VN Ren'Py It's a Bit Sudden, but Now I Have a Brown Elven Girlfriend [v0.05] [S3 Digital]

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Pillgrim

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You know, there are easier ways to tell the world your tastes are both sad and juvenile. Or, you know, you can just keep it to yourself.

Also, I'm an elder Millennial; Zoomers can't spell.
"Keeping it to yourself" is indeed something you should look into.
 

Urk

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Have you guys not seen the works of Aoi Nagisa? they massively popularized Dark Elf for the masses a few years ago. Taimanin series have several Dark waifus as well, "demons", "elves" they look the same, there are also "dark humans" if you can call it that, since this isn't the real world but hentai world, "choco waifus" is also a very common term now amongst the younger generation.
 

GunFeghtter

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Very intresing and very perspectiv. But in my opinion without full-animation it doesnt have any sense. If you are not planing to replace CGa to animation in some next update (v0.1-0.2 mb) i think that would be deadly for the game.

But concept, art, story in current state is prety good. In perspectiv, this game can be equal to other high rated games.

I'll keep an eye on the next update.
 

S3Actual

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Once again a game gets an update that kills saves. Hows that even possible with a Kinetic Novel?
Yeah it's a consequence of the new Select/Scene menu option I made. It will probably break future saves you make pertaining to new content relative to the version you are running, but the advantage is that you shouldn't need to manually save from here on, as the game will automatically bookmark your progress. Exception for the Holiday Events, I forgot to add the proper labels so saves on these Events will break when I correct that.
 

chiefkilic

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Honestly, this game is just awful and boring. You're thrown straight from the intro to the endgame. There's no relationship building, no romance at all. It's just the intro and endgame. After the intro, we immediately start a relationship with the elf, have sex with her, and then after the sex, this NPC pizza lady comes into the house. I have no idea who she is, but they seem to know each other. It's an extremely stupid idea to start at the end and then have a sex scene when you don't even know the characters yet. No build-up, no romance, no feelings. It's like reading a book backwards from the end to the beginning. It's just bad. I deleted the game immediately after the pizza lady.

On top of that, the game is extremely laggy; it stutters when skipping. The sex scenes are also very laggy and boring. If I were the developer, I would rewrite the game. After the intro, there should first be a phase where you get to know the elf. Showing something of the world would have been good too, but they don't start with the ending. That's almost always a bad decision. I don't want to be spoiled. Why keep playing if it starts with the ending? I already know how it ends, so there's no point in continuing. How are you supposed to develop feelings if you already know the ending? (Translated with Google)
 

S3Actual

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Am I missing something. It still ends at the sniffing sene for me. starting a new game didn't fix it.
Confirm. Although the archive file is 33 MB larger. :(
The Holiday Events are currently disconnected from the main story since I had a lot of work this summer that kept me from working on any of the series, so I'm very behind my development schedule. Once you get to at least the shower sex portion, there should be a link at the very bottom of "SELECT" for the Halloween Event, and soon one for the Christmas Event.

When I do complete Eris' arc it will smoothly transition through the events, but for now they are disconnected.
 

bheberling

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The Holiday Events are currently disconnected from the main story since I had a lot of work this summer that kept me from working on any of the series, so I'm very behind my development schedule. Once you get to at least the shower sex portion, there should be a link at the very bottom of "SELECT" for the Halloween Event, and soon one for the Christmas Event.

When I do complete Eris' arc it will smoothly transition through the events, but for now they are disconnected.
Thank you

Adding that to the change log would be appreciated.
 
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