VN Ren'Py Intertwined [v0.13] [Nyx]

[gelu123]

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Wouldnt that have required the incest tag? well if only layla , than k , still time , but if also Alexis , well

 

[DA22]

Wouldnt that have required the incest tag? well if only layla , than k , still time , but if also Alexis , well

Well even if Santi would be the stepfather of Alexis and blood father of MC, Alexis and MC have no blood or legal relation as such or ever been part of the same family living as a family unit. So none of the protective laws would apply or definitions of incest however broad you want to make them. It may be intertwined though. Nikki and Cara would be a bigger danger of that, though considering the age they first meet, that would be really stretching the idea behind those protective laws.

Even if Santi would be her real father as long as he was not mentioned on the birth certificate of MC, no outsider would have to know as long as the few people who would know kept their mouth shut.

 

[gelu123]

Well even if Santi would be the stepfather of Alexis and blood father of MC, Alexis and MC have no blood or legal relation as such or ever been part of the same family living as a family unit. So none of the protective laws would apply or definitions of incest however broad you want to make them. It may be intertwined though. Nikki and Cara would be a bigger danger of that, though considering the age they first meet, that would be really stretching the idea behind those protective laws.

Even if Santi would be her real father as long as he was not mentioned on the birth certificate of MC, no outsider would have to know as long as the few people who would know kept their mouth shut.

Also isnt now patreon against incest as far as i know? i mean that was a problem for some games , thats why so many turned tenant-landlady sex games or dunoo stepson-stepmother.
My guess would be that only layla at most would be mc stepsister at most . I think Nix wants us to believe their father is santi , but prob is just a guy who also likes basket and dark coffee.

 

[cxx]

Also isnt now patreon against incest as far as i know?

yes and no, if sex with bloodrelated isn't main thing then ok but better not take any risk.

 

[gelu123]

yes and no, if sex with bloodrelated isn't main thing then ok but better not take any risk.

Well if lexi is blood related , that is a problem , thats why i think layla at most can be , since no sexual activitties yet

 

[Kazutal]

I said that but maybe if their father is Santi, maybe he is just married and he's not the "real" father of Alexis and Layla

 

[Tulrek]

I'm sincerely sorry if the question have already been asked:
What does add the version "a" and "b" to the version X ?

Thanks for your diligence.

 

[Gladheim]

I want to thank all you guys for the amazing support! There was no way I expected this VN to grow this fast, this big. I'm truly happy you are enjoying the story and I will keep pushing to make it better every update. Thank you very much!
Also a big thank you to Fox and Kato for all the work they do on the Discord server! I really appreciate it!
Not really a progress update since I haven't started yet with the renders, I only wrote some parts of the script. I'll officially start working on this update this upcoming Friday!
At the moment I'm enjoying my little time off.
I don't know yet if this will be a big update or a "smaller" one. It all depends on the upcoming training camp scenes. There will be scenes with lots of people in it and I'm still trying to figure out how to deal with those.
But, it will be a fun update (I hope). More to come soon.
Here is a little thank you render:

 

[Ayhsel]

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I want to thank all you guys for the amazing support! There was no way I expected this VN to grow this fast, this big. I'm truly happy you are enjoying the story and I will keep pushing to make it better every update. Thank you very much!
Also a big thank you to Fox and Kato for all the work they do on the Discord server! I really appreciate it!
Not really a progress update since I haven't started yet with the renders, I only wrote some parts of the script. I'll officially start working on this update this upcoming Friday!
At the moment I'm enjoying my little time off.
I don't know yet if this will be a big update or a "smaller" one. It all depends on the upcoming training camp scenes. There will be scenes with lots of people in it and I'm still trying to figure out how to deal with those.
But, it will be a fun update (I hope). More to come soon.
Here is a little thank you render:
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She is soo cute.

By the way Gladheim could you share the image of my queen that you have as background (that is not as user image) in your profile? I have not found that one before!

 

[Gladheim]

She is soo cute.

By the way Gladheim could you share the image of my queen that you have as background (that is not as user image) in your profile? I have not found that one before!

My dream comes true ahhh Valeria

Ok, later when I'll sit on my PC

 

[Kazutal]

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I want to thank all you guys for the amazing support! There was no way I expected this VN to grow this fast, this big. I'm truly happy you are enjoying the story and I will keep pushing to make it better every update. Thank you very much!
Also a big thank you to Fox and Kato for all the work they do on the Discord server! I really appreciate it!
Not really a progress update since I haven't started yet with the renders, I only wrote some parts of the script. I'll officially start working on this update this upcoming Friday!
At the moment I'm enjoying my little time off.
I don't know yet if this will be a big update or a "smaller" one. It all depends on the upcoming training camp scenes. There will be scenes with lots of people in it and I'm still trying to figure out how to deal with those.
But, it will be a fun update (I hope). More to come soon.
Here is a little thank you render:
View attachment 1138228

Thank you, you're making an incredible work keep going !

 

[Gh0st_Harambe]

I want to thank all you guys for the amazing support! There was no way I expected this VN to grow this fast, this big. I'm truly happy you are enjoying the story and I will keep pushing to make it better every update. Thank you very much!
Also a big thank you to Fox and Kato for all the work they do on the Discord server! I really appreciate it!
Not really a progress update since I haven't started yet with the renders, I only wrote some parts of the script. I'll officially start working on this update this upcoming Friday!
At the moment I'm enjoying my little time off.
I don't know yet if this will be a big update or a "smaller" one. It all depends on the upcoming training camp scenes. There will be scenes with lots of people in it and I'm still trying to figure out how to deal with those.
But, it will be a fun update (I hope). More to come soon.
Here is a little thank you render:

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Totally deserved.
Oh Valeria, i think my heart stopped for a second

 

[LSC82]

Well, the only thing i want to know now is: Is Val a Drama Queen too, if so it would be boring. We have enough Drama Queens already.

First step drama with her would be undercutting your friend...
Before we even find out she's the cousin of someone else .

 

[LionHeart 95]

He dumped something embarrassing on her out of the blue in front of her friends. She wasn't sure how to respond, and probably took Ethan calling her over a way to get out of the situation for the moment. She tried to stop Ethan picking on him, and then went over his house to talk to him, but his mother suggested she let him cool down first.

Perhaps not a perfect response, but she's a teenager, how would she have a clue how the best way to respond to a situation like this is? I bet most adults wouldn't. I can't say I do. What do you think is the 'ideal' response?

And during this time he just went into full on "FUCK EVERYONE IN THE WORLD" mode. As it's been said numerous times, they would have had zero problems if he had just answered her any of the times she tried to talk to him after this.

(Also rewatching this scene, it's a bit odd. He's literally standing 5 feet away from them. He should be hear their conversation and see they're watching a video on a phone, might just be an oversight or limitation of scene creation, I don't know.)

thanks for the reply to my post.
My response is: Please don't give the dear in headlights response as an excuse for Erynn, as for a response a guy at that age will consider himself as rejected, if the girl turns away and has a conversation with someone else.

We Know that if you favor Erynn you might think at least she was afraid to answer in front of her friends as she did like him, we can only wonder as to why she thinks "why you ask now".

An adult would interrupt her and ask again to confirm her intent, but a girl diverting her attention to friends and watching a video instead of responding to a confession is rejection!

we understand without this event the story crumbles its just to funny to see such a simple thing change a life so much.

 

[LSC82]

thanks for the reply to my post.
My response is: Please don't give the dear in headlights response as an excuse for Erynn, as for a response a guy at that age will consider himself as rejected, if the girl turns away and has a conversation with someone else.

We Know that if you favor Erynn you might think at least she was afraid to answer in front of her friends as she did like him, we can only wonder as to why she thinks "why you ask now".

An adult would interrupt her and ask again to confirm her intent, but a girl diverting her attention to friends and watching a video instead of responding to a confession is rejection!

we understand without this event the story crumbles its just to funny to see such a simple thing change a life so much.

But she was a dear in the headlights, we can see her thoughts and she was very confused... both at him being into her in that fashion and "why here and now".
His move is also made out of a selfish desire of blocking her new friends rather than any romantic feelings.

I think she was going to reject him back then, she was just thinking how can she do this without breaking his heart... she cared for him but wasn't into him, it didn't come out right and he didn't allow her to clear the air.

 

[stuffstuffstuff]

thanks for the reply to my post.
My response is: Please don't give the dear in headlights response as an excuse for Erynn, as for a response a guy at that age will consider himself as rejected, if the girl turns away and has a conversation with someone else.

We Know that if you favor Erynn you might think at least she was afraid to answer in front of her friends as she did like him, we can only wonder as to why she thinks "why you ask now".

An adult would interrupt her and ask again to confirm her intent, but a girl diverting her attention to friends and watching a video instead of responding to a confession is rejection!

we understand without this event the story crumbles its just to funny to see such a simple thing change a life so much.

I still don't see how this puts a lot of the blame on her as you claimed. He didn't get the response he wanted to an awkward situation he created, and then reacted so badly to the situation he got sent to live with his father because he was out of control.

She even kept trying to talk to him even past his leaving town. And all of it could have been avoided if he had just talked to her at any of those points.

All she was really 'guilty' of in this is spending less time with him and more time with friends her own age.

EDIT: Even if she had rejected him, she still wouldn't be to blame in this situation (Unless she was cruel about it, which doesn't seem to fit her character at all). He thinks she was laughing at him along with Ethan, and that's what set him off, which isn't what happened, so she can't be blamed for that either.

 

[cxx]

trivia time: which of these girls doesn't appear in intertwined?

 

[Raziel_8]

First step drama with her would be undercutting your friend...
Before we even find out she's the cousin of someone else .

Uhm lets be honest, Zach is an idiot who is chasing after every skirt anyway, a few days earlier it was Layla he was sooo in love with.
Not to mention Val doesn't seem to be interested in him, like not at all, slightly annoyed if anything.
I really don't see him as a friend either...Nathan yes, he is buddy which has ur back, but Zach...

Well as long as she isn't the cousin of the mc, i would find it really satisfying if she is Ethans little sister thought.

 

[Gh0st_Harambe]

Uhm lets be honest, Zach is an idiot who is chasing after every skirt anyway, a few days earlier it was Layla he was sooo in love with.
Not to mention Val doesn't seem to be interested in him, like not at all, slightly annoyed if anything.
I really don't see him as a friend either...Nathan yes, he is buddy which has ur back, but Zach...

Well as long as she isn't the cousin of the mc, i would find it really satisfying if she is Ethans little sister thought.

He doesnt deserve her, thats for sure.
Hope Valeria is or is going to be a love interest, i dont want another Julia

 

[LSC82]

Uhm lets be honest, Zach is an idiot who is chasing after every skirt anyway, a few days earlier it was Layla he was sooo in love with.
Not to mention Val doesn't seem to be interested in him, like not at all, slightly annoyed if anything.
I really don't see him as a friend either...Nathan yes, he is buddy which has ur back, but Zach...

Well as long as she isn't the cousin of the mc, i would find it really satisfying if she is Ethans little sister thought.

I find him to be a loveable doofus and a solid dude who will have our back when the time comes.

Now and this is the critical point, he already "let you have" Layla, he understood you had a better shot and let it go, no problems...
But if you keep undercutting him with every girl in town at some point he is gonna stop seeing as you one of his friends.

If she's Ethan sister it will be hard to pass up and not brag to his face, dick move sure, but hard to pass up.
She's new in town so in the end i don't think she will a be a sister to someone who lives here for 20+ years.

He doesnt deserve her, thats for sure.
Hope Valeria is or is going to be a love interest, i dont want another Julia

Due to her late introduction the Julia suspicion will always hang over her head, you will be able to bang her but will only fuck up your other relationships.
But who knows maybe she has her own endgame.