VN Ren'Py Intertwined [v0.13] [Nyx]

[Dessolos]

Dessolos ; they were never "platonic friends" the Relship Dynamics from the get go were different.
nor is Erynn concerned about her Trauma, I wager to say thy will not have intercourse, till Ethan is dealt with.

I see yeah that makes more sense to see what he was trying to say to me. I do still think trauma is a bit of her concern but that's because it my personal interpretation because of her actions especially in the last 2 episodes.

 

[xapican]

(and at the neighbors dog at nite).

Please let it be my neighbours hellspawn Chihuahua

 

[MrD812]

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Well they just need proper instruction, ya know?
Kinda like MC could use some more advice with his dealings.
Wouldn't go so far as to get anyone at the school involved.

May have different dramatizations then expected.

 

[xapican]

Well they just need proper instruction, ya know?
Kinda like MC could use some more advice with his dealings.
Wouldn't go so far as to get anyone at the school involved.

May have different dramatizations then expected.

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Me: MC do you know the difference between Erynn and Legos ?
MC: What difference ???
Me: Ok! continue playing with Legos.....

 

[MrD812]

Me: MC do you know the difference between Erynn and Legos ?
MC: What difference ???
Me: Ok! continue playing with Legos.....

Thinking Erynn and MC should have different motives at play on this title.

 

[Warscared]

she is one just isn't one that has progress

depends on the point of view Emily has been having the time of her life for the past 5 years...

 

[LSC82]

Dessolos ; they were never "platonic friends" the Relship Dynamics from the get go were different.
nor is Erynn concerned about her Trauma, I wager to say thy will not have intercourse, till Ethan is dealt with.

I see yeah that makes more sense to see what he was trying to say to me. I do still think trauma is a bit of her concern but that's because it my personal interpretation because of her actions especially in the last 2 episodes.

There are a couple of things that act as "stoppers" with Erynn (besides Emily ).
One is Erynn being afraid of what a relationship will do to the friendship, she doesn't wanna lose him as a friend, she's happier since he came back, so she's scared to change their relationship, she's scared that entering a relationship will lead them apart in the future and change their friendship.

As for trauma, i don't think traumatized people know they're traumatized, and when told that they have issues they deny.
It's just something that hits them... not something they counciously think about.
The events that happened with Zane-Ethan did scar her, and often leads to her freaking out when we get intimate, but i doubt that is something she's actively thinking about.

The MC does a "meh" job getting her to feel secure enough for a relationship, they stay in that friends that sometimes fool around area that scares her, he never says anything besides "we will take it slow".

Stepping up the relationship when Ethan is dealt with is a very traditional structure, think of a quest line in an RPG, Erynn is the quest giver, Ethan is the problem you have to solve and you get the "reward" after you solve the quest.

Getting rid of Ethan will be a big boost for Erynn to get over her issues and of course trust the guy that solved her problems.

And goes without saying send Emily to Europe for a month, that will help more than anything.

 

[MrD812]

There are a couple of things that act as "stoppers" with Erynn (besides Emily ).
One is Erynn being afraid of what a relationship will do to the friendship, she doesn't wanna lose him as a friend, she's happier since he came back, so she's scared to change their relationship, she's scared that entering a relationship will lead them apart in the future and change their friendship.

As for trauma, i don't think traumatized people know they're traumatized, and when told that they have issues they deny.
It's just something that hits them... not something they counciously think about.
The events that happened with Zane-Ethan did scar her, and often leads to her freaking out when we get intimate, but i doubt that is something she's actively thinking about.

The MC does a "meh" job getting her to feel secure enough for a relationship, they stay in that friends that sometimes fool around area that scares her, he never says anything besides "we will take it slow".

Stepping up the relationship when Ethan is dealt with is a very traditional structure, think of a quest line in an RPG, the Erynn is the quest giver, Ethan is the problem you have to solve and you get the "reward" after you solve the quest.

Getting rid of Ethan will be a big boost for Erynn to get over her issues and of course trust the guy that solved her problems.

And goes without saying send Emily to Europe for a month, that will help more than anything.

Everyone deserves a pass and to take things slow BUT.....
that does not justify Beta-Boy MC shit choices, the neglect and hypocrisy of BOTH Erynn AND the MC.
Witch is in this case, blunders caused by the author.

Failed to correct, continuity went bad to worse from EP5 through EP10.
Had things been corrected, would have made HUGE significance even with all the drama.
I'd fully back title & Dev Regardless of the heat i'd catch for it by particular others, doing so.

We're not kids anymore so how about we stop kidding ourselves, yes?

 

[Maviarab]

Everyone deserves a pass and to take things slow BUT.....
that does not justify Beta-Boy MC shit choices, the neglect and hypocrisy of BOTH Erynn AND the MC.
Witch is in this case, blunders caused by the author.

Failed to correct, continuity went bad to worse from EP5 through EP10.
Had things been corrected, would have made HUGE significance even with all the drama.
I'd fully back title & Dev Regardless of the heat i'd catch for it by particular others, doing so.

We're not kids anymore so how about we stop kidding ourselves, yes?

 

[MrD812]

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[Dessolos]

As for trauma, i don't think traumatized people know they're traumatized, and when told that they have issues they deny.
It's just something that hits them... not something they counciously think about.
The events that happened with Zane-Ethan did scar her, and often leads to her freaking out when we get intimate, but i doubt that is something she's actively thinking about.

Good point guess the way it happens it almost feels like it's something on her mind especially with how she started to act more bold the next day after her last freak out in episode 11. Which makes up for not telling the MC her feeling for me at least for now since it was a great Erynn update and change I liked.

Everyone deserves a pass and to take things slow BUT.....
that does not justify Beta-Boy MC shit choices, the neglect and hypocrisy of BOTH Erynn AND the MC.
Witch is in this case, blunders caused by the author.

While we may ultimately disagree in the Erynn path cause we have to different point of views . This is one that I do agree with While Erynn has yet to tell the MC her feelings ( which I do understand why and from my pov) . I do get more upset the MC has yet to fire his shot and tell her his feeling even tho she probably does know. But still I wanted him to say something so many times, hell their mini date / outing after the photoshoot when the MC was sitting on the railings would of been a perfect time for it.

 

[LSC82]

Everyone deserves a pass and to take things slow BUT.....
that does not justify Beta-Boy MC shit choices, the neglect and hypocrisy of BOTH Erynn AND the MC.
Witch is in this case, blunders caused by the author.

Failed to correct, continuity went bad to worse from EP5 through EP10.
Had things been corrected, would have made HUGE significance even with all the drama.
I'd fully back title & Dev Regardless of the heat i'd catch for it by particular others, doing so.

We're not kids anymore so how about we stop kidding ourselves, yes?

Good point guess the way it happens it almost feels like it's something on her mind especially with how she started to act more bold the next day after her last freak out in episode 11. Which makes up for not telling the MC her feeling for me at least for now since it was a great Erynn update and change I liked.



While we may ultimately disagree in the Erynn path cause we have to different point of views . This is one that I do agree with While Erynn has yet to tell the MC her feelings ( which I do understand why and from my pov) . I do get more upset the MC has yet to fire his shot and tell her his feeling even tho she probably does know. But still I wanted him to say something so many times, hell their mini date / outing after the photoshoot when the MC was sitting on the railings would of been a perfect time for it.

Trauma can be overcome, so she should be coming out of her shell more and more as she gains confidence.

Still the MC doesn't do nearly enough to make her more confident in embracing a relationship, he had opportunities, but he just doesn't... almost like Nyx is waiting for something... Like xapican said she's probably waiting for the complete resolution of the Ethan to do it.

Until then, in the immortal words of MrD812 , expect more "Beta-Boy shit" lol.
It didn't need to be like that, but that's the way Nyx chose to go...

 

[Dessolos]

Still the MC doesn't do nearly enough to make her more confident in embracing a relationship, he had opportunities, but he just doesn't...

Damn you are so right ive seen other MC's in similar situations with other LI and they do give them a boost in confidence. While all this MC does is comfort her and that's it while that's nice and all but comparing him to some other MC's you are so right. This MC fails so hard when it comes to things he should be doing to help Erynn beyond comfort.

 

[MrD812]

Trauma can be overcome, so she should be coming out of her shell more and more as she gains confidence.

Still the MC doesn't do nearly enough to make her more confident in embracing a relationship, he had opportunities, but he just doesn't... almost like Nyx is waiting for something... Like xapican said she's probably waiting for the complete resolution of the Ethan to do it.

Until then, in the immortal words of MrD812 , expect more "Beta-Boy shit" lol.
It didn't need to be like that, but that's the way Nyx chose to go...

While we may ultimately disagree in the Erynn path cause we have to different point of views . This is one that I do agree with While Erynn has yet to tell the MC her feelings ( which I do understand why and from my pov) . I do get more upset the MC has yet to fire his shot and tell her his feeling even tho she probably does know. But still I wanted him to say something so many times, hell their mini date / outing after the photoshoot when the MC was sitting on the railings would of been a perfect time for it.

Bottom Line: Nyx Fucked Up, Period.
There is not If's, Ands, Butts, "Opinions" ....that change what has been Written.

 

[MilesEdgeworth]

Nyx has not talked about finishing the Zach scenes, games not getting released till march.

The Erynn MC dynamic is interesting in that you have two people who clearly like each other yet they're both afraid to make the first move for different reasons. Throw in the fact that MC's a walking pussy magnet and there are more than enough obstacles to justify the pace of their relationship. As long as they keep with the nudity, Im good. But as they say... different strokes

 

[Dessolos]

The Erynn MC dynamic is interesting in that you have two people who clearly like each other yet they're both afraid to make the first move for different reasons.

While this is a bit annoying at times especially from the MC's point of view. Cause you know one of them should just say something already. I do like that dynamic alot cause it's different than alot of LI out there plus it's kind of how I would act in reality especially at that age.

 

[MagicMan753]

People aaying no sex with Erynn, till Ethan situation is resolved, I don't see it. Ethan is like one of the main antagonists, and will probably be around till the end of the game, so I doubt nyx will wait to the very end where Erynn will have just one sex scene at end of the game while everyone else will get multiple throughout.

Sex is not the end goal, or finish line, it is just a step in their relationship and I believe it will happen in the next couple episodes max, maybe even sooner than we think.

 

[MilesEdgeworth]

People aaying no sex with Erynn, till Ethan situation is resolved, I don't see it. Ethan is like one of the main antagonists, and will probably be around till the end of the game, so I doubt nyx will wait to the very end where Erynn will have just one sex scene at end of the game while everyone else will get multiple throughout.

Sex is not the end goal, or finish line, it is just a step in their relationship and I believe it will happen in the next couple episodes max, maybe even sooner than we think.

I really don't think Ethans is anything more than a distraction from what the game is really about. Yea he's an antagonist, but he's barely present. Now that Erynn has basically assembled her avengers team, Im not sure Ethan's long for this game.

 

[Dessolos]

People aaying no sex with Erynn, till Ethan situation is resolved, I don't see it. Ethan is like one of the main antagonists, and will probably be around till the end of the game, so I doubt nyx will wait to the very end where Erynn will have just one sex scene at end of the game while everyone else will get multiple throughout.

Sex is not the end goal, or finish line, it is just a step in their relationship and I believe it will happen in the next couple episodes max, maybe even sooner than we think.

I agree and disagree with this. I do agree with what you said about sex with Erynn. I also hope you are wrong to when it comes to Ethan anyways. As I would like to have some updates where we can have some romantic dates and what not with Erynn without having to worry about Ethan anymore. I think Ethan is starting to over stay his welcome and we spent enough time not doing anything much about it. So I think Nyx will finish up his story line sooner than later and allow us to have some romance.

Then I think the antagonists needs to shift to another character like Layla's stalker we haven't seen in forever. Her path is pretty much the only one that is drama free unless you decide to pick Elena or cheat on her with Alexis. So I think she is due for something.

 

[cxx]

this game needs fwbs not gfs.