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Bnshy

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After this update I don' think they need to really need to tell one another they like each other anymore. To me it's apparent they know they like one another , considering how often they are kissing they are feeling more like a couple to me. As well Erynn is starting to be more bold when it comes to the MC and less hesitant and awkward. I could be wrong but that is my personal interpretation of their relationship after this update.

Yeah I did, see that change in her...
I probably feel this way more so, because the long wait between these updates and it's making the slow burn, even longer smh.
 

Bnshy

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In the last update Erynn is takin a bath naked with Mc, so I guess that is very straightforward...

Then again never read the scene as my dislike for Erynn is big.
Yeah I guess you right...
It can only better from now on...
Just that wait for these chapters...
 
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Yeah I did, see that change in her...
I probably feel this way more so, because the long wait between these updates and it's making the slow burn, even longer smh.
Might be a long wait for updates...barely been 2 weeks in the story...

How quick do you want her to move given her history?
 
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Yeah I did, see that change in her...
I probably feel this way more so, because the long wait between these updates and it's making the slow burn, even longer smh.
I feel that to be honest Erynn is one of the big reasons I think about this game a bit to much between updates in the past cause I cant wait for the next chapter. Though it's only bad for about 3 days to week after an update or replaying the game for me however with this cliffhanger since I love reveals I think ill be thinking about it a bit more often , as I cant wait to see the next bit of dialogue.
 

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yeah it's shorter, and even more so if you only play one route that maybe only has a minutes worth of content for the particular LI (like Lexi/Layla in this update) or none at all (Nikki/Cara). But if you play all of them then there is still a good amount of content and nuanced conversations.
Well, a problem in common with man VNs where there are multiple LIs is that a lot of content get skipped the further the story goes because the scenes tend to become more focused. This is especially true for a game like Intertwined were the girls are mutually exclusive.
 

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As you can see, Brooke points 0 (zero) ! That dialog is totally wrong. So... I expect to see a fix for this. Right ?
No, what's wrong here? MC didn't get one point because he was shitty in flirting. He might thinking it's because she's lesbian but as we can see with other choices Brooke enjoyed the flirting. But only if he isn't an idiot. He still flirted with her, even if it doesn't get him points in Ren'Py. Maybe he shouldn't peek as she changed.

I don't know.... I doubt her first time was outside...
Erynn isn't that kind of girl..

I don't doubt that it was traumatic, but this is the MC, we're talking about here...
Boy, please stop. At first it was her first time. Ethan even mentioned the look on her face when her hymen ruptures. And second and most important: after this she got blackmailed by Ethan. Her first sexual intercourse was shitty (maybe because Zane was a setup by Ethan and not really a good first time) and leads to months of harassments by Ethan and working as an escort which she clearly doesn't enjoy. She mentioned to MC how bad the clients treats her and Ethan yammers to her about her crying a lot during these "jobs". How can this all not be traumatic? Erynn is the victim of sexual abusing. Her sexual experience until MC's return to Madison Springs consists of men abusing her. How can you expect she open her doors to joy after only three and a half week with MC? She tries to trust and love. But she needs time. She has scars on her soul.
 
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Might be a long wait for updates...barely been 2 weeks in the story...

How quick do you want her to move given her history?
Two weeks into the novel?... and all these girls giving it up in two weeks... of knowing someone is insane.. smh
 

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No, what's wrong here? MC didn't get one point because he was shitty in flirting. He might thinking it's because she's lesbian but as we can see with other choices Brooke enjoyed the flirting. But only if he isn't an idiot. He still flirted with her, even if it doesn't get him points in Ren'Py. Maybe he shouldn't peek as she changed.

Boy, please stop. At first it was her first time in that stall. Ethan even mentioned the look on her face when her hymen ruptures. And second and most important: after this she got blackmailed by Ethan. Her first sexual intercourse was shitty (maybe because Zane was a setup by Ethan and not really a good first time) and leads to months of harassments by Ethan and working as an escort which she clearly doesn't enjoy. She mentioned to MC how bad the clients treats her and Ethan yammers to her about her crying a lot during these "jobs". How can this all not be traumatic? Erynn is the victim of sexual abusing. Her sexual experience until MC's return to Madison Springs consists of men abusing her. How can you expect she open her doors to joy after only three and a half week with MC? She tries to trust and love. But she needs time. She has scars on her soul.

Dude what kind of girl, sleeps with some one for the first time in a public place, where people can see them... That's a bit much....

The rest of it, I can understand...

 

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Is there a list of LI`s/future endings somewhere? Haven't got a clue who's playable and who's not in form of LI`s and side-girls. Are there checkpoints along the storyline where you can change paths or do you have to make multiple solo-runs from the start since harem obviously isn't an option?
 

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Dude what kind of girl, sleeps with some one for the first time in a public place, where people can see them... That's a bit much....

The rest of it, I can understand...
do we know it was in a public place though I don't recall that ever being mentioned at all. Unless I forgot something. So im going under the assumption it's unknown if it was public or not. As far I know it could of been in the safety of her or Zane's home and it's possible Zane and Ethan planned to blackmail her so they made plans to record her even in a private space.
 

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Dude what kind of girl, sleeps with some one for the first time in a public place, where people can see them... That's a bit much....
Who says that this was Erynn's dream of her first time? Do you have the slightest idea how many women are out there who were molested into their first time? It's not as if every girl at the typical age of "the first time" is mentally strong enough to always be able to defend herself against it. Gaslighting and other methods are unfortunately not unknown to women. Men celebrate themselves when they manage to "persuade" a girl. What they completely ignore is the fact that they have simply worn them down. Nothing men can be proud of.
 

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Is there a list of LI`s/future endings somewhere? Haven't got a clue who's playable and who's not in form of LI`s and side-girls. Are there checkpoints along the storyline where you can change paths or do you have to make multiple solo-runs from the start since harem obviously isn't an option?
well according to the dev, LIs are Erynn, Lexi, Layla, Elena, Nikki, Cara and Melissa (someone correct me if I missed one). But there seem to be other girls you can mess around with, not sure what will come of those. Also the official list may be bullshit for all we know, never can be too sure with Nyx. For the moment you can mix and match some of them if you are careful and like to live dangerously, but in the long term I don't think that will be viable, it's a single LI game.
 

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well according to the dev, LIs are Erynn, Lexi, Layla, Elena, Nikki, Cara and Melissa (someone correct me if I missed one). But there seem to be other girls you can mess around with, not sure what will come of those. Also the official list may be bullshit for all we know, never can be too sure with Nyx. For the moment you can mix and match some of them if you are careful and like to live dangerously, but in the long term I don't think that will be viable, it's a single LI game.
Thank you. Yeah, I discovered that early on as I got chewed out for "free"-playing as I usually do in games. :LOL:
 

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do we know it was in a public place though I don't recall that ever being mentioned at all. Unless I forgot something. So im going under the assumption it's unknown if it was public or not. As far I know it could of been in the safety of her or Zane's home and it's possible Zane and Ethan planned to blackmail her so they made plans to record her even in a private space.
I have no clue, but I doubt, that Zane was working with him..
Since Erynn went to prom with Ethan and that ended up being the reason her relationship ended with Zane..

I wonder why the MC didn't mention, that he took Ethans cellphone..
 
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I have no clue, but I doubt, that Zane was working with him..
Since Erynn went to prom with Ethan and that ended up being the reason her relationship ended with Zane..

I wonder why the MC didn't mention, that he took Ethans cellphone..
Do you even read what you play? Serious question.

She went to the prom with Ethan because he had the video and blackmailed her to go with him and she never saw Zane again.
 

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No, what's wrong here? MC didn't get one point because he was shitty in flirting. He might thinking it's because she's lesbian but as we can see with other choices Brooke enjoyed the flirting. But only if he isn't an idiot. He still flirted with her, even if it doesn't get him points in Ren'Py. Maybe he shouldn't peek as she changed.
No, that isn't what he means, If he like I did on Alexis path, ignored Brooke ( no flirting) just profesional, etc only getting the points (which are inevitable) by caring about Emily, that line of dialoge makes no sense at all, because you had more or less just "friendly" interactions, in which neither of both showed interest, Brooke because she feels atracted to woman , MC because she doesn't interest him.
 
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