VN Ren'Py Intertwined [v0.14.1] [Nyx]

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misfolk said:
Laugh all you want, it's all fun and games until you learn Santi has been trying to bang Layla when the MC was busy with his wife.
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trying? the dude as 20 years experience, he does not try he either does or chooses not to over moral reasons...

Also... who is Helena father? i wonder if they where Andres secret family...
 
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misfolk said:
We haven't really met him yet beyond a few minor scenes, but he's definitely not a good person the way he's written. We know he's dumped Emily after getting her pregnant, he's probably dumped his other family for a nubile track and field high school athlete Gabi, now we know he's already tired of her and probably, like DiCaprio, looking for a new barely legal GF that's literally old enough to be his daughter.
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At this rate, it won't take many years for her new girl to be young enough to be his granddaughter.
 
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Gzoosos said:
Uhh..why these pages full of

Shortly : Santi is written to be the good person which he isn't
Andres is written to be an asshole Which he isn't or completely
Emily isn't good either handled the situation of her son very poorly
They are shit people and Andres isn't He Rise a kid who isn't related to him!!!
And been better parent more than MC "biological" parents
But it seemed that Andres won't be important in the story more than the info he is the one who rised the MC that give the space for Santiago to return to Emily and be a happy family again.....well not again but family...kind of
Or appear the knight in armor who helps Erynn with his "connections"
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Andres was a good father, he went above and beyond to take care of the MC, when he split from Emily he could've shrugged off having anything to do with the kid (it sure doesn't help a brand new bachelor having a 13 year old to feed and attend to), but he kept his end of the deal.
He was written off unceremoniously, and turned into a huge prick.
Became the guy who never got over his ex, his childhood enemy and a cheater...
And to cap things off didn't even try to understand the situation his son was in...
Some(me included) think he deserved a little better given that he was a man of character and a good father for so long, but it is what is and the story isn't about him(in my head cannon the 2 make up a couple of months after the end game).

Emily, after 2 rewrites i think Nyx finally managed to "clear" her(which was always her intention, she never ment for her to be bad, unfortunately it never came out right in the text).
The new, "sending him away for spring break, but the kid chose to live there with his father instead" is a much better look for her than the old "you were being a prick so i sent you to live your father", so now (finally) she's in the clear, she's an alright mom and always tries her best for her kid.

Santi, he was a playa and froze when he got the news he would have kid, the unexplained part is where was he in the time after that? We see him try to speak to Emily once after he ran off the first time, but "he graduated and i never saw him again" is a pretty poor excuse for him vanishing, Melissa has pictures of him in her backyard with Emily, again "Emily blew him off once" is a poor excuse when there's a child on the line, the guy pretty much washed his hands...
And assuming he is indeed Gabi's husband he's also a shitty partner, and may be up to something (who is buying that he just works too much?).

PeraDrnda said:
Scene 3: Making a plan for John to meet Ethan

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I know, we all hate rewrites. But how blind we should be. Those scenes simply don't make sense.

Now I have to prepare for shitstorm.
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Yeah after John kicked the crap out of Ethan arranging for him to hire Erynn sounds bad, and John is a guy who stands out.
 
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