VN Ren'Py Intertwined [v0.14.1] [Nyx]

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Progress Update - Episode 15

That small phone call scene I was working on and wanted to finish before I start the work on the last 2 big scenes of the first day turned into 5 scenes. Those are all scenes to bring all the different routes to the same point in the story. So while working on that 1 scene, I figured, wait, I need a scene for that too. And if I have a scene for that, I need a scene for this also and so on... But I'm done with those. Now I can finally start with one of those 2 big scenes, and I'll leave the Valeria date for last, I think. I'm not gonna say what the other scene is about, but I'm looking forward to finally working on it (That scene had been written 2.5 years ago, so it has been on my to-do list for a long time. But I had to wait until the story was further along. Even now, I still had to create room for it, especially because of the moving around scenes for the blackmail plot to fasten. That's why I needed 8 days in a week instead of 7.) And at the same time, I'm dreading working on it because of the choices that will change stuff, and I'll have to create multiple renders for the same scene.
Those 2 scenes are relationship-specific. So if you are not on any of those paths, MC has nothing to do the rest of the day. So I have a question for you. As of now, minor spoiler warning, I've sent him to the movies, and that will end the day. But would you rather have a "neutral" scene, which you will get if you aren't on one of those 2 paths and where you get a choice to continue or just go home? For example, you meet someone at the movies. Of course, it can't be just anyone. Most LI have a certain scene where you will meet them again, so I can't put those there. But there are a few characters who also have nothing going on for that time slot. For example, Tori, Darryl, Zach, and some background characters,... So, I'll leave it to you if you want an extra scene there, or just leave it as it is. Keep in mind that if you want an extra scene, that will also take time to create, because nothing has been written for that scene.
I haven't continued working on the re-coding of the episodes besides the first 3 episodes because I just didn't have the time for it. When I work on it, I want to do a whole episode in one go, and if I don't have the time to do so, I'd rather wait and move it to the back instead of halting the progress for Episode 15.
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Got to be an Erynn scene

fuck that about meeting Zach, Daryl, or Tori at the movies, however Sha'Carri would be a nice one

valbitterb said:
Who would most likely be at a movie theater among the side characters that the MC has interacted with already?

Brooke - possibly
Ximena - remote chance but I don't see a big tv, net streaming star showing up at a public theater
Gigi - might be since she doesn't have any path conflicts
Tori - a movie fan? Well, she definitely needs more nuances other than being the way she is.
Sha'Carri - is set for the relay meet
Santi - ?
Zach - highly unlikely, we'll be seeing him next time when Val gets involved or at the height of the blackmail plot finishing
Gabi - possibly too
Zane - ?
Jenna - from the modeling shoot
EDIT: Dani - some people on this thread have said she might be the biker chick in those previews
Dylan - the path begins Kaskaze
Natasha - time for revenge against Zach by having his sister blow your clay dick in the movie theater Kaskaze
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Ximena might go in disguise

Dylan!

oh what about Sha'Carri's friend who drops hints to MC
 
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LSC82 said:
Someone is into zombies :cool:
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DIKHammer said:
Got to be an Erynn scene
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I agree.

If Nyx is supposed to wrap up the Ethan blackmail plot, it seems like time wasted to devote that scene to another lady.

DIKHammer said:
fuck that about meeting Zach, Daryl, or Tori at the movies, however Sha'Carri would be a nice one
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I am really hoping Sha'Carri or Brooke make an appearance.

DIKHammer said:
Ximena might go in disguise

Dylan!

oh what about Sha'Carri's friend who drops hints to MC
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Ximena would be nice too.

Dylan would not be a surprise. I can see him liking movies.

I wish Nyx gave a name to Sha'Carri's friend.
 
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DIKHammer said:
Got to be an Erynn scene

fuck that about meeting Zach, Daryl, or Tori at the movies, however Sha'Carri would be a nice one



Ximena might go in disguise

Dylan!

oh what about Sha'Carri's friend who drops hints to MC
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Like, I’m not gay and we were joking about Dylan and Darryl, but hear me out. This could actually be a chance to have a convo with Darryl. Yeah, two dudes talking in a movie theater sounds kinda sus, but just hanging out and spending time with him could be interesting and actually develop his character. So like, some kind of early burying-the-hatchet moment could be cool. Plus, if we’re on Tori’s route, it could either make the whole relationship and the outcome of the next tournament better or worse. And honestly, just a short convo like “Hey MC, how did you improve your start?” or “Darryl, why do you place your legs like that at the start?” could give us a chance to influence both the results and the friendship with him.
 
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valbitterb said:
I would sacrifice my saves if Nyx can redo the MC's clay dick and Lexi's skin.

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Hmmm what is the most urgent thing i can improve? I know, i can make Lucas better looking.

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DIKHammer said:
Got to be an Erynn scene

fuck that about meeting Zach, Daryl, or Tori at the movies, however Sha'Carri would be a nice one



Ximena might go in disguise

Dylan!

oh what about Sha'Carri's friend who drops hints to MC
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Ximena in a trench coat, trying to come out of the movies without anyone spotting her is my favorite option.
Actors still wanting to go to the movies is a thing, it could both fun and hot :love:

Kaskaze said:
Like, I’m not gay and we were joking about Dylan and Darryl, but hear me out. This could actually be a chance to have a convo with Darryl. Yeah, two dudes talking in a movie theater sounds kinda sus, but just hanging out and spending time with him could be interesting and actually develop his character. So like, some kind of early burying-the-hatchet moment could be cool. Plus, if we’re on Tori’s route, it could either make the whole relationship and the outcome of the next tournament better or worse. And honestly, just a short convo like “Hey MC, how did you improve your start?” or “Darryl, why do you place your legs like that at the start?” could give us a chance to influence both the results and the friendship with him.
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Darryl is getting a bit of push lately, trying to make him more sympathetic, but remember that this is an optional scene, if you have a Valeria or ???? relationship, you won't see this scene...
Might as well save this for another moment, save the development time and release 15 a couple of weeks early.

If we are gonna slow down the release by 2/3 weeks or a month over an optional scene many won't see, it better be something that gets the blood pumping, not a "that was nice/alright".
That's why i say Ximena scene :love:
 
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LSC82 said:
Hmmm what is the most urgent thing i can improve? I know, i can make Lucas better looking.

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Ximena in a trench coat, trying to come out of the movies without anyone spotting her is my favorite option.
Actors still wanting to go to the movies is a thing, it could both fun and hot :love:


Darryl is getting a bit of push lately, trying to make him more sympathetic, but remember that this is an optional scene, if you have a Valeria or ???? relationship, you won't see this scene...
Might as well save this for another moment, save the development time and release 15 a couple of weeks early.

If we are gonna slow down the release by 2/3 weeks or a month over an optional scene many won't see, it better be something that gets the blood pumping, not a "that was nice/alright".
That's why i say Ximena scene :love:
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Okay you're right we saw Daryl recently
 
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Kaskaze said:
Alright, I’ll be the one to ask—when do you guys think we can expect an update?
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Justaphase said:
November or December would be my guess.
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She still hasn't completed day 1... It's end of the year or early next year.
Day 1 seems hectic, Erynn in the morning, going to MSU, hanging out with John, Val or mysterious scene... or even this random stuff... she's not fast forwarding, she's determined to fill every time slot.

Let's see how much she has left for day 2.


Kaskaze said:
Okay you're right we saw Daryl recently
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For a throwaway optional scene it's better to have something wild and exciting... not a "nice conversation".
Getting drunk with Brooke and making out.
Helping Ximena sneak out and going to her apartment/penthouse.

Heck even running into the Old Perv and ending up at a strip club :KEK:
 
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that's one of those games where characters stay in your head when you turn off the pc and go to bed.
pretty awesome. and as far as ratings go it's one of the best AVN on this site. if not of all time. I'd put it up there with Summer's gone and BADIK.



looking forward to future updates . definitely . it could have done without the "socially inept sidekick/dudebro for life" but the betrayal is an interesting spin to it. I like that,pretty unexpected.

I'd like to see bonding with Darryl.
much more engaging than an established friendship with a moron.
 
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miltonlucifer said:
that's one of those games where characters stay in your head when you turn off the pc and go to bed.
pretty awesome. and as far as ratings go it's one of the best AVN on this site. if not of all time. I'd put it up there with Summer's gone and BADIK.



looking forward to future updates . definitely . it could have done without the "socially inept sidekick/dudebro for life" but the betrayal is an interesting spin to it. I like that,pretty unexpected.
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Zach showed his true colours and what a creep he is, well before the "betrayal" he was certainly no side kick or bro.
Nyx shows us a good example of a true friend with Nathan.
 
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Justaphase said:
Zach showed his true colours and what a creep he is, well before the "betrayal" he was certainly no side kick or bro.
Nyx shows us a good example of a true friend with Nathan.
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Or Erynn's Dad. I really really like his relationship with MC. it's a healthy mentor/apprentice/surrogate dad relationship. really wholesome.
I agree with you on Nathan. too bad he doesn't have enough screentime, and I hope there will be more of him.

badarse too.
 
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miltonlucifer said:
that's one of those games where characters stay in your head when you turn off the pc and go to bed.
pretty awesome. and as far as ratings go it's one of the best AVN on this site. if not of all time. I'd put it up there with Summer's gone and BADIK.



looking forward to future updates . definitely . it could have done without the "socially inept sidekick/dudebro for life" but the betrayal is an interesting spin to it. I like that,pretty unexpected.

I'd like to see bonding with Darryl.
much more engaging than an established friendship with a moron.
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well, MC got real friend bro, its Nathan. And its true, it will be interesting relationship with Darryl, since he's not completely hostile, only jealous to MC but still reasonable.

I'll correct you here, Zack is not moron, he's Hodor. HAHAHAHA
 
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She still hasn't completed day 1... It's end of the year or early next year.
Day 1 seems hectic, Erynn in the morning, going to MSU, hanging out with John, Val or mysterious scene... or even this random stuff... she's not fast forwarding, she's determined to fill every time slot.

Let's see how much she has left for day 2.



For a throwaway optional scene it's better to have something wild and exciting... not a "nice conversation".
Getting drunk with Brooke and making out.
Helping Ximena sneak out and going to her apartment/penthouse.

Heck even running into the Old Perv and ending up at a strip club :KEK:
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Okay, I didn't know that I needed a scene with MC and Old Perv at a titty bar, but now I really do. Make it happen, Nyx! :ROFLMAO: :ROFLMAO: :ROFLMAO:
 
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Ozymandias037 said:
Okay, I didn't know that I needed a scene with MC and Old Perv at a titty bar, but now I really do. Make it happen, Nyx! :ROFLMAO: :ROFLMAO: :ROFLMAO:
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Yeah, it would be fun.
Make him a big spender, known by all the girls that work there :ROFLMAO: , VIP access.

Nyx could also make Gianna(bartender) work there in the after hours, somedays she works at Dylan's... Others she strips and gives lap dances:love:
Or the girl that makes drinks at the beach, another good one for a second job ;)
 
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