VN Ren'Py Intertwined [v0.14.1] [Nyx]

[MrD812]

Yup, I hope the story does not take that kind of turn, as while there was quite a lot of drama (with the moving, Ethan, step-dad, etc) this would escalate everything. And it could go into the gangster/mafia kind of stuff, which I personally do not like that much, especially if it is abrupt.

Dunno about the Gangster/Mafia part.
Bad is just bad, not far off from Summer Scent or what i've been told about Acting Lessons.

 

[LSC82]

The least fucked up scenario that could have happened is she got drunk/roofied, ran away, and then passed out.

Indeed, this would be the "good ending" to this mystery.

Shows the kind of fucked up territory we are stepping in to.

 

[MrD812]

The least fucked up scenario that could have happened is she got drunk/roofied, ran away, and then passed out.

Another possible non-fucked situation could be that Zach manages to rub 2 braincells together and realize Ethan is trying to rape her. He could have helped her escape or something. That's a redemption arc that would lead to a mixed response lol.

Um, cannot see someone trying to stuff them self in trash bags and try bury them self but, Ya have a few points there.

 

[Shouki]

Dunno about the Gangster/Mafia part.
Bad is just bad, not far off from Summer Scent or what i've been told about Acting Lessons.

I meant it in the hypothetical way, that if they can get away with the blackmail and escort, and even this... That could lead to those type of story elements.

For Acting Lessons, I honestly loved it, but yeah, the ending was... shocking, to say the least.

 

[Shouki]

The least fucked up scenario that could have happened is she got drunk/roofied, ran away, and then passed out.

Another possible non-fucked situation could be that Zach manages to rub 2 braincells together and realize Ethan is trying to rape her. He could have helped her escape or something. That's a redemption arc that would lead to a mixed response lol.

I would honestly love it if it would be one of these 2 options.

But sadly, if there were no accidental mistakes with placements on the render, I doubt it.

 

[MrD812]

I meant it in the hypothetical way, that if they can get away with the blackmail and escort, and even this... That could lead to those type of story elements.

For Acting Lessons, I honestly loved it, but yeah, the ending was... shocking, to say the least.

Sad, it's not far fetched of what ill-willed people do in taking advantage within that industry.

 

[Nurikabe]

Fuck Zac, he was always a boat anchor trying to bring you down or get you busted for spying in showers, he’s luckyhe got that cheap shot in cause nextday at school I’m going Mike Tyson on his ass and taking his phone (which we should have taken Ethan’s too) I’m sure there’s a Eryn getting raped video on their by Zac and ethan.
Tell the hot principal everything Ethan has done to Eryn and how Zac is helping him with the blackmail sex tape & she will get the police involved.

I would've liked to have seen Valeria drop kick Zach onto the ground!

 

[MrD812]

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I would've liked to have seen Valeria drop kick Zach onto the ground!

100%+

Zach was trying to convince Val of his intent yet, he couldn't bearly contain himself with Erynn infront of everyone at the school.
Couldn't keep his lips offa Erynn, was Jelous Erynn was kissing the MC, ect ect ect... He's been obsessing over Erynn Online!
It all adds up, he cannot control himself, it's all there.

 

[Trojaner]

I would've liked to have seen Valeria drop kick Zach onto the ground!

Would be boring and exactly the way the other idiots are doing. More powerfull is to exclude him from all and everything. Just hope that Nyx won't force us to be ever friends with him again. This sort of People can never be real friends. Real friendships are Peops like Nathan/John.

 

[Nurikabe]

Whats wrong in that she doesnt come in incest tag and we got sexual dream scene with her

No, I get ya. I think many of us would enjoy some great Melissa sexy time. But it seems to me that the only side women that can be romanced/fucked are those who don't play directly into the plot. Having sex with Melissa, Emily, or any of the main characters would most certainly alter the plot dramatically.

The romantic lesson in this story is to choose a single woman to love and stick with her.

 

[VICTORIA8]

Does he really have her sextape or he just bluffing?

I think from start of the chapter, Ethan is always a manipulator.first he manipulated mc,again he tried to manipulate Erynn about alexi and now he showed mc the sextape.he is again trying to manipulate mc about erynn.
After mc saw the tape, he hoped tape was not original.this is not a big thing for ethan to show duplicate sextape to mc for the purpose of manipulation.

 

[Ursus4321]

I haven't played this update yet, but from what I'm reading it's possible that something bad happened to Erynn. Could it be that instead of being dead, what happened is that Ethan's gang raped her as revenge for wanting to leave him? I hope she's not dead and this hasn't happened

 

[MrD812]

I think from start of the chapter, Ethan is always a manipulator.first he manipulated mc,again he tried to manipulate Erynn about alexi and now he showed mc the sextape.he is again trying to manipulate mc about erynn.
After mc saw the tape, he hoped tape was not original.this is not a big thing for ethan to show duplicate sextape to mc for the purpose of manipulation.

The ladies and i have often wondered what really happen with Zane and where is he now,
Lots of things do not add up well at all.

Grateful dalli_x isn't here to deal with all this.
Would have ALOT to share, to say the VERY Least!

 

[SolarEclipsed]

He certainly played Zach, but playing a fiddle takes real effort. This was more like playing a triangle.

If that's all it takes, it's hard to see how Zach's relationship with the MC lasted this long in the first place.

The idium is played like a fiddle though.

5 years apart is probably why. Ethan has 5 years to manipulate Zach and everyone else.

 

[MrD812]

I haven't played this update yet, but from what I'm reading it's possible that something bad happened to Erynn. Could it be that instead of being dead, what happened is that Ethan's gang raped her as revenge for wanting to leave him? I hope she's not dead and this hasn't happened

Well it's not something i would recommend for the light-hearted.
It's just sad, very sad only.

 

[MrD812]

The romantic lesson in this story is to choose a single woman to love and stick with her.

This is what i do starting any VN.
Find the first LI(Erynn in this VN), play loyal all the way through to that one.

I get it, i'm an odd-duck but it's what i do all the time.
Even at the expense of missing out on alot of content.

 

[Nurikabe]

Doesn't make a whole lot of sense, Gabi has been the spanish teacher for a while, since before the MC moved into town, and Valeria just moved in.
Maybe she lived with her father or something but not a whole lot here.

Gabi also drives to school alone, doesn't take her "daughter" with her, nor acknowledges her on the bus.
The only thing we got is vaguely latino names.

If you look through the story again, Valeria and Gabi always appear together.

 

[MrD812]

If you look through the story again, Valeria and Gabi always appear together.

Could be mistaken, would have to go replay to confirm.
Think the two are related somehow.

 

[VICTORIA8]

I think without the help of zane,it is impossible to make tape.i think zane is helping ethan or ethan setup zane to get tape.

 

[CamaroFan432]

So played up to a point. I liked the story up to that point, but I had to stop. I was too much drama for me and the fact that I have to push every girl away until there is only one or none, isn't my cup. I'm playing these games to have a good time away from real life and not to have a real life simulator. I didn't reach the latest update, but reading the comments, the drama gets worse. I liked almost all girls (I couldn't stand the bitches Tori and Julia). The renders a quite good, sadly the story not anymore, at least in my opinion. I wish everyone, who still likes this game, much fun and the dev good luck, but I need to take my leave, for my own sake (and health).