- Jun 12, 2017
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Very good update, love the Devs work, worth supporting him in Patreon, even though updates are not the fastest.
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So far no big grammar issues or bugs. I would strongly suggest to re-read the script though and fix some letter capitalization. Also, while most of the time it's "Jennifer did this" or "Jennifer did that" sometimes I see "I did this or that". If you're writing in the 3rd person then stick with it. Check for that as well.
Also, I would STRONGLY advise to make ALL sex scenes gated behind a choice, otherwise this game is just a kinetic novel. If that is the style it's to be then fine. But since you do want to add player agency, a big reason I chose to even try this game, then please do that. For example, the scene with the janitor at his place, we should have been allowed to decline to drink the tea, or let her sip a little bit and prompt if she'd drink it ALL for the scene.
Or you can add "corruption" points gained each time she chooses to be a slut. And depending on the amount, the scenes will be a choice or even auto play.
Please think it over and decide if it's all illusion of choice or a real CYOA.
Lastly, I see you have a discord server. The link seems to have expired. I'd love to join. Does anyone have a link they can provide me?
Also, I would STRONGLY advise to make ALL sex scenes gated behind a choice, otherwise this game is just a kinetic novel. If that is the style it's to be then fine. But since you do want to add player agency, a big reason I chose to even try this game, then please do that. For example, the scene with the janitor at his place, we should have been allowed to decline to drink the tea, or let her sip a little bit and prompt if she'd drink it ALL for the scene.
Or you can add "corruption" points gained each time she chooses to be a slut. And depending on the amount, the scenes will be a choice or even auto play.
Please think it over and decide if it's all illusion of choice or a real CYOA.
Lastly, I see you have a discord server. The link seems to have expired. I'd love to join. Does anyone have a link they can provide me?
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I love this game so far, it's like a good wine, the more time passes, the better it gets. Very good job.
- Jun 2, 2017
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Absolutely noIs this the same plot of the game ..Inside Jennifer,,
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- Jul 27, 2022
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really would like to see more shota elements for this game, just saying.
- Oct 26, 2017
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What is it with this community and its fixation with choices? Also, the irritating habit of making suggestions that, if implemented, would entail a rewrite. (which the community hates)
Here's a suggestion: Play these games as if you are reading a book. The story is set; just enjoy it.
Another suggestion: if you are going to talk about punctuation, get yours right.
A few members here have quite correctly stated how the game has improved since its inception. Thank you for that.
What is it with this community and its fixation with choices? Also, the irritating habit of making suggestions that, if implemented, would entail a rewrite. (which the community hates)
Here's a suggestion: Play these games as if you are reading a book. The story is set; just enjoy it.
Another suggestion: if you are going to talk about punctuation, get yours right.
A few members here have quite correctly stated how the game has improved since its inception. Thank you for that.
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All I am saying is that, if choice has been elected to be added in the game, to at least add them to significant moments in the game. Or, as you say, we are meant to enjoy the game as a set story, then all choices should be removed and for the game to be recategorized as Kinetic Novel.Sorter
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What is it with this community and its fixation with choices? Also, the irritating habit of making suggestions that, if implemented, would entail a rewrite. (which the community hates)
Here's a suggestion: Play these games as if you are reading a book. The story is set; just enjoy it.
Another suggestion: if you are going to talk about punctuation, get yours right.
A few members here have quite correctly stated how the game has improved since its inception. Thank you for that.
Also, since I am not the type to believe I am 100% correct in my grammar etc, I am down with hearing you out where I messed up in my post in this regard.
- Oct 26, 2017
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You're asking the developer to rewrite sections of the game to satisfy you and the other choice police.
I changed it from grammar to punctuation. But grammar, punctuation, and spelling are synonymous. Again, if you're going to correct others, you should be correct in your writing, don't you think?
And yes, I'm the proofreader for this game.
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I don't remember all of them but you could refuse to help the janitor get the box. There was a choice with the guy in prison I don't remember if it was just to not stand next to his cell or if it was to get away from him earlier in the scene and the scene later with him there were options to try and fight or not during the scene.
You could stop the homeless guy from taking his pants off in your house and you could come back to your senses when woody comes into the janitors home.
There was also a choice to stare at the dudes dick or not when you walk in on the two teachers and where to stand on the bus. The last one I remember was when you clean the kids room I think it was to ignore him or keep an eye on him which stopped him from smacking your butt.
So they were mostly to stop scenes or skip parts but still they were nice to have so you don't have to just let everything happen to her. None of these are in the game anymore unless they were actually part of a mod or something that I didn't know was in the last version I downloaded.