flaviopaganini

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Yes in a VN like this a Male Protag VN where the story revolves the MC she's usless. You can't date her and she doesn't further a plot. And far as the Mom goes we have had the choice before and i'm pretty sure we will have a choice later. unless you know something i don't i just don't see why we don't have a choice.
What would a VN like this be? You have to keep in mind that this VN is written by a woman and focused on the storyline. If it were a VN written by a man oriented towards pornography, especially being a Harem, I would understand. But this AVN is in a different category than most are used to consuming on this site.

Imagine that you might need Broke in the future to help you against Ethan? She might need to trust you to risk her life, and that would depend on the points you have with her.
 

MrDude1977

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What would a VN like this be? You have to keep in mind that this VN is written by a woman and focused on the storyline. If it were a VN written by a man oriented towards pornography, especially being a Harem, I would understand. But this AVN is in a different category than most are used to consuming on this site.

Imagine that you might need Broke in the future to help you against Ethan? She might need to trust you to risk her life, and that would depend on the points you have with her.
The only difference i see in this VN and any other on this site is what you have mentioned it is written by a woman and is written more towards story and not porn. The story revolves around the MC. Sure there has been a hint here and there for side plot with the mom dating someone Melissa, John and now Brooke but it all boils down to choice made by the player. This VN is written very well and choices has been plenty so far in just about everything that goes own in it and that's what i been trying to say.
 

MrDude1977

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What would a VN like this be? You have to keep in mind that this VN is written by a woman and focused on the storyline. If it were a VN written by a man oriented towards pornography, especially being a Harem, I would understand. But this AVN is in a different category than most are used to consuming on this site.

Imagine that you might need Broke in the future to help you against Ethan? She might need to trust you to risk her life, and that would depend on the points you have with her.
Your point about Brooke would probably be the same scenario like with Val if you had enough points with her she steps in to help and if not John steps in to help.
 

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Yes in a VN like this a Male Protag VN where the story revolves the MC she's usless. You can't date her and she doesn't further a plot. And far as the Mom goes we have had the choice before and i'm pretty sure we will have a choice later. unless you know something i don't i just don't see why we don't have a choice.
hard disagree not all character needs to be lewdable sometimes it's just nice to have a character that is unavailable but part of the games world. Personally I find it annoying how in almost every day game every female character is lewdable, it's a nice and a breathe of fresh air to not think with your dick and just have character apart of the world so it feels more alive. Those characters may feel useless to you but to me they do not because they serve the purpose or brining life to said AVN.
 

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The mom won't be a single at the end of the game. Since when have a son a saying in this? Emily may be asked MC for his POV about John, but she would be dumb to give a fuck about it. They aren't living in a third world patriarchy without women rights.
well that'll be end of mc's and iris' relationship.
 
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well that'll be end of mc's and iris' relationship.
And from John's other daughter as well.
Actually no. It's not incest when parents of an adult couple becomes a couple too. Not by US laws, which is important for Patreon, nor by the terms of Patreon. So, it wouldn't be the end from that side. Iris, Erynn, and MC are adults. Emily and John can do what they want now.
 

MrDude1977

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People really don't get she's just a female version of MC? She's new to school and trying to figure out where she fits in. She's playing the field like MC. She flirts her and there, just like MC. If the player is on her path they can get her to commit to MC. The whole story of her path leads to that. There're four paths at the moment: the one where she falls for MC, the one where she's crushing on him but don't act further, the one where she's just friend with him, and the one where she dislike MC because of the way he acts with girls generally (cheating, peeping, etc.) It's on the player which path it is with her.
True on my playthrough i'm on the Layla path and i can tell she's crushing on MC but she see's Layla and MC flirting like a couple. So why would she make a move? I'd like to see her path with out being on Layla's path.
 

Monk3yHang3r86

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I keep getting this exception. Any idea how to solve it

I'm sorry, but an uncaught exception occurred.

While running game code:
File "game/episode_4.rpy", line 1129, in script
$ Nikki_Points += 2
File "game/episode_4.rpy", line 1129, in <module>
$ Nikki_Points += 2
NameError: name 'Nikki_Points' is not defined

-- Full Traceback ------------------------------------------------------------

Full traceback:
File "game/episode_4.rpy", line 1129, in script
$ Nikki_Points += 2
File "C:\Users\chris\Desktop\AVNs\Intertwined-0.12-pc\renpy\ast.py", line 1138, in execute
renpy.python.py_exec_bytecode(self.code.bytecode, self.hide, store=self.store)
File "C:\Users\chris\Desktop\AVNs\Intertwined-0.12-pc\renpy\python.py", line 1122, in py_exec_bytecode
exec(bytecode, globals, locals)
File "game/episode_4.rpy", line 1129, in <module>
$ Nikki_Points += 2
NameError: name 'Nikki_Points' is not defined

Windows-10-10.0.22631 AMD64
Ren'Py 8.1.0.23051307
Intertwined 0.12
Thu Sep 8 10:11:12 2024

Thanks in advance
 

flaviopaganini

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Actually no. It's not incest when parents of an adult couple becomes a couple too. Not by US laws, which is important for Patreon, nor by the terms of Patreon. So, it wouldn't be the end from that side. Iris, Erynn, and MC are adults. Emily and John can do what they want now.
According to Patreon's guidelines, content featuring sexual activities or role play between family members within the same immediate family is not allowed, regardless of whether they are blood-related. In the case of a scenario where a mother marries the father of a young woman, making their children step-siblings, any sexual relationship between the step-siblings would be prohibited. Patreon's rules specifically state that sexual content involving step-siblings or step-parents falls under the category of "Not permitted," as it involves members of the same immediate family.



Not permitted

Real or animated works (photo, video, written, audio) featuring sexual activity or role play interactions between family members who are blood relatives or part of the same immediate family (e.g. siblings, parents, adopted children, step-siblings, step-parents).
While the United States may not have federal laws prohibiting relationships between step-siblings or other non-blood-related family members, it’s important to note that laws can vary from state to state. In the state of Virginia, for example, laws regarding incest are more restrictive. Virginia explicitly prohibits sexual relationships between individuals who are related by affinity (i.e., through marriage), which includes relationships between step-siblings or between step-parents and step-children, even if they are not biologically related.
 

flaviopaganini

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That means, John or Emily dies? Or John or Emily backs off because of Melissa?
The same drama that happened with André's wedding is going to occur for the MC to be able to stay with either Cara or Nikki. They introduced that ridiculous cheating story involving the MC's 'father.' In this case, I think John dying would be too much drama even for Nyx. I think he's going to end up moving to another city.
 

Abhai

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I keep getting this exception. Any idea how to solve it

I'm sorry, but an uncaught exception occurred.

While running game code:
File "game/episode_4.rpy", line 1129, in script
$ Nikki_Points += 2
File "game/episode_4.rpy", line 1129, in <module>
$ Nikki_Points += 2
NameError: name 'Nikki_Points' is not defined

-- Full Traceback ------------------------------------------------------------

Full traceback:
File "game/episode_4.rpy", line 1129, in script
$ Nikki_Points += 2
File "C:\Users\chris\Desktop\AVNs\Intertwined-0.12-pc\renpy\ast.py", line 1138, in execute
renpy.python.py_exec_bytecode(self.code.bytecode, self.hide, store=self.store)
File "C:\Users\chris\Desktop\AVNs\Intertwined-0.12-pc\renpy\python.py", line 1122, in py_exec_bytecode
exec(bytecode, globals, locals)
File "game/episode_4.rpy", line 1129, in <module>
$ Nikki_Points += 2
NameError: name 'Nikki_Points' is not defined

Windows-10-10.0.22631 AMD64
Ren'Py 8.1.0.23051307
Intertwined 0.12
Thu Sep 8 10:11:12 2024

Thanks in advance
did you mod your game in any way (console, urm, walki-mods etc)?
if so you have probably messed up your saves - start fresh and you should be good.
 

LSC82

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That means, John or Emily dies? Or John or Emily backs off because of Melissa?
That makes sense, Emily backing off because Melissa is still somewhat hung up on John.
At some point Melissa is gonna figure out that her friend is dating Erynn's father, could be rather early...

Something like Emily decides to get a haircut for the date, and Melissa decides to take the chance to look around and see what this guy looks like.
Can even be a way to end the next episode, MC gets back home, Emily and Melissa are there(maybe Erynn too) as Melissa finishes the haircut... not much later John arrives to pick her up...
Ends with Melissa with her mouth wide open finally seeing the guy who slipped one past the goalie after 20 years :cool:

Nice parallel to the MC messing around with friends too.
 
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