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Ok - for a first project this is solid, but there are lot of points to improve.
1. There are way to many events that force the player.
2. The story itself is nothing special and the MC acts unbelievable.
She comes to a new city without a job, but rents a flat for 1.6k/month and is happy with a 2k salary? Rly? I dont know where she lives and yes big city prices and stuff, but with that rent she has to earn more. 400 for all the other stuff? My rent is around 1/3 of my net salary - and I know that that is nor realistic for a big city. But 400 for food, insurances, energy/heating, fun stuff and savings? How?
You need ~300 for food alone I guess.
Yeah nitpicky I know - but that is stuff I can stumble over and then the game will lose me ^^
Then we have all the major stuff - a lot of it forces the player into it.
All on all its fine as a training piece, but for the next attempt I hope the dev will try to improve the world building and storytelling.
1. There are way to many events that force the player.
2. The story itself is nothing special and the MC acts unbelievable.
She comes to a new city without a job, but rents a flat for 1.6k/month and is happy with a 2k salary? Rly? I dont know where she lives and yes big city prices and stuff, but with that rent she has to earn more. 400 for all the other stuff? My rent is around 1/3 of my net salary - and I know that that is nor realistic for a big city. But 400 for food, insurances, energy/heating, fun stuff and savings? How?
You need ~300 for food alone I guess. Yeah nitpicky I know - but that is stuff I can stumble over and then the game will lose me ^^
Then we have all the major stuff - a lot of it forces the player into it.
All on all its fine as a training piece, but for the next attempt I hope the dev will try to improve the world building and storytelling.
- Aug 21, 2018
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Then you can choose to make a kinetic novel - as soon as you allow the player to make choices, the player wants and needs some control or it is pointless.
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a game need to be criticized to get better, if you dont like critics, then dont even try to make a game, let the man say his piece and go, dont be such a wimp.
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- May 27, 2018
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As much as I hate games like this, you keep clicking refuse and she will still be a whore (((( . Maybe I want to run the game so that she is only corrupted by her boss... but no, I'm forced to watch her fuck with some homeless xD
(((( . Maybe I want to run the game so that she is only corrupted by her boss... but no, I'm forced to watch her fuck with some homeless xD
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This update turned out to be almost twice as big
A lot of time and effort has been put into this update
thx for support
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Made a request thread: https://f95zone.to/threads/jennifers-life-0-7-absentstudio.193018/
Hopefully a hero comes soon
Hopefully a hero comes soon
hero here
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Jennifer's Life [v0.7] [AbsentStudio]
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