VN Ren'Py Intertwined [v0.14.1] [Nyx]

[3J1E]

That's been scrapped. That took the game where I didn't want it to go, way too dark. Same with the Lucas path. It was way too dark and would ruin a certain love interest. That's why I took it out and am rewriting it while doing the rerenders of earlier episodes. I haven't forgotten about it. You wouldn't believe how many notes I have.

Good of you to pop in, even if only temporarily! It's really interesting hearing your thoughts and different ways the game could have gone, the different what if's. Can imagine there's a lot of notes involved in keeping track of all the different variables and paths!

I'm personally glad you moved away from the much darker material. I wouldn't mind there being more consequences for cheating or being an idiot, but glad it moved away from darker corruption routes. I think the fact that so many people really hate even the toned down version of Ethan shows the game is well written. People care about the characters and don't want anything bad to happen to them. I'm not sure I'd enjoy the stress of always worrying that something really nasty might happen...

Looking forward to seeing where the story goes from here, good luck!

 

[valzy87]

Oh my God, scenes like that would definitely keep me up at night. I’d be stuck wondering over and over what really went down

You don't have to guess, I'm almost certain Lexi is capable of such an act for her best friend. Honestly, it's a good thing Nyx didn't add such scenes; it would have been painful to watch .

 

[shenlao]

The scenes are already written, it's just a matter of if I want to create the renders once the game is finished or leave it as it is. It also depends on the interest of the game or maybe people rather want a new story.

I'll give a quick example, that gives you stuff to talk about.

The Alexis-Ethan path:

Remember when Zach betrayed MC and MC was held by Ethan's goons and shown the Erynn video. Ethan mentions that when you're dating Alexis that if Alexis would give him a blowjob, he would set Erynn free and delete the video.
Then later, when MC, Alexis and Erynn are talking in Erynn's room, you have the chance to tell them about what Ethan said (the blowjob). I think at least it's in the game, I might be confusing it right now with my version.
Anyway, if you decide to tell them, later in the story, Alexis takes matters into her own hands to help Erynn. She meets up with Ethan. It won't be specified what exactly happened or what she did but later when MC is in the city, he sees Alexis and Ethan together. Ethan is handing something to Alexis. From that point on, it's up to the reader what to believe. Do you trust Alexis and let it be or do you have a certain suspicion she did something and you fight and so on...

Well i hope you make option for MC too so he can sent Ethan to Jesus, its diabolical if MC sent Alexis to do that with Ethan hahahahaha.

But i bet Alexis will do that, since i notice if we don't take Alexis path, she will sleep with someone, i remember there's scene when Alexis on the phone and at the background she's sleep with a guy in her room, i bet it was a guy who talk with Zane at the beach. So its highly possible if she blow Ethan smolpp to delete the video.

 

[Acsuka]

But i bet Alexis will do that, since i notice if we don't take Alexis path, she will sleep with someone, i remember there's scene when Alexis on the phone and at the background she's sleep with a guy in her room, i bet it was a guy who talk with Zane at the beach. So its highly possible if she blow Ethan smolpp to delete the video.

Yes, there are indeed some images in the scene, but you can't identify the figure. So what you're saying is just your subjective opinion, which just means what you want to see in this scene, and the alternative story that Nyx talked about. And you'd be the most disappointed if it wasn't a boy in the bed...

 

[LSC82]

Well i hope you make option for MC too so he can sent Ethan to Jesus, its diabolical if MC sent Alexis to do that with Ethan hahahahaha.

But i bet Alexis will do that, since i notice if we don't take Alexis path, she will sleep with someone, i remember there's scene when Alexis on the phone and at the background she's sleep with a guy in her room, i bet it was a guy who talk with Zane at the beach. So its highly possible if she blow Ethan smolpp to delete the video.

Yes, there are indeed some images in the scene, but you can't identify the figure. So what you're saying is just your subjective opinion, which just means what you want to see in this scene, and the alternative story that Nyx talked about. And you'd be the most disappointed if it wasn't a boy in the bed...

The idea of introducing something that causes doubt to the players is quite interesting, even if it would make this place a nightmare(we already saw that with Fake Erynn, despite the fact that Fake Erynn gets exposed 5s later ).
And then leave to the players to either trust their LIs or get mad.

For example the person in Alexis bed can be her coworker from the bar(or any other man) or just her cousin Lakeyin who was talking to her, maybe watching a movie in her bedroom and fell asleep.
Up to each person to figure out what they believe.

Of course here the stakes are much lower because for this phone call to happen Alexis needs to be single, and therefore we have no right to say anything if she's fucking anybody, it's just a curiosity...
In the scene Nyx explained there would be real emotional stakes.

 

[shenlao]

Yes, there are indeed some images in the scene, but you can't identify the figure. So what you're saying is just your subjective opinion, which just means what you want to see in this scene, and the alternative story that Nyx talked about. And you'd be the most disappointed if it wasn't a boy in the bed...

The idea of introducing something that causes doubt to the players is quite interesting, even if it would make this place a nightmare(we already saw that with Fake Erynn, despite the fact that Fake Erynn gets outed 5s later ).
And then leave to the players to either trust their LIs or get mad.

For example the person in Alexis bed can be her coworker from the bar(or any other man) or just her cousin Lakeyin who was talking to her, maybe watching a movie in her bedroom and fell asleep.
Up to each person to figure out what they believe.

I'll keep my imagination that "person" who with Alexis is a some dude who talked with Zane at beach, so i have my reason to floor Ethan (again) later when the scene with Alexis happens. I hope there'll be option "to get mad for a reason to cheat" too, since some my gameplays with Alexis path are "cheating" with other girls like Val or Nikki or Mira or redhead chick

 

[Vidal the king of Pervert]

Okay, this is getting ridiculous and I can't believe I have to create an account for this.

Even though due to popular believe, no I haven't been on this forum since I left, I don't even know how long it's been since. But yes, they are people here who share stuff with me and you'd be surprised if I'd tell you the names.

First of all, if it doesn't come directly from me, you can be sure that the stuff said is a lie or my words twisted in a way. If you have questions, contact me directly if you want real answers.

About the dev that wasn't allowed to use screenshots of Intertwined. Not true. I actually allowed it. I said no at first because I didn't know the dev and the game so I asked that person to introduce themself first so I can check out what kind of game they are creating. Because I don't want Intertwined or myself associated with something I don't agree with. After that I asked which pictures they want to use so I can see if it's okay. They ignored me from that point on and didn't contact me again.

They are other devs and games which asked to use screenshots from Intertwined and I allowed it every time!

Next topic:

"Didn't even have the decency to message me and ask me to stop posting them or remove them."

I knew for some time that you were posting the preview pictures. But the person "ratting" you out mentioned the first time that you said it was a one time thing because you liked the pictures of Erynn and you'd normally don't do that. So I let it slide. Then I heard that you kept on doing it. Again, I let it slide, giving you another chance. But then again and again... At the end, I think I gave you plenty of chances and you didn't honour your word!
So, right back at you. You didn't even have the decency of apologising to something I asked not to do because it's not fair towards the supporters who pay for it.

There are probably lots of other things but I don't want to read through hundreds of pages.

If you have questions, ask them now because I will delete this account again.

Hi I have a question. I've been saving up my updates for a very, very long time

And when I say a long time, I mean a very long time, I'm waiting for the update where I can continue my Elena
only playthrough/monogamy route

It's been so long since I played it or saw her

I would like to know how much longer I have to wait before I can continue her solo route

Thank you once again

 

[Acsuka]

The idea of introducing something that causes doubt to the players is quite interesting, even if it would make this place a nightmare(we already saw that with Fake Erynn, despite the fact that Fake Erynn gets exposed 5s later ).
And then leave to the players to either trust their LIs or get mad.

For example the person in Alexis bed can be her coworker from the bar(or any other man) or just her cousin Lakeyin who was talking to her, maybe watching a movie in her bedroom and fell asleep.
Up to each person to figure out what they believe.

Of course here the stakes are much lower because for this phone call to happen Alexis needs to be single, and therefore we have no right to say anything if she's fucking anybody, it's just a curiosity...
In the scene Nyx explained there would be real emotional stakes.

I understand perfectly what you're saying. And I'm not going to argue with you because you're a friend...

 

[LSC82]

I understand perfectly what you're saying. And I'm not going to argue with you because you're a friend...

It's perfectly fine, friends can disagree.
It's not personal, just different takes on a subject...

I'll keep my imagination that "person" who with Alexis is a some dude who talked with Zane at beach, so i have my reason to floor Ethan (again) later when the scene with Alexis happens. I hope there'll be option "to get mad for a reason to cheat" too, since some my gameplays with Alexis path are "cheating" with other girls like Val or Nikki or Mira or redhead chick

The "i suspect you are up to no good... so i'm gonna cheat" is pretty funny
Pre-emptive cheating

 

[Kaskaze]

You little pervert...

When it comes to Nikki, I’ll straight up be a pervert.
When it comes to the other girls, I’ll be a connoisseur of beauty and art.
But even now, after what Nyx wrote, I keep wondering if Alexis would actually be able to go down on Ethan.
And honestly? I’d bet she wouldn’t.

 

[LSC82]

When it comes to Nikki, I’ll straight up be a pervert.
When it comes to the other girls, I’ll be a connoisseur of beauty and art.
But even now, after what Nyx wrote, I keep wondering if Alexis would actually be able to go down on Ethan.
And honestly? I’d bet she wouldn’t.

Only Nyx can give the definitive answer...

But i suspect the plan was:
Make the player paranoid> player overreacts and ruins the relationship> It's revealed that she never did anything wrong> Player feels like an idiot
If you show trust on your girl and relationship, you win.

Similar things for Erynn and Iris...
It would be shocking if the answer was "she was always a bitch".

But who knows, maybe i'm wrong, and Nyx does like shocking moments from time to time

 

[Acsuka]

When it comes to Nikki, I’ll straight up be a pervert.
When it comes to the other girls, I’ll be a connoisseur of beauty and art.
But even now, after what Nyx wrote, I keep wondering if Alexis would actually be able to go down on Ethan.
And honestly? I’d bet she wouldn’t.

I agree, my dear friend, it certainly wouldn't happen in the original version. And the alternative version could even be an NTR DLC, for those who want it...

 

[valbitterb]

This is directed towards everyone:
It's that simple. Seriously, if people have questions about me/the game, ask me directly, either on patreon, discord, whatever...
I'm happy to clear up all those misconceptions, decisions I make/had to make and so on...

Hello Nyx. I'm glad to see you temporarily joining this thread.

I've been playing since Episode/Update/Chapter 8 Training Camp. Your AVN is my favorite game on this forum. It has its flaws, but in my opinion, it's going to be an eventual AVN classic. Aside from the the obviously attractive, subtle and emotive renders, you're very good at writing characters and relationships that many on this thread end up loving and hating with a passion.

I'm asking if there's going to be a Zach redemption arc? I understand you can't spoil any writing plans on that end, but I am hoping there is no redemption arc for Zach. But if you do plan on giving Zach a redemption arc, I suggest and hope you can give the player the choice or choices whether or not to accept him back into the mc's life or not. Most people on this thread, myself included, hate Zach with volcanic venom. We believe there is no coming back from his betrayal of the mc. There is a minority who is either sincerely sympathetic to Zach or are just trolling for reactions. Sometimes I think Zach is even more hated than Ethan on this thread.

What many of us are hoping for is more scenes with Nathan and John who are better examples of the kind of male relationships the MC should have.

Thank you. All the best in your continuing work.

 

[gamingdevil800]

I'm not back. I'm just here to clarify things.
Especially for the "newer" people who have no idea who I am but only heard rumours and lies and blantantly believe everything that's being said.

So you're telling me that those rumours about you being a hot spanish lady are all a lie?



Are you secretly DrPinkCakes brother?

 

[Dessolos]

Okay, this is getting ridiculous and I can't believe I have to create an account for this.

Even though due to popular believe, no I haven't been on this forum since I left, I don't even know how long it's been since. But yes, they are people here who share stuff with me and you'd be surprised if I'd tell you the names.

First of all, if it doesn't come directly from me, you can be sure that the stuff said is a lie or my words twisted in a way. If you have questions, contact me directly if you want real answers.

About the dev that wasn't allowed to use screenshots of Intertwined. Not true. I actually allowed it. I said no at first because I didn't know the dev and the game so I asked that person to introduce themself first so I can check out what kind of game they are creating. Because I don't want Intertwined or myself associated with something I don't agree with. After that I asked which pictures they want to use so I can see if it's okay. They ignored me from that point on and didn't contact me again.

They are other devs and games which asked to use screenshots from Intertwined and I allowed it every time!

Next topic:

"Didn't even have the decency to message me and ask me to stop posting them or remove them."

I knew for some time that you were posting the preview pictures. But the person "ratting" you out mentioned the first time that you said it was a one time thing because you liked the pictures of Erynn and you'd normally don't do that. So I let it slide. Then I heard that you kept on doing it. Again, I let it slide, giving you another chance. But then again and again... At the end, I think I gave you plenty of chances and you didn't honour your word!
So, right back at you. You didn't even have the decency of apologising to something I asked not to do because it's not fair towards the supporters who pay for it.

There are probably lots of other things but I don't want to read through hundreds of pages.

If you have questions, ask them now because I will delete this account again.

I just wanted to apologize for anything ive said and it's one of the reasons you had to make this account. I was shocked when the dev I talked to they told me the conversation they had with you made them not enjoy the last update. I just assumed what the dev told me was true since they only ever seem like a very nice person to me so I believed them. I'm guessing / hoping it was a miss communication issue on their side.

Was debating if I should even reply cause I am kind of embarrassed and regret making that brief statement / comment of what I was told , especially since it turns out it wasn't true. Had a gut feeling probably shouldn't of done so after the fact in my sleep but I do regret it. Was even thinking about not even commenting on this thread for some time cause of my regret and embarrassment over it.

So again sorry even tho we don't know each other hope you can forgive me.

Your game is actually my #1 favorite and 2 of your LI are in my top 10 LI of all time. Erynn ( #1) , Alexis ( #6). Your game is one of the very few AVN's that actually bring a smile to me face and I feel happier than normal while playing it especially when I see Erynn. So I can't wait for future updates and replay it in the the next

 

[BorgiaBou]

I'm not back. I'm just here to clarify things.
Especially for the "newer" people who have no idea who I am but only heard rumours and lies and blantantly believe everything that's being said.

Awww this is so sweet... porn vn dev are so sensible ppl...

 

[Vidal the king of Pervert]

I just wanted to apologize for anything ive said and it's one of the reasons you had to make this account. I was shocked when the dev I talked to they told me the conversation they had with you made them not enjoy the last update. I just assumed what the dev told me was true since they only ever seem like a very nice person to me so I believed them. I'm guessing / hoping it was a miss communication issue on their side.

Was debating if I should even reply cause I am kind of embarrassed and regret making that brief statement / comment of what I was told , especially since it turns out it wasn't true. Had a gut feeling probably shouldn't of done so after the fact in my sleep but I do regret it. Was even thinking about not even commenting on this thread for some time cause of my regret and embarrassment over it.

So again sorry even tho we don't know each other hope you can forgive me.

Your game is actually my #1 favorite and 2 of your LI are in my top 10 LI of all time. Erynn ( #1) , Alexis ( #6). Your game is one of the very few AVN's that actually bring a smile to me face and I feel happier than normal while playing it especially when I see Erynn. So I can't wait for future updates and replay it in the the next

don't beat yourself up over it brother what matters is you apologized

and as long as you're truly sorry we all make mistakes I for one make mistakes all the time it's part of Being Human

I have a ton of things I regret that or I wish I had said differently

I believe as long as you apologize and truly mean it that's all that matters

 

[sudisudimagi]

Earlier comments like on page 1 2 dissed the game sayings it was a Badik rip off
it seems like the game is actually good considering the attention it got over the years
should I try it out

 

[Justaphase]

Earlier comments like on page 1 2 dissed the game sayings it was a Badik rip off
it seems like the game is actually good considering the attention it got over the years
should I try it out

Yes absolutely, though existing saves will be screwed with the next update due to changes to the script, so you may want to wait.

 

[sudisudimagi]

Yes absolutely, though existing saves will be screwed with the next update due to a change to the script, so you may want to wait.

tbh as you said it's good, I'll try it out and see if I like it

I can always do a new game if a new update comes