VN Ren'Py Intertwined [v0.14.1] [Nyx]

[LSC82]

id be okay with a redemption Zach arc and even play it if it means he gets killed

That's good, Ethan decides to take revenge and shoots at the MC... Zach protects the MC from the bullet with his body.
I'd put naked pictures of Gabi, Val, Layla and Erynn in his pocket so he can jerk off in hell.

 

[HiP1]

She wouldn't even need to remove the final scene since it takes place an undisclosed amount of time into their relationship, just drop a "Happy Birthday" and use the slightly aged MC model.

The one that happens right after they first met... that's tough.

The whole thing with Andres stinks, i wonder if he will come back into the game and get a better treatment.
The next update we are going to Alvarado/Riverside, running into him becomes a possibility.


True, it doesn't really move the needle for me personally... it's not like the sex scene between a 16 and 18 year olds damaged my fragile mind... actually i didn't even think about it, because i was paying attention to the girl.

The only reason i worry is because of the way she's fumbling to correct this oversight she might get her funding cut and end this project.



I think the most popular theory is that Navarro isn't their biological father.
Santiago is the acting father to both girls, "Mr Monroe" (whomever the hell he is) is their bio dad and completely absent, probably dead(i assume if the girls still had contact with their father they wouldn't call Santiago "dad" so liberally).
If true, it's also a similar situation to the Riverside sisters.

I'm not positive on this but... people here have said that Patreon treats "step" just the same as biological siblings, does this mean we will need to split Santiago and Adriana?
Here comes his likely affair with Gabi, if we can show Adriana that her husband has been cheating then the coast is clear.

For the John dating Emily blocks Erynn/Iris... in theory yes, but it's too far away for me to worry about it.

And fuck Zach, no "Red Head Redemption" for me.

Nyx can't just replace the model, she would have to render the whole scene again.

if Navarro is the current husband of the household, then they should be called the Navarro family, or Moore family. but when they went to our restaurant, they were referenced as the Monroes. that gave me a doubt as to who the current husband is. Also, if you are Lexi's boyfriend, your name should be known to the husband in the current update too, especially after what you did to his wife, and Navarro doesn't seem to know MC like that. I'm thinking, there is a chance that Ziko, the legendary player is also named "Santiago"

 

[HiP1]

bad theory :
Ethan is your brother and your father is the president of the modeling company

 

[Raziel_8]

MC left with Andres. he had a very rebellious behavior, and wanted to leave at all cost, even at the cost of abandoning his mother that only tried to take care of him and fix things with Erynn. Andres took the opportunity, it added to his control over her and MC. it was against her will, even if they "decided" that it was "better" that way at the time.

Yeah well, ever dealt with 13y old little shits ? That's not unusual behavior and she didn't exactly try to keep the MC around after he was moody for a couple of weeks. We don't even see if Andres is involved and Emily said it herself, that she thankfull for him being a good father all those years...

Also MC blamed Andres for cheating on Emily, not the other way arround.

just when he found out his father is not his real father, he should have immediately harassed his mom to get real info on his real father.

Why ? Why should i give a single fuck about the bio dad ?
The guy which never was there or had any contact, at least i would have no interest in meeting him, never would accept that guy as father. For better or worse Andres is the real father, the one which actually was a father all those years.

 

[LSC82]

Nyx can't just replace the model, she would have to render the whole scene again.

if Navarro is the current husband of the household, then they should be called the Navarro family, or Moore family. but when they went to our restaurant, they were referenced as the Monroes. that gave me a doubt as to who the current husband is. Also, if you are Lexi's boyfriend, your name should be known to the husband in the current update too, especially after what you did to his wife, and Navarro doesn't seem to know MC like that. I'm thinking, there is a chance that Ziko, the legendary player is also named "Santiago"

I agree, referring to them as the Monroe family when neither of the parents is called Monroe is very weird.

It seems like Navarro hasn't put 2 and 2 together that this guy sitting beside him is the Alexis/Layla's boyfriend.
Nor that he is Emily's(and his) son.

The only thing he recognizes is that the MC is the runner he met.

He knows Alexis has a boyfriend/Layla has a thing with some boy... but it doesn't seem like he knows the name, where he goes to school... Bad parenting.

bad theory :
Ethan is your brother and your father is the president of the modeling company

Yeah that would be good lol.
But i think this ship has sailed.

 

[Dessolos]

bad theory :
Ethan is your brother

Not gonna lie Ive thought this part a few times myself as i'm not sure how Ethan is going to be "Intertwined"

 

[HiP1]

Yeah well, ever dealt with 13y old little shits ? That's not unusual behavior and she didn't exactly try to keep the MC around after he was moody for a couple of weeks. We don't even see if Andres is involved and Emily said it herself, that she thankfull for him being a good father all those years...

Also MC blamed Andres for cheating on Emily, not the other way arround.

Why ? Why should i give a single fuck about the bio dad ?
The guy which never was there or had any contact, at least i would have no interest in meeting him, never would accept that guy as father. For better or worse Andres is the real father, the one which actually was a father all those years.

yeah I have, and they were nowhere near as bad as MC Emily had to deal with MC and her failing marriage at the same time though.

Andres was jealous and accused Emily of cheating with her ex, especially because he didn't want Santiago to cuck him after he cuck Santiago... and Andres told MC that his mother cheated for years. so when MC came back, he was still convinced that was the truth. But when MC found out Andres was cheating on his current fiance, MC's opinion flipped and now he believe Andres was the cheater and his mother is innocent. that's what I meant.

 

[HiP1]

if Alexis and MC could be related, then Lakeyn too...

 

[valbitterb]

Secondly, I want a race (wink-wink ( ͡° ͜ʖ ͡°)) against the Sha'something girl. She is faster and stronger than the other girls

Me too. I'd love me some Sha'Carri Evans.

Repost:

Fuck that. I'll play anyway. If they don't like it, the nurses had better be LIs and I'll be a manwhore.

I think that's a great idea for an AVN set in a nursing home. One of those, 18 year old teenager's brain in an old man's body with corruption.

That's good, Ethan decides to take revenge and shoots at the MC... Zach protects the MC from the bullet with his body.
I'd put naked pictures of Gabi, Val, Layla and Erynn in his pocket so he can jerk off in hell.

Man, that is ... COLD-BLOODED. I LIKE IT!

 

[Maviarab]

You know, Nyx could just remove the sex scene with MC/Iris in the flashback and she wouldn't need to rewrite all that just that it will somehow fit, with a lot of fantasy...

Would have taken 30 seconds, one line of dialogue and been done and dusted, but nope...

if Alexis and MC could be related, then Lakeyn too...

 

[Maviarab]

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[cxx]

You know, Nyx could just remove the sex scene with MC/Iris in the flashback and she wouldn't need to rewrite all that just that it will somehow fit, with a lot of fantasy...

not fucking gonna happen.

what's the current theory about Alexis and Layla's family ?
their last name is Monroe, but their mom's name is Moore.
Does Lexi and Layla have the same dad ?

maybe mom kept her old name and layla is from current marriage and lexi from prev (my 5 cents) and restaurant reservation was made by current hubby so they are called as monroes.

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yea reported him few times too.

 

[Tremonia]

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This mofu spams the whole board with that shit. The whole account belongs in trash bin.

 

[cxx]

This mofu spams the whole board with that shit. The whole account belongs in trash bin.

hey!!! it's a good bot but it's master is spammer.

 

[Tremonia]

hey!!! it's a good bot but it's master is spammer.

Looks more like a copy & paste spam.

 

[cxx]

Looks more like a copy & paste spam.

cause it was simple bot.

 

[Adhdclassic]

I hope Gabi husband and the lexi and Layla father aren't the same.

 

[cxx]

I hope Gabi husband and the lexi and Layla father aren't the same.

well they aren't but that doesn't mean that nyx won't tease players about them being 1 and same.

 

[xapican]

Gabi si MC Aunt or Cousin, and Santiago is her Uncle or Big brother, there has to be a conection, I'm prone more to Uncle, as brother from Gabis either Mom or Dad.
(clasical TN plot twist)

 

[ReallyNotTimmy]

Mighty easy fix to the whole underage-nooky probem:

• The MC wasn’t held back a year; he started late. California lets you do that; if the parents and teachers figure a child isn’t emotionally mature enough for kindergarten, they put em in pre-K and have em start kindergarten at age 6. Yeah you’ll be older than average for the rest of your time in school, but if you wanna graduate with all the 18-year-olds, nobody’s stopping you from taking the GED exam. Which you can take at any age, which is why 11-year-olds can graduate and go to college if they’re bright enough.
• So Zack still knew him before. Obviously.
• Oh, and he’s a really late bloomer. Didn’t even get pubes till 17.
• Iris didn’t pop his cherry two years ago; it was a few months ago, the relationship ended before he moved, and thereafter he started plowing Cara or Nikki or no one. Yeah they said they were in love, but they’re kids and don’t know shit.
• Yeah, Nyx has stated the MC fucked a few girls between Iris and Cara/Nikki (and not just Lakelyn), but she can either remove that, or explain that after he and Iris ended things, he was so heartbroken he got really drunk at a college party, wandered into an unexpected orgy in the basement, a few girls rode him, and that’s why he’s been vague about his body count—even he’s not entirely sure.
• Erynn, Lexi, and Ethan can be another year older too. Erynn and Lexi took a gap year and travelled Europe together, or did an AmeriCorps one-year program, or worked to get college money, or something.

It’d take a bunch of minor edits, but wouldn’t require any re-rendering, and I’m pretty sure y’all would enjoy the hell out of watching that orgy scene.