

So feel free to spin your puritan hypocrisy elsewhere - not on a pirate porn website like F95 FFS.

 

[Moleman111]

Mr Friendly you can decide to go back on the train with the others

 

[Osamabeenfappin]

I'm honestly just holding out for an MC, Melissa, Mom, threesome. The good old M cubed.

 

[Qmil679]

I'm right there with you. In fact I was annoyed that we couldn't avoid Erynn more. I was really disappointed that we were given a choice to ignore her but still had to talk to Erynn, we didn't have a choice to go back home on the train with the friends, just unhappy we aren't allowed to choose to help get our new friend Elena home safely. Especially when no conversation takes place once they go to Erynn's apartment. Erynn doesn't deserve the MC's time, she was a bitch to him in the past and, even though it's been five years, the MC should be able to decide not to waste his time with her. She was his childhood crush and he should be able to move on to someone else. Instead we are forced to spend a bunch of time with her, have her wake him up, etc.

At the moment I am just wanting to knock Alexis up, elope to Vegas, and live happily ever after.

Overall, I also recommend that you see the selection when you stay with Erynn. Then you can learn a few things about her in her apartment and in the club. In her apartment, while MC is asleep, she cries and talks to MC. It's just a pity that she forgot what she did to us, maybe it wasn't as important to her as to MC.

Most of the women here in the game have some secrets/problems. Alexis doesn't want to tell us who she lives with and that this someone see us. Layla is also hiding something.. during her conversation with Elen, Elen reminded her what once happened when she flirted harmlessly, and here comes the question with whom? what happened? Maybe with the teacher, nothing is known yet.

 

[MrFriendly]

Overall, I also recommend that you see the selection when you stay with Erynn. Then you can learn a few things about her in her apartment and in the club. In her apartment, while MC is asleep, she cries and talks to MC. It's just a pity that she forgot what she did to us, maybe it wasn't as important to her as to MC.

That's what I got the first time and I really don't feel it added anything. She is too vague and I really don't care. She's a stranger to us and, in a way, to the MC. It is too short a scene and doesn't provide us with information that makes it worthwhile. As I said to Nyx on Patreon I'm just not a fan of her character so far, regardless of the MC's grudge all she has going for her is that she is attractive (if you are into blondes). Whereas I find Alexis sexy and intriguing, I find myself feeling protective and almost brotherly toward Layla, I think Elena is cute and fiery, I just don't find Erynn interesting. She's just some attractive blonde who the MC had a crush on 5 years ago and she seems to think that the MC and her had some deeper connection while the MC feels like she treated him terribly.

 

[xXwankerXx]

So for this one, let's say she won the genetic jackpot..

We could always agree that this is just a game where a son is supposed to fuck his mom so yeah, it's all fiction, no need to make a woman, that's also a love interest, a wrinkled old bitch. Just look at how popular Nicole, the mom from The Tyrant is and she has 3 kids. Can't imagine her looking "believable".

That aside, I want to congratulate u for making a promising game with lots of sexy women to f... fall in love with. One thing tho, pls don't tell me Erynn is an escort/prostitute ... bcz judging from what she tells the MC at the bar and in her bedroom that's the hint ppl get. I love that blonde model but she kinda always ends up being the cheap slut in both porn comics and porn games. She seems genuinely interested in the MC. Hope she just had some shitty relationships or normal shit like that. Another girl I suspect is really doing something shady is Elena ... she changed the subject when Zac asked her about the private VIP room, but she comes from a poor background so she'd be forced to do it to support her family.

Will be keeping tabs on this game to see how it goes. Good luck with the project !!

 

[EZ8lt]

The forgive option is just a more adult response to it.. Like don't dwell in the past, just move forward..

This is where I have to massively disagree with you. Forgeting and forgiving even without ever confronting the situation or talking it out is not the more adult response, it's the rollover like a doormat response. If you're an adult, then what you'll do is to talk about it, get to the bottom of why and how it happened exactly, and from that point you can decide if you want to hold a grudge or not. Moving on without this being the mature thing to do is an urban myth, that game developers especially like to use for some reason.

This is also part of the reason why I did not like where you ended the update. Ending it a bit before that, where the MC goes to sleep in either scenario wouldn't feel like as if you cut it an ongoing event in half, and if you choose the two can play this option, I'd expect a talking it out scenario instead of a stalling as long as it possible (another bad habit of vns), not going forward with same exact flow as with the other option.

 

[MrFriendly]

This is where I have to massively disagree with you. Forgeting and forgiving even without ever confronting the situation or talking it out is not the more adult response, it's the rollover like a doormat response. If you're an adult, then what you'll do is to talk about it, get to the bottom of why and how it happened exactly, and from that point you can decide if you want to hold a grudge or not. Moving on without this being the mature thing to do is an urban myth, that game developers especially like to use for some reason.

This is also part of the reason why I did not like where you ended the update. Ending it a bit before that, where the MC goes to sleep in either scenario wouldn't feel like as if you cut it an ongoing event in half, and if you choose the two can play this option, I'd expect a talking it out scenario instead of a stalling as long as it possible (another bad habit of vns), not going forward with same exact flow as with the other option.

Yeah, you really nailed it in the last part of your post. I don't want to have the MC wake up in the morning and immediately have to choose "be a doormat" or "be an asshole". We don't know anything about WHY Erynn acted like she did back then, we don't know what she went through in the last 5 years, we don't know if her feelings have changed (they seem to have changed)... We do know that she seems to have missed the MC a lot, we know that she seems to not know why the MC left... I'd really like it if the MC and Erynn could have the forthcoming conversation (and maybe one or two more) before we decide if he is going to be mature and forgive her or be an immature grudge holding asshole.

TBH I feel the MC is being a bit over the top with his holding a grudge against her for that. They were both kids, kids are stupid, he should have moved on from it by now.

 

[micojive]

Quite an interesting opinion from guys who come to a pirate website to download and play erotic and porn games.

Guess none of you ever heard of "consenting adults" or acted on pure instinct or impulse.
What for you seemed like 10 min. in-game was 6,5 hours long flight. Things like that happen often - talking from my personal experience here.
In my younger days I worked as an airline executive (for almost 10 years) so... yeah I enjoyed the mile high club often either with "consenting adult" passengers or members of the flight crew. We had fun because we felt like it but if you're not a nice and charming person, not many women would be willing to jump your bones no matter how horny they are.
Sometimes it turned into more meaningful relationships and sometimes into long-lasting friendships.

So feel free to spin your puritan hypocrisy elsewhere - not on a pirate porn website like F95 FFS.

Nothing really to add other than this entire post seems like a copy/pasta from /iamverybadass and /ihavesex

 

[Deleted member 596203]

Yeah, you really nailed it in the last part of your post. I don't want to have the MC wake up in the morning and immediately have to choose "be a doormat" or "be an asshole". We don't know anything about WHY Erynn acted like she did back then, we don't know what she went through in the last 5 years, we don't know if her feelings have changed (they seem to have changed)... We do know that she seems to have missed the MC a lot, we know that she seems to not know why the MC left... I'd really like it if the MC and Erynn could have the forthcoming conversation (and maybe one or two more) before we decide if he is going to be mature and forgive her or be an immature grudge holding asshole.

TBH I feel the MC is being a bit over the top with his holding a grudge against her for that. They were both kids, kids are stupid, he should have moved on from it by now.

I also agree actually. I also had a private conversation about this and I will post what I wrote here:

Now the big one, Erynn..
This one isn't easy. I have a hard time putting myself in that situation and react accordingly.. So the writing isn't there yet.. I'm not happy with it either.. This will get a makeover in the future and probably completely rewritten..
I put the forgive her/two can play the game options in so people know there are going to be 2 routes which can lead to the same outcome eventually..
What I actually want is that you don't have a choice in this case, but will make up your mind along the way when you get to re-know her.. You like the person she became/you don't and according to that you'll react differently.. (I hope this is a little clear because I even have a hard time explaining it..)

So basically, you let the past in the past and see what happens in the present.
The past will still come up at some point though..

 

[Deleted member 596203]

This is where I have to massively disagree with you. Forgeting and forgiving even without ever confronting the situation or talking it out is not the more adult response, it's the rollover like a doormat response. If you're an adult, then what you'll do is to talk about it, get to the bottom of why and how it happened exactly, and from that point you can decide if you want to hold a grudge or not. Moving on without this being the mature thing to do is an urban myth, that game developers especially like to use for some reason.

This is also part of the reason why I did not like where you ended the update. Ending it a bit before that, where the MC goes to sleep in either scenario wouldn't feel like as if you cut it an ongoing event in half, and if you choose the two can play this option, I'd expect a talking it out scenario instead of a stalling as long as it possible (another bad habit of vns), not going forward with same exact flow as with the other option.

Yes, it is cut in half and here is why. Ep4 is a flashback episode of what happened right before you came back. It's not just a small flashback, it actually consists of a whole episode because it introduces 2 characters.

 

[MrFriendly]

I also agree actually. I also had a private conversation about this and I will post what I wrote here:

Now the big one, Erynn..
This one isn't easy. I have a hard time putting myself in that situation and react accordingly.. So the writing isn't there yet.. I'm not happy with it either.. This will get a makeover in the future and probably completely rewritten..
I put the forgive her/two can play the game options in so people know there are going to be 2 routes which can lead to the same outcome eventually..
What I actually want is that you don't have a choice in this case, but will make up your mind along the way when you get to re-know her.. You like the person she became/you don't and according to that you'll react differently.. (I hope this is a little clear because I even have a hard time explaining it..)

So basically, you let the past in the past and see what happens in the present.
The past will still come up at some point though..

Okay, that sounds good. Of all the characters she feels most like we haven't heard enough from or about her. The little bit of the past isn't enough for me to judge her. As I said they were both kids. We all act stupid and selfish as children, that's just how children are. I look forward to seeing you refine the scenes with her so we can learn more before we make any decisions.

 

[Osamabeenfappin]

Okay, that sounds good. Of all the characters she feels most like we haven't heard enough from or about her. The little bit of the past isn't enough for me to judge her. As I said they were both kids. We all act stupid and selfish as children, that's just how children are. I look forward to seeing you refine the scenes with her so we can learn more before we make any decisions.

Agreed. I'm not super ecstatic about how we're apparently going to be railroaded into a relationship though. At least that's the way I'm reading what Nyx said. 2 paths same destination.

 

[nevermoreXX]

Quite an interesting opinion from guys who come to a pirate website to download and play erotic and porn games.

Guess none of you ever heard of "consenting adults" or acted on pure instinct or impulse.
What for you seemed like 10 min. in-game was 6,5 hours long flight. Things like that happen often - talking from my personal experience here.
In my younger days I worked as an airline executive (for almost 10 years) so... yeah I enjoyed the mile high club often either with "consenting adult" passengers or members of the flight crew. We had fun because we felt like it but if you're not a nice and charming person, not many women would be willing to jump your bones no matter how horny they are.
Sometimes it turned into more meaningful relationships and sometimes into long-lasting friendships.

So feel free to spin your puritan hypocrisy elsewhere - not on a pirate porn website like F95 FFS.

Oh..whore got offended? am i right?
oh my lol ..u are actually attempting to accuse someone to be puritan for hating whores? and in same time attempting to tell me that i shouldnt visit porn web sites ...? fucking made my day. Maybe there should be philological test before attempting to work at airline industry..or joining porn sites? haha
"you enjoyed mile club" and now u are here with "puritans" jerking off on forum?
have my sympathies

P.S
consenting adults =/ whores

 

[AsherLikeYou]

If Layla and Alexis are sisters, I am forgetting about Alexis for Layla.

 

[nobrumski]

Love what I am seeing so far so backed it. I wouldn't mind if the pace was slowed a bit though. This is day 3 and things are already getting messy and complicated in MC's life.

I think my issue with Erynn is she doesn't come across as likeable in the first meeting. She is so focused on herself she doesn't notice you trying to help get your drunk friend home.

Staying with Erynn wasn't even a consideration, and the next morning definitely would have played out differently for me. It would have been easy to look over the past because of the fact you were both dumb kids, but the actions at the club would have said this might just be the type of person she is.

 

[MrFriendly]

If Layla and Alexis are sisters, I am forgetting about Alexis for Layla.

LOL, I am on the other side. I have no interest in Layla. Unfortunately the proliferation of that character model and hairstyle makes her rather generic.