Version: 0.1
Seems like this might be a short game by how simple the premise and plot is playing out. As such, it gets to the point very early on (sexual relationship with mom).
Characters
Hot mom. I'm enjoying her shameless attitude and straightforwardness.
Never enjoy when the son goes through "but you're my [maternal person]
!" crisis - it's so
insufferable but that's what you get with this male protag
Visuals and Gameplay
Mom renders look great. Animation has good motion and speed.
The map graphics are so easy on the eyes as opposed to the default graphics of RPGM design and avatars. It's
simple and goes well with the vibe but the grid when clicking is
annoying near the stairs and trying to click other areas to interact with - it doesn't line up with the graphics.
There are a
good few scenes to watch for a first release. That comes at the cost of a lot of
dead playtime in between where you must grind
Mom's approval and
Sexual tension
The battling of chores was cute the first time but on repeated attempts, it immediately is, and I pun, a chore to do.
Making matters worse, repeated scenes don't increase Sexual tension. This system needs the most work otherwise the game is boring to play to progress.
When unlocking an action/scene, it shouldn't show what is going to happen before it does, at least for the the first time per new action - meaning,
don't show "Thighjob" in bathroom if we've not had a thighjob happen in bathroom
Sound
Quiet atmosphere with the rain and clock gives a thematic minor dark tone to the story. however, the
battle SE ruins that vibe.
Although there is rain BG that can be heard inside house, it should be slightly increased in volume to balance out with the already
obnoxiously loud SE volume. Even if you lower the SE to 20% it's still louder than the rain BG [inside] at 100%
For added immersion, the dev could incorporate shower BG whenever Mom is in the bathroom (if she's bathing). And during the flashback, mute the rain and clock BG.
Lastly, I appreciate the little natural sexual sounds added; the kissing and fapping sfx. These more natural sounds should be incorporated as much as possible instead of settling on the RPGM default SEs, like the slap.
Not a bad first release but there's a lot to improve on to make the game a good/fapworthy experience.
When Son finds the bathroom door open:
Son: "Wait someone's inside!" Me to Son: Who else you dumbfuck?