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same problem. Infinite loop for the fucking scene with the oracle but also during a scene where we see one of the girl quiting a hut with her ass shaking.
 

desmondbrown1

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all the animated scene are going into a infant loop that need to be fix and when you change the name some part of the dialogue remain the same with the original name. but it look good the just need to a the sound and more to the sex scenes it look bland with just that you should animate the blow job scene as well
 

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eng is not my main language and i'm learning little by little, instead of using ai tools to create dialogues i rather think and write them down myself. sorry for that but i have my fun doing it :)
I seriously offer this advice:
Don't worry about grammar until the game is finished. Focus on your own creation. Fixing language issues can come after it's finished.
Too many games on the F95 were slowed down by various minor issues, or even abandoned.
Don't worry about things that don't affect the game.
Every day, countless native English speakers ask grammar questions in various games.
(In essence, it is the last stubbornness of a declining nation towards its glorious history."show their dignity")
 

PumperFull

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Ogre3DX Here's what I've fixed for the script file (v0.01). Took a while. Please make sure you go through it. It seems to work. I saw you had some of the choices labelled for Corruption, Love and Lust, so I added it to all of them for you. Just figured I'd try to be a little extra helpful. I "Skipped" through the game and went through the choices and made it to the end and back to the main screen without errors. So should be ok I guess. Give it a try. Hopefully it helps ya. I'm not overly familiar with coding, so I don't know how to stop the looping animations.... Only thing I knew worked was using the CTRL button to advance through
Please make sure you don't overwrite your original script file. Just use this until you're sure it's all good
 
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eng is not my main language and i'm learning little by little, instead of using ai tools to create dialogues i rather think and write them down myself. sorry for that but i have my fun doing it :)
Hmmm, just going through the recent update, and it looks like you did use AI for some of the lines. I guess that's fine since English isn't your first language. But it's pretty clear some of the lines have syntax similar to some LLMs.

EDIT: A majority of the lines.
 
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RedBone

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well, sadly I couldn't find a attractive woman in this game, tho Isolde wasn't too bad. the rest... too over inflated, a turn-off. but interesting game, good luck with it.
 

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Have anyone reported the text don't change in accordance to the name of the player character and remained Liam nonetheless?
 

Ogre3DX

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Ogre3DX Here's what I've fixed for the script file (v0.01). Took a while. Please make sure you go through it. It seems to work. I saw you had some of the choices labelled for Corruption, Love and Lust, so I added it to all of them for you. Just figured I'd try to be a little extra helpful. I "Skipped" through the game and went through the choices and made it to the end and back to the main screen without errors. So should be ok I guess. Give it a try. Hopefully it helps ya. I'm not overly familiar with coding, so I don't know how to stop the looping animations.... Only thing I knew worked was using the CTRL button to advance through
Please make sure you don't overwrite your original script file. Just use this until you're sure it's all good
oh thanks apprecited my friend, i will give it a look put it into the original as needed. i'm also not an expert this is my very first game and my very firt time coding, for sure i will make alot of errors but i'm learning through the process. thanks again.
 
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Beazlabub

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So, it's an interesting premise but, the Dialog needs to be looked at. Before the Village scenes, The MC is talked about as a she and not a he. Also, Dialog does not fit in many places for Women that have never seen nor heard of a Male before. Yeah it's a pron game but, It should be a bit better for anyone interested in at least a bit of a believable story line. Also, this is not animated as of this release, Would be a better game with animation & voice.
 

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So, it's an interesting premise but, the Dialog needs to be looked at. Before the Village scenes, The MC is talked about as a she and not a he. Also, Dialog does not fit in many places for Women that have never seen nor heard of a Male before. Yeah it's a pron game but, It should be a bit better for anyone interested in at least a bit of a believable story line. Also, this is not animated as of this release, Would be a better game with animation & voice.
You need to go through the story, you'll understand then. There was no errors for she/he or him/her at all in this "project" and I know because I actually went through it to help the Dev. Go through it, while thinking like the ladies on this island, most of the ladies never heard of such a thing as a "man". Also there are animations in this "project" if you take the corrupt path
 
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PumperFull

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I seriously offer this advice:
Don't worry about grammar until the game is finished. Focus on your own creation. Fixing language issues can come after it's finished.
Too many games on the F95 were slowed down by various minor issues, or even abandoned.
Don't worry about things that don't affect the game.
Every day, countless native English speakers ask grammar questions in various games.
(In essence, it is the last stubbornness of a declining nation towards its glorious history."show their dignity")
I take your opinion into consideration, but, I strongly disagree. Without proper grammar and proper spelling, vocabulary and such, some "projects" get "back burnered" by people. Meaning that, when people can't enjoy something because of not knowing what's going on with the "story," then they don't play it consistently. The players will forget "projects" that they have a hard time understanding. I know if I see a fair bit of "Engrish" it turns me off. I suggest that almost every Developer has an English proofreader if they are trying to attract an English crowd. English is the hardest language to learn on this planet. There are sooooo many nuances and word variations, it's practically insane. When I was in school, I truly didn't enjoy English class. But I'm thankful I paid some attention. I'm lucky to have been brought up in an English community and English is my native language. Even still, I will never be a wordsmith.
Edit: Also, there are a lot of English native speaking people who haven't learnt the language properly, or for that matter, they simply don't care. That's why you'll see English natives making wayyyyy too many mistakes. It is truly sad....
EDIT: After coming back, I read this again and could still find "corrections" to be done. English is crazy! Even though the word I corrected was in my own paragraph, it was a universal word. Ughh LOL. Even after a while, sometimes you just need to step back, do something else and then come back to it. Cheers everyone !!!
 
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