nio :3

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Jun 4, 2017
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The technical side of this project, the level of dialogs, and, the crazy Kajima-long cut-scenes with TWO frames, the size of the assets. All the things were done beyond any sane.

I wish to rip off the great art from this """game""" and inject it on simple and quick RenPy with ChatGPT reworked text

I cannot recommend you to download this game to waste an hour of your time on nothing

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Ninpass

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Apr 22, 2019
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The technical side of this project, the level of dialogs, and, the crazy Kajima-long cut-scenes with TWO frames, the size of the assets. All the things were done beyond any sane.

I wish to rip off the great art from this """game""" and inject it on simple and quick RenPy with ChatGPT reworked text

I cannot recommend you to download this game to waste an hour of your time on nothing

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An hour? Well, dev said that there's 6 to 8 hours of content Dx I guess he included huge gaps between scenes and long text time.
 

Bastard-Sama

Formerly 'kilbane'
Game Developer
May 17, 2018
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for the next update, an option to remove the pauses b/w scenes would be really appreciated
The technical side of this project, the level of dialogs, and, the crazy Kajima-long cut-scenes with TWO frames, the size of the assets. All the things were done beyond any sane.

I wish to rip off the great art from this """game""" and inject it on simple and quick RenPy with ChatGPT reworked text

I cannot recommend you to download this game to waste an hour of your time on nothing

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I was looking for feedback for this initial version. I'll work on these things and promise to fix them and implement Skip, dialogue pacing, more save slots and everything else in the next update. Thank you all for your opinions.
 

Ferizzz

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Nov 25, 2019
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#2 - I hope the bugfix doesn't require a restart, I have a save where I'm trapped at "Dawn" in sandbox mode and also get stuck in an infinite loop if I enter Laura's room. I am enjoying your game despite the super slow tempo, but there's no way I will go back and spend hours clicking to get back to where I am now, and I think a lot of people would agree. Understand you put a lot of work into the big things (and it shows), but without the little things, the game is unplayable. Suggest you upload a save file along with the bugfix if it means a restart.
same here...
 
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nio :3

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Jun 4, 2017
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An hour? Well, dev said that there's 6 to 8 hours of content Dx I guess he included huge gaps between scenes and long text time.
Yes, an hour of no gameplay in the prologue with descriptions of basic MMORPG rules.

1/3 of the time is a black screen between 2 frames, 1/3 is time to load the next line of text, 1/6 is reading and 1/12 is enjoying the art. Did I forget something? Yeah, you cannot choose anything, The last 1/12 is the time for this game to launch.
 

Bastard-Sama

Formerly 'kilbane'
Game Developer
May 17, 2018
41
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An hour? Well, dev said that there's 6 to 8 hours of content Dx I guess he included huge gaps between scenes and long text time.
1 hour is just the prologue before the bug, I guess... Things will get better with each release, so I'll start work on them as soon as possible.
 

mjuros97

Newbie
Jul 19, 2017
15
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Ohh come on guys, dont be harsh on dev with his first game, this is not constructive criticism in 90% of the time, which is needed for the dev. If you dont like, you dont have to hate the dev for it, there are waay to much topics to please everyone. Give every dev some time, and as he said, for now its free, soo he isnt responsible anyone but himself. Its really not necessary to be hater... provide good feedback and also compliments about what you liked...
 

Kaos_Theory

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Apr 18, 2019
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I like the sound of this story to be honest, most of the time, games have you start as some overly handsome god-level man with a wang the size of a billy club, it's nice to see that this one begins with the user as an average joe who can with time learn to manipulate himself into any personality and body shape he chooses, keep it up, this is looking interesting, I'll keep my eyes on this one as I want to see where it goes.
 

enfuego

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Feb 10, 2018
218
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Game has a lot of promise, there's a ton of effort put into the characterization of the MC but it has the exact same problem as the Timestamps game: There is no reason for this game to be Unity.

Everything clunky about this game is due to not being on Ren'py. I am begging the developer to consider switching engines.

Also that loop bug is brutal.
 

cooperdk

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Jul 23, 2017
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Due to the size of this game, find somewhere else to host it in addition, so everybody can download it. GDRIVE is limited in downloads, Pixeldrain has a download limit only a bit higher than the size of this game.
 
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Why does he have a micro dick? Seriously, his dick is like the size of my thumb. The whole reason the ugly bastard trope works is because the ugly bastard can satisfy the woman with his fat dong.

If you have a gross ugly bastard that no one wants to fuck with a little dick that cant please anyone - then what are you left with?
 

BoobiesSugoi

Pixel Connaisseur
Donor
Mar 18, 2020
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This game has really potential into my eyes. Liked what I saw so far a lot.

That said, i agree that the game lacks interaction for the "introduction".

People have a low attention span and want to click on something^^

If you would build in some basic choices this would increase the interaction/attention span for the players.
If you can do it in form of a mini game even better. (as long the mini game is easy)

I think it would be best to split the intro into at least 3 or 4 parts and build some interaction/progression steps into it.
Maybe something like cut wood in the wood level up from 1-2 = for the power of domination

And then you are able to "dominate" the hunter girl.

Don`t get me wrong I really love the story buildup and the world building , its just to much in one part.

So if you could implant some basic level up system in form of mini games or at least some basic text choices the players would feel more freedom with those interaction and the powers that you have from the start, even if that is basically only to dominate would feel more "earned".

GL with the Game can`t wait to see more.
 
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