VN Ren'Py Intertwined [v0.14.1] [Nyx]

[Vidal the king of Pervert]

""Welcome to my Patreon page! My name is Nyx and I create adult Visual Novels (VNs). It has always been a passion of mine to create stories and visualize them. This is my first project I decided to publish. I have no prior experience in programming or digital illustration, so I'm learning on the go. If you happen to like what I'm creating, please feel free to show your appreciation through a donation by becoming my patron. Thank you very much for reading my page and for playing my game!""

There's nothing wrong with giving your opinion here after all it is a forum lol!
But like I said it's a one woman?{I believe} show doing this game. And it's up to the
dev to decide how this game goes and the people who actually pay the dev to
make it. It is what it is and like I said before, if you dislike the fact of more girls
being added your opinion isn't gonna change that at this stage and the fact you probably
don't sub....enjoy what you can from this FREE game here on this site.

I know I can't do anything to change it but I'm still allowed to give my opinion in a respectful way

and I can still play a game enjoy parts of it and give criticism

especially since it's been 5 years since I seen my girl

and on a separate note just because somebody's poor and they never donated any money

doesn't mean their opinion is not valid

 

[Elduriel]

and the fact you probably
don't sub....enjoy what you can from this FREE game here on this site.

ones financial contribution to the dev does mean exactly shit on this site. You can have a perfectly valid (or even wrong) opinion about the game and share it here without giving her a cent.

 

[KKhalduras]

As much as I would like to murder Zach punching him in front of all these witnesses is bad.
I think there is a chance the MC gets off the hook next update with just the push.
I'm more surprised that Gabi tells on you.

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Honestly other than the layla path which could suggest just resentment out of jealousy, i think her reaction is fairly normal? Like thats the type of shit that happens when i was at highschool where the teacher just parrots whatever they hear first.


Why didnt adriana try asking other students aswell is what gave me a headscratcher

 

[LastOne24/7]

When I loaded the last save from 0.13.2, I got this:

I'm sorry, but an uncaught exception occurred.

While running game code:
File "game/episode_13.rpy", line 19119, in script
if Erynn_Week3_Monday_Blackmailhelp == True:
File "game/episode_13.rpy", line 19119, in <module>
if Erynn_Week3_Monday_Blackmailhelp == True:
NameError: name 'Erynn_Week3_Monday_Blackmailhelp' is not defined

-- Full Traceback ------------------------------------------------------------

Full traceback:
File "game/episode_13.rpy", line 19119, in script
if Erynn_Week3_Monday_Blackmailhelp == True:
File "D:\Stuff\Games\G\New folder\Intertwined-0.14-pc\renpy\ast.py", line 2133, in execute
if renpy.python.py_eval(condition):
File "D:\Stuff\Games\G\New folder\Intertwined-0.14-pc\renpy\python.py", line 1153, in py_eval
return py_eval_bytecode(code, globals, locals)
File "D:\Stuff\Games\G\New folder\Intertwined-0.14-pc\renpy\python.py", line 1146, in py_eval_bytecode
return eval(bytecode, globals, locals)
File "game/episode_13.rpy", line 19119, in <module>
if Erynn_Week3_Monday_Blackmailhelp == True:
NameError: name 'Erynn_Week3_Monday_Blackmailhelp' is not defined

Windows-10-10.0.26100 AMD64
Ren'Py 8.1.0.23051307
Intertwined 0.14
Thu May 29 03:58:21 2025

HELLO? Can anyone he me?

 

[Bombmaster]

Well it sure as shit isn't the 'drama.'

the thing Nyx does better than most is her drama and duckfaces
and sure write girls that act more real.

 

[valbitterb]

the thing Nyx does better than most is her drama and duckfaces
and sure write girls that act more real.

Agreed.

 

[UncleFappy]

the thing Nyx does better than most is her drama and duckfaces
and sure write girls that act more real.

I mentioned it a while back, but she's also just real good at making everything feels so comfy. Even with the silly drama stuff. Its still just this comfy ass slice of life game.

 

[Adhdclassic]

Not sure if it's a serious question or not, but just in case it is, it's the steps telling you how to get on her secret path, which is absolutely not the regular Alexis path. On the ASP, you are in a relationship with Layla, but also developing things with Alexis in secret, and if I remember rightly, Erynn is trying to push you and Alexis together, which is why you need to manage the Erynn points so that she is friendly enough, but not so friendly that you stray onto her path.

Wait there is another path. Thought it was weird that they have a secret path for a girl I got in 5 choices. Definitely will try it. Thanks

 

[Joan6969]

ones financial contribution to the dev does mean exactly shit on this site. You can have a perfectly valid (or even wrong) opinion about the game and share it here without giving her a cent.

And I believe I said that in my post. It's a forum and your entitled to your opinion.
But it is a fact that a dev is gonna listen more to those who actually pay to help
her to develop the game no?

 

[ruby_rubicon]

I would love to know what thrilling, drama filled VN's all of you people who call Intertwined boring are playing. Or is it just about the lewds for you? Is it the lack of incest? If you can't fuck your family members it's boring to you?
If you found this episode or any other boring then I guess playing more than just one damn path.

Kinks and/or multiple paths don't make or break a story for me. If they also don't do it for you, then why assume they are important to critique this game? What I care about is believable growing characters populating a story of personal development where decisions matter and have consequences. And Intertwined has most of this! Characters are funny, distinctive and sexy, and decisions do matter (although sudden consequences from decisions clicked on 2 years ago are a bit frustrating), but there's been so many twists and resets that I've forgotten why should I care, and what is the point of it all.

Is the point of the story the gradual uncovering of all the relatives -via plenty of sexy times and awkward realizations- by the very uncurious MC? That's not a great plot but OK! It sounds like a fun sexy comedy. But if the writer insists to take a more "serious" approach and attempt intrigue and shock with every new revelation... congrats, you have a smut telenovela ("on tonight's episode, Esteban finds out her sexy aunt is not dead!"). Which would also be OK, if we only knew what is the destination. MC doesn't need to save the world, or become a famous athlete, but do we need all these twists to get somewhere like that?

I couldn't even finish this update, so I guess I'll never find out. Thankfully plenty more games to play, with just as many chronically eyelined LIs but that may know where they're headed.

 

[KKhalduras]

the thing Nyx does better than most is her drama and duckfaces
and sure write girls that act more real.

At the very least, things have been pretty natural which is why the highlights for me have always just been reading through the mc hanging out with just anyone lol

 

[valbitterb]

I mentioned it a while back, but she's also just real good at making everything feels so comfy. Even with the silly drama stuff. Its still just this comfy ass slice of life game.

I'm out of reactions.

Yes. I agree. If we take away the badly done blackmail plot, (I like the telenovela aspect even if others don't), the game will still work because of the slice of life details: each lady has a distinct personality, look and body, each lady has distinct relationship and sexual dynamics, most of the ladies have different histories and relationships with the MC. Apart from the uninteresting villains, most of the male figures' characters and relationships with the MC are also quite distinct.

The game progresses through repetition. Scenes and locations get repeated but with different relationship dynamics and context with the character/s you're interacting with based on your MC's choices.

If you do combo paths, you'll create tension in those interactions and dynamics depending on which ladies you choose. And you can also compare and contrast between the different relationships.

 

[Elduriel]

And I believe I said that in my post. It's a forum and your entitled to your opinion.
But it is a fact that a dev is gonna listen more to those who actually pay to help
her to develop the game no?

well the dev fucked off from here ages ago so we're not writing stuff like that to influence her either way, just talking between each other.

 

[Bombmaster]

Too many girls and the story branches a lot and thus slowly craws foward.
Dont kill me for saying, but we could remove Iris and make MC first time with Nikki and make her an only child.

Thus we would get One Li from the past, We keep the drama ErynnXLexi and the foil LaylaxElena
and keep the side girls. Then you only have 2 main paths that interwined with "long distance" Nikki.

 

[Couto25]

What's new in the udpate?? Seems same to me lol.

 

[valbitterb]

 

[Avaron1974]

ones financial contribution to the dev does mean exactly shit on this site. You can have a perfectly valid (or even wrong) opinion about the game and share it here without giving her a cent.

Sharing opinions here is certainly valid but you also have to remember Nyx gave up on this site after dealing with a couple of idiots every update. Chances of her seeing any of the posts aimed at her are very slim.

 

[indio68]

HELLO? Can anyone he me?

he you

 

[th3pun1sh3r]

compressed version ??

 

[Jantio1999]

what a shitshow... If only you could take 2 girls as the same time, lots of problems would be solved....

Now I am just watching the pictures, and I see them all cry one after the other...