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Jennifer's Life [v1.1] [AbsentStudio]

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So far no big grammar issues or bugs. I would strongly suggest to re-read the script though and fix some letter capitalization. Also, while most of the time it's "Jennifer did this" or "Jennifer did that" sometimes I see "I did this or that". If you're writing in the 3rd person then stick with it. Check for that as well.

Also, I would STRONGLY advise to make ALL sex scenes gated behind a choice, otherwise this game is just a kinetic novel. If that is the style it's to be then fine. But since you do want to add player agency, a big reason I chose to even try this game, then please do that. For example, the scene with the janitor at his place, we should have been allowed to decline to drink the tea, or let her sip a little bit and prompt if she'd drink it ALL for the scene.

Or you can add "corruption" points gained each time she chooses to be a slut. And depending on the amount, the scenes will be a choice or even auto play.

Please think it over and decide if it's all illusion of choice or a real CYOA.

Lastly, I see you have a discord server. The link seems to have expired. I'd love to join. Does anyone have a link they can provide me?
 
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What is it with this community and its fixation with choices? Also, the irritating habit of making suggestions that, if implemented, would entail a rewrite. (which the community hates)
Here's a suggestion: Play these games as if you are reading a book. The story is set; just enjoy it.

Another suggestion: if you are going to talk about punctuation, get yours right. :cautious:

A few members here have quite correctly stated how the game has improved since its inception. Thank you for that. :giggle:
 
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What is it with this community and its fixation with choices? Also, the irritating habit of making suggestions that, if implemented, would entail a rewrite. (which the community hates)
Here's a suggestion: Play these games as if you are reading a book. The story is set; just enjoy it.

Another suggestion: if you are going to talk about punctuation, get yours right. :cautious:

A few members here have quite correctly stated how the game has improved since its inception. Thank you for that. :giggle:
All I am saying is that, if choice has been elected to be added in the game, to at least add them to significant moments in the game. Or, as you say, we are meant to enjoy the game as a set story, then all choices should be removed and for the game to be recategorized as Kinetic Novel.

Also, since I am not the type to believe I am 100% correct in my grammar etc, I am down with hearing you out where I messed up in my post in this regard.
 
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