VN Ren'Py Intertwined [v0.13] [Nyx]

[seniorboop]

She's dead, won't be much left but more drama and flash-back's.

Doubt it, most devs don't have the balls for this until their VN is on the last ep. Narratives willing to kill off main characters GRRM-style set the precedent for that early.

Killing off Erynn would be a GoT season 8 tier mistake.

And like you say, even if she makes a full recovery, we put the dude behind bars... yay sexy time!!! Feels wrong and more than a little pointless.

Exactly, not a fan... Like you said, even if she somehow manages to speedrun a full mental recovery through the amazing power of porn logic I would only be able to see it as bad writing.

 

[MrD812]

Doubt it, most devs don't have the balls for this until their VN is on the last ep. Narratives willing to kill off main characters GRRM-style set the precedent for that early.

Killing off Erynn would be a GoT season 8 tier mistake.

Many of us hope You're correct!
Not seeing it atm, due to Alot of 'why' Nyx has been negligent of Erynn AND leaving things so messed up for so long.

 

[MrD812]

seniorboop and this post shares some interesting points as well:

https://f95zone.to/threads/intertwined-v0-9-nyx.53676/post-7967288

 

[UnoriginalUserName]

Hang on, whoa, you're telling me Erynn has fans? Seriously? When the game has Layla?

Next you'll tell me people like that ginger twat Zach.

 

[nyrek]

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interesting. every playthrough I did yesterday, I had help from John
then again, all of my playthroughs are started in season 6 where val wasn't even important (if we even knew about her back then)

Spoiler: I have my doubts though

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oh boy, if it's her, I hope it was Zach. time to die, dumbass!

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what did you do to get this one? I love it, gotta see it myself

nyx mentioned that there will be a game over type of choice in this one and im confused which one it was

soooo... anyone has a theory on what the mentioned game-over-type-of-choice was? and with who?
was it something so stupid you'd never actually pick that noone got it so far?

 

[D9074]

None of the choices felt like game over, maybe keeping nikki cara there or telling them the truth could have, with alexis maybe not telling her your ex is there if you kept her there. cumming in iris could of been but it was too long ago to make sense.

if there was a way too stop the erynn thing happening that could of def been one but ill be honest i didnt even notice her by the bin until the last playthrough of it so idk if that happens in every other one.

 

[MrD812]

None of the choices felt like game over, maybe keeping nikki cara there or telling them the truth could have, with alexis maybe not telling her your ex is there if you kept her there. cumming in iris could of been but it was too long ago to make sense.

if there was a way too stop the erynn thing happening that could of def been one but ill be honest i didnt even notice her by the bin until the last playthrough of it so idk if that happens in every other one.

Only had once save, didn't see the need of anything else.
After last months talk with the ladies on where things were going and NOT going.

You did not hear the phone?
Was there before the text on mine.

 

[nyrek]

None of the choices felt like game over, maybe keeping nikki cara there or telling them the truth could have

which reminds me, I've only played my nikki path where I tell her I'm seeing someone else (old save so I don't even remember who the other person is)

ill be honest i didnt even notice her by the bin until the last playthrough of it so idk if that happens in every other one.

it does. had it in nikki, erynn, lexi and layla paths

 

[D9074]

Only had once save, didn't see the need of anything else.
After last months talk with the ladies on where things were going and NOT going.

You did not hear the phone?
Was there before the text on mine.

ahh it was late as fuck when i played it so i didnt even notice that. if it comes to it and she is actually dead i better get the option to kill ethan and that cuck zach.

 

[LSC82]

Many of us hope You're correct!
Not seeing it atm, due to Alot of 'why' Nyx has been negligent of Erynn AND leaving things so messed up for so long.

The pacing of things is super messed up.
I mean next we'll need to have some kind of recovery time.
Destroy Ethan somehow.
And then we need to step over all the trauma...

Meanwhile the other girls are planning spring break...
How fucked up it's gonna be that you visit your childhood friend in the hospital... then go to the beach, make out with a hottie.
It's like this game has a bipolar personality disorder.

The kind of drama i was finding entertaining, pitting Alexis vs Layla, Alexis vs Erynn... Layla's extreme jealousy of everybody else... Are now being either written out in a hurry or made irrelevant by much much bigger issues.

 

[MrD812]

ahh it was late as fuck when i played it so i didnt even notice that. if it comes to it and she is actually dead i better get the option to kill ethan and that cuck zach.

Hate to say this, the way MC pussy-foots around things.
Just don't see it happening anywhere near ... what thunder we would bring down.

 

[StarFayek]

Ouch, hurts the wallet and heart

 

[MrD812]

The pacing of things is super messed up.
I mean next we'll need to have some kind of recovery time.
Destroy Ethan somehow.
And then we need to step over all the trauma...

Meanwhile the other girls are planning spring break...
How fucked up it's gonna be that you visit your childhood friend in the hospital... then go to the beach, make out with a hottie.
It's like this game has a bipolar personality disorder.

The kind of drama i was finding entertaining, pitting Alexis vs Layla, Alexis vs Erynn... Layla's extreme jealousy of everybody else... Are now being either written out in a hurry or made irrelevant by much much bigger issues.

Don't see it, justa' huge amount of drama either way.
All i see is Nyx wanting to get rid of Erynn.

 

[seniorboop]

Hang on, whoa, you're telling me Erynn has fans? Seriously? When the game has Layla?

Next you'll tell me people like that ginger twat Zach.

Upgrade your choice of sisters fam.

On a more serious note, I need a fair one next ep with Zach. Dude needs to get some served some Iron Mike haymakers. I need him getting KO'd on concrete.

seniorboop and this post shares some interesting points as well:

https://f95zone.to/threads/intertwined-v0-9-nyx.53676/post-7967288

That... Actually makes a lot more sense and definitely gives some good background on the way she's been written.

Personally not seeing how the way she's presented now is meant to be any less serious than how she was originally intended to be written before.

She was raped, had that rape videotaped, said videotape is actively used to blackmail her, shes in constant fear of being raped by the clients she's forced to spend time with, is employed by, has to regularly deal with, and is financially dependent on her rapist...

Add in Zach giving off some hella creepy vibes about those backstage passes and we find Erynn behind a dumpster hours later...

I reiterate, how do you salvage that?

 

[Trojaner]

Don't see it, justa' huge amount of drama either way.
All i see is Nyx wanting to get rid of Erynn.

Well, i would prefer it much more if Nyx get rid of all the Braindead guys. There are too much. This just shows that Nyx likes Braindamaged Guys more.

And one thing i wrote bout when we first meet John: "He's a good one and i would let him pop my mum (Em)" this still stands, i would let him if both can get some hapiness out of it.

 

[tramtoriana2]

tag says milf but what kind of milf we are talking about someone close to mc?

 

[D9074]

Hate to say this, the way MC pussy-foots around things.
Just don't see it happening anywhere near ... what thunder we would bring down.

idk, we have hit ethan before, had options to fight with the guys who tried to fuck with the mc from where he previously lived, had option to hit his dad when he was hit. i think he will be able to do something. When he was getting into the mcs face when they was holding him back i was hoping he would nut him lol.

now if we got them options there i think we will get the options after this, even if erynn is just unconscious and we find out what happened it would make anyone mad. now if she dies? that shit is where i wanna turn terminator and come through ballied up with akimbo swords and chop heads

 

[MrD812]

Upgrade your choice of sisters fam.

On a more serious note, I need a fair one next ep with Zach. Dude needs to get some served some Iron Mike haymakers. I need him getting KO'd on concrete.



That... Actually makes a lot more sense and definitely gives some good background on the way she's been written.

Personally not seeing how the way she's presented now is meant to be any less serious than how she was originally intended to be written before.

She was raped, had that rape videotaped, said videotape is actively used to blackmail her, shes in constant fear of being raped by the clients she's forced to spend time with, is employed by, has to regularly deal with, and is financially dependent on her rapist...

Add in Zach giving off some hella creepy vibes about those backstage passes and we find Erynn behind a dumpster hours later...

I reiterate, how do you salvage that?

The tape was saposed to be her "First Time" with Zane(her boyfriend at the time).

Weather or not it all went down that way or not still doesn't change a thing.

Case and Point------> "All i see is Nyx wanting to get rid of Erynn".

 

[Trojaner]

When he was getting into the mcs face when they was holding him back i was hoping he would nut him lol.

Well, this job was done by Valeria. It was a nice Kick, felt for one second really sorry for Ethan.

 

[MrD812]

idk, we have hit ethan before, had options to fight with the guys who tried to fuck with the mc from where he previously lived, had option to hit his dad when he was hit. i think he will be able to do something. When he was getting into the mcs face when they was holding him back i was hoping he would nut him lol.

now if we got them options there i think we will get the options after this, even if erynn is just unconscious and we find out what happened it would make anyone mad. now if she dies? that shit is where i wanna turn terminator and come through ballied up with akimbo swords and chop heads

There's no way i would have left Ethan at the event.
He and his buddies would not walk for a very long time IF ever again AND...
would have not left till.............. Zach joind them.

MC = Pussy