VN Ren'Py Intertwined [v0.14.1] [Nyx]

[nyrek]

The first "almost" was mentioned once when she goes pick him up and take him to school, she says she's sorry for leading him on.
After that it doesn't come up again...
There's actually a second almost that's brutally cut by the MCs mom... and it was brought up in this episode.

Let's see what happens from here, is Nyx gonna hit the brakes again? It seemed like she was finally getting comfy about it, but you can never trust Nyx not to throw a curve ball...
Also the crappy BS interruptions always happen on her path(Layla-Elena got one too, but Erynn is queen of getting cut right when things are picking up).

my bad
but I'd say they still act pretty uncommon for two people who have been in love with each other for their entire lives and have just almost had sex. they mention it once and then carry on as if nothing happened, just keep on acting like they're friends. just... no.
it's not like she can't write a normal slow burn. layla's was done really well
the erynn one is just horrible

 

[chuck42]

He probably just masturbated so many times in the shower, so he can't even get it up anyway...

i sense an attempt to shame in that comment. hes just washing it........fast.....really.... really fast. get your mind out of the gutter! haha

 

[chuck42]

my bad
but I'd say they still act pretty uncommon for two people who have been in love with each other for their entire lives and have just almost had sex. they mention it once and then carry on as if nothing happened, just keep on acting like they're friends. just... no.
it's not like she can't write a normal slow burn. layla's was done really well
the erynn one is just horrible

and how does that convo go?

erynn: im sorry i blue balled you again.
mc: dont worry, im a masochist.

hmm, no thats not right, lets give it another go

erynn: i know ive got you going a few times, but when you get me turned on i think about making a sex tape with ethan, and it freaks me out.
mc: .......really erynn? ethan?!......get out!

nope, thats not going to work either. i'll have to get back to you on this 1
lol jk, im just playing

 

[chuck42]

ok, 1 more and then im done.

erynn: hey, about last night, im really sorry, but you know im struggling with what ethan did. it wont happen again. can you forgive me?
mc: of course i can erynn. just keep in mind that your mom eye bangs me every time i come over. so, uh..... dont let it happen again.

 

[LSC82]

my bad
but I'd say they still act pretty uncommon for two people who have been in love with each other for their entire lives and have just almost had sex. they mention it once and then carry on as if nothing happened, just keep on acting like they're friends. just... no.
it's not like she can't write a normal slow burn. layla's was done really well
the erynn one is just horrible

No, i agree, the Erynn story gets contrived and bogged down not only because of Erynn and her issues but because we are never given the option to go all in, we don't get the choice to chase her, really go after her.

In addition to not 1 but 2 "almost" scenes (which are referenced, as i said, but the MCs reaction is "it's ok" and nothing comes of it), bad interruptions by the evil cockblocking mom, there's also a "why aren't you going for it?" in chapter 10... the girl is sleeping in your bed, talking about the time you touched her boobs(remembering it fondly i might add) in your youth, you start kissing and... go to sleep.
There's no human male that acts this way.

Erynn is written as someone who needs to feel safe and loved, yet you can't say anything meaningful to her.
That's what frustrates me the most, this is a girl that i know has trust issues... but i'm not given the option to try and reassure her.
Well, it did look like she was finally getting comfy towards the end, so fingers crossed it doesn't revert to acting like "good buddies".

 

[valbitterb]

chuck69

 

[cxx]

Fuck all the time ends with nikki breaking up on Airport

then her path is different than cara's who was still lovey duey after leaving back to home. so do her solopath.

 

[RohMadden]

I finally played the update and I feel that Nyx is looking for you to cheat Lexis at any cost because if you still don't like her and yes Iris or Erynn you have to be in Lexis's branch.

So if anyone who likes Iris you have to screw Lexis to be with her and the truth is like look for trouble without need.

 

[Acsuka]

I finally played the update and I feel that Nyx is looking for you to cheat Lexis at any cost because if you still don't like her and yes Iris or Erynn you have to be in Lexis's branch.

So if anyone who likes Iris you have to screw Lexis to be with her and the truth is like look for trouble without need.

That's exactly how it is, and it's intentionally designed like that... That's why this game is called, because every character is connected to someone... If each character had an individual route, then the story would be less exciting... Because it's not a harem game , so if you like more than one character, you have to decide who to choose...Since you like Iris, you can unfortunately only reach her in two routes, but even then another girl is in the foreground (Alex's route and Layla in Alex's secret route). Erynn has her own route, but then there will be little game content... You have to make the decision...

 

[Elduriel]

That's exactly how it is, and it's intentionally designed like that... That's why this game is called, because every character is connected to someone... If each character had an individual route, then the story would be less exciting... Because it's not a harem game , so if you like more than one character, you have to decide who to choose...Since you like Iris, you can unfortunately only reach her in two routes, but even then another girl is in the foreground (Alex's route and Layla in Alex's secret route). Erynn has her own route, but then there will be little game content... You have to make the decision...

I personally refuse to be a cheating asshole, so I have lots of saves for solo paths, sue me. If I miss a scene or two that's fine by me Also no Tori, she is just... no.

 

[Deleted member 207916]

Well, there are some things we could think about:

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Yeah, yeah, I know, I'm fangirling, but I really really love the game and how the dev trolls us, or don't she?

You know one time, while Nyx was active on this forum, Nyx and i chated and she did mentioned Val dying tragically. Back then i didn't know whether to take it as a joke or serious.

 

[Acsuka]

I personally refuse to be a cheating asshole, so I have lots of saves for solo paths, sue me. If I miss a scene or two that's fine by me Also no Tori, she is just... no.

Well, I'm doing exactly the same thing, so I don't really understand why you're pointing these words at me... I just wrote to the commenter before me what options he has... I have almost two pages of saves on different routes... And I don't have Tori in any of them.. .That's why anyone can sue me...

 

[cxx]

Also no Tori, she is just... no.

no sha'carri?

 

[Deleted member 207916]

I personally refuse to be a cheating asshole, so I have lots of saves for solo paths, sue me. If I miss a scene or two that's fine by me Also no Tori, she is just... no.

About Tori, i think majority of the players are avoiding her and with good reason. Her life choices. Act like a hooker, you'll be treated as one. She's on the same level as Julia from where Nikki and Cara are.

Same as me, multiple saves for single girl. Nothing to be ashamed of and no one is judging. You play however you want.

 

[hakuna-matata]

I personally refuse to be a cheating asshole, so I have lots of saves for solo paths, sue me. If I miss a scene or two that's fine by me Also no Tori, she is just... no.

I'm making the most scumbag possible saves.

 

[Elduriel]

I'm making the most scumbag possible saves.

well that's also an option, good luck

 

[Elduriel]

no sha'carri?

no real content with her anyway... wouldn't be opposed but she is introduced way too late, you could be on any path really waiting for something to happen with her, just not worth it... it's worse than the Val path

 

[chuck42]

About Tori, i think majority of the players are avoiding her and with good reason. Her life choices. Act like a hooker, you'll be treated as one. She's on the same level as Julia from where Nikki and Cara are.

Same as me, multiple saves for single girl. Nothing to be ashamed of and no one is judging. You play however you want.

"act like a hooker, you'll be treated as one" how dare you! i mean, im going to hit it, but dont expect me to pay!

 

[LSC82]

I'm making the most scumbag possible saves.

Mah man!!!!
The war between people who have 500 saves each with 1 different love interest and the people who just want to fuck around and watch the world burn can get more heated than the "my waifu is better than your waifu" wars lol.

 

[misfolk]

It's like spinning plates, it's not fun to spin just one. I'm just sad that Gabi and Elena seem to be mutually exclusive.