VN Ren'Py Intertwined [v0.14.1] [Nyx]

[Maestro91]

Its not... terrible. But it is... horrible.



Like, I'm down with it conceptually. But the execution of it is just so laughable and dragged out and it ends up being more of a stain and a reason to dislike Erynn than a plus to her story.

Instead of activating protector mode to stop Ethan from fucking with Erynn, I end up activating "shut the fuck up" mode to stop Ethan from shitting up the story with his stupid face. I want MC to stop Ethan to get him out of the story, more than I want MC to stop Ethan to save Erynn from him.

My thoughs exactly. There are way too many characters for the story to feel like Ethan has a place in it. He's actively blackmailing Erynn, but what does that entail? Erynn is free to walk around with MC that has jumped and beat him twice now, and twice more with his goons around, but he doesn't really do anything about it...

He's just scheming about nothing, And now that he knows John is Erynn's father it doesn't really matter halfway since his advantage is gone, John knows that Erynn is his daughter. Only thing is the MC squad doesn't know that he knows, but he doesn't know that they know either...
And why does this weird, uncharismatic guy have so many resources that he's able to keep this facade going.

 

[Maestro91]

Any ideas why Gabi would say the MC hit Zack?

Misunderstanding... or something else afoot...

 

[Maestro91]

We don't know for certain that it was Zach who pushed his bike over. My money is on Lucas (guy from the park) after he probably saw the MC with Layla and Elena in the morning at school. Most assume that it was Zach but it was likely a bait and switch.

Yea... What the hell happened to that guy? Have we seen literally anything of him since that sucker punch at the park?

 

[Maestro91]

The MC is more of a lover than a fighter let's be honest. He's really good at getting his ass kicked, even Lucas got the best of him. He's always open for the sucker punch, unless your name is Zach and you just can't punch.

Training arc when?

 

[Maestro91]

Just wait until Zach finds out my MC is fucking Gabi and also dating Val on one of my saves. He's going to lose it. Would be totally shooting myself in the foot...but worth it!

Banging your dad's wife... for shame

 

[Justaphase]

Yea... What the hell happened to that guy? Have we seen literally anything of him since that sucker punch at the park?

He lives at the park and has to watch everything through binoculars.

Training arc when?

The MC needs his sidekick Nathan.

Banging your dad's wife... for shame

Yeah but it's Gabi, who's a total fucking smokeshow.

 

[Justaphase]

Speaking of Gabi, this moment is hilarious to me. Note to everyone, if you get to this point...she's sure!
The look on her face is like "really bitch?" then she shoves his head down.

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[valbitterb]

Speaking of Gabi, this moment is hilarious to me. Note to everyone, if you get to this point...she's sure!
The look on her face is like "really bitch?" then she shoves his head down.

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The MC was so concerned about the implications for her career and life.

That was a funny moment.

I hope Nyx maintains the humor in her redo.

 

[Justaphase]

The MC was so concerned about the implications for her career and life.

That was a funny moment.

I hope Nyx maintains the humor in her redo.

So much concern with his head between her legs.

 

[Dessolos]

Would you trust that sex offender face next to Layla? (At least Coach Morgan has the albino gorilla thing going for him.)

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everytime I see that teacher I keep thinking Niko Bellic from GTA became a teacher after a life of crime

 

[Dr.TSoni]

Yea... What the hell happened to that guy? Have we seen literally anything of him since that sucker punch at the park?

He lives at the park and has to watch everything through binoculars.

Personally I think Nyx had an Araki moment

everytime I see that teacher I keep thinking Niko Bellic from GTA became a teacher after a life of crime

is in witness protection to escape the harassment of...

 

[LSC82]

Speaking of Gabi, this moment is hilarious to me. Note to everyone, if you get to this point...she's sure!
The look on her face is like "really bitch?" then she shoves his head down.

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Worst possible moment to stop and question if they really should be doing this
She doesn't even answer his question...

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Any ideas why Gabi would say the MC hit Zack?

Misunderstanding... or something else afoot...

I think it was just her perception of the situation, she didn't have a front row seat and from her position a shove may have looked like punch.
Wether you have a relationship with Gabi or is just a student to her she reports the same thing, so no ulterior motives.

Other than the fact Nyx wanted the MC suspended no matter what, that's the true ulterior motive.

Yea... What the hell happened to that guy? Have we seen literally anything of him since that sucker punch at the park?

He's been pretty much forgotten(seems like this happens a lot).
There is one scene, where Layla, and only Layla, not Val or MC who were also present, has her hoodie stolen while they practice in the park, many(me included) suspect him due to the suspicious circumstances.

And maybe this Bike drop
But no proof of anything, just suspicion.

 

[UncleFappy]

Any ideas why Gabi would say the MC hit Zack?

Misunderstanding... or something else afoot...

I think its just a misunderstanding or one of the students who saw it lied on Zach's behalf. She comes in, Zach is on the ground and he's saying MC punched him. MC says he didn't, but the actual scene Gabi stumbled onto doesn't really help his case.

So I figure she probably just reported what she saw and heard, and it was taken by Adriana as if Gabi was saying MC hit Zach. Misunderstanding from miscommunication. Happens all the time in school. I got in trouble over the same thing once, and I was the kid being bullied in the situation.

Orrrrr, Gabi followed up, grabbed a student or two to ask what actually happened. And for whatever reason, they said MC hit Zach. MC's Parker luck kicking in.