VN Ren'Py Intertwined [v0.14.1] [Nyx]

[Tremonia]

Could be, it would certainly give another reason for her and the MC to interact again. Seeing as their last brief interaction outside of class was awkward to say the least.

Sometimes MC is a little bit dense.

 

[Justaphase]

Sometimes MC is a little bit dense.

That's being rather generous.

 

[Craysser]

Home...not first guiy she ever been with or jumped on after a few hours. The fact she 'thought' she knew him (years ago, as a kid)...really? You're giving that a pass? lmao...jesus....yet Tori a slut for her behaviour? Rofl....oh fuck me....I just can't.

Implied means fuck all. Plain facts are all that matter. Nyx also implies a lot...very little of it ever comes to pass. And for the record, this all started with me talking about 'facts'. Not assumption, not heresay, not...'implied'...facts about Tori, that still, when challenged, no one can can disprove. Facts, as stated/shown in the story.

Like you did with me?

Not surprised at all, since it's been happening for thousands of years....I also don't have an issue with it, unlike you it would seem. Look, relations are transactional. Both parties want something from the other person and/or the relationship itself (whether they even realise or admit it). This could be anything, kids, stability, security, status, even just trust, loyalty and honesty. And you're both offering something. You're kidding yourself if you think they are not/don't and it's all about 'luuurrrve' is just being delusional (as well as not thinking it's been happening like that since the dawn of damn time).

You think Tori be interested in you if you were a 5ft balding fat ugly bastard of a 20yo? Ofc she wouldn't....neither would any of the other girls in the story either (unless he was a billionaire with it)

So like most people in the world, she want the best....pfff....cry me a river sweety. I guess we're all just sluts then aren't we?

difference is, other girls would not choose "balding fat ugly bastard of a 20yo" because that is not their type and/or they wish for something better.
Reason why i call tori a slut is because if said "balding fat ugly bastard of a 20yo" somehow wins the race she will jump on that ugly 20yo dick on a first chance she gets

 

[Tremonia]

That's being rather generous.

I'm a generous person. But to be fair MC is just a typical teenager of his age. On the edge between adulthood and childish behavior.

 

[LSC82]

Could be, it would certainly give another reason for Dani and the MC to interact again. Seeing as their last brief interaction outside of class was rather awkward to say the least.

Nyx did say that our partner for geography would be revealed in this update...
It's "uncommon" to see a brand new character coming in this late and getting much shine, but Nyx is a weird one
Is this about Dani herself? Or is she being used to give more story for Gabi?

One thing is for certain, the girl recognizes the MC even while he has a helmet on, must be from the school, the only place he rode the bike recently.

 

[Craysser]

You're kidding yourself if you think they are not/don't and it's all about 'luuurrrve' is just being delusional

who hurt you... lmao

 

[Tremonia]

Reason why i call tori a slut is because if said "balding fat ugly bastard of a 20yo" somehow wins the race she will jump on that ugly 20yo dick on a first chance she gets

No, Tori has some standards. The guy must benefit her. Mostly her "reputation" of being the top of food chain. That's how she sees herself. The guy can win all he wants. When he's ugly she won't care.

Nyx did say that our partner for geography would be revealed in this update...

Would surprise me when it's not Daniela.

 

[Justaphase]

I'm a generous person. But to be fair MC is just a typical teenager of his age. On the edge between adulthood and childish behavior.

Lucky for him he has that pretty privilege where he can get away with alot more, well aside from the main character privilege. There was really no need for their interaction to be so awkward, he sits next to her in class every day. Make up an excuse and talk to her.

Nyx did say that our partner for geography would be revealed in this update...
It's "uncommon" to see a brand new character coming in this late and getting much shine, but Nyx is a weird one
Is this about Dani herself? Or is she being used to give more story for Gabi?

One thing is for certain, the girl recognizes the MC even while he has a helmet on, must be from the school, the only place he rode the bike recently.

Not sure if I could see Nyx adding Dani as a potential love interest this late into the story. Whatever she has planned for her I hope that she doesn't take away too much time from the main girls.

 

[Tremonia]

Not sure if I could see Nyx adding Dani as a potential love interest this late into the story. Whatever she has planned for her I hope that she doesn't take away too much time from the main girls.

Just to spice up the Gabi path. MC flirting with Daniela when her jealous sister is watching and listening...

 

[Craysser]

No, Tori has some standards. The guy must benefit her. Mostly her "reputation" of being the top of food chain. That's how she sees herself. The guy can win all he wants. When he's ugly she won't care.

ill believe it when i see it

 

[Justaphase]

Just to spice up the Gabi path. MC flirting with Daniela when her jealous sister is watching and listening...

Gabi is bad enough when it comes to Layla. We could very well see Gabi go nuclear if it's her sister.

 

[LSC82]

Lucky for him he has that pretty privilege where he can get away with alot more, well aside from the main character privilege. There was really no need for their interaction to be so awkward, he sits next to her in class every day. Make up an excuse and talk to her.

That one was incredibly awkward

Not sure if I could see Nyx adding Dani as a potential love interest this late into the story. Whatever she has planned for her I hope that she doesn't take away too much time from the main girls.

Just to spice up the Gabi path. MC flirting with Daniela when her jealous sister is watching and listening...

It is super unusual to see someone come in this late, which is why i'm wondering if she's being used for something other than herself...
But you never know with Nyx, maybe we'll be banging her in the restroom while John and the guy talk

Gabi is bad enough when it comes to Layla. We could very well see Gabi go nuclear if it's her sister.

Definitely

 

[Justaphase]

Imagine all of our shock when this is actually Zach with Valeria on the back and he's like "Surprise Motherfucker!"

 

[jadepaladin]

Imagine all of our surprise when this is actually Zach with Valeria on the back and he's like "Surprise Motherfucker!"

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What a tease. The chaos that would erupt.

 

[LSC82]

Imagine all of our shock when this is actually Zach with Valeria on the back and he's like "Surprise Motherfucker!"

You just painted a horrible worst case scenario

 

[Tremonia]

ill believe it when i see it

You seem to didn't understood the character at all. Her personality is very clear. There were girls like that at every school. I don't know if boys always noticed, but just ask the girls you went to school with. They knows immediately who the Tori was in your school.

Gabi is bad enough when it comes to Layla. We could very well see Gabi go nuclear if it's her sister.

Gabi is very territorial. If she claimed MC in her mind, she'll go nuclear for sure.

It is super unusual to see someone come in this late, which is why i'm wondering if she's being used for something other than herself...

One of the reasons why I think AVN is so good. It doesn't just work through two or three plots. Every now and then, you get a little side story over one, two, or three updates.

 

[Justaphase]

Gabi is very territorial. If she claimed MC in her mind, she'll go nuclear for sure.

Gabi's path is also kinda bland without the added jealousy, last update we saw that in particular. She's a latina so needs that extra spice.

 

[LSC82]

You seem to didn't understood the character at all. Her personality is very clear. There were girls like that at every school. I don't know if boys always noticed, but just ask the girls you went to school with. They knows immediately who the Tori was in your school.

I agree, Tori only wants to be seen with high status men.
So it requires both that he's a good sprinter and that there are some chicks interested in him.
If he's pretty and a scrub, that's a no go.
If he's great athletically but no ladies want him, that's also a no.

Gabi is very territorial. If she claimed MC in her mind, she'll go nuclear for sure.

Gabi is recently divorced and got attached to the wrong guy easily... now she's a bomb ready to explode.
Despite knowing she shouldn't.

One of the reasons why I think AVN is so good. It doesn't just work through two or three plots. Every now and then, you get a little side story over one, two, or three updates.

Yes, the interwoven traps can be very interesting and add a lot of fun

Just like Nyx is doing with Melissa with Erynn and Iris-Erynn-Alexis.

Gabi's path is also kinda bland without the added jealousy, last update we saw that in particular. She's a latina so needs that extra spice.

Yes, it adds so much

 

[valbitterb]

That looks like a great bro date between John and the MC.

Thank you for sharing the previews.

Same outfit we've seen Val wearing in this last picture? Could be a coincidence, but who knows? Almost looks like her also, when zoomed in but hard to tell.

I've zoomed in. I think it's Val. She has similar eyes to Val and even though Nyx has used assets for other characters, that's definitely her style. Dani's eyes are very different from Val's and anyone else's.

I also recall that Val was also excited about the MC having his own bike when he told her about it during the beach date. We can surmise that she likes bikes and has been on one before.

It could be Valeria or... Dani, probably Val.
The girl is staring at the MC, that's for sure... would the rider be her dad?

Maybe her dad, unless it's whoever we've seen her training with at the gym and who picked her up in the park?

I agree that it's either her dad or gym guy. It looks like gym guy's body even underneath all the riding attire.

who hurt you... lmao

That's a good and fair question.


After serving my jail time for breaking this thread's rules, it's good to be back.





Thanks to LSC82 and Justaphase for being my Nathan bros and having my back during my ban and always having my back.





Thank you to brother Kaskaze for encouraging and advising me to write an appeal letter to get the punishment reduced.




Thank you to the Moderator for being understanding and merciful, and reducing my permanent ban into a temporary ban.

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[jadepaladin]

That looks like a great bro date between John and the MC.

Thank you for sharing the previews.



I've zoomed in. I think it's Val. She has similar eyes to Val and even though Nyx has used assets for other characters, that's definitely her style. Dani's eyes are very different from Val's and anyone else's.

I also recall that Val was also excited about the MC having his own bike when he told her about it during the beach date. We can surmise that she likes bikes and has been on one before.




I agree that it's either her dad or gym guy. It looks like gym guy's body even underneath all the riding attire.



That's a good and fair question.


After serving my jail time for breaking this thread's rules, it's good to be back.

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Thanks to LSC82 and Justaphase for being my Nathan bros and having my back during my ban and always having my back.

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Thank you to brother Kaskaze for encouraging and advising me to write an appeal letter to get the punishment reduced.

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Thank you to the Moderator for being understanding and merciful, and reducing my permanent ban into a temporary ban.

Thank you to Acsuka UncleFappy @4thurMorg4n Dr.TSoni and others for making my time at the fan art thread a lot of fun with the A.I. generated video posts. (You can click on my signature to check them out at the fan thread. I'll keep posting the videos at the fan thread.)

Welcome back!