VN Ren'Py Intertwined [v0.13] [Nyx]

[Kukipett]

In chapter 1 we learn that Erynn DID like the MC. He misunderstood the laughter and took it personally...Something he does throughout the story.

Erynn wants to be close to the MC. She wants to tell him the truth about what is being done to her... How Ethan is mistreating her. How being a model comes with some sadistic maltreatment... She is afraid of what he (and her friends and family)will think of her if she tells him the truth.

She is being abused and you blame HER for the abuse?

It's not really a question to blame her, but she put herself in that position and she did not trust the MC later, he could have helped her, but she went on with the lies. We have a scene where the MC sees her in a coffee shop with Ethan and she did not seemed to be upset at all she even seemed to be flirting with him, she then panicked when she noticed the MC and tried to tell him bullshit again the she cried.
So it's clear that she started flirting with Ethan when the MC went away, then when he came back she tried to play them both and failed.

 

[dempun]

It's not really a question to blame her, but she put herself in that position and she did not trust the MC later, he could have helped her, but she went on with the lies. We have a scene where the MC sees her in a coffee shop with Ethan and she did not seemed to be upset at all she even seemed to be flirting with him, she then panicked when she noticed the MC and tried to tell him bullshit again the she cried.
So it's clear that she started flirting with Ethan when the MC went away, then when he came back she tried to play them both and failed.

I think the reason she doesn't want to go to the cops is that Ethan has rather more than her first sexual encounter with her then boyfriend to hold over her head. I expect we'll see if that is true in later updates.

 

[dempun]

I agree that, "he's blond and fits the timeline" isn't exactly a matching dna test, and normally i would dismiss it... but playing this game for as long as we have, everything seems to work out in this fashion.
And as you know if a gun is introduced(Erynn search for her father), it must go off at some point.

At this point he's the only one who can fit the description to a tee, it would be kind of weird(and lame) to have a different guy who fits the same description pop out of nowhere just to pull a "gotcha".

Now that's a fair point. Just the title of the game suggests that somehow all roads lead to Rome. I believe the guy isn't Erynn's father, or at least doesn't KNOW he is... But I just might be shown differently in the updates to come.

But please.. PLEASE don't make Valeria his long lost sister on his real father's side. I am so looking forward to seeing what can happen with her and MC.

 

[thegrimm]

The "theory" you guys are talking about Jhon being Erynn father
someone said "he is blond and have a beard" is this really categorized being a viking? D:
But i starting thinking about it too and...
Melissa and Emily are best friends since college , they shared everything since then
if Jhon and Melissa had a one time thing or even a relationship before , wouldn't Emily know about it ?
I mean , when she visited the garage with MC to buy a car for him , she didn't know Jhon.
My first thought is that they aren't related , BUT is a game , small city , "everyone knows everyone" ,
in the end they could be related like you guys are saying , so who knows?! D:

Melissa had Erynn like two years before she even met Emily. Also, John just recently moved into town if I'm remembering right. Starting to think this theory is solid.

 

[Kourtams]

Everyone's related to everyone in this game

John's probably Erryn's father
Layla's probably MC's half sister

So many "*GASP* What a SHOCKING revelation" that it feels like a bad old soap opera

There's so many Flashback/Plot Twist/Cliffhangers that I ended up with a headache after one playthrough, the story is more convoluted than the lore of the last WoW Expansion (that's not a compliment)

MC's unlikable, a huge moron, and inconsistent. Other characters are needlessly complex for the sake of the story which make the story even more uninteresting.

Render are truly beautiful though and I hope the story will end in a satisfying way for those interested in it but that ain't the game for me

 

[Sadistic Fucker]

Can anyone upload it to Google drive?

 

[Meghead]

Well, i got what i deserve, i still have Nikki tho.

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[Nurikabe]

Everyone's related to everyone in this game

John's probably Erryn's father
Layla's probably MC's half sister

So many "*GASP* What a SHOCKING revelation" that it feels like a bad old soap opera

There's so many Flashback/Plot Twist/Cliffhangers that I ended up with a headache after one playthrough, the story is more convoluted than the lore of the last WoW Expansion (that's not a compliment)

MC's unlikable, a huge moron, and inconsistent. Other characters are needlessly complex for the sake of the story which make the story even more uninteresting.

Render are truly beautiful though and I hope the story will end in a satisfying way for those interested in it but that ain't the game for me

No accounting for taste. Flying spaghetti monster forbid there be a VN with a story. For those who like a little erotica with their story, plot before porn, this story is fun and clever. I like how everyone is tied together. The ripples of each action affect everyone around him. Choices are not black and white.
I am sure you will find a hundred VNs that are to your liking elsewhere. Good luck!

 

[Nurikabe]

Well, i got what i deserve, i still have Nikki tho.

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That is the result of not choosing Lexi or Layla? I saw it in the script but didn't have the conditions met to see this result.

 

[ToursEiffelNeymar]

Here is what I feel like should happen either we get a flashback with how MC planted Zach into Ethan's group, the beatdown was just all part of their plan to earn Ethan's trust allowing Zach to gain access to their group and find all the evidence to finally bring down Ethan's empire or Ethan set his eyes on Zach's sister next, Zach finally sees the manipulative Ethan's true colours and ends up murdering him

 

[Pantic_10]

is there a reduced link?

 

[Luvsgettinghd]

Melissa had Erynn like two years before she even met Emily. Also, John just recently moved into town if I'm remembering right. Starting to think this theory is solid.

John has Iris, who is the same age as Erynn. They are not sisters. Iris has a crush on Erynn. Therefore, John cannot be Erynn's father. Unless he is Nick Cannon and has a bunch of baby mommas.

 

[jak1165]

Bruh

I hate this game. I hate the nonsense. I hate the MC. I hate the soap opera bullshit

Yet, I cant stop. Its literally a soap opera. I just keep clicking because I have to know what happens next. John is a real one

 

[Meghead]

That is the result of not choosing Lexi or Layla? I saw it in the script but didn't have the conditions met to see this result.

Yes, I just chose to be with both. Didn't leave Layla when Alexis asked me to.

 

[thegrimm]

John has Iris, who is the same age as Erynn. They are not sisters. Iris has a crush on Erynn. Therefore, John cannot be Erynn's father. Unless he is Nick Cannon and has a bunch of baby mommas.

I mean look at the game we're playing, MC has unbelievable luck with women and "Intertwined" revolves around all these insane relationship webs. Of all the side characters to show up and help MC at the end up the update, regarding Erynn, it is John. Really convenient.

Iris talking about Erynn: "When I first met her, I felt this... like.. immediate bond, I can't really explain it."
Given how this game operates plot wise, I feel this theory edges out towards "true".

 

[CachedBaguette]

I just laughed hard when Zack tells u about Layla and how after the MC arrives she oesn´t pay any attention to him, when that never happened lol or also the sex he tought he had with Elena, I liked him ,after this episode I like more the friend MC had when he was living with Cara and Nikki, hope he comes back.

That would be awesome. He knows how to fight, then those motherfckers (including Zack) would pay for what they done.

 

[Nurikabe]

So for those who know, in episode 8, what are the conditions for the MC winning his race?

I have so many saves and playthroughs that I am lost in them. But I was just trying to replay a specific part. Previously the MC had won his race and then goes to see Elena's competition. But in the playthrough at the moment, the MC is getting 4th place, overhears Gabi's conversation, and misses Elena's competition. So I am trying to figure out what I did differently.

Thanks!

 

[CachedBaguette]

So for those who know, in episode 8, what are the conditions for the MC winning his race?

I have so many saves and playthroughs that I am lost in them. But I was just trying to replay a specific part. Previously the MC had won his race and then goes to see Elena's competition. But in the playthrough at the moment, the MC is getting 4th place, overhears Gabi's conversation, and misses Elena's competition. So I am trying to figure out what I did differently.

Thanks!

You must train (and then race) with Layla in park before competition.

 

[Nurikabe]

You must train (and then race) with Layla in park before competition.

Thank You! Yep, skipped the park race.
ED: Ugh, MC even says, "Or because I trained with you," to Layla.

 

[SolarEclipsed]

I mean look at the game we're playing, MC has unbelievable luck with women and "Intertwined" revolves around all these insane relationship webs. Of all the side characters to show up and help MC at the end up the update, regarding Erynn, it is John. Really convenient.

Iris talking about Erynn: "When I first met her, I felt this... like.. immediate bond, I can't really explain it."
Given how this game operates plot wise, I feel this theory edges out towards "true".

I played a second play through ignoring the Alexis route and it was one of the girls ( the one who came second) who came to the rescue