VN Ren'Py Intertwined [v0.14] [Nyx]

[Justaphase]

He mentions during the episode that he could lose his invitation... but i never thought it was going to happen for real.

Kinda harsh though IMO. Suspended from school causes him to lose his BBQ invite that's outside of school time.

 

[justheretopirate]

I would like to see a Netori scene with MC and Valeria with Zach watching from afar. That will really mind break him.

 

[Wojtek96]

what a shitty update
continuation of sucker milking

 

[Dessolos]

I'm glad to hear the blackmail route will get speed up. I feel like it was dragging lately a lot, and I was getting tired of it. Would rather want "Erynn healing/romance" route or something like this than the blackmail.

im mixed on it myself. Some of the idea's sounded like they could of been fun storylines to explore tho it would of also pissed alot of people off too. Tho also happy because of the fact means progress with Erynn sooner. But from a storytelling point of view I would of liked them. Tho there is a chance we might get them back there was talk of a potential directors cut version of Intertwined after the game is completed.

Cause Nyx mentioned some of those storylines would of had NTR

Like the fake Erynn scene. Nyx said if the Ethan Storyline wasn't pushed forward to finish the blackmail sooner that scene could of had Iris , Alexis or Erynn ( if you don't help Erynn)

what a shitty update
continuation of sucker milking

There was no milking involved. Fine you don't like it ( I loved the update almost as much as Ep 13 ) but not anyone closer to milking

 

[LSC82]

Kinda harsh though IMO. Suspended from school causes him to lose his BBQ invite that's outside of school time.

I agree.
Despite the MC wondering if that would be the case... i was never worried about the invitation being rescinded.

Adriana is harsh when it comes to education.

 

[MagicMan753]

Kinda harsh though IMO. Suspended from school causes him to lose his BBQ invite that's outside of school time.

Well, looks like now, it's possible, a maybe, so we just have to wait.

But this is a consequence of moving up Erynn blackmail storyline. Since that will end maybe even in .16 now accoring to Nyx. A lot of things got shuffled around.

Suspension, Bbq got moved up. Melissa got moved up while other got pushed back like Gabi(very sadge for me), Iris and Elena. Apparently Elena lovers will have to wait a long, long time now.

So this storyline change is messing a lot of things up.snd shifting them.

 

[Dessolos]

I agree.
Despite the MC wondering if that would be the case... i was never worried about the invitation being rescinded.

Adriana is harsh when it comes to education.

I wonder if that means Alexis gonna skip it if we really don't get to go anymore. Im kind of confused if we do or don't get to go to it anymore but some of Nyx's comments in discord tbh. Cause sounds like it's a maybe to me

 

[Elduriel]

There was no milking involved. Fine you don't like it ( I loved the update almost as much as Ep 13 ) but not anyone closer to milking

there is no milking in the sense it would be used generally on the site, but Nyx sure milks the fuck out of that blackmail storyline for years now

 

[Justaphase]

I agree.
Despite the MC wondering if that would be the case... i was never worried about the invitation being rescinded.

Adriana is harsh when it comes to education.

Maybe we will get the option to break up with Lexi or Layla because of Adrianna withdrawing his invite to the BBQ. Really twist the knife and let her see her heartbroken daughters in retaliation.

 

[Dessolos]

Maybe we will get the option to break up with Lexi or Layla because of Adrianna withdrawing his invite to the BBQ. Really twist the knife and let her see her heartbroken daughters in retaliation.

lol honestly if we don't get to go I want to be petty and have an option and do a save where I do break up with her over it lol

 

[Justaphase]

Apparently Elena lovers will have to wait a long, long time now.

I genuinely weep for Elena fans. Her solo path is a joke at this point.

 

[tryndakaiser]

Ethan gotta die lowkey

 

[LSC82]

Well, looks like now, it's possible, a maybe, so we just have to wait.

But this is a consequence of moving up Erynn blackmail storyline. Since that will end maybe even in .16 now. A lot of things got shuffled around.

Suspension, Bbq got moved up. Melissa got moved up while other got pushed back like Gabi, and Elena. Apparently Elena lovers will have to wait a long, long time now.

So this storyline change is messing slot of things up.

It's weird that the BBQ got moved up... only for it to get cancelled(I mean the family is still doing it, but we aren't going anymore).
It didn't have a established date yet, Nyx had no need to say, "BBQ tommorow..." except you aren't going.
Could've just said BBQ on sunday, relatively far away and there would be no problems... a little bit of a fumble, in my opinion.
If the script is still getting remade she could reconsider.

Oh well, scheduling conflict cleared lol.

Maybe we will get the option to break up with Lexi or Layla because of Adrianna withdrawing his invite to the BBQ. Really twist the knife and let her see her heartbroken daughters in retaliation.

That's nasty, i love it

I genuinely weep for Elena fans. Her solo path is a joke at this point.

Or you know chose throuple and be happy
It really is the worst treated route, absolute misery.
Iris is getting pushed back... well at least she got a hell of a "send off".

 

[meskuzi]

my heart almost stoped racin when i saw pic

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Dude that was most epic twist

 

[Acsuka]

She mentioned since like last week that, we aren't invited cause of the suspension. She said now we don't have to choose between val and bbq now in response to someone on discord. So she could be trolling like usual, but it doesn't seem that way, and we actually aren't going since Adrianna suspended us, but we'll see.

Wait... I really don't understand the logic... MC can't go to school for three days... So why can't MC go to the party? Adriana is actually punishing her daughters by doing this... If Emily punished her then it's okay because she's her mother... but Emily isn't mad at MC... Plus, if we're in a relationship with one of the girls, Adriana likes MC... This punishment is illogical...

 

[Justaphase]

Wait... I really don't understand the logic... MC can't go to school for three days... So why can't MC go to the party? Adriana is actually punishing her daughters by doing this... If Emily punished her then it's okay because she's her mother... but Emily isn't mad at MC... Plus, if we're in a relationship with one of the girls, Adriana likes MC... This punishment is illogical...

Adrianna even seems sad that she had to suspend the MC on the Layla or Lexi path, calls Enzo and says how she "hates this job sometimes" and genuinely seems sad about it. So to then punish him further...doesn't make much sense.

Personally I think that the BBQ will just get delayed. He may well get found out though for dating Val while still being in a relationship with Lexi, which will obviously cause him to no longer have to choose between the BBQ and the Val date. All it would take is for Val to mention the date to Layla.

 

[SweatyDevil]

im mixed on it myself. Some of the idea's sounded like they could of been fun storylines to explore tho it would of also pissed alot of people off too. Tho also happy because of the fact means progress with Erynn sooner. But from a storytelling point of view I would of liked them. Tho there is a chance we might get them back there was talk of a potential directors cut version of Intertwined after the game is completed.

Cause Nyx mentioned some of those storylines would of had NTR

Like the fake Erynn scene. Nyx said if the Ethan Storyline wasn't pushed forward to finish the blackmail sooner that scene could of had Iris , Alexis or Erynn ( if you don't help Erynn)


There was no milking involved. Fine you don't like it ( I loved the update almost as much as Ep 13 ) but not anyone closer to milking

Interesting to hear, there might be director cut at some point. Even though I prefer the current version, it would be interesting to at least see some of the stuff from the scrapped version, which I heard was suppossed to be darker.

 

[LSC82]

Wait... I really don't understand the logic... MC can't go to school for three days... So why can't MC go to the party? Adriana is actually punishing her daughters by doing this... If Emily punished her then it's okay because she's her mother... but Emily isn't mad at MC... Plus, if we're in a relationship with one of the girls, Adriana likes MC... This punishment is illogical...

Adrianna even seems sad that she had to suspend the MC on the Layla or Lexi path, calls Enzo and says how she "hates this job sometimes" and genuinely seems sad about it. So to then punish him further...

The whole thing seems weird, the BBQ didn't have an exact date until this update, the normal logical thing would be doing it during the weekend(who does BBQ on tuesdays?)
Nyx brings the BBQ forward to tuesday, it's weird... but i won't complain since i'm looking forward to it.

Only to cancel the invite.

And like Acsuka said, she's not his mom, in school she suspends him because that's her job... further punishment should be on Emily.

Interesting to hear, there might be director cut at some point. Even though I prefer the current version, it would be interesting to at least see some of the stuff from the scrapped version, which I heard was suppossed to be darker.

Directors cut version sounds great, with all the ideas that didn't make it.

 

[Acsuka]

Adrianna even seems sad that she had to suspend the MC on the Layla or Lexi path, calls Enzo and says how she "hates this job sometimes" and genuinely seems sad about it. So to then punish him further...doesn't make much sense.

Personally I think that the BBQ will just get delayed. He may well get found out though for dating Val while still being in a relationship with Lexi, which will obviously cause him to no longer have to choose between the BBQ and the Val date. All it would take is for Val to mention the date to Layla.

Yes, it's just like "kicking the person who's already down"...
However, if you're not in Val's way and you're loyal, there's no getting caught... So again, basing party expulsion on Val's relationship is wrong...

 

[Gryffie101]

The whole thing seems weird, the BBQ didn't have an exact date until this update, the normal logical thing would be doing it during the weekend(who does BBQ on tuesdays?)
Nyx brings the BBQ forward to tuesday, it's weird... but i won't complain since i'm looking forward to it.

Only to cancel the invite.

And like Acsuka said, she's not his mom, in school she suspends him because that's her job... further punishment should be on Emily.



Directors cut version sounds great, with all the ideas that didn't make it.

Believe she moved the BBQ forward to a week day because of the upcoming visit from Nikki/Cara.