VN Ren'Py Intertwined [v0.14.1] [Nyx]

[Ozymandias037]

Poor Erynn, finally getting away from Ethan only to end up with Freddy Krueger! MC Dreamfucker.

I'm stealing this if I ever become a nightclub DJ and/or joke rapper.

 

[valbitterb]

Poor Erynn, finally getting away from Ethan only to end up with Freddy Krueger! MC Dreamfucker.

I'm stealing this if I ever become a nightclub DJ and/or joke rapper.

NYX'S REMAKE OF A NIGHTMARE ON ELM STREET 2: MC KRUEGER

Dylan fits into the whole homoerotic vibe of that sequel.

 

[MilesEdgeworth]

NYX'S REMAKE OF A NIGHTMARE ON ELM STREET 2: MC KRUEGER

Dylan fits into the whole homoerotic vibe of that sequel.

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That backwards cap is absolutely horrifying

 

[Kaskaze]

That backwards cap is absolutely horrifying

 

[Justaphase]

Lexi was right in the original version, he does look like a douchebag. She should have kept his little freak out where he proves her right and acts like one.
Lexi -"You kinda look like a douchbag."
MC -"Why are you calling me a douchebag?!"
Lexi -"I said you kinda look like one, not that you are one."
MC - "I'm sick of you, I'm done!"

Then Lexi walk off crying. MC storms off inside and asks his Emily..

MC - "Mom, do I look like a douchebag?"
Emily - "Want an honest answer?"

That's how my brain remembers that scene anyway.

 

[Kaskaze]

Lexi was right in the original version, he does look like a douchebag. She should have kept his little freak out where he proves her right and acts like one.
Lexi -"You kinda look like a douchbag."
MC -"Why are you calling me a douchebag?!"
Lexi -"I said you kinda look like one, not that you are one."
MC - "I'm sick of you, I'm done!"

Then Lexi walk off crying. MC storms off inside and asks his Emily..

MC - "Mom, do I look like a douchebag?"
Emily - "Want an honest answer?"

That's how my brain remembers that scene anyway.

The stupidity in that scene was good, and I regret that it was removed

 

[LSC82]

Lexi was right in the original version, he does look like a douchebag. She should have kept his little freak out where he proves her right and acts like one.
Lexi -"You kinda look like a douchbag."
MC -"Why are you calling me a douchebag?!"
Lexi -"I said you kinda look like one, not that you are one."
MC - "I'm sick of you, I'm done!"

Then Lexi walk off crying. MC storms off inside and asks his Emily..

MC - "Mom, do I look like a douchebag?"
Emily - "Want an honest answer?"

That's how my brain remembers that scene anyway.

The stupidity in that scene was good, and I regret that it was removed

Even i felt bad for Alexis in that scene...
Dude was completely unreasonable lol.

It would be good to have more dates that end badly lol.
For fun and variation.
When a scene has it's own separate point counter, like "Alexis beach" or "Nikki visit", we should have bad endings for performing terribly... Otherwise what's the point?

 

[Justaphase]

Even i felt bad for Alexis in that scene...
Dude was completely unreasonable lol.

It would be good to have more dates that end badly lol.
For fun and variation.
When a scene has it's own separate point counter, like "Alexis beach" or "Nikki visit", we should have bad endings for performing terribly... Otherwise what's the point?

Exactly. It was a horrible and over the top douchebag reaction. I still like having those options, when I feel like playing in a chaotic asshole way, choosing bad options on purpose.
If some people didn't like it (and I understand why) just don't pick that option. For example I think not helping Erynn with Ethan is horrible, but I would still argue for people to have the right to do that. Give them that option.

 

[LSC82]

Exactly. It was a horrible and over the top douchebag reaction. I still like having those options, when I feel like playing in a chaotic asshole way, choosing bad options on purpose.
If some people didn't like it (and I understand why) just don't pick that option. For example I think not helping Erynn with Ethan is horrible, but I would still argue for people to have the right to do that. Give them that option.

Yes, that option felt terrible, but i still like it to be an option... and it has long lasting consequences beyond Erynn.
The beach scene, even without the hat... i think it should've been possible to get Alexis "not in the mood" to go to the club if you seriously and repeatedly piss her off at the beach

Some others, like when the 2 douches try their luck on Erynn, felt like it would be a bigger deal to pick the wrong option(and the "correct" option too to be fair).
But she just chides you a little and the date ends on happy note anyways.
It lacked impact, when i saw that option i thought that would be a bigger moment, not just a "Erynn likes/dislikes" with no major consequences.

Some choices are just about "making her smile" in the moment, but some other things could/should have more impact...
The game is quite "sticky" once you are inside a path, doesn't show how quick to anger women can be

 

[Kaskaze]

Even i felt bad for Alexis in that scene...
Dude was completely unreasonable lol.

It would be good to have more dates that end badly lol.
For fun and variation.
When a scene has it's own separate point counter, like "Alexis beach" or "Nikki visit", we should have bad endings for performing terribly... Otherwise what's the point?

It seems to me that this choice was meant to be a kind of break with Alexis, or one of the choices that would lead to a breakup. The problem is that it was handled in a stupid way. It could have been something like, for example, that it was supposed to be the reason we stay home and don’t go to the party, but in reality we go to Erynn. But it’s no longer in the game. Now it only remains as a meme

 

[LSC82]

It seems to me that this choice was meant to be a kind of break with Alexis, or one of the choices that would lead to a breakup. The problem is that it was handled in a stupid way. It could have been something like, for example, that it was supposed to be the reason we stay home and don’t go to the party, but in reality we go to Erynn. But it’s no longer in the game. Now it only remains as a meme

Yeah, it feels like it could've led to a break up...
I think that when she removed this scene Nyx should've made the whole beach more impactful.
Add the option of Alexis getting pissed off and canceling the club if you fuck up too much at the beach(i had some negative points masterpieces ).
Now we have consequences for being a terrible BF

Could it be changed in the new script?

 

[MilesEdgeworth]

Lexi was right in the original version, he does look like a douchebag. She should have kept his little freak out where he proves her right and acts like one.
Lexi -"You kinda look like a douchbag."
MC -"Why are you calling me a douchebag?!"
Lexi -"I said you kinda look like one, not that you are one."
MC - "I'm sick of you, I'm done!"

Then Lexi walk off crying. MC storms off inside and asks his Emily..

MC - "Mom, do I look like a douchebag?"
Emily - "Want an honest answer?"

That's how my brain remembers that scene anyway.

If he wasnt beefing with his stepdad, he probably wouldve ran over there for seven more years because he got his feelings hurt

 

[MilesEdgeworth]

Exactly. It was a horrible and over the top douchebag reaction. I still like having those options, when I feel like playing in a chaotic asshole way, choosing bad options on purpose.
If some people didn't like it (and I understand why) just don't pick that option. For example I think not helping Erynn with Ethan is horrible, but I would still argue for people to have the right to do that. Give them that option.

Most of them yes, but ignoring someone on the verge of being raped because you don't like them should have dire consequences. Only reason they're not stronger is because Erryn keeps most of that shit to herself without MC's encouragement

 

[Justaphase]

Yeah, it feels like it could've led to a break up...
I think that when she removed this scene Nyx should've made the whole beach more impactful.
Add the option of Alexis getting pissed off and canceling the club if you fuck up too much at the beach(i had some negative points masterpieces ).
Now we have consequences for being a terrible BF

Could it be changed in the new script?

Most of them yes, but ignoring someone on the verge of being raped because you don't like them should have dire consequences. Only reason they're not stronger is because Erryn keeps most of that shit to herself without MC's encouragement

There should always be consequences for acting in a certain way, both good and bad. I still prefer for people to have options, even though it could obviously cause more work for Nyx.

 

[LSC82]

There should always be consequences for acting in a certain way, both good and bad. I still prefer for people to have options, even though it could obviously cause more work for Nyx.

Agreed, the more impactful options the better... the story becomes more personal when we have more say where it goes and how it unfolds.
And adds replayability.
The downside is that it's more work, and the "next update" wait already has all of us with anxiety


I think in particular it's very hard to get out of relationships... You can only get out at specific spots under specific conditions.
You only get the option to break up with Alexis if you have Valeria... otherwise it's impossible, even if i pick every bad option in the universe, there's no tanking the relationship...
Despite the game constantly dropping hints that the MC might like Erynn, Nikki or Iris more, the option never comes...
More consequences for bad choices would be great.

And to get out of Layla you need to do that crime with Elena...

 

[Justaphase]

Agreed, the more impactful options the better... the story becomes more personal when we have more say where it goes and how it unfolds.
And adds replayability.
The downside is that it's more work, and the "next update" wait already has all of us with anxiety


I think in particular it's very hard to get out of relationships... You can only get out at specific spots under specific conditions.
You only get the option to break up with Alexis if you have Valeria... otherwise it's impossible even if i pick every bad option in the universe, there's no tanking the relationship...
Despite the game constantly dropping hints that the MC might like Erynn, Nikki or Iris more, the option never comes...
More consequences for bad choices would be great.

And to get out of Layla you need to do that crime with Elena...

As you've said before the Lexi break up scene for Val was really well done. We were even given the option to be an asshole and lie to both of them, which we know will have dire consequences.

The one that has always driven me crazy is when Nikki or Cara come to MS, Erynn comes over and the MC will openly tell her if he is back together with one of them. Theres no reaction or consequences to that if you've been fooling around with Erynn.
You can even still keep fooling around and it's never discussed again. There's no "Sorry you just told me you have a girlfriend, we're not kissing."
Even in episode 13 when he tells Erynn that he's visiting Riverside it's not brought up. "Are you still seeing Nikki or Cara" "What about me and what we've already done together?"
I don't believe for a second that Erynn would just be happy being his side piece, hoping he will ultimately pick her. Be friends with him of course, but more than that is hard to believe for me.

 

[LSC82]

As you've said before the Lexi break up scene for Val was really well done. We were even given the option to be an asshole and lie to both of them, which we know will have dire consequences.

That one is really well done, chose one or the other... or roll the dice and see the consequences, it's perfect.
Which on the other hand just makes me go "why the others get nothing?".

The one that has always driven me crazy is when Nikki or Cara come to MS, Erynn comes over and the MC will openly tell her if he is back together with one of them. Theres no reaction or consequences to that if you've been fooling around with Erynn.
You can even still keep fooling around and it's never discussed again. There's no "Sorry you just told me you have a girlfriend, we're not kissing."
Even in episode 13 when he tells Erynn that he's visiting Riverside it's not brought up. "Are you still seeing Nikki or Cara" "What about me and what we've already done together?"
I don't believe for a second that Erynn would just be happy being his side piece, hoping he will ultimately pick her. Be friends with him of course, but more than that is hard to believe for me.

Just a small correction, MC tells Erynn he's going to Alvarado...
Not that this is much of an excuse, this trip still should've had Erynn very suspicious and aware that these towns are very close to each other.
Erynn seems to have completely forgotten about meeting the sisters and being told that the relationship between MC and Nikki/Cara is still going...
Erynn gets very disappointed if you ditch her for Valeria, can show jealousy towards Alexis(she's hiding it, but it's there) and even hearing about the Iris kiss bet...
But for Nikki/Cara there's zero reaction, it's just not normal, this conversation should already have happened.

This is definitely something that should be addressed in this new script... and hopefully giving us the options, ending for either side or taking the chance

 

[MilesEdgeworth]

theres one scene that always bugs me. When working on the car and iris stands above him so he can see shes wearing no panties. If he's with Alexis, she'll tell him to chill out, but why even show him that in the first place if you was trying to respect his relationship with Alexis?

 

[LSC82]

theres one scene that always bugs me. When working on the car and iris stands above him so he can see shes wearing no panties. If he's with Alexis, she'll tell him to chill out, but why even show him that in the first place if you was trying to respect his relationship with Alexis?

I guess the excuse is that she was already "letting it breathe" when the MC arrived, and she just... forgot... when she stepped over him.

Certainly sends mixed messages, because that's not the only provocation she makes... she shows her titties, she teases... and then, "you have a GF".

 

[Justaphase]

theres one scene that always bugs me. When working on the car and iris stands above him so he can see shes wearing no panties. If he's with Alexis, she'll tell him to chill out, but why even show him that in the first place if you was trying to respect his relationship with Alexis?

Because she wants to really, she was really conflicted. It's only a matter of time before she cheats with the MC behind Lexi's back. LSC82 Can't wait for that day to come.