VN Ren'Py Intertwined [v0.14.1] [Nyx]

[LSC82]

The thing is, Vader's redemption came by destroying a Galactic threat through self-sacrifice.

So unless Zach dies saving the world, any redemption would pale in comparison.

It also came after decades of helping subjugate this same galaxy... decades of violence, torture, persecution...
Despite his help he'd have to face punishment had he survived and i don't think many would hail him as saviour(other than Luke).

The worst part about this story is my speculation that Ethan probably isn't even the main bad guy. He's giving off that main henchman energy with his pathetic ness.

That scene where even his henchman had to avoid telling him how pathetic he is... was just a terminal shot to his (already low) credibility.
Maybe his dad will take the lead...
You suspect Zane right?

I've corrected a small spelling error in your post. I'm thinkin' we could give Tori that task... Jus' Sayin'

Personally i would go the Iris route.
She would take great pleasure doing that to both Ethan and Zach, i think

 

[MilesEdgeworth]

It also came after decades of helping subjugate this same galaxy... decades of violence, torture, persecution...
Despite his help he'd have to face punishment had he survived and i don't think many would hail him as saviour(other than Luke).


That scene where even his henchman had to avoid telling him how pathetic he is... was just a terminal shot to his (already low) credibility.
Maybe his dad will take the lead...
You suspect Zane right?



Personally i would go the Iris route.
She would take great pleasure doing that to both Ethan and Zach, i think

Nah, I think he's just another asshole. My current theory, without enough information, is his father. No way do I believe that he doesn't know what's going on at his company.

 

[byaaahh]

Nah, I think he's just another asshole. My current theory, without enough information, is his father. No way do I believe that he doesn't know what's going on at his company.

Doesn't his father also own the club where Ethan is pimping out the models from the agency? No way he doesn't at least know of what's going on.

 

[LSC82]

Nah, I think he's just another asshole. My current theory, without enough information, is his father. No way do I believe that he doesn't know what's going on at his company.

Like i said i can see the father taking over too, too much going on in his company for him to be oblivious...
Thinking back in the "Kyle Johnson" scene Ethan was saying how this is his big chance to prove himself, no doubt looking to score a big client and show to big bad Daddy.

 

[reb95]

Just when you think you can't hate Zach any more then you get to the end of the update not sure who I hate moe Zach for be possible the dumbest excuse for a so call friend or Ethan hope we get so kind of payback against one of them in the next update

I'd like that too, getting punched in the face and doing nothing leaves a bitter taste. At the very least, we should be able to get revenge when school starts, I'm tired of this stupid shit Zach does, the guy is a born loser and still blames others for it. He's indefensible, when he goes to Ethan for help with Val, what does he expect the guy to do? It's clear he has no character, just like Ethan.

 

[jayeddie1008]

How to spot non-Americans tell a story that take place in America? They use the metric system when talking about weight. American use lbs. No problem with, just felt like teasing. Good story so far, keep it coming.

 

[Jarulf]

They use the metric system when talking about weight. American use lbs. No problem with, just felt like teasing.

And the non-Americans among us are grateful I think there's some non American spelling going on too.

 

[ModiThorrson]

And the non-Americans among us are grateful I think there's some non American spelling going on too.

I like the ones where the 18 year old characters are going to bars in the US.

 

[ModiThorrson]

Zach leads MC directly to Ethan and his two goons, so what did he think would happen? A nice civilized conversation? I don't think anyone could be quite that ignorant.

You're making some assumptions about that scene that I see no basis for. I DID however forget that part of the ethan/zach convo in the latest update, so I'll have to reconsider my opinions.

 

[cooldevo]

You're making some assumptions about that scene that I see no basis for. I DID however forget that part of the ethan/zach convo in the latest update, so I'll have to reconsider my opinions.

You are right. Unfortunately some assumptions do need to be made, as a lot of details are skipped over.

Some parts we are made privy to, such as the conversation at the end with Ethan and Zach. MC wasn't there, but you can see Zach being sucked in further with the manipulation. Same with Ethan's plan to get back at MC if he intervened at the bar or Zach wanting Val. MC wasn't there, but it was convenient for the story.

We don't see what, or how many times, Zach and Ethan talked before the confrontation. Who sought out who? What did they agree on? Because that part isn't relevant to the author's story, it's all speculation. Perhaps Zach went to Ethan first.. he certainly seems mad the MC steals all his women, even if you are on neither Layla or Val's paths. That'd change things a lot more than Ethan approaching Zach and manipulating him due to his stupidity/ignorance but being more close/trusted to the MC.

 

[Uriel ☁]

How to spot non-Americans tell a story that take place in America? They use the metric system when talking about weight. American use lbs. No problem with, just felt like teasing. Good story so far, keep it coming.

The game is set in a high school, more than a month has passed and not a single school shooting? Totally unrealistic. Europeans this days smh my head.

 

[anonnyscouse]

The game is set in a high school, more than a month has passed and not a single school shooting? Totally unrealistic. Europeans this days smh my head.

That is Zach's endgame.

 

[DIKHammer]

That is Zach's endgame.

Its always the losers like Zach

 

[punkstars]

does anybody have version 0.12? i fucked up all my saves

 

[MiltonPowers]

does anybody have version 0.12? i fucked up all my saves

Here's a mega link to 0.21.1

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[MilesEdgeworth]

Actually, you know what I'd like to send that handbra pic that I took with Val to Zack just to fuck with that little prick

 

[jadepaladin]

Actually, you know what I'd like to send that handbra pic that I took with Val to Zack just to fuck with that little prick

Damn. Double damage. Burns Zach and burns Val since it's literally playing into one of her fears (having her intimate pics shared). Impressive.

 

[MilesEdgeworth]

Damn. Double damage. Burns Zach and burns Val since it's literally playing into one of her fears (having her intimate pics shared). Impressive.

Thats why my MC wouldn't do that, still don't stop me from fantasizing about it.

 

[PickerLewd]

Ok, of the supposed 7200 renders I have seen less than 400 on my broken path without a girlfriend .

I have fallen into almost all of Nyx's traps, so the next update will probably be the end of this path.

At least I met Nikki and Cara at the airport and they want to talk to me and have me visit them again. I haven't seen them since Cara told me to fuck off because I got into a fistfight with Andres in front of her .

 

[jadepaladin]

Ok, of the supposed 7200 renders I have seen less than 400 on my broken path without a girlfriend .

I have fallen into almost all of Nyx's traps, so the next update will probably be the end of this path.

At least I met Nikki and Cara at the airport and they want to talk to me and have me visit them again. I haven't seen them since Cara told me to fuck off because I got into a fistfight with Andres in front of her .

I need to buckle up and do the no friends playthrough. Be nice to Alexis on the plane, fuck Rachel, hook up with Alexis later on at the bar so I can have that blowout with Layla later on. Go all in on Erynn way too soon and get kicked off her route and then don't help her with Ethan, so it tanks Melissa. Not sure what to do with Gabi. I might fuck her but I don't want to go into the blackmail plot because I want Layla to fail. Do everything I can not to have a good relationship with Emily so no bike. Blowing up Layla and Alexis kills Val's route. All that would be left is Nikki/Cara, and Julia takes care of that. Definitely gonna do it to Cara though. Maybe I could fuck Tori at every chance? Then hook up with Mira in the latest episode.

Hopefully I didn't miss anything.