VN Ren'Py Intertwined [v0.14.1] [Nyx]

[byaaahh]

So why is everything on Andres and not on Emily who actually took the deal? From what I can tell, she barely even liked Andres back then. Not to mention if Im not mistaken, they broke up when MC was 4, so she had plenty of time to divulge that information to him if she wanted to do so.

It's on both of them, but without Andres' deal Emily could have spoken to Santi sooner.

Also, they divorced when MC was around 10 13, not sure where you're getting 4 from.

Just played through it again, turns out Emily ran into Santi "6 years ago", making MC ~13.

 

[Dr.TSoni]

damn, I didn't even know this image of Layla was in the game

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Layla, you've got me on my knees.
Layla, I'm begging, darling please.
Layla, darling won't you ease my worried mind.​

Layla is my favorite

You undoubtedly have good taste.

There is a still better photo than this

 

[minibaer12]

You undoubtedly have good taste.

 

[MilesEdgeworth]

It's on both of them, but without Andres' deal Emily could have spoken to Santi sooner.

Also, they divorced when MC was around 10 13, not sure where you're getting 4 from.

Just played through it again, turns out Emily ran into Santi "6 years ago", making MC ~13.

Emily took a deal to get married to a guy that she doesnt even like. I guarantee you as thirsty as Andres is if Emily wouldve told him to gtfoh, he wouldve married her with or without that deal.

I stand corrected, so she had five years. Do you think she wouldve even said anything if MC didnt catch her lezzing out?

 

[valbitterb]

Starting the campaign for a Layla secret path, if Alexis can screw over her sister Layla deserves the same chance to screw over Alexis
And that break up was too easy...

And i want a pay off for these...

Not quite alright with everything....
Equality for the sisters screwing over each other, LAYLA SECRET PATH NOW!!!!

I agree that there should be a Layla Secret path (and to a lesser extent, a Cara Secret Path.) To be fair, the younger Monroe and Morgan sisters should also get equal opportunity with the MC, not the just the older sisters.

It's only fair that Layla should have the same opportunity to get back together with the MC. And as you posted, this possible LSP has already been set up by this scene from training camp where the MC's choices lead to Layla stepping aside for the MC and Lexi. (This scene actually shows Layla's maturity.)




As one of the bosses of the Val family, I respectfully ask this favor from the heads of the Layla family Dr.TSoni and Jarulf to support the campaign for a Layla Secret Path.

 

[Dr.TSoni]

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I agree that there should be a Layla Secret path (and to a lesser extent, a Cara Secret Path.) To be fair, the younger Monroe and Morgan sisters should also get equal opportunity with the MC, not the just the older sisters.

It's only fair that Layla should have the same opportunity to get back together with the MC. And as you posted, this possible LSP has already been set up by this scene from training camp where the MC's choices lead to Layla stepping aside for the MC and Lexi. (This scene actually shows Layla's maturity.)

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As one of the bosses of the Val family, I respectfully ask this favor from the heads of the Layla family Dr.TSoni and Jarulf to support the campaign for a Layla Secret Path.

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Indeed, even little sisters have the right to interfere in their big sisters' relationship.

 

[Jarulf]

I agree that there should be a Layla Secret path (and to a lesser extent, a Cara Secret Path.) To be fair, the younger Monroe and Morgan sisters should also get equal opportunity with the MC, not the just the older sisters.

It's only fair that Layla should have the same opportunity to get back together with the MC. And as you posted, this possible LSP has already been set up by this scene from training camp where the MC's choices lead to Layla stepping aside for the MC and Lexi. (This scene actually shows Layla's maturity.)

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As one of the bosses of the Val family, I respectfully ask this favor from the heads of the Layla family Dr.TSoni and Jarulf to support the campaign for a Layla Secret Path.

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Any path that leads to Layla's happiness has my full support and endorsement. Nyx, please make it so.

 

[Acsuka]

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[byaaahh]

Emily took a deal to get married to a guy that she doesnt even like. I guarantee you as thirsty as Andres is if Emily wouldve told him to gtfoh, he wouldve married her with or without that deal.

I stand corrected, so she had five years. Do you think she wouldve even said anything if MC didnt catch her lezzing out?

I've just played through to try and substantiate the timeline:

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I wouldn't go as far as saying Emily didn't like Andres, just that it wasn't a marriage of love, but convenience. She liked that he was a support and he liked the trophy wife and picturesque family.

 

[valbitterb]

Indeed, even little sisters have the right to interfere in their big sisters' relationship.

Any path that leads to Layla's happiness has my full support and endorsement. Nyx, please make it so.

Thank you Godfathers.

FANTASTIC! HAHAHAA.

 

[Acsuka]

FANTASTIC! HAHAHAA.

I knew you'd like Tori's new nose...

 

[Tremonia]

Emily tells Santi she's pregnant.
Santi's parents propose abortion.
Santi approaches her at which point she has starts ducking him.

She didn't started ducking him. Yes, she was angry in the flashback, but you forgot a significant detail. There's a photo Melissa showed MC where Santiago, Emily, AND Melissa are on it. This photo couldn't have made before the beach outfall. Melissa didn't knew him before that beach day. So there was a time where Santi and Emily were on good terms after the abortion talk.

 

[byaaahh]

She didn't started ducking him. Yes, she was angry in the flashback, but you forgot a significant detail. There's a photo Melissa showed MC where Santiago, Emily, AND Melissa are on it. This photo couldn't have made before the beach outfall. Melissa didn't knew him before that beach day. So there was a time where Santi and Emily were on good terms after the abortion talk.

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Emily had been ducking his calls and he had to ask around to find out she was at the beach, where she proceeded to storm off. Also, Melissa first met Santi at the club. It's possible there is a larger gap between Emily telling Santi she's pregnant and his parents suggesting an abortion than we are led to believe... or it's an oversight on Nyx's part.

 

[MilesEdgeworth]

Im just realizing that MC's girls are so bony that Layla would be considered the fat one

 

[Kaskaze]

Layla, you've got me on my knees.
Layla, I'm begging, darling please.
Layla, darling won't you ease my worried mind.​

You undoubtedly have good taste.


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First I wanted to be a dick and throw Tori at you, but I won't do that . In my opinion, there is no better layla photo than this one And that facial expression is irreplaceable

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[blackarts989]

I am enjoying the VN but it keeps pulling me out of the story. It definitely feels like the creator wants to make different characters but may not know what that means for each one.
Milfs look too much like kids and dress like them. son looks older than his mother. Makes them seem generic. the younger ones also look too similar. milfs need more work to separate them from the younger characters, at least visually. while i get the goal is to have attractive older women, adding some indicators of age, details, and maturity in dress fleshes this out more. different ideas of "sexy". explore more body types. there are plenty of mature women who are very gorgeous for references. overall characters need more diversity and detail. these generic yoga moms are a bit tired, along with the repetitive young girl who loves shopping and bathing suits. there does seem to be some good sincerity building here, but if you cant connect with the audience they wont care about your characters. they need a huge dose of realism brought to their behaviors and bios to give them depth and make each unique beyond her hairstyle. I understand the male fantasy idea, but the biggest issue is most characters look and feel a bit generic. take more time with your models. they should offer different fantasies with different people. Daz offers truckloads of stuff to distinguish them more.

 

[Jarulf]

I am enjoying the VN but it keeps pulling me out of the story. It definitely feels like the creator wants to make different characters but may not know what that means for each one.
Milfs look too much like kids and dress like them. son looks older than his mother. Makes them seem generic. the younger ones also look too similar. milfs need more work to separate them from the younger characters, at least visually. while i get the goal is to have attractive older women, adding some indicators of age, details, and maturity in dress fleshes this out more. different ideas of "sexy". explore more body types. there are plenty of mature women who are very gorgeous for references. overall characters need more diversity and detail. these generic yoga moms are a bit tired, along with the repetitive young girl who loves shopping and bathing suits. there does seem to be some good sincerity building here, but if you cant connect with the audience they wont care about your characters. they need a huge dose of realism brought to their behaviors and bios to give them depth and make each unique beyond her hairstyle. I understand the male fantasy idea, but the biggest issue is most characters look and feel a bit generic. take more time with your models. they should offer different fantasies with different people. Daz offers truckloads of stuff to distinguish them more.

I don't think the developer, NYX is active here on f95 so she probably won't see your comments. I think you'd have a better chance of that on her Discord channel or directly on Patreon.

 

[jadepaladin]

I am enjoying the VN but it keeps pulling me out of the story. It definitely feels like the creator wants to make different characters but may not know what that means for each one.
Milfs look too much like kids and dress like them. son looks older than his mother. Makes them seem generic. the younger ones also look too similar. milfs need more work to separate them from the younger characters, at least visually. while i get the goal is to have attractive older women, adding some indicators of age, details, and maturity in dress fleshes this out more. different ideas of "sexy". explore more body types. there are plenty of mature women who are very gorgeous for references. overall characters need more diversity and detail. these generic yoga moms are a bit tired, along with the repetitive young girl who loves shopping and bathing suits. there does seem to be some good sincerity building here, but if you cant connect with the audience they wont care about your characters. they need a huge dose of realism brought to their behaviors and bios to give them depth and make each unique beyond her hairstyle. I understand the male fantasy idea, but the biggest issue is most characters look and feel a bit generic. take more time with your models. they should offer different fantasies with different people. Daz offers truckloads of stuff to distinguish them more.

We're 14 updates in with the earlier chapters being remade and the next update remaking some of the script. Nyx isn't going to go back and work on existing characters' looks unless something drastic happens (like a loss of files). She's also not here so unlikely to receive your feedback.

 

[MiltonPowers]

We're 14 updates in with the earlier chapters being remade and the next update remaking some of the script. Nyx isn't going to go back and work on existing characters' looks unless something drastic happens (like a loss of files). She's also not here so unlikely to receive your feedback.

We're gonna need a lot of popcorn for this thread if Nyx decides to go back and remake some of the MILFs.

 

[minibaer12]

We're gonna need a lot of popcorn for this thread if Nyx decides to go back and remake some of the MILFs.

I'm ready!