Jah-Ith-Ber
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Nikki is almost 100% pregnant. A sexually active woman throwing up is like Chekovs gun.
I wish we could've gotten the beach scene without being on the Alexis secret path. If Erryn is still interested in the MC it makes just as much sense for her to invite him for herself as for her to invite him to hook up with Lexi. Less branching would've made the story easier to write also.
I hope if you are the "alexis dated" path you will be able to become friends with her. It will be hard because they were lovers first as opposed to Layla where they were friends first so when they broke up it wasn't that hard to just go back to being friends but it sucks that if you break up with Alexis she drops off the game completely.
I love how awkward MC is around Adrianna. One of the hottest MILF's in any VN doesn't have the ugly bolt-on tits that they usually do. Also really like the whole family dynamic between all of them.
Layla losing her virginity was well done. Little awkward, painful, and she didn't orgasm
Poor Alexis doesn't realize she's surrounded by sharks! Now she has Valeria, Erryn and Iris knowingly trying to steal her boyfriend (not to mention Nikki/Cara who MC is two-timing).
I wish we could've gotten the beach scene without being on the Alexis secret path. If Erryn is still interested in the MC it makes just as much sense for her to invite him for herself as for her to invite him to hook up with Lexi. Less branching would've made the story easier to write also.
I hope if you are the "alexis dated" path you will be able to become friends with her. It will be hard because they were lovers first as opposed to Layla where they were friends first so when they broke up it wasn't that hard to just go back to being friends but it sucks that if you break up with Alexis she drops off the game completely.
I love how awkward MC is around Adrianna. One of the hottest MILF's in any VN doesn't have the ugly bolt-on tits that they usually do. Also really like the whole family dynamic between all of them.
Layla losing her virginity was well done. Little awkward, painful, and she didn't orgasm
Poor Alexis doesn't realize she's surrounded by sharks! Now she has Valeria, Erryn and Iris knowingly trying to steal her boyfriend (not to mention Nikki/Cara who MC is two-timing).