VN Ren'Py Intertwined [v0.14.1] [Nyx]

[LSC82]

This MC does drive me crazy sometimes, what do you mean nothing?! "I like you too, alot." It's really not hard. I wish that we were given options as the player at times like this.

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This MFer is lucky he's good looking...

Alright, I'm finally all caught up. I played the Erryn path and could see what people were discussing. However, I think everything is implied in their relationship. It probably will be a problem later on down the line, but for now, it works. They're clearly boyfriend and girlfriend, even if they haven't said it yet. It's likely why Erryn doesn't acknowledge it; to her, it's like, duh. This became apparent to me during the mutual masturbation scene when she just does it as soon as he brings it up without otherwise acknowledging the request.
That ending scene makes a lot more sense now. It's not about the danger to her father; it's about leveraging the situation to force MC back to Alvarado, even if he doesn't realize that more than the MC is stopping her from being blackmailed into banging him.

Off-topic: when he was talking about playing doctor with Erryn, and she said they didn't, there was only one other little girl that we know of that he knew when he was that age. Did he play doctor with

Even if it isn't official, it's clearly far along enough that you can't fool around with other chicks and get away with "we never established exclusivity", Erynn won't take that.
Even then she still plays dumb when her mom teases her and is afraid of putting it into words.

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This is the part that frustrates me, why can she go 80% of the way... but not 100%? Both in commitment and sexually(they are one and the same for her, when one comes the other will).
And what will it take to give her the confidence? Nyx is probably waiting for some big event to push her... instead of simply the next date.

It could be Ethan related, it could be finding her family, it could be Zane giving his blessing...

On Zane i wonder if she'll bring up meeting with him, Nyx always wants us to play honest and open... so she should mention having a conversation with her old BF to the guy she's with, even if nothing of note happened, even if it's not official.

 

[Justaphase]

This MFer is lucky he's good looking...


Even if it isn't official, it's clearly far along enough that you can't fool around with other chicks and get away with "we never established exclusivity", Erynn won't take that.
Even then she still plays dumb when her mom teases her and is afraid of putting it into words.

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This is the part that frustrates me, why can she go 80% of the way... but not 100%? Both in commitment and sexually(they are one and the same for her, when one comes the other will).
And what will it take to give her the confidence? Nyx is probably waiting for some big event to push her... instead of simply the next date.

It could be Ethan related, it could be finding her family, it could be Zane giving his blessing...

On Zane i wonder if she'll bring up meeting with him, Nyx always wants us to play honest and open... so she should mention having a conversation with her old BF to the guy she's with, even if nothing of note happened, even if it's nopt official.

It's not going to be official until the Ethan problem is dealt with most likely. Which is frustrating to me personally, I see no reason why they can't do both. Assuming that you are boyfriend and girlfriend is all well and good but you know what they say? To assume makes an ass of u and me.
Plus it gives a scumbag MC the excuse of "well technically we weren't in a relationship so.."

The Zane thing is certain to be not a big deal to Erynn, but a massive deal in the MC's head once he sees them, most likely at school together. Especially if you are on Erynn's path.

 

[Telmasoma]

Layla is the best in my opinion erynn meh she's good friend very funny but not my favourite i hope we can deal with z soon i want punch his face badly

 

[Penfold Mole]

This MC does drive me crazy sometimes, what do you mean nothing?! "I like you too, alot." It's really not hard. I wish that we were given options as the player at times like this.

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Try to say anything remotely smart or appropriate while your brain is in the state of hypoxia because of the lack of bloodflow
Nyx clearly knows how it goes

 

[doovel]

Try to say anything remotely smart or appropriate while your brain is in the state of hypoxia because of the lack of bloodflow
Nyx clearly knows how it goes

I would believe the hypoxia in John's case, but MC is clearly average sized.

 

[valbitterb]

This MC does drive me crazy sometimes, what do you mean nothing?! "I like you too, alot." It's really not hard. I wish that we were given options as the player at times like this.

I like you too a lot would be one thing to say or something along the lines of ...

Uuhhhh, where to sign to give my soul to her?

Or

"My bounty is as boundless as the sea thy bosom,
My I love as your ass deep; the more I give to thee,
The more I have, for both are infinite."

This MFer is lucky he's good looking...

Speaking of Lucky Good looking MFers ...

This is the part that frustrates me, why can she go 80% of the way... but not 100%? Both in commitment and sexually(they are one and the same for her, when one comes the other will).
And what will it take to give her the confidence? Nyx is probably waiting for some big event to push her... instead of simply the next date.

It could be Ethan related, it could be finding her family, it could be Zane giving his blessing...

It's not going to be official until the Ethan problem is dealt with most likely. Which is frustrating to me personally, I see no reason why they can't do both. Assuming that you are boyfriend and girlfriend is all well and good but you know what they say? To assume makes an ass of u and me.
Plus it gives a scumbag MC the excuse of "well technically we weren't in a relationship so.."

If it's solving the Ethan problem, I hope we solve it in the next few updates so we can focus on the relationship development and problems for the rest of the updates.

Character wise, both could be scared of losing each other's relationship. This is the oldest and longest relationship both have had with anyone outside of Erynn-Alexis or it's Nyx not making things easy at all for the Erynn path.

On Zane i wonder if she'll bring up meeting with him, Nyx always wants us to play honest and open... so she should mention having a conversation with her old BF to the guy she's with, even if nothing of note happened, even if it's not official.

MC Internal Monologue: Why do I feel jealous? They're not even together anymore ... Why do I keep staring at him ... because he's good looking ... STOP STARING AT HIM!

I would believe the hypoxia in John's case, but MC is clearly average sized.

Spoiler: John's Case

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[ModiThorrson]

That val date was an example of pretty privelage if MC wasn't so pretty some of the stuff he did on that date would come off as creepy.

Agreed, MC on the bus and at camp was mildly charming,. The Val beach date, while fun, MC is just a horny creep, it would be one thing if they were having normal conversations while checking each other out but it was just one stare after another until the trauma dump, and then somehow it got worse lol.

 

[World of Pants]

Spoiler: John's Case

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If the NTR brigade don't like Emily and John, they are going to shit a brick when the inevitable Emily / Melissa / John threesome happens!

 

[cxx]

and there is a Nikki Secret Path on a Cara path too!

is there secret layla path too?

If the NTR brigade don't like Emily and John, they are going to shit a brick when the inevitable Emily / Melissa / John threesome happens!

that so not gonna happen.

 

[hakuna-matata]

If the NTR brigade don't like Emily and John, they are going to shit a brick when the inevitable Emily / Melissa / John threesome happens!

I hope it happens. I want to see the world burn and I want the NTR losers to die eternally. If a game consisting of fake pixels banging upsets you, you need psychiatric help.

 

[World of Pants]

that so not gonna happen.

Actually you're right, Mommy Brooke will find out about John soon, then he will find hiself dead behind a dumpster like the last person that tried to mess with Emily!

It's probably a good thing I'm not actually writing this story lol.

 

[MightbeSomeone]

It's not going to be official until the Ethan problem is dealt with most likely. Which is frustrating to me personally, I see no reason why they can't do both. Assuming that you are boyfriend and girlfriend is all well and good but you know what they say? To assume makes an ass of u and me.
Plus it gives a scumbag MC the excuse of "well technically we weren't in a relationship so.."

The Zane thing is certain to be not a big deal to Erynn, but a massive deal in the MC's head once he sees them, most likely at school together. Especially if you are on Erynn's path.

Hopefully the ethan thing is resolved soon. His story needs to be finished and then the zane stuff should be advanced

 

[cxx]

Actually you're right, Mommy Brooke will find out about John soon, then he will find hiself dead behind a dumpster like the last person that tried to mess with Emily!

It's probably a good thing I'm not actually writing this story lol.

definitely good thing.

 

[doovel]

If the NTR brigade don't like Emily and John, they are going to shit a brick when the inevitable Emily / Melissa / John threesome happens!

Spoiler: John's Case

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This is why Melissa has been single all this time, she couldn't get off on all those smaller dicks.

 

[World of Pants]

This is why Melissa has been single all this time, she couldn't get off on all those smaller dicks.

Emily: "His name is John, he has blue eyes, blonde hair, is covered in tattoos and has a 16 inch dick"
Melissa: "That's definately not my John, and I have no follow up questions"
Me: "Really though Nyx?... Really?"

 

[cooldevo]

Actually you're right, Mommy Brooke will find out about John soon, then he will find hiself dead behind a dumpster like the last person that tried to mess with Emily!

It's probably a good thing I'm not actually writing this story lol.

Naaah, no on my playthroughs. Mommy Brooke owns them all! I have a few older saves with John, but they are there just to see the content and gallery work. Too impossible to pass over on Brooke, she's just so cute and been in love for almost 2 years but never said a word.

 

[misfolk]

I hope it happens. I want to see the world burn and I want the NTR losers to die eternally. If a game consisting of fake pixels banging upsets you, you need psychiatric help.

I wonder how they can replace a 18-yo Latino horndog with a sprinter's body, hunter's eyes and a massive tattoo with their own projection in a sex scene, but are utterly incapable when it's a 40-yo Eastern European Technoviking with a wrestler's body and a massive tattoo instead.

 

[doovel]

I wonder how they can replace a 18-yo Latino horndog with a sprinter's body, hunter's eyes and a massive tattoo with their own projection in a sex scene, but are utterly incapable when it's a 40-yo Eastern European Technoviking with a wrestler's body and a massive tattoo instead.

Exactly I had the opposite reaction. Finally someone I can pretend to be!


mostly because I am much closer to John's age, than the MC's age.

 

[doovel]

Emily: "His name is John, he has blue eyes, blonde hair, is covered in tattoos and has a 16 inch dick"
Melissa: "That's definitely not my John, and I have no follow up questions"
Me: "Really though Nyx?... Really?"

Nyx really pushes the mystery, every chance she has.

 

[World of Pants]

Exactly I had the opposite reaction. Finally someone I can pretend to be!

Damn right, John is now the MC of this story, we can skim past all the pretty boy stuff!