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kazeiheikaya

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Not someone making a coherent point that makes sense. Stop! That's not allowed here! o_O
honestly, it's tiring to try and reason with people.

The Bodyguard knows exactly nothing about MC because she couldn't follow them into the dungeon, that's why she sleeps with him in the first place, and MC skips town before she wakes up the next morning. You are all making shit up to justify why MC acts like a pussy and lets them walk all over him.
Except she does, because she literally witnessed after he free'd sylph and carried her out of thin air, thus forming a spirit contract with her. Something no human is ever able to achieve, which she seen with her own two eyes.

They know nothing about MC. If they find traces of mana, so what? She is a mage, of course, there would be traces of mana if she fought against an attacker.
MC has skills which are from outside the world, they can't anticipate him having skills they don't even know exist.
They both witnessed MC fight attackers which is what eventually put them on MCs trail because there was a new trace of mana at the time that they picked up on during the fight. Granted they couldn't verifiably prove that it was MC's mana, or that he used magic, but it was enough to make them suspect about MC having magic. They also dont know MC is from another world that whole point is just moot.

They know he is a porter who can't use magic. Porters can't use Magic!!!
He can erase every evidence from this world by putting it in his inventory. An inventory that can't exist per the rules of the world. They have zero chance of ever finding it without MC directly telling them.
And again, The bodyguard witnessed the spirit bond with Sylph, so even if "PORTERS CANT USE MAGIC!!!" he has a great spirit residing within him. Which, if you paid attention to the story, requires a goddess's approval to make a spirit bond. So even moreso arguably, he is not just a simple porter, he is hiding something. Whether it be that he has a blessing, magic, powers, whatever it may be. Thats the key point.

He can tell them anything from them getting attacked and she was killed to them talking and she left afterwards. There are no witnesses.
Except the bodyguard, that somehow made it from the town that took them all day on carriage to get from, to where the explosion with sylph happened, in a record speed to see MC come out of the portal of the spirit world carrying Sylph in his arms. Pretty fucking fast if you ask me. Who is in the vicinity, not dick drunked unconscious, and is also of a noble birth. So, the right hand of the Grand Mage "The Highest Mage" position in the entire kingdom also of a noble descent, isn't just going to go to the king after she goes to check on the dead/missing Grand Mage? And he's gonna be like "Pah! You know nothing you silly girl! she's fine!" right. That makes sense. Meta huh.

MC wouldn't put anyone in danger. They have nothing to even connect the MC to her vanishing, that wouldn't sound like crazy talk to any inhabitants of the world.
So we're just going to ignore the fact that the bodyguard knows his entire party, and he started serving at the guild in the first town, they're all just gonna be ignored? They arent gonna dig into his connections and who he's interacted with? Even willing to push that aside, still his party wouldn't be in the least bit of danger? Huh... Interesting. Who woulda thought becoming an enemy of the kingdom doesn't include your acquaintances who adventure with you?

All you lot are doing is justifying his behaviour with meta knowledge nobody in the game world has or even could have.
Or, hear me out, just actually reading the story and paying attention to things as they're happening. That might be a possibility.

Talking about her making a 180 why the fuck should i want that after what she did? I want to have nothing to do with her. She is not an Asset she is a fucking liability. Even more so when she flips on a dime.
Thats cool, I personally dont mind it because like you claim for us, making all these crazy whimsical assumptions, arent you literally doing the same? You dont even know the extent of what just happened. it was right at the end of the update and you're assuming the worst in everything. MC jizzed before the spell wore off with a 1 hour set timer, and she never said she had to channel it and since we have to take everything at face value, couldn't that be evidence that it was a fluke to make the MC panic and talk? We also never seen her torture anyone before, could she have been lying just to make the MC more anxious? We know Vega isn't exactly a "good" person, and she wants to use the MC as a political leverage point in the courts for whatever reason. Sure, I can understand hating her. But like said if you take all the context clues of the game, the MC literally breaks women with his dick. If he breaks Vega and she swears unwavering loyalty to him. As silly as it would be, it would MAKE SENSE lmao. It's in theme with EVERYTHING up to this point. Slaves just got their damn freedom back and they still dont wanna leave MC's side under zero obligation. Idc if it was the best pussy in the world If I was enslaved for 50 years I'm going out into the world and taking some me time. But thats also me rationalizing myself onto the world too.

But still dont see in what universe you can think killing the highest ranking mage of the kings court, with a bodyguard of noble bloodline being literally in proximity, that can report the crime when she magically disappears, isn't meta itself. You're using his pass as a porter for being the best get out of jail free card meanwhile i'm like "he's a commoner, thats worth nothing to this kingdom, they could literally kill him on principle and no one would give two fucks" But eh I'm tired of breaking this down, I've made my points. I'm at the agree to disagree stage after this because if that doesnt get through, literally nothing will haha.


Keep rocking on developer. Do your story how you want to, I support it.
 

Kpoptarts

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honestly, it's tiring to try and reason with people.



Except she does, because she literally witnessed after he free'd sylph and carried her out of thin air, thus forming a spirit contract with her. Something no human is ever able to achieve, which she seen with her own two eyes.



They both witnessed MC fight attackers which is what eventually put them on MCs trail because there was a new trace of mana at the time that they picked up on during the fight. Granted they couldn't verifiably prove that it was MC's mana, or that he used magic, but it was enough to make them suspect about MC having magic. They also dont know MC is from another world that whole point is just moot.



And again, The bodyguard witnessed the spirit bond with Sylph, so even if "PORTERS CANT USE MAGIC!!!" he has a great spirit residing within him. Which, if you paid attention to the story, requires a goddess's approval to make a spirit bond. So even moreso arguably, he is not just a simple porter, he is hiding something. Whether it be that he has a blessing, magic, powers, whatever it may be. Thats the key point.



Except the bodyguard, that somehow made it from the town that took them all day on carriage to get from, to where the explosion with sylph happened, in a record speed to see MC come out of the portal of the spirit world carrying Sylph in his arms. Pretty fucking fast if you ask me. Who is in the vicinity, not dick drunked unconscious, and is also of a noble birth. So, the right hand of the Grand Mage "The Highest Mage" position in the entire kingdom also of a noble descent, isn't just going to go to the king after she goes to check on the dead/missing Grand Mage? And he's gonna be like "Pah! You know nothing you silly girl! she's fine!" right. That makes sense. Meta huh.



So we're just going to ignore the fact that the bodyguard knows his entire party, and he started serving at the guild in the first town, they're all just gonna be ignored? They arent gonna dig into his connections and who he's interacted with? Even willing to push that aside, still his party wouldn't be in the least bit of danger? Huh... Interesting. Who woulda thought becoming an enemy of the kingdom doesn't include your acquaintances who adventure with you?



Or, hear me out, just actually reading the story and paying attention to things as they're happening. That might be a possibility.



Thats cool, I personally dont mind it because like you claim for us, making all these crazy whimsical assumptions, arent you literally doing the same? You dont even know the extent of what just happened. it was right at the end of the update and you're assuming the worst in everything. MC jizzed before the spell wore off with a 1 hour set timer, and she never said she had to channel it and since we have to take everything at face value, couldn't that be evidence that it was a fluke to make the MC panic and talk? We also never seen her torture anyone before, could she have been lying just to make the MC more anxious? We know Vega isn't exactly a "good" person, and she wants to use the MC as a political leverage point in the courts for whatever reason. Sure, I can understand hating her. But like said if you take all the context clues of the game, the MC literally breaks women with his dick. If he breaks Vega and she swears unwavering loyalty to him. As silly as it would be, it would MAKE SENSE lmao. It's in theme with EVERYTHING up to this point. Slaves just got their damn freedom back and they still dont wanna leave MC's side under zero obligation. Idc if it was the best pussy in the world If I was enslaved for 50 years I'm going out into the world and taking some me time. But thats also me rationalizing myself onto the world too.

But still dont see in what universe you can think killing the highest ranking mage of the kings court, with a bodyguard of noble bloodline being literally in proximity, that can report the crime when she magically disappears, isn't meta itself. You're using his pass as a porter for being the best get out of jail free card meanwhile i'm like "he's a commoner, thats worth nothing to this kingdom, they could literally kill him on principle and no one would give two fucks" But eh I'm tired of breaking this down, I've made my points. I'm at the agree to disagree stage after this because if that doesnt get through, literally nothing will haha.


Keep rocking on developer. Do your story how you want to, I support it.
Honestly, I think they're wanting MC to be this no shits given, almost 0 moral compass badass that shoots first, and asks questions later. Which we know from what's already in the game that he is NOT that. So far, MC is shown as someone who can think his way out of situations, has a strange set of powers that kinda makes him uber OP, assuming he's fucked a few times before anything actually happens. And most importantly, someone who has a moral compass and can actually think twice before just haphazardly taking another life. I personally like that he put Sylph in her place when she tried suggesting to kill Vega, because 1) it shows that he actually thinks and has a set of moral standards that he abides by, and 2) it further demonstrates that he has a backbone and isn't a "pussy" :ROFLMAO: and is willing to stand up to others who don't align with his morals.

Also, I want to see the corruption stages of Vega turning into a sex obsessed lunatic over MC's dick :LOL:
 

Silentdeath8

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The game isn't too bad, if you don't account the MC being a true Mary sue (very accurate when you see all the isekai animes who came out nowaday from Japan or Corea).
My only complain is about the sex scenes, Dev do you need to shake everything during them ? looking them is :sick: , if it was just the protagonists... but you make it look like there is a big earth quake occuring each time o_O
 

Lynava

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I'm glad I don't watch anime since isekai is new to me and I'm only familiar with two avn so far.:)
And it seems I'm lucky that camera shake is not a disadvantage for me.
 
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Kugatsu500

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Did any of you read what appears on the bottom half of the screen? Not just skipping to to the sex scenes for a wank?

It is as if all of you folk did read another story altogether? Let us level a bit to see if we talk about the same game.

1) Was MC in the story you read not transported to a parallel world and receive insanely potent magic powers? MC killed some demonic goblins effortlessly. People don't want to believe him because a single one of them is super strong and dangerous.

2)In the story I read, MC got Status screens and other stuff like in an RPG, but that doesn't seem to be the case for the story you all played? Included was an inventory system that other people in that world don't possess.

3)Did MC not return the dead Porter from the Dungeon he found at the bottom of the trap pit to the women in the village? is that an optional thing?
"Did any of you read what appears on the bottom half of the screen? Not just skipping to to the sex scenes for a wank?"

Stop being condescending when not even you seem to have been paying attention. The inventory system does exist in the world, there are even rings that allow for one to use it even if they are not able to use magic, MC himself buys some rings in order to fake it, since he is a villager class, and isn't suposed to be able to use inventory, or any type of magic for that matter. That is even what makes Vega suspicious of him. First he bought a magic healing scroll, then he used subtle wind magic in a fight and Vega caught on.

So yes, your brilliant plan of hiding the corpse away in his inventory would not work, as Vega herself in this very same scene talks about him using inventory rings that she recognizes as being fake, seeing as she was the one who invented them.

And even IF MC was the only one capable of using inventory magic (which he isn't), hiding the body would accomplish what exactly? He was still the last person to see her before she disappeared under mysterious circumstances, the lack of a body wouldn't void the need for an investigation.

"So, there is this MC guy, Vega was suspicious of him being able to use magic. I also heard him say that he has an ability to multiply his stats by 5, and I even WITNESSED him make a contract with a spirit. Because of that, Vega had me capture him in order to investigate and interrogate. I left them both alone, and that was the last we saw of Vega." - Tyra

Imagine thinking that the word of Vega's direct bodyguard, spy and assassin, and also a member of an influent family wouldn't carry weight, and that the government would just dismiss it as "she is grieving the loss of her master and talking crazy". Either wishful thinking, or you are assuming that the officials of this world are a bunch of incompetent bufoons, which could be true, but we don't know for sure. In a world of magic, where many things are possible, and where people are in constant war against demons, one does tend to keep an open mind towards the reporting of anomalies. Couple that with the fact that MC is in bad terms with the Hero himself, and that one of the white knight girls felt something off about him, and you have a recipe for disaster.

MC was completely right, not in the whole "value of life" stuff, but in the "killing doesn't solve everything". MC had already talked with Kaela about how he is not completely against killing when necessary. But just killing every single nuisance in front of you is not really the way to go about, specially when you want to lay low and avoid trouble. MC is powerful, but he is not powerful enough to fight the entire country, he is doing what he thinks best in order to not draw attention. That is also why he decided to lose to the Hero, but I guess to you this is also a pussy attitude, since he didn't show off his powerful magic and rubbed his cock in the Hero's face.
 
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Lynava

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Somehow i believe you guys put in way more thought about that Vega scene than the dev ever did...he was probably like 'how can i make MC dick her down good, with some amount of reason' :ROFLMAO:
It's more about the pseudo dominants people.
I'm fine with that.
 

Syphalion

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I also personally find that the MC is not really that smart and rather naive, I really feel like he thinks he's in a game or the chosen one with plot armor and even if that's the case, it's not really great for immersion, throughout the story, I feel like he clearly doesn't care about the world.

He arrived in and doesn't ask any relevant questions about how the world works, the different religions, the abbreviated history of the world, why the war with demons or even magic and the different schools... Nor the question of why only nobles can use magic ?

Basically, I find him incredibly passive. All he does is follow the trend that others impose on him.
For example, someone wants to sell him an elf with a sad little story, and he buys it because they tell him it's clearly the best solution, and he never questions it.

So, the noble sex slave trade isn't a big deal. At least I did my good deed and saved the elf. He could have chosen from the start to train even more during the week to go and destroy the traffickers' hideout instead of making fans... and solve the elf problem right away. No, he has to wait until they kidnap her to really act on the real problems.

He's always in the present, never looking to the future.


Not to mention the stupidity of creating things that come from the earth and are much more technologically advanced in a fantasy world if you want to go unnoticed, no luck, I think the other heroes will probably realize that an electric fan has no place here and probably ask questions about the creator.

And the inconsistency that says that he can only make things when he knows how it works ? So, he knows perfectly the construction from A to Z of a fan, a flashlight or even a lighter? I find it hard to believe.

Unless he just has to know very vaguely how it works for it to work, but in this case why doesn't he create firearms or even a grenade launcher for fun, just to bring "democracy" to the world... For me, his power to create earth-tech is basically perfect for destroying the genre.


He also literally has the power to create any spell, is only limited by his own imagination, and the spell he uses the most is fireball... seriously dude ?! Create fucking black holes ! Disintegrate them at the molecular level. Deflect light beams to become invisible and finally stop being tracked so easily ! Teleport a random rock directly into their brains, I don't know, do anything using more than two neurons please...

And the comments about him being a "pussy" aren't necessarily wrong, but I prefer to say that he's rather hypocritical, I mean the guy clearly doesn't care about the history of the world and races and knowing if the world is more complicated and nuanced than black and white, so killing dozens of goblins and orcs who seem to be beings with a certain level of intelligence doesn't keep him awake at night, no problem at all, they're necessarily bad, but killing a disgusting human who traffics slaves then it wavers.

The same later having a second chance after dying, cool, people smoke tobacco here too, perfect, I'm going to resume a bad habit for drugs, because I have no willpower as a human being and well cancer, it's not very serious, it can probably be cured here with a little magic, even if I have absolutely no idea, hey, I'm even going to show and explain to this unscrupulous tobacconist how to create a drug empire that will probably kill millions of people in the future. I'm a really nice guy, it should be fine.

What!? This woman, who literally stalks me for no reason other than her little interest in magic and who thinks she's absolutely untouchable, didn't hesitate for a second to kidnap me and extract secrets from me under the penalty of literally making my dick explode.
No, I can't do anything against her... even if I know she's probably not going to stop there. She's a woman, I'm weak against that...

Seriously ?! If I were in its place even if I can't kill her, I would at least ask Sylph if she could help me create a servitude contract impossible to break except for me, so that her power is greatly reduced, and she can no longer do anything to me, if she tries to talk about me to someone, she suffers if she tries to have me murdered, she will lose her life or her power completely. That's how you make her understand that she shouldn't have bothered you.

Anyway, that's all to say, I find it a shame with the potential of a universe like that we end up with an MC barely more intelligent than the Weeb Hero, and the lore is clearly pushed into the background...

Especially when I have just finished a "Dogma" or the MC even if he has problems and demons it only makes him more human and interesting, and he remains decisive and reliable in these actions.
 

wsnlndr

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I suppose that rendering images and animations from 3D models and scenarios is not trivial for all dev and their computer teams, they consume time, attention and is a human effort to work on the desired details of all readers.
The action, adventure and sex plot may be enough for many, or not.

At the same time I find it curious how some details of the novel are perceived in one way or another according to the emotional intelligence of each one and especially the cognitive abilities that are evident in the comments while other details are overlooked Olympically, but I don't complain about that, I just point it out as something curious.

There will always be something good about the novel beyond any criticism. -> It allows us to dream of another world and other rules.
 

Son_of_ogre

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I also personally find that the MC is not really that smart and rather naive, I really feel like he thinks he's in a game or the chosen one with plot armor and even if that's the case, it's not really great for immersion, throughout the story, I feel like he clearly doesn't care about the world.

He arrived in and doesn't ask any relevant questions about how the world works, the different religions, the abbreviated history of the world, why the war with demons or even magic and the different schools... Nor the question of why only nobles can use magic ?

Basically, I find him incredibly passive. All he does is follow the trend that others impose on him.
For example, someone wants to sell him an elf with a sad little story, and he buys it because they tell him it's clearly the best solution, and he never questions it.

So, the noble sex slave trade isn't a big deal. At least I did my good deed and saved the elf. He could have chosen from the start to train even more during the week to go and destroy the traffickers' hideout instead of making fans... and solve the elf problem right away. No, he has to wait until they kidnap her to really act on the real problems.

He's always in the present, never looking to the future.


Not to mention the stupidity of creating things that come from the earth and are much more technologically advanced in a fantasy world if you want to go unnoticed, no luck, I think the other heroes will probably realize that an electric fan has no place here and probably ask questions about the creator.

And the inconsistency that says that he can only make things when he knows how it works ? So, he knows perfectly the construction from A to Z of a fan, a flashlight or even a lighter? I find it hard to believe.

Unless he just has to know very vaguely how it works for it to work, but in this case why doesn't he create firearms or even a grenade launcher for fun, just to bring "democracy" to the world... For me, his power to create earth-tech is basically perfect for destroying the genre.


He also literally has the power to create any spell, is only limited by his own imagination, and the spell he uses the most is fireball... seriously dude ?! Create fucking black holes ! Disintegrate them at the molecular level. Deflect light beams to become invisible and finally stop being tracked so easily ! Teleport a random rock directly into their brains, I don't know, do anything using more than two neurons please...

And the comments about him being a "pussy" aren't necessarily wrong, but I prefer to say that he's rather hypocritical, I mean the guy clearly doesn't care about the history of the world and races and knowing if the world is more complicated and nuanced than black and white, so killing dozens of goblins and orcs who seem to be beings with a certain level of intelligence doesn't keep him awake at night, no problem at all, they're necessarily bad, but killing a disgusting human who traffics slaves then it wavers.

The same later having a second chance after dying, cool, people smoke tobacco here too, perfect, I'm going to resume a bad habit for drugs, because I have no willpower as a human being and well cancer, it's not very serious, it can probably be cured here with a little magic, even if I have absolutely no idea, hey, I'm even going to show and explain to this unscrupulous tobacconist how to create a drug empire that will probably kill millions of people in the future. I'm a really nice guy, it should be fine.

What!? This woman, who literally stalks me for no reason other than her little interest in magic and who thinks she's absolutely untouchable, didn't hesitate for a second to kidnap me and extract secrets from me under the penalty of literally making my dick explode.
No, I can't do anything against her... even if I know she's probably not going to stop there. She's a woman, I'm weak against that...

Seriously ?! If I were in its place even if I can't kill her, I would at least ask Sylph if she could help me create a servitude contract impossible to break except for me, so that her power is greatly reduced, and she can no longer do anything to me, if she tries to talk about me to someone, she suffers if she tries to have me murdered, she will lose her life or her power completely. That's how you make her understand that she shouldn't have bothered you.

Anyway, that's all to say, I find it a shame with the potential of a universe like that we end up with an MC barely more intelligent than the Weeb Hero, and the lore is clearly pushed into the background...

Especially when I have just finished a "Dogma" or the MC even if he has problems and demons it only makes him more human and interesting, and he remains decisive and reliable in these actions.
Bro needs character development........:ROFLMAO::ROFLMAO:
 

elprebsi

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a few peoble here like to plot i see. how about what MC said that "hou knows if the demon lord is actually the evil one" we know the grand mage killed a porter and lied to his wife. his quest said stop the war and not kill the demon lord
 

Kpoptarts

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a few peoble here like to plot i see. how about what MC said that "hou knows if the demon lord is actually the evil one" we know the grand mage killed a porter and lied to his wife. his quest said stop the war and not kill the demon lord
I don't wanna think about that, cuz knowing the streak of VN's around here, it's gonna take a year or 2 before that topic is even touched on again :ROFLMAO:
 
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Syphalion

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Yes indeed, I think he needs some good character development, and it's true that he at least pointed out that the demon lord wasn't necessarily evil and that he's beginning to understand that no matter what world he's in, humans are still human and can do horrible things. That gives hope, but I'll see.

And the giant shield thing amused me a lot, I mean, knowing that Kaela and Vega are 175 cm tall and are clearly taller than everyone else at the moment, and that the MC is a little shorter than her, he must be, what, 174 cm ? (rather short in my opinion...) So a person who's over 190 cm goes straight into the giant race, right ? :ROFLMAO:
 

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Yeah wasted mary sue, he could become a god but he is as intelligent as is the Dev... he could be a dark anti-hero but it's also wasted... he is reborn so he can't be the Good hero as we have 2 others true summoned hero...
The Mc could be more than the average/S tier adventurer without god-tier power & still be interesting even if he strugle but no...

After to be fair we get low-lvl porn game... with low-lvl background/characters development, if we want more we would need a true writer who know how to build movie/game story, because yet all we have is a kid who get feed with isekai animes & wanted to past them all together with adult sex scene (it was already be done with 2-3 isekai animes even if not as graphic as hard porn game) with no knowledges to how to write a story.
 

LinkBox88

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I'm surprised the same person that wrote the Succubus and Sylph taming scenes made the Vega one so unsatisfying. That snob deserved way more degradation and humbling.
 

Juerhullycin

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I also personally find that the MC is not really that smart and rather naive, I really feel like he thinks he's in a game or the chosen one with plot armor and even if that's the case, it's not really great for immersion, throughout the story, I feel like he clearly doesn't care about the world.

He arrived in and doesn't ask any relevant questions about how the world works, the different religions, the abbreviated history of the world, why the war with demons or even magic and the different schools... Nor the question of why only nobles can use magic ?

Basically, I find him incredibly passive. All he does is follow the trend that others impose on him.
For example, someone wants to sell him an elf with a sad little story, and he buys it because they tell him it's clearly the best solution, and he never questions it.

So, the noble sex slave trade isn't a big deal. At least I did my good deed and saved the elf. He could have chosen from the start to train even more during the week to go and destroy the traffickers' hideout instead of making fans... and solve the elf problem right away. No, he has to wait until they kidnap her to really act on the real problems.

He's always in the present, never looking to the future.


Not to mention the stupidity of creating things that come from the earth and are much more technologically advanced in a fantasy world if you want to go unnoticed, no luck, I think the other heroes will probably realize that an electric fan has no place here and probably ask questions about the creator.

And the inconsistency that says that he can only make things when he knows how it works ? So, he knows perfectly the construction from A to Z of a fan, a flashlight or even a lighter? I find it hard to believe.

Unless he just has to know very vaguely how it works for it to work, but in this case why doesn't he create firearms or even a grenade launcher for fun, just to bring "democracy" to the world... For me, his power to create earth-tech is basically perfect for destroying the genre.


He also literally has the power to create any spell, is only limited by his own imagination, and the spell he uses the most is fireball... seriously dude ?! Create fucking black holes ! Disintegrate them at the molecular level. Deflect light beams to become invisible and finally stop being tracked so easily ! Teleport a random rock directly into their brains, I don't know, do anything using more than two neurons please...

And the comments about him being a "pussy" aren't necessarily wrong, but I prefer to say that he's rather hypocritical, I mean the guy clearly doesn't care about the history of the world and races and knowing if the world is more complicated and nuanced than black and white, so killing dozens of goblins and orcs who seem to be beings with a certain level of intelligence doesn't keep him awake at night, no problem at all, they're necessarily bad, but killing a disgusting human who traffics slaves then it wavers.

The same later having a second chance after dying, cool, people smoke tobacco here too, perfect, I'm going to resume a bad habit for drugs, because I have no willpower as a human being and well cancer, it's not very serious, it can probably be cured here with a little magic, even if I have absolutely no idea, hey, I'm even going to show and explain to this unscrupulous tobacconist how to create a drug empire that will probably kill millions of people in the future. I'm a really nice guy, it should be fine.

What!? This woman, who literally stalks me for no reason other than her little interest in magic and who thinks she's absolutely untouchable, didn't hesitate for a second to kidnap me and extract secrets from me under the penalty of literally making my dick explode.
No, I can't do anything against her... even if I know she's probably not going to stop there. She's a woman, I'm weak against that...

Seriously ?! If I were in its place even if I can't kill her, I would at least ask Sylph if she could help me create a servitude contract impossible to break except for me, so that her power is greatly reduced, and she can no longer do anything to me, if she tries to talk about me to someone, she suffers if she tries to have me murdered, she will lose her life or her power completely. That's how you make her understand that she shouldn't have bothered you.

Anyway, that's all to say, I find it a shame with the potential of a universe like that we end up with an MC barely more intelligent than the Weeb Hero, and the lore is clearly pushed into the background...

Especially when I have just finished a "Dogma" or the MC even if he has problems and demons it only makes him more human and interesting, and he remains decisive and reliable in these actions.
Maybe i hate on it more than it deserves but MC uses his skills for shit all. I recently watched Isekai Cheat magican and i wanted to punch the MC through the screen a passiv dumbfuck how has his enemies parading in front of him telling him how they wont only fuck him over, rape his loved ones, and will also fuck over waste swats of land and populance. And he stands there and says, "I don't want to fight you."

Jesus H Christ my dude the guy is a massmurderer that wanted to rape your GF and you don't want to fight him?

There is a point in a story where the MC deserves everything bad that happened to him and anybody around him because he has the power to change it, but he did nothing again and again. He not only deserves bad shit happen to him he is guilty that it happend in the first place. You could have shut it down when he disrespected you and your GF at least grow a spine and do it for her you fag.

What happened here is exactly the same MC is a passive idiot. I wouldn't be surprised if someone betrays him because all he shows is that if pussy is involved he will take any and all disrespect without pushing back.

If anyone ever wants to capture him, all they have to do is sit a naked girl in a cell with an open door, wait till the "hero" walks in and close it behind him. That's all it takes to capture him. He won't even break out because he is occupied with other matters.
 
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