New user, and first off I just want to say I really appreciate how you handled kink and consent in this game. I love how everyone is in agreement with what is going on, and Jamie and Sarah check in with one another to make sure things are okay to do.
I like how Jamie's group is all encouraging and is trying to help her become who she truly wants to be. And how she is becoming better at pleasing women without her penis, so when her and Sarah are back together, it won't be a "Jamie can't pleasure her at all, so she must NTR her" type situation.
And I love how even though Sarah's side is a lot more sexual, the conversations with Tracy and her husband are very clear about what kind of kink play they are getting into and how they still love one another. Not often you see consensual cuckolding, and they were a good way to show to Sarah that it can be done with her still loving Jamie. And I saw your previous comments where you expressed how you intended for them to remain together in the end, while still having all this raunchy sex going on. I also like how we are in control of what actions she takes, and I love how she is becoming the more dominant one as time goes on.
So again, I really like how this is a sissy/feminization and cuckolding story where everything is above board and everyone is happy with it. Makes for a pleasant read
As for the coming story, I'm excited for them to meet up at this party. Jamie showing up as a guest, and Sarah and Mel presumably as the entertainment. I'm sure Sarah will be giving Jamie quite the show! I'm sure Louis will be sure to show Sarah how far Jamie has come as well, and maybe after that they can get those matching QoS tattoos! Definitely excited for more snowbunny Sarah content. Wish Mel could have written Snowbunny on her back with the sunscreen but oh well. Also would love for Jamie to get a completely flat cage but that's just me lol
My only complaint is I wish Sarah kept her dark hair, since Mel is already blonde and Penny is a redhead. But I understand the point of that scene was to surprise Jamie with how much she has changed in such a short time, and if you opted not for the piercings or didn't do the QoS route, she wouldn't have anything to show besides the revealing outfit. So I get it.